2021年1月浙江高考读后续写考试指导 课件 -2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理情节逻辑构建、人物情感描写、语言连贯表达三大核心考点，通过2021年浙江卷真题分析明确“情节合理发展”占45%、“细节生动刻画”占30%的高频考点分布，归纳“冲突解决型”“情感升华型”等常考题型，体现备考针对性。 课件亮点在于“真题示例+错误剖析+技巧建模”策略，如结合南瓜雕刻被困情境，解析“困境-尝试-解决-感悟”情节链构建方法，培养学生思维品质和语言能力。提供“情节脱节”“用词不当”等易错点警示及“五感描写模板”，助力学生掌握续写逻辑，教师可据此开展精准训练，提升复习效率。

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ILLUSTRATION BY APIN Trick or Treat！ Children can play trick or People carve pumpkins. treat on their neighbors. scare away the evil spirits... Pumpkin()carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantage-I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year.Old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,asI went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork (forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy."I'm going to set it down,now,"I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use."I can't get it out!"I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. Para.1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Para.2 That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. Pumpkin()carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantage-I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork (forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy."I'm going to set it down,now,"I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use."I can't get it out!"I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. Para.1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Para.2 That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.2021年1月浙江高考读后续写 2 3 4 5 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Sweating and nearly tearing, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. With every angle tried in vain for my nose's prevention, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret and annoyance. At last, Dad determined to break the pumpkin with the help of the sharp knife. "It's done!" the voice from my dad seemed to be the most beautiful melody, and a breath of fresh air eventually entered. With my head getting out of the pumpkin and my body straightening, what I had seen was close-up-camera. My dear mom was engaged in filming my embarrassing and awkward situation when her daughter was in suffering! That video was posted the day before Halloween.To our surprise, the video managed to catch much attention from people online, racking up hundreds of thousands of views. Neighbors and friends recognized the pulling head person was me and regarded me as a celebrity. It was when some reporters and TV stations called for interview that I truly realized how hot and popular this video became. During Halloween, which was a festival of trick and treat, I tricked myself instead. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others. Undoubtedly, it became the most unforgettable Halloween even if I still had no idea of whose pumpkin was heavier yet. 6 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Although I was panicking, my family found my foolish display more comical than dangerous. To my dismay, instead of trying to help, Jason reached for his phone. While mom and dad worked hard to help calm me down in between fits of laughter, Jason recorded the whole ordeal. He was determined to keep a video record of the events in its full entirety, surely to tease me with it for a long time to come. Pull as I might, my head couldn’t budge. Finally, after some olive oil to help ease the friction and a final pull with all my might, I stumbled back to the ground - my head free and the pumpkin firmly grasped by mom and dad. That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. If I didn’t feel humiliated enough at home, now I get to live with my foolishness in school as well. It was not long before I was given the nickname “Pumpkin Head”, and it stuck. The nickname could not come at a better time; my friends begged me to seriously consider putting my head back in the pumpkin for our annual trick-or-treating adventures tomorrow night. At this point, I could not do anything but smile and chuckle along with the rest of my friends. Acts of foolishness can happen to anybody. On Halloween night, I went around my community with my friends, trick-or-treating with my head in another pumpkin that mom and dad had found for me. This time, I made sure to cut a big enough hole. 7 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The hard pumpkin weighed stubbornly upon my shoulder, not wanting to budge at all. Through the thick wall of the pumpkin’s meaty shell, I could hear my mom and Jason struggling to hold back their laughter while supporting me to pull my oversized orange astronaut helmet off. I attempted the artful removal of pumpkin head calling out all of my hidden gymnastic abilities in ways that I knew I never could have moved. To put it simply, my body was like an octopus crawling out of a borrowed conch shell, and my mom captured all the tactful escape on camera.   That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. Never had I ever felt so embarrassed but never had I ever been so famous! Instantly, without a few hours, the video went viral. My emotions were so conflicted between whether I should be happy or sad. As it turned out, Dad managed to hold on to the pumpkin and keep it steady so that I could perform my dance routine. Together, the choreography appeared quite hilarious. Until today, I am still unsure what to make of that unforgettable Halloween and super thankful for my dad’s rescue. 8 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Dad held onto the pumpkin steadily and mom pulled my body. In the meantime, Jason burst into laughter and joked: “Sticking your head into the pumpkin would not count for extra weight!” Fortunately, I got my head out of the pumpkin.I saw Jason holding his phone at me: “I am going to post this online and you are going to be famous!” Finally, we came to an agreement that he may post the video, but I am the winner of this year’s pumpkin contest. Paragraph 2： That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. I am too embarrassed to see the video, let alone see my friends’ comments! “It has over 100 views already!” Jason announced triumphantly at breakfast. “Then let it be!” I pretended to be not bothered. At the cafeteria during lunch, my friend Nathan greeted me smirkingly, “I heard someone had a little too much pumpkin over the weekend.” I ignored his mocking tone and responded proudly: “Someone might have, but someone also won the pumpkin contest!”  9 10 11 12 加入新角色 13 解决办法奇怪 14 没有时间 15 解决方法奇怪 16 南瓜说话 17 没有衔接 18 带着南瓜看电视？ 19 有时间不自己写点儿？ 20 这种方式是否合适？ 21 用石头砸是否合适？ 22 用stick砸是否合适？ 23 逃避问题 24 用词需准确 25 A good sample 26 $