摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点,覆盖投诉信的格式规范、内容要点完整性及语言得体性等考查要求。资料按商品质量、服务态度等10类场景分类构建模板体系,内在逻辑遵循投诉信“明确事由 - 描述问题 - 提出诉求”的通用结构,通过模板示范梳理考点、写作指导提炼方法、场景化练习强化应用,帮助学生系统掌握写作框架。
讲义特色在于将模板化表达与思维训练结合,创新采用“模块拆解法”,引导学生分析不同场景下问题描述、影响阐述、诉求提出的逻辑层次,培养语言组织能力与思维品质。设计“模板套用 - 真题改编 - 自主创作”分层练习,配合即时反馈,助力学生在短期内提升应用文写作效率,为教师把控复习节奏、落实核心素养培养提供实用教学工具。
内容正文:
投诉信万能模板及写作指导
一、万能模板
模板①
(投诉商品质量)
Dear _______ (商家名称),
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with _______ (商品名称,如“the smartphone I purchased from your store”) on _______ (日期,如“January 5th”).When I used it, I found that _______ (问题1,如“the battery drains extremely fast”) and _______ (问题2,如“the screen flickers constantly”). I have attached _______ (凭证,如“the purchase receipt and photos of the defects”) for your reference.I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“replace the product with a new one”) within _______ (期限,如“3 working days”). I trust you will handle this matter promptly.
Yours Sincerely,
_______ (你的姓名)
_______ (联系方式)
模板②
(投诉服务态度)
Dear _______ (机构负责人),
I am writing to complain about the poor service I received at _______ (场所,如“your restaurant”) on _______ (日期,如“January 8th”).When I asked the waiter about _______ (事项,如“the menu details”), he was _______ (态度,如“rude and unpatient”) and refused to assist. This made me feel _______ (感受,如“disrespected and uncomfortable”) during the meal.I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“train your staff on service etiquette”) and offer a _______ (补偿,如“discount for my next visit”). I look forward to your response.
Yours Faithfully,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板③
(投诉快递延误)
Dear _______ (快递公司),
I am writing to complain about the delayed delivery of my package (tracking number: _______).The package was supposed to arrive on _______ (原定日期,如“January 6th”), but it is still missing as of _______ (当前日期,如“January 10th”). This delay has caused _______ (影响,如“inconvenience for my travel plan”).I request you to _______ (诉求,如“locate the package immediately”) and _______ (补偿,如“refund the delivery fee”). Please update me on the progress soon.
Best Regards,
_______ (你的姓名)
_______ (联系方式)
模板④
(投诉住宿问题)
Dear _______ (酒店经理),
I am writing to express my disappointment with my stay at _______ (酒店名称) from _______ (入住日期) to _______ (退房日期).The room I booked had _______ (问题1,如“a broken air conditioner”) and _______ (问题2,如“dirty bed sheets”). When I reported it to the front desk, they _______ (处理情况,如“did not resolve it in time”).I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“refund 50% of my room fee”) as compensation. I hope you will improve your service quality.
Yours Sincerely,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑤
(投诉课程质量)
Dear _______ (培训机构负责人),
I am writing to complain about the _______ (课程名称,如“English training course”) I enrolled in your institution.The course did not match the description: _______ (问题1,如“the teacher was often absent”) and _______ (问题2,如“the teaching materials were outdated”). This has wasted my time and money.I demand you to _______ (诉求,如“refund the full tuition fee”) within _______ (期限,如“7 days”). Please respond to my request as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑥
(投诉公共设施问题)
Dear _______ (管理部门),
I am writing to report the problems of _______ (设施,如“the public playground in our community”).The _______ (设施1,如“swing set”) is broken, and _______ (设施2,如“the ground is covered with garbage”). These issues pose _______ (风险,如“safety hazards for children”).I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“repair the facilities and clean the area”) within _______ (期限,如“1 week”). Thank you for your attention.
Best Wishes,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑦
(投诉网购订单错误)
Dear _______ (电商平台客服),
I am writing to complain about the wrong item I received from your platform (order number: _______).I ordered _______ (商品描述,如“a blue XL-sized sweater”), but I got _______ (收到的商品,如“a red M-sized shirt”). This is a clear mistake in your delivery process.I request you to _______ (诉求,如“send the correct item and cover the return shipping fee”). Please process this request quickly.
Yours Sincerely,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑧
(投诉航班延误)
Dear _______ (航空公司),
I am writing to complain about the delay of Flight _______ (航班号) on _______ (日期,如“January 9th”).The flight was delayed for _______ (时长,如“4 hours”) without any timely notice. This caused me to _______ (影响,如“miss an important meeting”).I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“provide a compensation voucher for future flights”) and improve your notification system. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑨
(投诉书籍印刷错误)
Dear _______ (出版社),
I am writing to report the printing errors in the book _______ (书名,如“English Grammar Guide”) I bought recently.There are _______ (问题1,如“typos on pages 15 and 23”) and _______ (问题2,如“missing paragraphs in Chapter 4”). These errors have affected my learning.I hope you can _______ (诉求,如“send me a corrected version of the book”) and apologize for the inconvenience. Thank you for your cooperation.
Best Regards,
_______ (你的姓名)
模板⑩
(投诉噪音干扰)
Dear _______ (物业/邻居),
I am writing to complain about the noise from _______ (来源,如“your construction site/ apartment”) during _______ (时间,如“late night”).The loud noise has _______ (影响,如“disturbed my study and sleep”), which is very frustrating. I have tried to communicate with you, but the problem remains.I request you to _______ (诉求,如“limit the noise to daytime hours”) to resolve this issue. I hope we can reach a solution soon.
Yours Sincerely,
_______ (你的姓名)
二、写作指导
1.开头:明确投诉对象与事由
- 第一句直接说明“因某事投诉某对象”,清晰点明核心诉求。2.主体:具体描述问题+影响
- 列出1-2个具体问题(附细节,如时间、凭证);
- 说明问题造成的实际影响(如不便、损失),增强说服力。3.结尾:提出清晰诉求+期待回复
- 明确要求对方采取的措施(如退款、维修),并给出合理期限;
- 礼貌表达对处理结果的期待。4.格式:符合书信规范
- 包含称呼、正文、结束语、署名(可加联系方式),贴合高考写作要求。
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