Unit 9 Human Bilogy人（单元应用文写作精练）英语北师大版选择性必修第三册

Unit 9 Human Biology人类生物学 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：撰写一篇发言稿，用于演讲、致辞、竞选、分享经验等公开场合。发言稿的语言通常要富有感染力，立场要明确，观点要鲜明。 写作框架： 第一段 自我介绍，进入话题 第二段 阐明主题，分点展开 第三段 概括总结，表达感谢，表示祝愿 写作词汇短语： 一、开场与问候 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Ladies and gentlemen 女士们先生们 Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for being here. Distinguished guests 尊敬的来宾 Distinguished guests, faculty, and friends… Good morning / afternoon 大家早上/下午好 Good afternoon, everyone. It’s an honor to… 很荣幸…… It’s an honor to speak before you today. On behalf of… 代表…… On behalf of the organizing committee, I welcome you. 二、引入主题 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Today, I’d like to talk about… 今天我想谈谈…… Today, I’d like to talk about the power of empathy. The topic of my speech is… 我演讲的主题是…… The topic of my speech is “Youth and Innovation.” Have you ever wondered…? 你是否曾想过……？ Have you ever wondered what makes a true leader? Let me begin with… 让我从……开始 Let me begin with a personal story. 三、结构衔接与过渡 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 First and foremost 首先 First and foremost, we must recognize… Moving on to… 接下来谈到…… Moving on to my next point… Similarly / Likewise 同样地 Similarly, we can see this in… On the other hand 另一方面 On the other hand, some may argue… In addition / Furthermore 此外 Furthermore, it is essential to… 四、强调与情感表达 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 I strongly believe… 我坚信…… I strongly believe we can make a change. What really matters is… 真正重要的是…… What really matters is not success, but effort. It touches my heart… 这让我感动…… This story touches my heart every time. Let me emphasize… 让我强调…… Let me emphasize the urgency of this issue. Without a doubt 毫无疑问 Without a doubt, this is a turning point. 五、互动与呼吁 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Imagine if… 想象一下如果…… Imagine if we all took one small step… I urge you to… 我呼吁你们…… I urge you to join this movement. Let’s work together to… 让我们一起…… Let’s work together to build a better future. Think about… 想想…… Think about what you can do today. Are you with me? 你们支持我吗？ Are you with me on this journey? 6、 结尾与感谢 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 In conclusion 总之 In conclusion, I hope we remember… To sum up 总而言之 To sum up, every action counts. Thank you for your attention 谢谢聆听 Thank you for your attention and support. I leave you with this thought… 我留给你们这句话…… I leave you with this thought: be the change. Let’s make a difference together 让我们一起改变 Let’s make a difference together, starting today. 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.Greeting + 主题引入 Good morning, everyone. Today, I am here to talk about a topic that is close to all our hearts: [演讲主题]. 2.提问式开头 Have you ever wondered what it would be like if [情景或问题]? Today, I want to explore this with you. 3.故事式开头 Let me start with a story. A few years ago, I [个人经历]. That experience taught me [感悟]. 4.引用名言式开头 As [名人] once said, “[名言].” This quote perfectly captures what I want to share with you today. 5.直接点题式开头 The focus of my speech today is [主题]. I believe it is crucial because [简要理由]. 【中间句】 1.结构说明 My speech is divided into three key parts: first, [第一点]; second, [第二点]; and finally, [第三点]. 2.过渡与衔接 Now let’s move on to my next point: [下一主题]. 3.举例说明 For example, [具体事例]. This shows us that [说明]. 4.强调重点 What I want to emphasize here is [重点内容]. It is essential because [理由]. 5.互动与提问 How many of you have experienced [某个情景]? This is actually more common than we think. 6.对比与转折 While some may think [观点A], I would argue that [观点B]. Let me explain why. 【结尾句】 1.总结要点 In summary, we have discussed [要点一], [要点二], and [要点三]. Together, they remind us that [核心信息]. 2.呼吁行动 So let’s take action today. Start by [具体行动], and together we can [愿景]. 3.升华情感 I hope my words have inspired you to [思考/行动]. Remember: [一句有力的话]. 4.感谢与结束 Thank you for your attention. I look forward to seeing the change we can create together. 5.留下思考 As we leave here today, I leave you with one question: [引人深思的问题]. Think about it, and act on it. 写作模板： Good morning/afternoon, everyone. Today, I want to talk about [演讲主题]. Let me start with a question / a story / a fact… First, [要点一]. For example… / This shows that… Second, [要点二]. This is important because… Finally, [要点三]. In our daily life, we can… In short, [重复核心观点]. Let’s [具体建议] together. Thank you for listening. 写作范例：“阅读的力量” Good afternoon, everyone. Today, I want to talk about the power of reading. First, reading opens minds. It lets us see the world through different eyes. For example, a novel can teach empathy better than any lesson. Second, reading builds knowledge. Whether it’s science or history, books help us grow. This is especially important in a fast-changing world. In short, reading is not just a habit—it’s a tool for life. Let’s pick up a book this week and share what we learn. Thank you for listening. 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，学校即将举办“低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题演讲活动，你要报名参加。请根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿： （1）指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象； （2）建议从身边小事做起，如……； （3）号召大家行动起来。 试题词汇：低碳校园 low carbon campus 注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 假定你是李华，学校发起 “校园垃圾分类，共创文明环境” 倡议活动，邀请你在周一升旗仪式上做演讲。请根据以下要点写作： ①问候师生，说明演讲目的； ②分析校园垃圾分类的重要性（如减少污染、节约资源、培养环保意识）； ③提出具体落实建议（如学习分类知识、正确投放垃圾、带动身边人）； ④发出积极呼吁。 注意：词数 80 左右；语言口语化，有感染力；格式正确，结尾致谢。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 1. （2024高考模拟）假定你是李华，学校将举办 “校园读书节” 活动，邀请你作为学生代表在开幕式上发表演讲，呼吁同学们多读书、读好书。请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿： ①说明读书的意义； ②提出读书建议； ③发出呼吁。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（阶段练习）假定你是李华，在学校 “心理健康周” 活动中，作为学生代表发表演讲，分享缓解学习压力的方法。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①表示理解同学们的压力； ②分享 2-3 个缓解压力的方法； ③表达美好祝愿。 注意：词数 100 左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（阶段练习）假设你将在班级分享学习经验，主题为“Effective Ways to Improve English”。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①你在英语学习中的体会； ②提出2–3个具体学习方法； ③鼓励同学们坚持练习。 注意：词数 100 左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（阶段练习）假定你是李华，在班级 “友谊伴我行” 主题班会上发表演讲，谈谈如何维护真挚的友谊。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①友谊的重要性； ②维护友谊的方法； ③表达对友谊的珍视。 注意：词数 100 左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.假设你在英语俱乐部做一次分享，主题为“The Power of Small Habits”。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①小习惯对学习与生活的影响； ②举一两个你自己的例子； ③鼓励同学们从小事做起。 要求：词数80左右；演讲稿结构完整，语言流畅。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 9 Human Biology人类生物学 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：撰写一篇发言稿，用于演讲、致辞、竞选、分享经验等公开场合。发言稿的语言通常要富有感染力，立场要明确，观点要鲜明。 写作框架： 第一段 自我介绍，进入话题 第二段 阐明主题，分点展开 第三段 概括总结，表达感谢，表示祝愿 写作词汇短语： 一、开场与问候 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Ladies and gentlemen 女士们先生们 Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for being here. Distinguished guests 尊敬的来宾 Distinguished guests, faculty, and friends… Good morning / afternoon 大家早上/下午好 Good afternoon, everyone. It’s an honor to… 很荣幸…… It’s an honor to speak before you today. On behalf of… 代表…… On behalf of the organizing committee, I welcome you. 二、引入主题 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Today, I’d like to talk about… 今天我想谈谈…… Today, I’d like to talk about the power of empathy. The topic of my speech is… 我演讲的主题是…… The topic of my speech is “Youth and Innovation.” Have you ever wondered…? 你是否曾想过……？ Have you ever wondered what makes a true leader? Let me begin with… 让我从……开始 Let me begin with a personal story. 三、结构衔接与过渡 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 First and foremost 首先 First and foremost, we must recognize… Moving on to… 接下来谈到…… Moving on to my next point… Similarly / Likewise 同样地 Similarly, we can see this in… On the other hand 另一方面 On the other hand, some may argue… In addition / Furthermore 此外 Furthermore, it is essential to… 四、强调与情感表达 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 I strongly believe… 我坚信…… I strongly believe we can make a change. What really matters is… 真正重要的是…… What really matters is not success, but effort. It touches my heart… 这让我感动…… This story touches my heart every time. Let me emphasize… 让我强调…… Let me emphasize the urgency of this issue. Without a doubt 毫无疑问 Without a doubt, this is a turning point. 五、互动与呼吁 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 Imagine if… 想象一下如果…… Imagine if we all took one small step… I urge you to… 我呼吁你们…… I urge you to join this movement. Let’s work together to… 让我们一起…… Let’s work together to build a better future. Think about… 想想…… Think about what you can do today. Are you with me? 你们支持我吗？ Are you with me on this journey? 6、 结尾与感谢 英文 中文释义 常用搭配 In conclusion 总之 In conclusion, I hope we remember… To sum up 总而言之 To sum up, every action counts. Thank you for your attention 谢谢聆听 Thank you for your attention and support. I leave you with this thought… 我留给你们这句话…… I leave you with this thought: be the change. Let’s make a difference together 让我们一起改变 Let’s make a difference together, starting today. 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.Greeting + 主题引入 Good morning, everyone. Today, I am here to talk about a topic that is close to all our hearts: [演讲主题]. 2.提问式开头 Have you ever wondered what it would be like if [情景或问题]? Today, I want to explore this with you. 3.故事式开头 Let me start with a story. A few years ago, I [个人经历]. That experience taught me [感悟]. 4.引用名言式开头 As [名人] once said, “[名言].” This quote perfectly captures what I want to share with you today. 5.直接点题式开头 The focus of my speech today is [主题]. I believe it is crucial because [简要理由]. 【中间句】 1.结构说明 My speech is divided into three key parts: first, [第一点]; second, [第二点]; and finally, [第三点]. 2.过渡与衔接 Now let’s move on to my next point: [下一主题]. 3.举例说明 For example, [具体事例]. This shows us that [说明]. 4.强调重点 What I want to emphasize here is [重点内容]. It is essential because [理由]. 5.互动与提问 How many of you have experienced [某个情景]? This is actually more common than we think. 6.对比与转折 While some may think [观点A], I would argue that [观点B]. Let me explain why. 【结尾句】 1.总结要点 In summary, we have discussed [要点一], [要点二], and [要点三]. Together, they remind us that [核心信息]. 2.呼吁行动 So let’s take action today. Start by [具体行动], and together we can [愿景]. 3.升华情感 I hope my words have inspired you to [思考/行动]. Remember: [一句有力的话]. 4.感谢与结束 Thank you for your attention. I look forward to seeing the change we can create together. 5.留下思考 As we leave here today, I leave you with one question: [引人深思的问题]. Think about it, and act on it. 写作模板： Good morning/afternoon, everyone. Today, I want to talk about [演讲主题]. Let me start with a question / a story / a fact… First, [要点一]. For example… / This shows that… Second, [要点二]. This is important because… Finally, [要点三]. In our daily life, we can… In short, [重复核心观点]. Let’s [具体建议] together. Thank you for listening. 写作范例：“阅读的力量” Good afternoon, everyone. Today, I want to talk about the power of reading. First, reading opens minds. It lets us see the world through different eyes. For example, a novel can teach empathy better than any lesson. Second, reading builds knowledge. Whether it’s science or history, books help us grow. This is especially important in a fast-changing world. In short, reading is not just a habit—it’s a tool for life. Let’s pick up a book this week and share what we learn. Thank you for listening. 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，学校即将举办“低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题演讲活动，你要报名参加。请根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿： （1）指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象； （2）建议从身边小事做起，如……； （3）号召大家行动起来。 试题词汇：低碳校园 low carbon campus 注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【范文】 My fellow students, I’m Li Jin from Class 5. It’s a great honor to speak here today on “Low Carbon Campus, Starting from Me”. First, I’d like to point out some common things on campus that go against low-carbon living. You may have noticed lights left on in empty classrooms, taps dripping in the washroom, etc. So, what can we do? Actually, small actions can make a big difference. For example, always turn off lights and fans when you leave the room. Use both sides of the paper when printing or writing. A low-carbon campus is not just an idea—it’s a way of life. Let’s start today, from ourselves, from the little things around us. Together, we can save energy, reduce waste, and make our school a greener and healthier place. Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为校园主题英文演讲稿，围绕“低碳校园，从我做起”展开，结构清晰，语言简洁有力，具备较强的号召力与感染力。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 指出：point out → highlight / mention 常见现象：common things → common practices / common issues 造成浪费：go against low-carbon living → are not environmentally friendly / lead to waste 小事：small actions → minor habits / daily gestures 产生影响：make a big difference → have a significant impact 2.句式拓展 原句：Small actions can make a big difference. 拓展句：Although they seem small, these actions can actually lead to big changes over time. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] First, I’d like to point out some common things on campus that go against low-carbon living.（运用了that引导的定语从句，使表达具体且有说服力） [高分句型2] A low-carbon campus is not just an idea—it’s a way of life.（运用破折号进行强调，节奏感强，突出主题思想，富有感染力） 假定你是李华，学校发起 “校园垃圾分类，共创文明环境” 倡议活动，邀请你在周一升旗仪式上做演讲。请根据以下要点写作： ①问候师生，说明演讲目的； ②分析校园垃圾分类的重要性（如减少污染、节约资源、培养环保意识）； ③提出具体落实建议（如学习分类知识、正确投放垃圾、带动身边人）； ④发出积极呼吁。 注意：词数 80 左右；语言口语化，有感染力；格式正确，结尾致谢。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students! I'm Li Hua. Today, I stand here to talk about garbage sorting on campus. Sorting our waste is vital. It reduces pollution, saves resources, and builds our environmental awareness. Small acts can make a big difference. So, let's learn how to sort correctly, use the right bins, and encourage others to join us. Start from your classroom, your dorm, and your next meal. Together, we can create a cleaner, more civilized campus. Let's take action now! Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为校园倡议类英文演讲稿，主题鲜明、结构紧凑、语言简练有力，通过说理与号召相结合的方式，有效传达垃圾分类的重要性与行动方法，富有感染力。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 至关重要的：vital → essential / crucial 减少污染：reduces pollution → cuts down on pollution / lessens environmental harm 提高意识：builds awareness → enhances consciousness / fosters a sense of responsibility 从小事做起：small acts → everyday actions / simple steps 鼓励他人：encourage others → motivate those around us / inspire others to participate 2.句式拓展 原句：Start from your classroom, your dorm, and your next meal. 拓展句：You can begin right where you are—whether in your classroom, your dorm, or even during your next meal. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Sorting our waste is vital. It reduces pollution, saves resources, and builds our environmental awareness.（使用并列结构，逻辑清晰、节奏感强，突出垃圾分类的多重意义） [高分句型2] Let's learn how to sort correctly, use the right bins, and encourage others to join us.（以祈使句与动词并列结构提出具体建议，简洁明确，富有号召力） [高分句型3] Together, we can create a cleaner, more civilized campus.（运用“Together, we can...”句型，增强集体归属感与行动决心，适合用于演讲结尾的呼吁部分） 1. （2024高考模拟）假定你是李华，学校将举办 “校园读书节” 活动，邀请你作为学生代表在开幕式上发表演讲，呼吁同学们多读书、读好书。请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿： ①说明读书的意义； ②提出读书建议； ③发出呼吁。 注意：1. 词数 80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good morning, teachers and fellow students! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m honored to speak here during our School Reading Festival. Reading is like opening a window to the world. It broadens our minds, enriches our hearts, and lights the path to our future. My suggestions are simple: first, choose good books --classics, biographies, and inspiring stories; second, read with a pen in hand --take notes and think along the way; and third, share what you read --with friends, in class, or in your diary. Let’s make reading a part of our life. Start today, pick up a book, and let’s grow together through reading! Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为校园读书节英文演讲稿，主题明确、比喻生动、结构清晰，语言富有感染力，通过形象说理与具体建议相结合，有效激发听众的阅读兴趣与行动意愿。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 感到荣幸：honored → privileged / delighted 开阔视野：broadens our minds → expands our horizons / opens our thinking 丰富内心：enriches our hearts → nourishes our inner world / fills us with insight 照亮前路：lights the path → illuminates the way / guides our future 拿起书：pick up a book → start with a book / begin reading today 2.句式拓展 原句：Let’s make reading a part of our life. 拓展句：I encourage every one of us to make reading not just an activity, but a natural part of our daily life. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Reading is like opening a window to the world.（运用明确比喻，生动形象，易于引发听众共鸣，增强语言感染力） [高分句型2] It broadens our minds, enriches our hearts, and lights the path to our future.（使用三重并列结构，节奏清晰、意义层层递进，突出阅读的多重价值） 2.（阶段练习）假定你是李华，在学校 “心理健康周” 活动中，作为学生代表发表演讲，分享缓解学习压力的方法。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①表示理解同学们的压力； ②分享 2-3 个缓解压力的方法； ③表达美好祝愿。 注意：词数 80左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good morning, teachers and fellow students! I'm Li Hua. I understand many of us feel stressed from heavy schoolwork. It’s completely normal. To ease stress, here are some tips: First, exercise regularly --even a short run can refresh your mind. Second, pick up a hobby like drawing or listening to music to relax. Third, talk with friends or teachers. Sharing helps a lot. I hope we can all take care of our minds while studying hard. Remember, you’re not alone --let’s support each other. Wish everyone a healthy and happy week ahead. Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为“心理健康周”主题英文演讲稿，内容贴近学生生活，语言平实真诚、富有共情力与支持感。结构清晰，从理解压力到提供方法，最后给予祝愿，符合鼓励性演讲的沟通逻辑。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 减轻：ease → relieve / reduce 很常见：completely normal → very common / a shared experience 提神醒脑：refresh your mind → clear your thoughts / boost your energy 你不是一个人：you’re not alone → we are all in this together / others feel the same 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Sharing helps a lot. 拓展句：When you share your feelings, it helps a lot because it lightens your emotional burden. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] I understand many of us feel stressed from heavy schoolwork. It’s completely normal. (开篇直接表达理解与共情，使用“It's completely normal”进行有效安抚，迅速拉近与听众的心理距离，奠定了支持性基调。) [高分句型2] Remember, you’re not alone --let’s support each other. (运用破折号连接提醒与号召，将个人感受(“not alone”)自然过渡到集体行动(“support each other”)，句式简洁有力，富有感染力，强化了“共同体”意识。) 3.（阶段练习）假设你将在班级分享学习经验，主题为“Effective Ways to Improve English”。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①你在英语学习中的体会； ②提出2–3个具体学习方法； ③鼓励同学们坚持练习。 注意：词数 80左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good morning, everyone! As someone who once found English challenging, I’ve learned that consistency beats talent. Here are two methods that helped me a lot: First, listen and repeat every day—try English podcasts or songs. Second, read what you love, whether it’s short stories or news, and note down useful words. Progress may be slow, but don’t give up. Keep practicing, and you’ll see the change. Let’s improve our English together—day by day! Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为学习方法分享类英文演讲稿，以个人经历切入，观点鲜明、方法具体、语言真诚鼓励。结构清晰，从核心观点到具体行动，再到激励号召，符合经验分享类演讲的实用性与感染力要求。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 曾经觉得有挑战：once found ... challenging → initially struggled with ... 坚持胜过天赋：consistency beats talent → perseverance is more important than natural ability 对我帮助很大：helped me a lot → made a significant difference for me / greatly benefited me 记录有用单词：note down useful words → jot down new vocabulary / keep a word journal 不要放弃：don’t give up → stay persistent / hang in there 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Progress may be slow, but don’t give up. 拓展句：Even though progress may sometimes be slow, it is crucial that you don’t give up. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] As someone who once found English challenging, I’ve learned that consistency beats talent. (以“As someone who...”个人经历开头，亲切且有说服力；“consistency beats talent”观点凝练、对比强烈，容易让人记住并产生共鸣。) [高分句型2] Let’s improve our English together-- day by day! (以破折号强调“day by day”，突出持续积累的理念；使用“Let's...”的呼吁句型，增强互动感和集体动力，适合作为演讲收尾。) 4.（阶段练习）假定你是李华，在班级 “友谊伴我行” 主题班会上发表演讲，谈谈如何维护真挚的友谊。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①友谊的重要性； ②维护友谊的方法； ③表达对友谊的珍视。 注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good morning, everyone! True friendship is like sunshine—it warms our hearts and brightens our days. It gives us strength when we feel weak, and joy when we feel alone. To keep friendship alive, we need to listen sincerely, support each other through ups and downs, and stay in touch even when life gets busy. Remember, small acts of kindness matter most. Let’s treasure our friends, care for them, and grow together on this wonderful journey. Thank you! 【导语】 本篇为价值观倡导类英文演讲稿，主题温暖，语言富有诗意和感染力。通过生动的比喻、具体的行动指南和真诚的呼吁，清晰阐述了友谊的价值与维系之道，能有效引起听众共鸣并传递积极情感。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 照亮生活：brightens our days → lights up our lives / brings warmth to our daily routine 真诚倾听：listen sincerely → listen with a genuine heart / be an attentive listener 同甘共苦：through ups and downs → in good times and bad / through thick and thin 保持联系：stay in touch → maintain connection / keep in contact 珍视：treasure → cherish / value deeply 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Remember, small acts of kindness matter most. 拓展句：What we must remember is that it is often the small acts of kindness that matter the most in sustaining a friendship. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] True friendship is like sunshine -- it warms our hearts and brightens our days. (运用明确且温暖的比喻“like sunshine”，并采用破折号进行解释说明，形象生动地揭示了友谊的积极功能，开篇即营造出美好的氛围。) [高分句型2] Let’s treasure our friends, care for them, and grow together on this wonderful journey. (以“Let‘s...”的呼吁句式收尾，配合“treasure, care, grow”三个动词构成的排比，节奏感强，情感真挚，升华了主题并发出行动倡议。) 5.（阶段练习）假设你在英语俱乐部做一次分享，主题为“The Power of Small Habits”。请写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： ①小习惯对学习与生活的影响； ②举一两个你自己的例子； ③鼓励同学们从小事做起。 要求：词数80左右；演讲稿结构完整，语言流畅。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Good afternoon, everyone! Today, I want to talk about “the power of small habits”. Tiny actions, done regularly, can change our learning and life in big ways. For example, I review 5 new words every morning, and now my vocabulary has grown naturally. I also read one English article a day --it doesn’t take long, but it builds my reading skill quietly. Don’t underestimate small starts. A little effort every day leads to great progress over time. Let’s begin with one small habit today and keep going! Thank you. 【导语】 本篇为学习方法与个人成长主题的英文演讲稿，聚焦“小习惯”的累积效应。语言简洁、例证具体、说理清晰，通过亲身经历阐释观点，极具说服力与鼓励性，能有效引导听众关注日常积累并付诸行动。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 微小的行动：tiny actions → small steps / minor daily routines 定期坚持：done regularly → performed consistently / maintained daily 自然增长：grown naturally → improved organically / expanded steadily 悄无声息地提升：builds ... quietly → enhances ... gradually / improves ... in a subtle way 不要低估：don't underestimate → don't downplay / never overlook the potential of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A little effort every day leads to great progress over time. 拓展句：If you put in a little effort every day, it will lead to great progress as time goes by. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Tiny actions, done regularly, can change our learning and life in big ways. (使用“done regularly”作为后置定语，修饰“Tiny actions”，使句子结构紧凑、表意清晰；”in big ways”与“Tiny actions”形成鲜明对比，突出核心观点，令人印象深刻。) [高分句型2] I also read one English article a day -- it doesn’t take long, but it builds my reading skill quietly. (通过破折号引出补充说明，以“doesn’t take long”降低行动门槛，用“builds... quietly”生动描绘潜移默化的提升效果，真实而具有说服力。) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $