期末复习之书面表达16篇（Units1-8单元话题）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上学期期末复习（译林版2012）

期末复习之书面表达16篇 （Units1-8单元话题） 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 Know yourself 个人信息 Unit 2 Colours 颜色 Unit 3 Teenage problems 青少年问题 Unit 4 Growing up 成长 Unit 5 Art world 艺术世界 Unit 6 TV programmes 电视节目 Unit 7 Films 电影 Unit 8 Detective stories 侦探故事 1．现在电视上的节目丰富多彩，作为中学生我们要学会选择适合自己的节目，以充实自己的娱乐生活。上周班会，老师组织你们就中学生应该看什么类型的电视节目进行了讨论。请根据讨论内容，写一篇英语短文，并表述自己的观点。 Types of TV programmes Opinions (观点) about the programmes   Students Documentary 学到许多自然、历史方面的知识…… News report 了解世界上正在发生的事…… Music programme 感到放松…… Teacher Drama series 长时间观看会伤害眼睛，影响…… In my opinion... 注意事项：1.表达清楚语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 3.词数：100词左右； 4.不得出现真实姓名和校名等。 Last week, we had a class meeting to discuss what types of TV programs we students should watch. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．不积跬步，无以至千里；不积小流，无以成江海。在我们的学习和生活中，点滴付出也会带来巨大的影响。阳光中学英语社团准备开展以“Little effort makes a difference”为主题的演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，结合个人经历谈谈你对整个主题的理解以及感悟。内容包括： ♦ What’s the meaning of effort? ♦ Describe your experience. ♦ Share your feelings and suggestions. 注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中勿提及真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Little effort makes a difference Hello, everyone! Not every effort will be successful, but every effort is preparing for our success. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 3．艺术使我们的生活丰富多彩。在众多的艺术形式中，有人喜欢音乐，有人喜欢电影，还有人喜欢电视节目。近期，你校英语报正在举办“My favourite art form”的主题征文活动。 要求： 1. 参考下表，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，并分享与之相关的故事和感受，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 My favourite art form Introduction ... Story ... Feelings ... My favourite art form My favourite art form is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．2025年即将过去，新的一年即将来到，学校英语社团将举行以“Look back at the past, hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛，你想投稿，请根据下图提示，就2025年一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受，并写写新一年的希望和打算。 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Look back at the past, hope for the future This year is coming to an end. During this year, I experienced a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．音乐、电影、绘画、摄影，在众多的艺术形式中，电影广受人们的喜爱。假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据表格中的提示，以 I like English films best 为题，写一篇英语短文。 注意：1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译； 2. 词数 100 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 I like English films best Among all kinds of art forms, I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．在初三的英语学习中，我们了解了许多提升自己的方式，例如：学习各种艺术形式、观看电视节目、向榜样学习等。请你以“My Way to Improve Myself”为题，结合自己的经历介绍一下你提升自己的方法以及这样做的理由和成效，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. What’s your way(s) to improve yourself? 2. Why would you like to do it? 3. How can it help you improve? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Way to Improve Myself Everyone has its own ways to improve. I like______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．成长就像长途旅行，一路上我们通过各种方式了解广阔的世界，同时在成长过程中，我们会享受成功，也会经历挫折……请根据下列提示，以“Growing up in difficulties”为题写一篇英语短文。 1. How do you learn about the world? 2. What problem(s) have you had during the journey of growing up? 3. How have you dealt with it/them? 4. What’s your feeling about growing up? 注意事项： （1）短文应包含提示中涵盖的要点，可适当拓展。 （2）短文中不得提及真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 （3）词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Growing up in difficulties Growing up is like a journey and I have learned a lot so far. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．我们身边有许多值得我们钦佩的人，有在某个领域做出非凡成就的名人，也有平凡的普通人，他们的事迹感人肺腑，他们的品行受人敬仰，是我们学习的榜样。学校英语社团在举办演讲比赛，假设你最钦佩的人是你的妈妈，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，写一篇以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语演讲稿。内容要点如下： 对我影响最深的人 妈妈，40多岁，一名医生，把大部分时间奉献给了工作。 性格 善良又乐于助人，有一颗充满爱的心，经常帮助需要帮助的人 喜好 喜欢蓝色的房间，蓝色让人放松；音乐，喜欢古典音乐，有持久价值；喜欢画画，美术是令人愉快的事情。 其他 对我的学习要求很严格；总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；当我学习有困难的时候，她总是给我提供一些有价值的建议，有了她的帮助，我在我的课业和爱好之间能取得平衡，…… 注意事项： 1. 词数：90左右(文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 3. 文章必须包含所提供的信息，并做适当发挥。 Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now, I’d like to talk about my mother. The person who has influenced me most is my mother. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 9．成长是一个不断变化的过程。进入九年级以来，你在性格和学习习惯方面发生了哪些变化？近期校园英语广播站开设了一档以成长为主题的栏目，向九年级同学约稿，请以The Changes in Me为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的变化及感受。要点如下： Aspect Past Now Feelings 性格态度 1. 害羞，不敢发言 2. …… 1. 积极参与，努力表达自己 2. …… 1. 更自信 2. …… 学习习惯 1. 依赖父母提醒 2. …… 1. 学会规划时间，做事更有条理 2. …… 1. 更有成就感 2. …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Growing up brings many changes to my life. When I look back, I find that I am not the same person as I was before. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．10月3日，王楚钦与孙颖莎夺得 WTT 中国大满贯冠军——这是他们八年搭档中“无数次加练、无数滴汗水”的结果。耀眼的荣光，藏在无人看见的晨光与星光里。他们的故事印证了：成功是奋斗时光的馈赠。你们的学校正在进行主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的征文比赛，你想投稿，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，文章需包含以下几个要点： 1. 简述你认为青少年应当具备的品质； 2. 分享一次你的奋斗故事 (时间，地点，人物，起因，经过，结果)； 3. 说明这次奋斗带给你的成长。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Youth is a time for fighting ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．近期Chris的学校将举行“To be a sunshine teenager”为题的英语演讲活动。请根据要求，帮助Chris写一篇英语演讲稿。 Name Chris Grade 9 Personality 1.待人谦虚有礼，如……；  2.做事细心、有条理，如…… Hobby 1.喜欢的运动及原因……； 2.喜欢的音乐类型及原因…… Problems&Solutions 1.感觉疲惫时，会…….；    2．感觉孤独时，会…… Dream …… 注意：1．根据提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．词数在100左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 To be a sunshine teenager Hello, everyone! I’m Chris from Grade 9. I’m 15 years old. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．“光影流转间藏着千年智慧，音符悦动里诉说人生百态。”娱乐不仅是消遣，更是我们认识世界的另一扇窗。你喜欢什么样的娱乐方式呢？有过怎样的故事呢？又有怎样的感受呢？请结合你的真实体验，谈谈电影、音乐、绘画或阅读等娱乐活动的重要性，以及这些活动给你带来的独特思考。 参考词汇： 娱乐 entertainment 内容包括： 1. 描述你喜爱的一种或几种娱乐方式； 2. 讲述你与这项娱乐活动的故事； 3. 谈谈它带给你的思考或成长。 注意： 1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 Many people think that entertainment is just for fun, but for me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是刘浩，你最近认识的澳大利亚交流生Thomas回国后给你发了一封电子邮件，邮件中他详细地介绍了自己，并想更多地了解你。请你就下面邮件中提及的几个问题用英语进行回复。 ● What is your personality like? ● What kind of art form do you like best? Why? ● Who has influenced you most? Why? ● Do you have any problems with study or life? What are they? 注意事项： 1. 至少选择三个方面进行回复，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 答题卡上只写正文内容，词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Thomas, Thank you for your email. I miss you very much and I want to make friends with you. Now I will tell you something about myself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Hao 14．学业上难以平衡的时间、家庭中难以沟通的父母、好友间难以协调的分歧……这些藏在学习生活里的“小挑战”，看似会让人紧张或退缩，实则却蕴藏着成长的契机。阳光英语社团准备开展以“Every challenge is a great chance to grow”为主题的写作比赛。请根据以下流程图用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意事项： (1)短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; (2)词数不少于90个，短文标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数; (3)短文须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Every challenge is a great chance to grow Hello，everyone! Life is always full of challenges，but every challenge is a great chance to grow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Every challenge is a great chance to growHello, everyone! 15．成长像一次长途旅行，在成长的过程中有困惑，也有收获。请以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在成长过程中的困惑及感受。 如何了解世界 1. 书本：获得各学科的知识，了解历史上的人和事； 2. 父母：教你做个善良、有爱心的人； 3. ……（自拟一点）。 如何解决烦恼 你的烦恼是什么及如何解决的（举例说明）。 你的感受 1. 成长比成功重要； 2. ……（自拟一点）。 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3）100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。 Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．在刚刚结束的苏超 (JSCL) 比赛中，泰州队 (Taizhou Team) 给我们留下了深刻的印象，他们从最初的失败一路逆袭，直到站在决赛的领奖台上，完美地诠释了永不放弃的力量。他们用行动向我们证明了“伟大从来不是天赋的爆发，而是日复一日的坚守”。 泰州队值得我们尊重和学习。请以The Power of Not Giving Up为题，按照要求根据Taizhou Team从困境走向胜利的历程写一篇作文。 Problems win only one in the first five games； be the last in the ranking (排名榜)； no one thought... Actions ...lose heart； train...； encourage each other instead of... Results after 175 days of hard work； win... feelings What do you learn from the story? What will you do next? 要求： 1) 观点明确, 主题向上，必须包括符合题意的相关信息，并适当发挥； 2) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，注意时态和句式多样； 3) 词数：100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 The Power of Not Giving Up Last week, I heard a touching story about Taizhou Team in the “Suchao” soccer game._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 期末复习之书面表达16篇 （Units1-8单元话题） 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 Know yourself 个人信息 Unit 2 Colours 颜色 Unit 3 Teenage problems 青少年问题 Unit 4 Growing up 成长 Unit 5 Art world 艺术世界 Unit 6 TV programmes 电视节目 Unit 7 Films 电影 Unit 8 Detective stories 侦探故事 1．现在电视上的节目丰富多彩，作为中学生我们要学会选择适合自己的节目，以充实自己的娱乐生活。上周班会，老师组织你们就中学生应该看什么类型的电视节目进行了讨论。请根据讨论内容，写一篇英语短文，并表述自己的观点。 Types of TV programmes Opinions (观点) about the programmes   Students Documentary 学到许多自然、历史方面的知识…… News report 了解世界上正在发生的事…… Music programme 感到放松…… Teacher Drama series 长时间观看会伤害眼睛，影响…… In my opinion... 注意事项：1.表达清楚语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 3.词数：100词左右； 4.不得出现真实姓名和校名等。 Last week, we had a class meeting to discuss what types of TV programs we students should watch. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Last week, we discussed what TV programmes students should watch. Some students recommended documentaries which teach us about nature and history. Others preferred news reports to know what’s happening worldwide. Many enjoyed music programmes, because listening to beautiful songs made them relaxed. However, our teacher warned that drama series can be harmful. Watching them for too long may hurt our eyes and affect our studies. In my opinion, we should choose meaningful programmes like documentaries and news. They not only broaden our knowledge but also help us relax properly. As long as we control screen time, TV can be a good friend. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍学生推荐的节目类型及原因，并转述老师对电视剧的看法； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①harmful有害的 ②in my opinion在我看来 ③meaningful有意义的 [高分句型] ①Watching them for too long may hurt our eyes and affect our studies. (动名词作主语) ②As long as we control screen time, TV can be a good friend. (as long as引导的条件状语从句) 2．不积跬步，无以至千里；不积小流，无以成江海。在我们的学习和生活中，点滴付出也会带来巨大的影响。阳光中学英语社团准备开展以“Little effort makes a difference”为主题的演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，结合个人经历谈谈你对整个主题的理解以及感悟。内容包括： ♦ What’s the meaning of effort? ♦ Describe your experience. ♦ Share your feelings and suggestions. 注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中勿提及真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Little effort makes a difference Hello, everyone! Not every effort will be successful, but every effort is preparing for our success. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文 Little effort makes a difference Hello, everyone! Not every effort will be successful, but every effort is preparing for our success. Effort is not just about achieving a goal. It’s about the journey of self-improvement and learning. Once I had difficulty with my maths, but I didn’t give up. I spent hours doing maths exercises every day. I also asked my teacher and classmates for help. As a result, I made great progress in maths through months of effort. Just as an old saying goes, “No pain, no gain.” This experience taught me that no matter how small the effort is, it can lead to great results. I think we should keep trying and face difficulties bravely in our life. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应围绕“努力的意义、个人经历、感悟建议”展开，用具体事例说明小努力如何带来改变。 [写作步骤] 第一步，解释努力的含义； 第二步，描述自身经历； 第三步，分享感悟和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①self-improvement自我提升 ②make great progress取得巨大的进步 ③bravely勇敢地 [高分句型] ①This experience taught me that no matter how small the effort is, it can lead to great results.（that引导的宾语从句，no matter how引导的让步状语从句） ②I think we should keep trying and face difficulties bravely in our life.（省略that的宾语从句） 3．艺术使我们的生活丰富多彩。在众多的艺术形式中，有人喜欢音乐，有人喜欢电影，还有人喜欢电视节目。近期，你校英语报正在举办“My favourite art form”的主题征文活动。 要求： 1. 参考下表，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，并分享与之相关的故事和感受，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 My favourite art form Introduction ... Story ... Feelings ... My favourite art form My favourite art form is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite art form My favourite art form is films because they’re like colourful dreams that everyone can share. Last month, our school held a “Mini-Oscar” activity. My group chose Zootopia. I played Judy, the brave rabbit. At first I was shy and nervous, so I watched the movie five times, copying Judy’s smile, hop, even the way she walks. When the big day came, I wore grey ears made from paper plates and spoke my words loudly. Everyone clapped and we won the “Best Teamwork” award. Films teach me more than English. They show that a small action can change the big world. The world on the screen is wide and welcoming, and I know I will always get power from it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：介绍最喜欢的艺术形式，分享个人故事，表达感受。考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，简单介绍最喜欢的艺术形式； 第二步：分享一个具体的故事； 第三步：书写结语，表达个人感受和影响。 [亮点词汇] ①at first首先 ②made from由……制成 ②wide and welcoming广阔而热情友好的 [高分句型] ①When the big day came, I wore grey ears made from paper plates and spoke my words loudly.（运用了“When”引导的时间状语从句，以及“made from”过去分词短语作后置定语） ②The world on the screen is wide and welcoming, and I know I will always get power from it.（运用了省略“that”的宾语从句） 4．2025年即将过去，新的一年即将来到，学校英语社团将举行以“Look back at the past, hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛，你想投稿，请根据下图提示，就2025年一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受，并写写新一年的希望和打算。 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Look back at the past, hope for the future This year is coming to an end. During this year, I experienced a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Look back at the past, hope for the future This year is coming to an end. During this year, I experienced a lot. The most unforgettable moment was when I joined the school English speech contest. At first, I was so nervous that my voice shook. But with my teacher’s help and daily practice, I finally got the third prize. This experience taught me “Practice makes perfect” and to be brave when facing challenges. For the new year, I have two main plans. First, I’ll read one English storybook every month to improve my reading skills. Second, I’ll take part in more volunteer activities to help others. I hope the new year will be full of joy and growth, and I can become a better version of myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：通过围绕回顾过去的经历、自己的记忆和感受以及计划和希望展开写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍最让自己难忘的经历； 第二步，详细描述自己的记忆和感受； 第三步，介绍自己的计划和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①most unforgettable最难忘的 ②facing challenges面对挑战 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①The most unforgettable moment was when I joined the school English speech contest. (when引导的表语从句) ②I hope the new year will be full of joy and growth, and I can become a better version of myself. (宾语从句) 5．音乐、电影、绘画、摄影，在众多的艺术形式中，电影广受人们的喜爱。假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据表格中的提示，以 I like English films best 为题，写一篇英语短文。 注意：1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译； 2. 词数 100 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 I like English films best Among all kinds of art forms, I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I like English films best Among all kinds of art forms, I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. First, they’re a great way to learn new English words and polish my listening skills. I also get to know famous actors and actresses, like the elegant Audrey Hepburn, through these films. What’s more, they let me explore different cultures: I learn about foreign history, geography, and even local customs while enjoying scenes of places like London’s Big Ben. However, I have no time to watch films because I have much homework to do every day. I hope I can achieve a balance between my study and my hobbies. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：以“I like English films best”为题，介绍喜欢英语电影的原因、遇到的问题及期望。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点明自己最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，并说明喜欢的原因是能从中学到很多。 第二步，中间详细介绍喜欢英语电影的具体理由。 第三步，结尾说明目前遇到的问题，并表达平衡学习与爱好的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①polish my listening skills提升我的听力技能 ②elegant优雅的 ③explore different cultures探索不同文化 ④achieve a balance实现平衡 [高分句型] ①I hope I can achieve a balance between my study and my hobbies. (运用了宾语从句) ②However, I have no time to watch films because I have much homework to do every day. (运用了原因状语从句) 6．在初三的英语学习中，我们了解了许多提升自己的方式，例如：学习各种艺术形式、观看电视节目、向榜样学习等。请你以“My Way to Improve Myself”为题，结合自己的经历介绍一下你提升自己的方法以及这样做的理由和成效，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. What’s your way(s) to improve yourself? 2. Why would you like to do it? 3. How can it help you improve? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Way to Improve Myself Everyone has its own ways to improve. I like______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Way to Improve Myself Everyone has their own ways to improve. I like learning different art forms, especially painting. I would like to do it because painting is a great way to express my feelings. When I’m happy or sad, I can use colors and lines to show my emotions on the canvas. It’s like talking to myself in a silent way. Painting helps me improve in many ways. It enhances my creativity and imagination. Also, when I focus on painting, I can forget about my worries and relax. Now, I’m more confident and can think in a more creative way. In short,  I am not only becoming a better learner but also a more well-rounded person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍提升自己的方法； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点，即提升自己的方法、理由和成效，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“每个人都有自己的提升方式”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“提升自己的方法、理由和成效”几个方面重点介绍自己的情况； 第三步，书写结语。总结提升自己的成效。 [亮点词汇] ①different不同的 ②express表达 ③enhance提高 ④in a...way以……的方式 ⑤well-rounded全面的 [高分句型] ①When I’m happy or sad, I can use colors and lines to show my emotions on the canvas.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②It’s like talking to myself in a silent way.（be like doing sth.像做某事一样） 7．成长就像长途旅行，一路上我们通过各种方式了解广阔的世界，同时在成长过程中，我们会享受成功，也会经历挫折……请根据下列提示，以“Growing up in difficulties”为题写一篇英语短文。 1. How do you learn about the world? 2. What problem(s) have you had during the journey of growing up? 3. How have you dealt with it/them? 4. What’s your feeling about growing up? 注意事项： （1）短文应包含提示中涵盖的要点，可适当拓展。 （2）短文中不得提及真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 （3）词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Growing up in difficulties Growing up is like a journey and I have learned a lot so far. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Growing up in difficulties Growing up is like a journey and I have learned a lot so far. Learning about the world is part of growing up. I usually learn about the world from teachers at school. They teach me lots of useful knowledge. I also learn about the world through the Internet. I can get lots of information quickly. But I also have some problems when growing up. For example, I don’t have enough sleep because of too much homework. What’s more, I can’t achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. I ask my teacher Mr. Green for advice and he advises me to plan my time well. Although growing up is hard, we should never give up and take on new challenges bravely. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述自己遇到的问题以及是如何处理的； 第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ①lots of许多 ②because of因为 ③achieve a balance实现平衡 ［高分句型］ ①I ask my teacher Mr. Green for advice and he advises me to plan my time well.（并列句） ②Although growing up is hard, we should never give up and take on new challenges bravely.（让步状语从句） 8．我们身边有许多值得我们钦佩的人，有在某个领域做出非凡成就的名人，也有平凡的普通人，他们的事迹感人肺腑，他们的品行受人敬仰，是我们学习的榜样。学校英语社团在举办演讲比赛，假设你最钦佩的人是你的妈妈，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，写一篇以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语演讲稿。内容要点如下： 对我影响最深的人 妈妈，40多岁，一名医生，把大部分时间奉献给了工作。 性格 善良又乐于助人，有一颗充满爱的心，经常帮助需要帮助的人 喜好 喜欢蓝色的房间，蓝色让人放松；音乐，喜欢古典音乐，有持久价值；喜欢画画，美术是令人愉快的事情。 其他 对我的学习要求很严格；总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；当我学习有困难的时候，她总是给我提供一些有价值的建议，有了她的帮助，我在我的课业和爱好之间能取得平衡，…… 注意事项： 1. 词数：90左右(文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 3. 文章必须包含所提供的信息，并做适当发挥。 Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now, I’d like to talk about my mother. The person who has influenced me most is my mother. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now, I’d like to talk about my mother. The person who has influenced me most is my mother. She is a doctor in her forties and devotes most of her time to work. She is kind. She has a heart full of love and often helps those in need. She likes blue rooms because the color helps people relax. She likes listening to classical music. It has lasting value. She enjoys painting and thinks art is pleasant. She is strict with my study. She listens to my problems patiently and suggests how to solve them. When I have difficulties in my study, she will offer me valuable advice. With her help, I can balance my study and hobbies. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需覆盖表格所有要点，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍妈妈职业和奉献精神； 第二步，分述性格和三大喜好； 第三步，强调对我的严格教育、学习帮助及精神影响。 [亮点词汇] ①devotes奉献 ②valuable有价值的 ③balance平衡 [高分句型] ①She likes blue rooms because the color helps people relax.（运用because引导的原因状语从句） ②When I have difficulties in my study, she will offer me valuable advice.（运用when引导时间状语从句） 9．成长是一个不断变化的过程。进入九年级以来，你在性格和学习习惯方面发生了哪些变化？近期校园英语广播站开设了一档以成长为主题的栏目，向九年级同学约稿，请以The Changes in Me为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的变化及感受。要点如下： Aspect Past Now Feelings 性格态度 1. 害羞，不敢发言 2. …… 1. 积极参与，努力表达自己 2. …… 1. 更自信 2. …… 学习习惯 1. 依赖父母提醒 2. …… 1. 学会规划时间，做事更有条理 2. …… 1. 更有成就感 2. …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Growing up brings many changes to my life. When I look back, I find that I am not the same person as I was before. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes in Me Growing up brings many changes to my life. When I look back, I find that I am not the same person as I was before. In the past, I was shy and seldom raised my hand in class, always afraid of making mistakes. Now, I join discussions actively and share ideas bravely, no longer worrying about being wrong. I’ve become more outgoing and confident. Also, I used to dislike sports, but now I play basketball after school with friends, which makes me healthier and more energetic. As for study, I once depended on parents to check my work. Now, I manage time wisely and make detailed plans, which helps me finish tasks efficiently. I really enjoy these changes. They help me grow into a better version of myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了个人成长过程中的变化； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”，描述现在和过去的状态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括性格和学习习惯方面的变化以及个人感受，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Growing up brings many changes to my life. When I look back, I find that I am not the same person as I was before.”来引出下文对个人变化的描述； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“性格态度”和“学习习惯”两个方面详细描述过去和现在的不同，以及这些变化带来的感受； 第三步，书写结语。通过“I really enjoy these changes. They help me grow into a better version of myself.”表达对这些变化的喜爱和它们对个人成长的积极影响。 [亮点词汇] ①seldom很少 ②no longer不再 ③depend on依赖 [高分句型] ①Now, I join discussions actively and share ideas bravely, no longer worrying about being wrong.（现在分词作伴随状语） ②Now, I manage time wisely and make detailed plans, which helps me finish tasks efficiently.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．10月3日，王楚钦与孙颖莎夺得 WTT 中国大满贯冠军——这是他们八年搭档中“无数次加练、无数滴汗水”的结果。耀眼的荣光，藏在无人看见的晨光与星光里。他们的故事印证了：成功是奋斗时光的馈赠。你们的学校正在进行主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的征文比赛，你想投稿，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，文章需包含以下几个要点： 1. 简述你认为青少年应当具备的品质； 2. 分享一次你的奋斗故事 (时间，地点，人物，起因，经过，结果)； 3. 说明这次奋斗带给你的成长。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Youth is a time for fighting ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Youth is a time for fighting I believe teenagers need persistence and courage to face challenges. Last year, I took part in a school speech contest. The topic was difficult, and I felt nervous at first. Every evening after finishing homework, I practiced speaking in front of the mirror, adjusting my tone and gestures again and again. My deskmate also helped me correct my mistakes patiently. After two weeks of hard work, I won second prize.   This experience taught me that hard work brings growth. Now, I dare to take on new tasks without fear. Fighting in youth not only makes us better but also builds a stronger future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：围绕青少年品质、个人奋斗经历（时间/地点/人物/起因/经过/结果）、成长收获展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明青少年必备品质； 第二步：详细描述自己的奋斗故事 (时间，地点，人物，起因，经过，结果)； 第三步：说明这次奋斗带给你的成长。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②in front of在……前面 ③take on接受 [高分句型] ①I believe teenagers need persistence and courage to face challenges.（宾语从句） ②Fighting in youth not only makes us better but also builds a stronger future.（not only...but also...并列结构） 11．近期Chris的学校将举行“To be a sunshine teenager”为题的英语演讲活动。请根据要求，帮助Chris写一篇英语演讲稿。 Name Chris Grade 9 Personality 1.待人谦虚有礼，如……；  2.做事细心、有条理，如…… Hobby 1.喜欢的运动及原因……； 2.喜欢的音乐类型及原因…… Problems&Solutions 1.感觉疲惫时，会…….；    2．感觉孤独时，会…… Dream …… 注意：1．根据提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．词数在100左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 To be a sunshine teenager Hello, everyone! I’m Chris from Grade 9. I’m 15 years old. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To be a sunshine teenager Hello, everyone! I’m Chris from Grade 9. I’m 15 years old. I’m modest and polite. For example, I always help classmates patiently. Also, I’m careful and organized. I keep my schoolbag tidy and plan my study time clearly every day. I love playing basketball because it’s exciting and makes me relaxed. I also enjoy pop music because it cheers me up when I’m tired. When feeling tired, I listen to light songs. When feeling lonely, I talk to friends or parents. They make me feel warm. My dream is to be a volunteer. I hope to help others with my skills. Let’s all be sunshine teenagers! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：需覆盖表格中所有栏目（性格、爱好、问题与解决、梦想），适当举例。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍性格+举例（礼貌谦虚→帮同学；细心有条理→书包整洁、规划学习）。 第二步：用并列结构分述两个爱好（运动+音乐）及原因（basketball→relaxed; pop music→cheer up）。 第三步：针对两个问题提出解决方法（累→听歌；孤独→聊天）+ 梦想（志愿者）+ 呼吁结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①modest and polite谦虚有礼貌 ②cheer…up使……振作 ③hope to do sth.希望做某事 [高分句型] ①I love playing basketball because it's exciting and makes me relaxed. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②When feeling tired, I listen to light songs. (“when+现在分词”作状语) 12．“光影流转间藏着千年智慧，音符悦动里诉说人生百态。”娱乐不仅是消遣，更是我们认识世界的另一扇窗。你喜欢什么样的娱乐方式呢？有过怎样的故事呢？又有怎样的感受呢？请结合你的真实体验，谈谈电影、音乐、绘画或阅读等娱乐活动的重要性，以及这些活动给你带来的独特思考。 参考词汇： 娱乐 entertainment 内容包括： 1. 描述你喜爱的一种或几种娱乐方式； 2. 讲述你与这项娱乐活动的故事； 3. 谈谈它带给你的思考或成长。 注意： 1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 Many people think that entertainment is just for fun, but for me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many people think entertainment is just for fun, but for me, it’s a window to the world. Music, especially the song “You Raise Me Up”, has truly broadened my horizons. First, this beautiful song introduced me to the power of classical instruments and Irish folk culture. Besides, its lyrics about overcoming difficulties with the help of others taught me the importance of gratitude and friendship. It made me think about the people who support me in my life. In conclusion, music is more than pleasant sounds. It is a special teacher who helps me see a bigger and kinder world. I will keep learning from it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点明确，需描述喜爱的娱乐方式、讲述与该娱乐活动的故事以及谈谈其带来的思考或成长，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头通过“Many people think entertainment is just for fun, but for me, it’s a window to the world.”表明娱乐对作者而言不只是消遣，而是认识世界的窗口，引出重点介绍的音乐这一娱乐方式； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从两个方面具体阐述，先是说明“You Raise Me Up”这首歌让作者了解到古典乐器和爱尔兰民俗文化的力量，接着讲述歌词让作者明白感恩和友谊的重要性，思考生活中支持自己的人，这是作者与音乐的故事以及音乐带来的思考； 第三步，书写结语。结尾“In conclusion, music is more than pleasant sounds. It is a special teacher that helps me see a bigger and kinder world. I will keep learning from it.”总结音乐不仅仅是悦耳的声音，更是一位特别的老师，作者会继续向它学习，表达了作者对音乐的感悟和持续学习的态度。 [亮点词汇] ①broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野 ②overcome difficulties克服困难 ③the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①Many people think that entertainment is just for fun, but for me, it’s a window to the world.（“but”连接两个句子，形成对比关系） ②It is a special teacher that helps me see a bigger and kinder world.（who引导定语从句 ） 13．假如你是刘浩，你最近认识的澳大利亚交流生Thomas回国后给你发了一封电子邮件，邮件中他详细地介绍了自己，并想更多地了解你。请你就下面邮件中提及的几个问题用英语进行回复。 ● What is your personality like? ● What kind of art form do you like best? Why? ● Who has influenced you most? Why? ● Do you have any problems with study or life? What are they? 注意事项： 1. 至少选择三个方面进行回复，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 答题卡上只写正文内容，词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Thomas, Thank you for your email. I miss you very much and I want to make friends with you. Now I will tell you something about myself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Hao 【答案】例文 Dear Thomas, Thank you for your email. I miss you very much and I want to make friends with you. Now I will tell you something about myself. First, I am an outgoing, active and friendly boy. I get along well with my classmates and I am always ready to help others in need. Second, as for art forms, I like music best. Listening to soft music can help me relax completely when I am tired. It brings me great fun and makes my life colorful. Third, the person who has influenced me most is my mother. She is kind and hardworking. She always encourages me to keep going and be brave when I face difficulties. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Liu Hao 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己的性格特点； 第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式并说明理由； 第三步：介绍对自己影响最大的人并说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ①outgoing外向的 ②get along well with与……相处融洽 ③completely完全地 ④keep going坚持下去 ⑤encourage鼓励 [高分句型] ①Listening to soft music can help me relax completely when I am tired. (动名词作主语) ②The person who has influenced me most is my mother. (who引导定语从句) 14．学业上难以平衡的时间、家庭中难以沟通的父母、好友间难以协调的分歧……这些藏在学习生活里的“小挑战”，看似会让人紧张或退缩，实则却蕴藏着成长的契机。阳光英语社团准备开展以“Every challenge is a great chance to grow”为主题的写作比赛。请根据以下流程图用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意事项： (1)短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; (2)词数不少于90个，短文标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数; (3)短文须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Every challenge is a great chance to grow Hello，everyone! Life is always full of challenges，but every challenge is a great chance to grow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Every challenge is a great chance to growHello, everyone! Life is always full of challenges, but every challenge is a great chance to grow. To me, this means challenges are not walls to stop us, but ladders to lift us up. Last term, I faced a big challenge: I had to balance my school play practice and my math exam preparation. I felt stressed and even wanted to quit the play. But with my teacher’s advice, I made a detailed plan—using lunch breaks to review math and spending after-school time on practice. Finally, I not only got a good grade in math but also did well in the play. This experience taught me how to manage time better. When facing challenges, we should stay calm first. Then, we can ask for help from others and make a clear plan. Remember, every challenge is a gift that helps us become stronger and smarter. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：围绕“理解主题含义、分享个人经历、给出应对建议”三个核心要点展开，贴合“挑战是成长机遇”的主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步：解释主题含义：点明“挑战不是阻碍，而是成长的阶梯”； 第二步：分享个人经历：讲述自己平衡校园戏剧排练与数学备考的挑战，以及如何通过制定计划克服困难、收获成长； 第三步：给出应对建议：说明面对挑战时应保持冷静、寻求帮助、制定计划，升华“挑战是成长礼物”的主题。 [亮点词汇] ①balance平衡 ②detailed plan详细计划 ③manage time管理时间 [高分句型] ①To me, this means challenges are not walls to stop us, but ladders to lift us up.（用比喻修辞） ②Finally, I not only got a good grade in math but also did well in the play.（not only...but also...结构） 15．成长像一次长途旅行，在成长的过程中有困惑，也有收获。请以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在成长过程中的困惑及感受。 如何了解世界 1. 书本：获得各学科的知识，了解历史上的人和事； 2. 父母：教你做个善良、有爱心的人； 3. ……（自拟一点）。 如何解决烦恼 你的烦恼是什么及如何解决的（举例说明）。 你的感受 1. 成长比成功重要； 2. ……（自拟一点）。 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3）100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。 Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. To understand the world, I read books for knowledge of different subjects and learn about people and events in history. My parents teach me to be a kind, loving person. Besides, traveling helps me broaden my horizons. However, there are worries. I worried about my spoken English because I was too shy to speak in public. I asked my English teacher for help. She encouraged me to practice more and join the English club. With her help, I became confident and made great progress. From my experience, I realize that growing up is more important than success. I will cherish every moment of my life and keep moving forward. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，讲述具体经历时使用一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，阐述了解世界的途径； 第二步：转折引出成长中的烦恼。具体描述一个烦恼以及是如何解决的。 第三步：总结全文，表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①broaden one’s horizons开阔某人的眼界 ②in public在公共场合 ③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ④make progress取得进步 ⑤cherish 珍惜 [高分句型] ①To understand the world, I read books for knowledge of different subjects and learn about people and events in history. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②From my experience, I realize that growing up is more important than success. (that引导宾语从句) 16．在刚刚结束的苏超 (JSCL) 比赛中，泰州队 (Taizhou Team) 给我们留下了深刻的印象，他们从最初的失败一路逆袭，直到站在决赛的领奖台上，完美地诠释了永不放弃的力量。他们用行动向我们证明了“伟大从来不是天赋的爆发，而是日复一日的坚守”。 泰州队值得我们尊重和学习。请以The Power of Not Giving Up为题，按照要求根据Taizhou Team从困境走向胜利的历程写一篇作文。 Problems win only one in the first five games； be the last in the ranking (排名榜)； no one thought... Actions ...lose heart； train...； encourage each other instead of... Results after 175 days of hard work； win... feelings What do you learn from the story? What will you do next? 要求： 1) 观点明确, 主题向上，必须包括符合题意的相关信息，并适当发挥； 2) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，注意时态和句式多样； 3) 词数：100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 The Power of Not Giving Up Last week, I heard a touching story about Taizhou Team in the “Suchao” soccer game._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Power of Not Giving Up Last week, I heard a touching story about Taizhou Team in the “Suchao” soccer game. At the start of the season, they only won one game in the first five matches and even fell to the last place in the ranking. Almost nobody thought they could win. However, the players didn’t lose heart. They trained even harder every day and encouraged each other instead of complaining. After 175 days of hard work, they finally beat all the other teams and won the final! When I saw their happy faces on TV, I felt so proud of them. Their amazing journey to victory has shown me the great power of never giving up. I’ll learn from Taizhou Team and never give up easily from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时(描述事件)和一般现在时(表达感悟)； ③提示：需覆盖表格中 Problems/Actions/Results/Feelings 四部分，结尾升华主题 [写作步骤] 第一步：描述困境：前五场仅一胜、排名垫底、无人看好； 第二步：行动与转折：对比消极与积极行动，强调训练和互助，带出 175 天后夺冠； 第三步：感悟与行动：点明主题，结合自身承诺。 [亮点词汇] ①complaining抱怨 ②instead of 而不是 ③felt proud of为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] ①They trained even harder every day and encouraged each other instead of complaining. (and并列；even harder程度递进) ②When I saw their happy faces on TV, I felt so proud of them. (when引导的时间状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $