概要写作·上海卷（信息提炼+语言转换+逻辑整合+精准表达）-高考英语新题型·写作

高考英语新题型解析模板（上海卷） 概受写作 说明文+议论文+记叙文 (30题) 考查目标 ①信息提炼能力 ②语言转换能力 ③逻辑整合能力 ④精准表达能力 A4页面pdf文件下载编辑打印随心所欲 高考英语新题型解析模板 0 高考英语（上海卷)概要写作 题型说明 核心定位：适配上海卷高考英语概要写作(60词以内) 备考需求，覆盖说明文、议论文、记叙文三大体裁及科技、环 保、教育等高频主题，每道模板均含“试题框架+满分范文模板 +四大能力详细解析”，可直接替换具体主题/数据情节使用。 一、说明文类试题模板口 试题模板1：科技类·A1与教育应用 试题模板框架 Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible. 原文：Vith the rapid development of artificial intelligence(Al),it has gradually penetrated into the field of education,bringing changes such as personalized learning plans and intelligent homework correction.Some people worry that Al may replace teachers,but experts point out that Al is only a tool to assist teaching,which cannot replace teachers role in cultivating students critical thinking and emotional intelligence.The combination of Al and education will promote the modernization of education. 满分范文模板 Al has entered education,bringing changes.Though some fear it replaces teachers,experts regard it as a teaching aid.Its combination with education will advance educational modernization.(56 words) 详细解析（考查四大能力） 信息提炼能力：模板核心要点—①A!渗透教育领域带来变革；②部分人担 忧A|替代教师；③专家认为A!是教学辅助工具；④A!与教育结合推动教育现代 化。考查学生区分核心观点（专家结论、变革意义)与冗余细节（具体变革案例： 个性化学习计划、智能作业批改)的能力。 语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“penetrated into'→“entered”、“tool to assist teaching'”→"teaching aid"、“pro mote”→“advance”）、句式重构（将“bringing 」上海卷·概要写作02 高考英语新题型解析模板) changes such as."整合为“bringing changes'"简洁表达)、冗余信息精简的能力， 避免照抄原文举例。 逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“变革呈现→争议（担忧VS专家观点）→积极影响”逻 辑链的能力，要求用“Though”衔接转折关系，用逗号自然衔接因果逻辑（A!与教育 结合→推动现代化)，确保层次清晰。 精准表达能力：考查用“teaching aid"精准界定Al角色（非替代品)、用 “advance educational modernization"准确概括核心影响的能力，要求语义无扭曲， 词数控制在60词以内。 试题模板2：环保类海洋塑料污染 试题模板框架 Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible. Marine plastic pollution has become a global environmental crisis, causing serious harm to marine organisms and coastal ecosystems.The chart clearly shows the worsening trend of marine plastic pollution.To address this problem,countries around the world need to strengthen international cooperation, promote plastic reduction and improve plastic recycling systems. 满分范文模板 Marine plastic pollution,a global crisis harming marine organisms and ecosystems,is worsening as shown in the trend chart.Global cooperation,plastic reduction and improved recycling are needed to solve it.(55 words) 详细解析（考查四大能力) 信息提炼能力：模板核心要点一①海洋塑料污染成全球环境危机（危害海洋 生物、海岸生态)；②图像显示污染趋势恶化；③解决措施（国际合作、减塑、 完善回收体系)。考查提炼核心问题、图像核心信息与解决方案，排除图像中具体 数据（如8000万吨）、数据来源等冗余细节的能力。 语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“serious harm”→“harming”、“address this problem"→“solve it''、“promote”→“carry out'")、句式整合（将“causing serious harm to.."整合为后置定语“a global crisis harming..")、明确图像指代("the trend chart"对应原文折线图)的能力。 逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“问题定性→图像佐证→解决措施”逻辑链的能力，要 」上海卷·概要写作04 高考英语新题型解析模板) 求用“as shown in''衔接图像与问题趋势，用逗号衔接措施并列关系，确保逻辑连贯 无断层。 精准表达能力：考查用“a global crisis"精准定位污染严重程度、用“strengthen international cooperation"准确概括措施核心的能力，要求图像指代清晰，语义无遗 漏（如未遗漏“减塑”“回收”两大具体措施)。 试题模板3：教育类劳动教育的意义 试题模板框架 Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible. 原文：Labor education has been officially incorporated into the basic education system in recent years,which is of great significance for students all- round development.It helps students develop practical skills,cultivate a sense of hard work and understand the value of labor.Different from theoretical learning, labor education emphasizes the combination of knowledge and practice.Schools are advised to carry out diverse labor courses to ensure the effectiveness of labor education 满分范文模板 Labor education,incorporated into basic education recently,is vital for students all-round development by fostering practical skills and hard work awareness.Schools need diverse courses for effectiveness.(52 words) 详细解析（考查四大能力） 信息提炼能力：模板核心要点一①劳动教育近年纳入基础教育体系；②对 学生全面发展意义重大（培养实践能力、勤劳意识、理解劳动价值)；③特点（知 行合一)；④建议学校开展多样化劳动课程。考查提炼核心政策背景、价值与建议， 排除“different from theoretical learning'等对比类冗余细节的能力。 语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“of great significance”→“vita"、“incorporated into”→“included in”、“fostering''→“developing/cultivating'")、句式简化（将which is of great significance.."整合为后置定语)、冗余语义合并（将“practical skills, cultivate a sense of hard work and understand the value of labor''合并为“practical 」上海卷·概要写作06 高考英语新题型解析模板) skills and hard work awareness'")的能力。 逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“政策背景→核心价值→实施建议”逻辑链的能力，要 求用介词“by”衔接教育价值的实现方式，用句号分隔核心价值与学校建议，层次分 明。 精准表达能力：考查用“incorporated into"精准体现政策属性、用“a ll-round development''"准确概括教育目标的能力，要求合并语义时不遗漏核心价值（实践能 力、勤劳意识)。 试题模板4：科技类·5G技术的应用与优势 试题模板框架 Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible. 原文：The5 G technology has been widely applied in various fields such as medical treatment,intelligent transportation and daily life.Compared with 4G,5G has obvious advantages:high speed,low latency and large capacity.These advantages enable 5G to promote the digital transformation of industries and bring more convenience to peoples life.With the continuous progress of technology,5G will be applied in more fields in the future. 满分范文模板 5G is widely used in many fields with advantages of high speed,low latency and large capacity,promoting industrial digital transformation and bringing convenience.It will have more applications in the future.(53 words) 详细解析（考查四大能力） 信息提炼能力：模板核心要点一①5G广泛应用于多领域（医疗、智能交通、 日常生活)；②优势（高速、低延迟、大容量)；③作用（推动产业数字化转型、 便利生活)；④未来趋势（更多领域应用）。考查排除“compared with4G”with the continuous progress of technology"等冗余对比与背景细节的能力。 语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“widely applied”→“widely used"、“obvious advantages”→“advantages”、“promote”→“boosting”）、句式整合（将“These advantages enable5Gto..”整合为伴随状语“pro moting.")、具体领域概括 (“many fields"对应原文列举)的能力。 」上海卷·概要写作08 高考英语新题型解析模板 逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“应用范围→核心优势→现实作用→未来趋势”逻辑链 的能力，要求用逗号自然衔接各环节，用“wt”衔接优势与作用，逻辑流畅。 精准表达能力：考查用“high speed,low latency and large capacity"精准概括 5G核心优势、用“industrial digital transformation"准确对应产业变革方向的能力， 要求未来趋势表述清晰无歧义。