Unit 3 Period 5 Using Language (Ⅱ) 写作培优课（教用Word）-【金榜题名】2025-2026学年高二英语选择性必修第三册高中同步学案（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦“写关于环境问题的报道”这一核心知识点，先通过写作要领指导（强调事实依据、结构明确、语言准确）搭建理论支架，再以东湖污染及治理为实例，分审题谋篇、遣词造句、句式升级、组句成篇四步开展实践演练，形成“理论-实践”完整学习脉络。 该资料亮点在于“分步进阶式”写作指导，通过东湖案例的审题分析、核心词汇积累、句式升级（如定语从句改写、非谓语动词运用）等环节，培养学生的思维品质（分析、创造）和语言能力（准确表达）。课中教师可按步骤引导学生构建写作逻辑，课后学生可参考范文及步骤回顾，弥补写作短板，提升自主学习能力。

Period 5　Using Language (Ⅱ)　写作培优课 Learning Aims(学习目标) 1．Learn how to write a report on an environmental issue. 2．Practice writing one.(重点难点) 目标一　写作要领　技法指导 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。写作时应注意以下几点： 1．以事实为依据，对事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。 2．要有明确的文章结构。 3．语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。 [常用表达] 1．It is reported that an activity was organized to get the students close to nature. 2．As is reported/According to the report，a terrible earthquake happened. 3．They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. 4．What they did brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. 5．Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork. 6．The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was beneficial to us. 目标二　写作实践　分步演练 东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，请根据以下要点写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事。 1．曾经的情景(景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多)； 2．后来的状况(工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾)； 3．当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　审题谋篇 [审题] 写作要求是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况。写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇报道，写作中应注意报道的常规格式。 2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3．主体人称：由于是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 [谋篇] 第一段：介绍东湖以前的情况。 第二段：东湖的污染情况。 第三段：采取措施改善后的情况。 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1．渴望做某事　be_starving_for/starve_for 2．垃圾 garbage/waste/rubbish 3．许多；很多 dozens_of 4．发起运动 launch_campaigns 5．被罚款 get_fined 6．要不是由于 but_for 7．适度的政策 moderate_policy 8．毫无疑问 there_is_no_doubt_that... [连词成句] 1．东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水很清澈，鱼儿在里面快乐地游着。 East Lake used_to_be_a_beautiful_place and the water was clear and fishes swam in it happily. 2．来自全国的游客渴望来参观这个湖，欣赏它的美。 Travelers from all over the nation are starving for a visit to the lake and appreciate its beauty. 3．随着数百万吨来自周围工厂的废水夜以继日地排入湖中，这个湖已经被污染得如此严重了。 With_millions_of_tons_of_waste_water_from_factories_around_poured_into_it_day_and_night，the lake has been polluted so badly. 4．垃圾经常被游客扔进湖里，严重污染了湖水。 Rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，polluting_the_lake_badly. 5．当地政府再也不能容忍这种危险的情况了，因此它已经发起了各种各样的运动宣传环保的重要性。 The local government can't_tolerate_the_dangerous_situation_any_longer，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection. 6．毫无疑问，向湖里倾倒废水的一些工厂以及把垃圾扔进湖里的游客将被罚款。 There_is_no_doubt_that some factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined. 7．要不是由于许多适度的但有效的政策，这个湖不会变得越来越美丽。 But_for_dozens_of_moderate_but_effective_policies，the lake wouldn't have become more and more beautiful. 第三步　句式升级 1．用定语从句改写句1。 East_Lake_used_to_be_a_beautiful_place_and_the_water_was_clear，in_which_fishes_swam_happily. 2．用非谓语动词改写句2。 Travelers_from_all_over_the_nation_are_starving_for_a_visit_to_the_lake，appreciating_its_beauty. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： East Lake used to be a beautiful place and the water was clear，in which fishes swam happily.Travelers from all over the nation are starving for a visit to the lake，appreciating its beauty. Unfortunately，with millions of tons of waste water from factories around poured into it day and night，the lake has been polluted so badly.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，polluting the lake badly. The local government can't tolerate the dangerous situation any longer，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection.There is no doubt that some factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.But for dozens of moderate but effective policies，the lake wouldn't have become more and more beautiful. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $