Unit 2 Amazing China 说明文（旅游景点）（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级下册

本讲义聚焦“介绍类说明文写作”核心知识点，系统梳理国内景点介绍的写作脉络，从话题解读明确核心要素（名称、类型、位置、特色、活动），到写作步骤（总起-分述-总结）搭建逻辑框架，结合素材宝库（词汇、句型、模板）提供学习支架，助力学生掌握中考高频话题写作方法。 资料特色突出，以语言能力培养为核心，提供丰富话题词汇（如classical garden、breathtaking）和高级句型（Located in...、It is a perfect combination of...），提升表达准确性。融入文化意识，通过丽江古城等范文及无锡、连云港等本土景点训练，增强家国情怀。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后变式训练帮助学生自主巩固，查漏补缺，有效提升写作能力。

Unit 2 Amazing China 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍各类热门景点（涵盖古典园林、海滩、山峰、森林、主题公园、博物馆、动物园等），阐述景点的名称、类型、地理位置、核心特色及文化价值，表达对景点的评价与感受。 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般现在时描述景点的现状，适当使用一般现在时或现在完成时介绍历史背景；② 条理清晰，至少从3个维度展开描述（如位置、特色、活动等）；③ 恰当使用连接词与高级句型，语言流畅自然；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合八年级同步写作常规要求）。 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“介绍类说明文”，是中考高频写作话题之一，常以“推荐旅游景点”“介绍家乡特色景点”“向外国友人介绍中国名胜”等形式命题，核心考查学生的事物描述能力、逻辑组织能力及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕 “国内景点介绍” 这一核心主题，选取国内任一类型景点（如古典园林、海滩、山峰、森林、主题公园、博物馆、动物园等），全面介绍其核心信息，展现景点的独特魅力与文化 / 自然价值，表达对景点的评价与推荐意愿。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是国内景点介绍，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为 “推荐家乡特色景点”“向外国友人介绍中国名胜”“我最爱的国内景点”“国内文旅景点推荐” 等。命题内容以客观描述与主观评价相结合为主，要求根据提示或自身积累，有条理地呈现景点关键信息。写作时应注意信息的全面性、逻辑的连贯性、语言的生动性以及时态的准确运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. What is the name of the attraction? 2. Which type of attraction is it? 3. Where is it? 4. What is special about it? 5. What can you see or do there? 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，点明景点的名称、地理位置及总体地位（如知名度、文化 / 自然价值），快速引出话题。 ◆ 步骤二：正文分维度展开，依次介绍景点的类型、核心特色（结合细节描写）、可体验的活动，恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结景点的核心价值，表达个人游玩感受或推荐理由，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出景点，说明其知名度与总体地位 现在完成时/一般现在时 As one of the most famous..., ...is popular among...; Located in..., ...has become a symbol of...; With a long history of..., ...attracts thousands of visitors every year 中间（分述） 1. 基本信息：类型、地理位置； 2. 核心特色：自然景观、建筑风格、文化价值； 3. 可参与活动：观赏、体验类项目。 一般现在时（现状）；一般过去时（历史背景） Firstly,...; Secondly,...; What’s more,...; Besides,...; In addition,...; For example,...; Especially,... 结尾（总结） 评价景点价值，表达推荐理由或感受 现在完成时/一般现在时 In my opinion,...; It is well worth visiting because...; Visiting...can not only...but also...; All in all,... ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 景点类型词汇：classical garden（古典园林）、beach（海滩）、mountain（山峰）、forest（森林）、theme park（主题公园）、museum（博物馆）、zoo（动物园）、national park（国家公园）、historic site（历史遗迹）、botanical garden（植物园） 2. 描述特色的词汇： ￮形容词：magnificent（壮丽的）、serene（静谧的）、unique（独特的）、ancient（古老的）、colorful（色彩斑斓的）、peaceful（宁静的）、fantastic（极好的）、breathtaking（令人惊叹的） ￮名词：scenery（风景）、landscape（景观）、architecture（建筑）、culture（文化）、relic（遗迹）、carving（雕刻）、atmosphere（氛围）、bio-diversity（生物多样性） 3. 动作短语： ￮观赏类：admire the scenery（欣赏风景）、view the exhibits（观赏展品）、enjoy the performances（欣赏表演）、appreciate the architecture（品鉴建筑） ￮体验类：hike in the mountains（山间徒步）、swim in the sea（海中游泳）、explore the forest（探索森林）、take photos（拍照留念）、have a picnic（野餐）、ride roller coasters（乘坐过山车） 4. 时态标志词：nowadays（如今，一般现在时）、for centuries（数世纪以来，现在完成时）、in ancient times（在古代，一般过去时）、currently（目前，一般现在时） 5. 逻辑连接词：firstly（首先）、secondly（其次）、what’s more（此外）、besides（另外）、in addition（再者）、however（然而）、as a result（因此）、in short（总之） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式： ① As one of the most famous scenic spots in China, the Classical Gardens of Suzhou are popular among visitors from all over the world. ② Located in the southern part of Hainan Island, Sanya Bay is famous for its white sand and clear blue sea. ③ With a history of over 2,000 years, the Great Wall has become a symbol of Chinese culture. 2. 