内容正文:
厦门英才学校2025-2026八上U7 When tomorrow comes 作文指导
Topic: make predictions
一、写作框架(outline)
Beginning:technology的重要性以及我要展开的predictions
(开门见山,直接交代technology的意义以及你要制定几个predictions。两句话搞定,不可拖沓。)
为了实现我的预测,我将做哪些准备?
Ending:憧憬未来(我相信...只要...就一定能够成真!)
二、细化框架
Beginning:technology的重要性以及我要展开几个predictions
In the future, technology will play a/an... role in my daily life. Here are my predictions for
my future.
(开门见山,直接交代technology的意义以及你要制定几个predictions。两句话搞定,不可拖沓。)
1.My job: I will be a/an... +(工作方式)
2.My home: I will live in a/an...house.+...will be able to...(功能)
My predictions: 3.The transport/Education/Health care 任选一个进行预测)
4.My free time activities
5. I think my future life will be...adj.)
I will be an AI engineer, and I will work by a brain-computer link.
As for my home, I will live in a smart home. Its windows will be able to change temperature and clean the air.
Instead of driving, I will ride in a self-driving car to work.(任选一方面)
On weekends, I'll travel across countries and even into outer space in my self-driving car.
I think my future will be full of new possibilities.
I will do many things to prepare for my future.
My preparation:I will
I will use more AI tools like Doubao and deepseek. And I will keep learning to master the smart machines...
Ending:憧憬未来I believe these predictions will come true as long as I keep learning and work hard toward the future.
三、补充语句.
(一)Beginning 开篇点题
In the future,technology will play a/an role in my daily life. Here are my predictions for my future.
(二)My predictions
① My job: I will be a/an ....., and I will work at/ by -...
Jobs
1、工程师
4.科学家
2.音乐家 3.运动员
艺术家 6.演员
ways
1.在任何地方工作 (at home) with online tools.
2.使用-brain-computer links(脑机接口)directly.
3.和机器人一起工作-
替 换
smart
1.神奇的
2.高科技的 high-
3.环保的 eco-
雪能的
Functions
功能
1.Its
(墙壁)will be able to
(改变颜色).
2.Its
(厨房机器人)will be able to
m汪美味的晚餐).
3.Its
(灯光)will be able to
(关闭)by themselves.
4.Its
(地板)will be able to
(清理)itself.
⑧The transport/ the kid's education/ the health care 任选一个进行预测
Transport
1.I will take a self-driving (公交车)to go shopping.
2.I will ride a (飞行自行车)to visit my parents.
3.I will travel by a small (水下火车)to see the sea.
4.I will use a (任意门/魔法门)to go to my office.
Education
1.There will be 器人教师)to help kid-with their homework.
2.There will be fun 3D games for students to 轻松地学数学
3.There will be 法钢笔)that can talk with students in English.
Health
care
1.There will be an AI health mirror. When I stand in front of it, it can show the health of every part of my body.
2.There will be a magic health close. When my body hurts, I put it on, and I get well.
④ My free time activities: I think my future life will be...adj.
Time
in my
在我空闲时间/ 在周末/
在晚上/after my-work 下班:-
Future
activities
1.I will (和...聊天)anons about their home planets.
2.I will 种彩色的树)that light up at night.
3.I will
(野餐)on the moon.
⑤ I think my future life will be 有趣的) (多彩的)
(令人惊叹的)/ (充满魔法的)/ (超酷的)
(三)My preparationHome
Job
Transport
Free time activity
·What do you think of your future life?
·How will you prepare for your future?
I will do many things to prepare for my future.
First,
接受变化
学习AI工具/
使用智能机器
Then,
保持学习
努力工作
学习新知识 -
学习新技能
提高情商
培养团队精神
Finally,
face challenges bravely and never give up easily.
(四)Ending结尾(憧憬)
★I believe these predictions will come true I keep learning and work hard toward the future.
1.As the saying goes, "Where there's a will, there's a way."常言道:“有志者,事竟成。”
2.As the saying goes,"No pain,no gain."常言道:“一分耕耘,一分收获。”
3.As the saying goes, "Where there's a will,there's a way."“有志者,事竟成。”
4.As the saying goes, "Rome was not built in a day."常言道:“罗马不是一天建成的。”
5.As the saying goes,"Hard work pays off." 常言道:“天道酬勤。”
6.As long as I keep learning and try my best, these predictions will come true.
只要我坚持学习、全力以赴,这些预言终会成真.
7. If I keep learning and work hard, my predictions will turn real.
如果我坚持学习、努力付出,我的这些预言会变为现实。
8. If I learn new things daily and keep going, these predictions will come true.
如果我每天学新东西、坚持下去,这些预言会成真。
五、实战演练
假如你是李华,你校英文校刊正在开展以My future life in 2040为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,畅想你的未来生活。(满分15分)
提示:
要求:
1.包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2、语句通顺。语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
3.90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
In the future, technology will play an important role in my dally life. Here are my predictions for my future.
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