内容正文:
Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.Writing
一、单元话题分析music and movies”,介绍自己喜欢的音乐或者电影。
本单元以“音乐偏好”为核心话题,围绕个人喜爱的音乐类型、歌手、乐队及相关理由展开,常见命题形式主要有两种:1. 介绍个人喜爱的音乐类型/歌手/歌曲,阐述具体喜欢的原因;
2. 根据提示写议论文,表达对某类音乐的观点,或对比不同音乐类型的特点。
【写作素材积累】
二、结构(三段式)
1. 总(引入主题):开门见山点明自己喜爱的音乐类型/歌手/歌曲,引出话题。
2. 分(详细阐述):说明喜欢的具体理由,可结合音乐的节奏、歌词、带给人的感受等。
3. 总(总结升华):概括音乐对个人生活的影响,升华主题,表达对音乐的整体感悟。
三、分段写作
万能开头句型
Among all kinds of music/movies, I prefer...; My favorite piece of music is...
在所有种类的音乐/电影中,我更喜欢……;我最喜欢的音乐是……
1. Music is an important part of our life, and everyone has their own favorite type of music.
2. When it comes to music, I always have a lot to say because I am a real music lover.
3. Among all kinds of music, I like music that I can dance to best.
课本句子积累(适合开头介绍自己喜欢的音乐/电影类型)
① I prefer music that has great lyrics.
② I love music that I can sing along with.
③ I like music that isn't too loud.
④ I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work.
⑤ I only like movies that are funny. I just want to laugh and not think too much.
⑥ I prefer movies that give me something to think about.
⑦ I prefer movies that can cheer me up. 我喜欢那些能让我开心的电影。
2. 描述音乐的常用词汇:
- 节奏:fast - paced(节奏快的)、smooth(旋律流畅的)、lively(欢快的)
- 感受:relaxing(令人放松的)、exciting(令人兴奋的)、moving(感人的)
- 类型:pop music(流行音乐)、rock music(摇滚音乐)、folk music(民间音乐)
3. 常用观点表达句型:
- I prefer...because...(我更喜欢……,因为……)
- The reason why I like...is that...(我喜欢……的原因是……)
- What I love most about this music is...(我最喜欢这种音乐的地方是……)
结尾句:
1. In short, music that I can dance to always cheers me up and makes my life more colorful.
2. Whenever I feel tired or upset, this kind of music can lift my spirits quickly.
3. Different people have different tastes in music, but for me, the music that I can dance to is always my first choice. 范文赏析
实战演练:
Tip 1: try to use some attributive clauses.
- I like music that can make me feel comfortable and relaxed.
- I prefer music which has a soft melody (旋律) and wonderful lyrics.
- I enjoy songs that are cheerful and full of emotions.
- I like movies that can give me something to think about.
- I prefer movies which are educational and meaningful.
- I enjoy movies that have a happy ending and can cheer me up.
Tip 2: try to use some beautiful sentences.
- Music is the spice of life. 音乐是生活的调味剂。
- The world needs music to amuse people’s life. 这个世界需要音乐来娱乐人们的生活。
- We can see our own lives through movies. 我们可以通过电影看到自己的生活。
- Movies are windows to the world. 电影是通往世界的窗户。
命题作文:My favourite movie/music.
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