中间描述句式： ① It is a beautiful beach with soft sand and gentle waves, making it an ideal place for relaxation. ② The museum is special because it collects a large number of ancient relics that can help us learn about the local history. ③ In this theme park, you can not only ride exciting roller coasters but also meet your favorite cartoon characters. ④ What makes the mountain unique is its strange rock formations and beautiful waterfalls. 3. 结尾总结句式： ① In my opinion, visiting this scenic spot is a wonderful experience that you will never forget. ② It is well worth a visit because it not only shows the beauty of nature but also carries rich cultural meanings. ③ All in all, this place is a perfect combination of natural scenery and human wisdom, attracting more and more visitors every year. ( 谚语名句 ) 1. The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page.（世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读过其中一页。）—— 可用于开头引出旅游与景点话题 2. Nature always wears the colors of the spirit.（自然永远披着心灵的色彩。）—— 可用于描述自然类景点时升华主题 3. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.（美在观者眼中。）—— 可用于结尾表达对景点的独特感受 ( 写作模板 ) ____ (Name of the scenic spot) is one of the most famous ____ (type of the spot) in ____ (location). It has been attracting visitors from home and abroad for many years because of its unique charm. Firstly, it is famous for its ____ (first feature, such as natural scenery/architecture). For example, there are ____ (specific details, like green hills, clear lakes, ancient buildings) that make it look like a fairyland. Secondly, the ____ (second feature, such as cultural connotation/special activities) here is also worth experiencing. You can ____ (specific activities, like learn about the history, join in the local customs) during your visit. What’s more, ____ (third feature, such as comfortable environment/friendly service) makes the trip more enjoyable. In my opinion, ____ (name of the spot) is well worth visiting. It not only allows you to enjoy the beauty of ____ (nature/culture) but also broadens your horizons. I believe you will have an unforgettable experience here. ( 参考范文 ) A Wonderful Trip to Lijiang Old Town Lijiang Old Town, located in Yunnan Province, is a world-famous historic site and one of the most charming scenic spots in China. Firstly, it is special for its unique ancient architecture. The houses here are made of wood with black tiles, and the narrow stone streets wind through the town like ribbons. Secondly, the natural scenery around the town is breathtaking. Surrounded by green mountains and clear rivers, it feels like a peaceful paradise. You can take a walk along the riverside, visit ancient bridges, or taste local snacks in the traditional markets. What’s more, the Naxi culture here is rich and interesting. You can listen to Naxi music and watch traditional dances to learn about the local people’s life. In short, Lijiang Old Town is a perfect combination of history, culture and nature. Visiting here makes you feel relaxed and happy. It is truly a place worth visiting again and again. 【范文说明】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇说明文，围绕“景点介绍”主题，以丽江古城为例，从建筑特色、自然景观、文化体验三个维度展开描述，符合“总—分—总”结构要求，涵盖景点核心信息。 2. 写作指导：人称以第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主，准确运用连接词“firstly, secondly, what’s more, in short”增强逻辑连贯性。写作中融入素材宝库中的核心词汇（historic site, ancient architecture, natural scenery, local snacks）和高级句型（located in..., surrounded by..., it is a perfect combination of...），语言流畅生动，符合八年级同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 常州 对学生说脏话现象的讨论（含观点与建议：为什么不能说脏话、如何阻止他人说脏话） 提示类+投稿格式（校英文报讨论，给定核心要点，需补充细节） 扬州 以"The beauty of our school"为主题的小组活动计划（含感受、记录、分享校园美的具体做法） 提示类+活动计划格式（给定实践任务框架，需补充细节） 泰州 以"Good Relationships"为题写短文（含良好人际关系的重要性、个人实例与做法） 提示类+命题作文格式（给定主题，需结合个人体验） 2024年 常州 阐述倾听的重要性（含校园生活与日常生活中倾听的理由） 提示类+投稿格式（校英文报投稿，给定要点） 扬州 以"Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism"为题写征文（含端午节的意义、庆祝方式与个人行动） 提示类+征文格式（英语报“Culture”专栏，给定文化主题要点） 泰州 “走进社区”志愿服务经历分享（含过程、做法与收获） 提纲类（给定“经历—做法—感受”核心框架） 2023年 常州 介绍坚持多年的兴趣爱好（含爱好内容及带来的影响） 提示类（开放细节补充，侧重个人体验表达） 扬州 以"Getting close to traditional Chinese culture"为题写征文（含走近中国传统文化的具体做法与感受） 提示类+征文格式（校报英语专栏，给定文化主题） 泰州 给英国朋友介绍泰州的教育（含良好的教育环境、名人与特色） 提示类+书信格式（给定要点，需补充细节） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】无锡，江南水乡的璀璨明珠，被选为2025年央视春晚分会场，展现了其独特的文化魅力与现代化风貌。春晚分会场的设立，让全国观众领略无锡的自然之美、人文之韵与创新活力，为这座城市增添了新的光彩。请写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的人来无锡游玩，体验无锡之美。 Word bank: attraction 吸引人的地方，景点 可参考景点：Taihu Lake, Huishan Ancient Town, Xihui Park, Turtle Head Isle, Wuxi Nanchan Temple... 注意： 2.语句通顺，言之有理。（括号给出内容非限定性表达，可自主合理发挥） 3.不得出现真实的人名和学校名。 4.字数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear friends, As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏苏州·期中】读万卷书，行万里路。祖国的大好河山，如画风景一定让你印象深刻，请你根据以下内容和自身经历补全标题，仔细阅读题目要求，并将你的想法写成一篇英语短文。 Have you ever been touched by the beauty of a place that you felt completely lost in? Please complete the title first to write an article at least 100 words about a time when you were lost in the beauty of something. Which place touched you most? What’s special about it? What did you see, hear at that moment? What activities did you do while enjoying the beauty? How did you feel? Title: Lost in the beauty of _________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 【24-25八年级下·江苏连云港·期中】你校英语兴趣小组的网站“Tour”板块正在举行题为“My trip in Lianyungang”的征文比赛。 假如你是李华，请根据下列信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你在连云港的一次旅游经历，参加征文比赛。 A place of interest My trip in Lianyungang Beautiful views Time, people, transport,... ... Activities 要求： （1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】假设你的笔友打算到无锡旅游，他想了解无锡的情况，请你根据提示，写一篇短文介绍无锡的情况。      Wuxi location (地理位置)；weather Places of interest Nanchang Ancient Street: in the past…now… Huishan Town: take a walk…enjoy…Huishan clay figurine(惠山泥人)…since… Wuxi Grand Theatre: big and modern…Xi opera… Travelling advice … 注意： 2. 短文须包括所给内容要点，词数80个左右，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 省略号部分展开合理想象，作适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】无锡作为今年春晚及元宵晚会江苏分会场，备受赞誉。假设你是李明，你的笔友Mike也想来无锡游玩，为了更好地计划这趟旅行，他给你写了一封邮件，请根据Mike的邮件内容，给他写一封回信。 Dear Ming, After watching the Spring Festival Gala, I fall in love with your hometown Wuxi. I plan to visit it. Is it a suitable season to come? Why? I’m interested in the places of interest there. Can you give me some advice? From the show, I know that Wuxi has a long history. What special things can I enjoy there? What else should I prepare during my visit? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike Word Bank： 南禅寺 Nanchan Temple        梅园 the Plum Garden     鼋头渚 Yuantouzhu            惠山古镇 Huishan Ancient Town 要求： (1)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，要点全面。 (2)词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。 Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Ming ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Amazing China 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍各类热门景点（涵盖古典园林、海滩、山峰、森林、主题公园、博物馆、动物园等），阐述景点的名称、类型、地理位置、核心特色及文化价值，表达对景点的评价与感受。 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般现在时描述景点的现状，适当使用一般现在时或现在完成时介绍历史背景；② 条理清晰，至少从3个维度展开描述（如位置、特色、活动等）；③ 恰当使用连接词与高级句型，语言流畅自然；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合八年级同步写作常规要求）。 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“介绍类说明文”，是中考高频写作话题之一，常以“推荐旅游景点”“介绍家乡特色景点”“向外国友人介绍中国名胜”等形式命题，核心考查学生的事物描述能力、逻辑组织能力及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕 “国内景点介绍” 这一核心主题，选取国内任一类型景点（如古典园林、海滩、山峰、森林、主题公园、博物馆、动物园等），全面介绍其核心信息，展现景点的独特魅力与文化 / 自然价值，表达对景点的评价与推荐意愿。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是国内景点介绍，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为 “推荐家乡特色景点”“向外国友人介绍中国名胜”“我最爱的国内景点”“国内文旅景点推荐” 等。命题内容以客观描述与主观评价相结合为主，要求根据提示或自身积累，有条理地呈现景点关键信息。写作时应注意信息的全面性、逻辑的连贯性、语言的生动性以及时态的准确运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. What is the name of the attraction? 2. Which type of attraction is it? 3. Where is it? 4. What is special about it? 5. What can you see or do there? 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，点明景点的名称、地理位置及总体地位（如知名度、文化 / 自然价值），快速引出话题。 ◆ 步骤二：正文分维度展开，依次介绍景点的类型、核心特色（结合细节描写）、可体验的活动，恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结景点的核心价值，表达个人游玩感受或推荐理由，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出景点，说明其知名度与总体地位 现在完成时/一般现在时 As one of the most famous..., ...is popular among...; Located in..., ...has become a symbol of...; With a long history of..., ...attracts thousands of visitors every year 中间（分述） 1. 基本信息：类型、地理位置； 2. 核心特色：自然景观、建筑风格、文化价值； 3. 可参与活动：观赏、体验类项目。 一般现在时（现状）；一般过去时（历史背景） Firstly,...; Secondly,...; What’s more,...; Besides,...; In addition,...; For example,...; Especially,... 结尾（总结） 评价景点价值，表达推荐理由或感受 现在完成时/一般现在时 In my opinion,...; It is well worth visiting because...; Visiting...can not only...but also...; All in all,... ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 景点类型词汇：classical garden（古典园林）、beach（海滩）、mountain（山峰）、forest（森林）、theme park（主题公园）、museum（博物馆）、zoo（动物园）、national park（国家公园）、historic site（历史遗迹）、botanical garden（植物园） 2. 描述特色的词汇： ￮形容词：magnificent（壮丽的）、serene（静谧的）、unique（独特的）、ancient（古老的）、colorful（色彩斑斓的）、peaceful（宁静的）、fantastic（极好的）、breathtaking（令人惊叹的） ￮名词：scenery（风景）、landscape（景观）、architecture（建筑）、culture（文化）、relic（遗迹）、carving（雕刻）、atmosphere（氛围）、bio-diversity（生物多样性） 3. 动作短语： ￮观赏类：admire the scenery（欣赏风景）、view the exhibits（观赏展品）、enjoy the performances（欣赏表演）、appreciate the architecture（品鉴建筑） ￮体验类：hike in the mountains（山间徒步）、swim in the sea（海中游泳）、explore the forest（探索森林）、take photos（拍照留念）、have a picnic（野餐）、ride roller coasters（乘坐过山车） 4. 时态标志词：nowadays（如今，一般现在时）、for centuries（数世纪以来，现在完成时）、in ancient times（在古代，一般过去时）、currently（目前，一般现在时） 5. 逻辑连接词：firstly（首先）、secondly（其次）、what’s more（此外）、besides（另外）、in addition（再者）、however（然而）、as a result（因此）、in short（总之） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式： ① As one of the most famous scenic spots in China, the Classical Gardens of Suzhou are popular among visitors from all over the world. ② Located in the southern part of Hainan Island, Sanya Bay is famous for its white sand and clear blue sea. ③ With a history of over 2,000 years, the Great Wall has become a symbol of Chinese culture. 2. 中间描述句式： ① It is a beautiful beach with soft sand and gentle waves, making it an ideal place for relaxation. ② The museum is special because it collects a large number of ancient relics that can help us learn about the local history. ③ In this theme park, you can not only ride exciting roller coasters but also meet your favorite cartoon characters. ④ What makes the mountain unique is its strange rock formations and beautiful waterfalls. 3. 结尾总结句式： ① In my opinion, visiting this scenic spot is a wonderful experience that you will never forget. ② It is well worth a visit because it not only shows the beauty of nature but also carries rich cultural meanings. ③ All in all, this place is a perfect combination of natural scenery and human wisdom, attracting more and more visitors every year. ( 谚语名句 ) 1. The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page.（世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读过其中一页。）—— 可用于开头引出旅游与景点话题 2. Nature always wears the colors of the spirit.（自然永远披着心灵的色彩。）—— 可用于描述自然类景点时升华主题 3. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.（美在观者眼中。）—— 可用于结尾表达对景点的独特感受 ( 写作模板 ) ____ (Name of the scenic spot) is one of the most famous ____ (type of the spot) in ____ (location). It has been attracting visitors from home and abroad for many years because of its unique charm. Firstly, it is famous for its ____ (first feature, such as natural scenery/architecture). For example, there are ____ (specific details, like green hills, clear lakes, ancient buildings) that make it look like a fairyland. Secondly, the ____ (second feature, such as cultural connotation/special activities) here is also worth experiencing. You can ____ (specific activities, like learn about the history, join in the local customs) during your visit. What’s more, ____ (third feature, such as comfortable environment/friendly service) makes the trip more enjoyable. In my opinion, ____ (name of the spot) is well worth visiting. It not only allows you to enjoy the beauty of ____ (nature/culture) but also broadens your horizons. I believe you will have an unforgettable experience here. ( 参考范文 ) A Wonderful Trip to Lijiang Old Town Lijiang Old Town, located in Yunnan Province, is a world-famous historic site and one of the most charming scenic spots in China. Firstly, it is special for its unique ancient architecture. The houses here are made of wood with black tiles, and the narrow stone streets wind through the town like ribbons. Secondly, the natural scenery around the town is breathtaking. Surrounded by green mountains and clear rivers, it feels like a peaceful paradise. You can take a walk along the riverside, visit ancient bridges, or taste local snacks in the traditional markets. What’s more, the Naxi culture here is rich and interesting. You can listen to Naxi music and watch traditional dances to learn about the local people’s life. In short, Lijiang Old Town is a perfect combination of history, culture and nature. Visiting here makes you feel relaxed and happy. It is truly a place worth visiting again and again. 【范文说明】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇说明文，围绕“景点介绍”主题，以丽江古城为例，从建筑特色、自然景观、文化体验三个维度展开描述，符合“总—分—总”结构要求，涵盖景点核心信息。 2. 写作指导：人称以第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主，准确运用连接词“firstly, secondly, what’s more, in short”增强逻辑连贯性。写作中融入素材宝库中的核心词汇（historic site, ancient architecture, natural scenery, local snacks）和高级句型（located in..., surrounded by..., it is a perfect combination of...），语言流畅生动，符合八年级同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 常州 对学生说脏话现象的讨论（含观点与建议：为什么不能说脏话、如何阻止他人说脏话） 提示类+投稿格式（校英文报讨论，给定核心要点，需补充细节） 扬州 以"The beauty of our school"为主题的小组活动计划（含感受、记录、分享校园美的具体做法） 提示类+活动计划格式（给定实践任务框架，需补充细节） 泰州 以"Good Relationships"为题写短文（含良好人际关系的重要性、个人实例与做法） 提示类+命题作文格式（给定主题，需结合个人体验） 2024年 常州 阐述倾听的重要性（含校园生活与日常生活中倾听的理由） 提示类+投稿格式（校英文报投稿，给定要点） 扬州 以"Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism"为题写征文（含端午节的意义、庆祝方式与个人行动） 提示类+征文格式（英语报“Culture”专栏，给定文化主题要点） 泰州 “走进社区”志愿服务经历分享（含过程、做法与收获） 提纲类（给定“经历—做法—感受”核心框架） 2023年 常州 介绍坚持多年的兴趣爱好（含爱好内容及带来的影响） 提示类（开放细节补充，侧重个人体验表达） 扬州 以"Getting close to traditional Chinese culture"为题写征文（含走近中国传统文化的具体做法与感受） 提示类+征文格式（校报英语专栏，给定文化主题） 泰州 给英国朋友介绍泰州的教育（含良好的教育环境、名人与特色） 提示类+书信格式（给定要点，需补充细节） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】无锡，江南水乡的璀璨明珠，被选为2025年央视春晚分会场，展现了其独特的文化魅力与现代化风貌。春晚分会场的设立，让全国观众领略无锡的自然之美、人文之韵与创新活力，为这座城市增添了新的光彩。请写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的人来无锡游玩，体验无锡之美。 Word bank: attraction 吸引人的地方，景点 可参考景点：Taihu Lake, Huishan Ancient Town, Xihui Park, Turtle Head Isle, Wuxi Nanchan Temple... 注意： 2.语句通顺，言之有理。（括号给出内容非限定性表达，可自主合理发挥） 3.不得出现真实的人名和学校名。 4.字数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear friends, As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 【答案】例文 Dear friends, As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world. Wuxi, a shining pearl in the Jiangnan water-towns, has so much to offer. Its long-standing culture is deeply appealing. Wander in Huishan Ancient Town, and you’ll be surrounded by ancient streets and traditional architecture, feeling the weight of history. The natural attractions are breathtaking. Taihu Lake, with its vast and clear waters, and Turtle Head Isle, where you can enjoy the perfect blend of lake and mountain views, are must-visit. Xihui Park and Wuxi Nanchan Temple also have their own allures. When it comes to food, steamed buns with savory fillings and the famous Wuxi spare ribs will delight your taste buds. The people here are known for their friendliness and warmth, making you feel at home. What’s more, convenient transport networks, including subways and buses, make getting around a breeze. I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息中文化、景点、美食、人文、交通的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出无锡的吸引力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借已给开头引出无锡因春晚分会场展现魅力； 第二步，从“文化、景点、美食、人文、交通”等方面介绍无锡； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①long-standing历史悠久的 ②breathtaking令人惊叹的 ③allure魅力 ④convenient便利的 [高分句型] Taihu Lake, with its vast and clear waters, and Turtle Head Isle, where you can enjoy the perfect blend of lake and mountain views, are must-visit. (where引导的非限制性定语从句) （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏苏州·期中】读万卷书，行万里路。祖国的大好河山，如画风景一定让你印象深刻，请你根据以下内容和自身经历补全标题，仔细阅读题目要求，并将你的想法写成一篇英语短文。 Have you ever been touched by the beauty of a place that you felt completely lost in? Please complete the title first to write an article at least 100 words about a time when you were lost in the beauty of something. Which place touched you most? What’s special about it? What did you see, hear at that moment? What activities did you do while enjoying the beauty? How did you feel? Title: Lost in the beauty of _________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Lost in the Beauty of Guilin Have you ever visited a place that made you forget everything else? Guilin is such a place for me. When I got to Guilin, I was shocked by its beautiful views. The mountains there are really special. They stand tall and look like different things, like animals or people. The Li River runs through it. The water is so clear that you can see the stones at the bottom. I took a bamboo raft ride on the Li River. As the raft moved, I heard the water flowing and birds singing. It was so nice. I took lots of photos to keep these beautiful scenes. I also talked with the man on the raft. He told me some interesting stories about Guilin. In Guilin, I felt really relaxed and happy. All my troubles just went away. Guilin’s beauty is amazing, and I will never forget this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求补全短文标题“Lost in the Beauty of Guilin”。 第二步，具体介绍在桂林看到的风景及活动等。 第三步，最后写出自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像…… ②lots of许多 ③talk with与……交谈 [高分句型] ①The water is so clear that you can see the stones at the bottom.（so that引导的结果状语从句） ②I heard the water flowing and birds singing.（and连接并列成分） （3） 【24-25八年级下·江苏连云港·期中】你校英语兴趣小组的网站“Tour”板块正在举行题为“My trip in Lianyungang”的征文比赛。 假如你是李华，请根据下列信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你在连云港的一次旅游经历，参加征文比赛。 A place of interest My trip in Lianyungang Beautiful views Time, people, transport,... ... Activities 要求： （1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. Last summer, I went to Suma Bay with my family by car. It was sunny and hot. We spent a whole day there and enjoyed ourselves. We arrived there at about 9 a.m. My brother and I couldn’t wait to rush into the sea. We swam in the sea and played water games. The water was so cool. Then we played with the sand on the beach. It was so wonderful. When we were tired, we sat in the chair and enjoyed the wind. What a nice day it was! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我去连云港旅游的时间，同游人员，交通工具，美景以及活动内容”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“嗨，我是李华。我很高兴向大家介绍我的连云港之行。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我去连云港旅游的经历”介绍去连云港旅游的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“多么美好的一天啊！” [亮点词汇] ① by car乘汽车 ② in the sea在海里 [高分句型] ① When we were tired, we sat in the chair and enjoyed the wind.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② What a nice day it was!（what引导的感叹句） （4） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】假设你的笔友打算到无锡旅游，他想了解无锡的情况，请你根据提示，写一篇短文介绍无锡的情况。      Wuxi location (地理位置)；weather Places of interest Nanchang Ancient Street: in the past…now… Huishan Town: take a walk…enjoy…Huishan clay figurine(惠山泥人)…since… Wuxi Grand Theatre: big and modern…Xi opera… Travelling advice … 注意： 2. 短文须包括所给内容要点，词数80个左右，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 省略号部分展开合理想象，作适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Wuxi is my hometown. It lies in the southeast of China. The weather here is very pleasant. There are many places of interest. Nanchang Ancient Street is one of them. In the past, it was small and old, but now it is very big and busy. Many visitors come here every year. And you can go to Huishan Town. You can take a walk around it and enjoy Huishan clay figurine, which has been popular since more than four hundred years ago. Wuxi Grand Theatre is very big and modern and you can enjoy Xi opera. If you come to Wuxi, you’d better wear comfortable shoes. And the best time to come here is from March to November. I’m sure you will have great fun here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍自己的家乡无锡，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍无锡的地理位置以及天气； 第二步，详细介绍无锡的名胜古迹； 第三步，介绍去无锡的旅行建议。 [亮点词汇] ①lie in位于 ②place of interest名胜古迹 ③have fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①You can take a walk around it and enjoy Huishan clay figurine, which has been popular since more than four hundred years ago.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②If you come to Wuxi, you’d better wear comfortable shoes.(if引导的条件状语从句) （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·期中】无锡作为今年春晚及元宵晚会江苏分会场，备受赞誉。假设你是李明，你的笔友Mike也想来无锡游玩，为了更好地计划这趟旅行，他给你写了一封邮件，请根据Mike的邮件内容，给他写一封回信。 Dear Ming, After watching the Spring Festival Gala, I fall in love with your hometown Wuxi. I plan to visit it. Is it a suitable season to come? Why? I’m interested in the places of interest there. Can you give me some advice? From the show, I know that Wuxi has a long history. What special things can I enjoy there? What else should I prepare during my visit? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike Word Bank： 南禅寺 Nanchan Temple        梅园 the Plum Garden     鼋头渚 Yuantouzhu            惠山古镇 Huishan Ancient Town 要求： (1)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，要点全面。 (2)词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。 Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Thanks for your email. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery of Taihu Lake and the ancient charm of the Grand Canal. Wuxi is also famous for its traditional culture, such as the Huishan clay figurines and the local opera. Don’t miss the delicious Wuxi cuisine, especially the sweet and savory Wuxi ribs. During your visit, remember to wear comfortable shoes and bring a camera to capture the stunning views. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here! I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，需回答Mike关于季节、景点、特色文化及注意事项的提问，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回应Mike关于季节是否适合来访的问题，并说明原因； 第二步，介绍无锡的主要景点和特色文化； 第三步，给出旅行中的注意事项，并表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①mild and pleasant 温和宜人 ②ancient charm 古老魅力 ③can’t wait to do sth等不及做某事 [高分句型] ①This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant.（原因状语从句） ②I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here!（宾语从句） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $