专题07 写作（专项训练）四年级英语寒假专项提升（Join in外研剑桥英语版·新教材）

专题07 写作 ( 01 答题技巧 02 知识精练 ) 考点点拨 1. 内容完整性：需围绕写作主题（如介绍动物、人物、活动），包含题目要求的核心信息（如动物的外形、习性，活动的时间、地点），避免关键内容缺失。 2. 语法正确性：考查一般现在时的运用、名词单复数、人称代词（it/he/she）和常用句型（ It has got... / I like... ）的正确使用，杜绝基础语法错误。 3. 词汇丰富度：要求使用符合年级水平的形容词（如 cute / strong ）、动词（如 swim / jump ）和固定搭配，避免重复使用简单词汇。 答题技巧 1. 先列提纲再写作：动笔前用关键词梳理核心内容（如写动物：名称→外形→能力→喜好→感受），确保写作逻辑清晰，不偏离主题。 2. 巧用模板句型：熟记四年级常用万能句型，如 My favourite... is... / It can... / I think it’s... ，快速搭建作文框架，减少语法错误。 3. 检查三步法：写完后先查单词拼写，再查语法（时态、单复数），最后查语句通顺度，及时修正漏字、错词和病句。 小试牛刀 一、根据表格中Nana、Peter、Mike和Lucy的能力进行写一篇英语作文。 要求：1. 语句通顺，语法正确，使用  can  和  can’t  句型。 2. 字数控制在40词左右。开头已给出，不计入总单词数。 Nana Peter Mike Lucy Can Swim Play football Play ping-pong Do kung fu Can’t Ride a bike Do kung fu skate Play basketball I have got four friends. They are Nana, Peter, Mike and Lucy. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 二、请以“My favorite sport star”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一位你喜欢的体育明星。 要求：1. 语句通顺，正确使用 can、is good at 等句型。 2. 用1-2个简单理由说明喜欢他/她的原因。 3. 40词左右，书写工整。 My favorite sport star ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 三、假如你是Nana，新来的同学Mike不知道怎么去博物馆，请写一段对话，描述问路过程。 要求：1. 语句通顺，语法正确，单词拼写无误。 2.对话不少于6句。开头结尾已经给出，不计入总句数。 Mike: Hello! My name is Mike. I'm new here. Nana: Hello, Mike! I'm Nana. Nice to meet you. Mike: _________________________________________________ Nana: _________________________________________________ Mike: _________________________________________________ Nana: _________________________________________________ Mike: _________________________________________________ Nana: _________________________________________________ Mike: Thank you so much, Nana! Nana: You’re welcome! Have a good time! 四、根据地图中的场所位置，以“My town”为题写一篇英语作文，介绍自己的小镇，至少提及5个不同场所的位置关系。 要求：1. 正确使用  beside 、 next to 、 between 、opposite等方位介词。 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，40个单词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 五、阳光动物园需要招聘一名熊猫饲养员，请你帮忙写一篇英语招聘广告。 要求：书写工整，条理清晰，语句通顺，不少于40单词。 Do you love pandas? Our zoo is looking for a panda keeper to join our team! ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ If you are the right person, call us at 1234567! 六、每个人都有自己的梦想职业，请你根据以下提示，以“My dream job”为题写一篇作文，告诉大家你自己的梦想工作吧。 1.What is your dream job? 2.Where do you work? 2.Who do you work with? 3.What do you do at work? 要求：1.句子通顺，拼写正确，标点使用规范。2. 40个单词左右。 My Dream Job ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 七、根据表格中的信息，以“My cousin Wang Qian”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.内容完整，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，表达连贯，不少于40单词。 Name Age Favourite sport Favourite animal Can job Wang Qian 21 basketball lion do kung fu cook My friend Wang Qian ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 八、假如你是杨华，你在阳光服装店（Sunny Clothes Shop）做售货员。请根据表格提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍店里四种商品的价格。 要求：语句通顺，表达清晰，可适当发挥，40词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, I'm Yang Hua. Welcome to Sunny Clothes Shop! ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Come and buy nice clothes here! 九、学校将要举行机器人设计比赛，李梅（Li Mei）画了一个可爱的机器人，请你以李梅的身份，写一篇英语短文介绍这个机器人。 要求：1.需介绍机器人的外观形状（使用 rectangle / triangle / square / circle 等形状单词）。 2.句子通顺，逻辑连贯，单词拼写、大小写及标点使用规范。 3.字数40左右，可适当发挥。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Look at my little robot._________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ I think my robot is very lovely! 十、动物是人类的好朋友。每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物，请以 My Favourite Animal 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物。 要求：1.明确写出最喜欢的动物名称，介绍它的 外形特点（如大小、颜色、身体部位特征）和生活习性（如喜欢的食物、动作特点）。 2. 句子通顺，逻辑清晰，单词拼写、大小写及标点符号使用规范，书写工整。 3. 字数40左右。 My favourite animal ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 一、【参考范文】 I have got four friends. They are Nana, Peter, Mike and Lucy. Nana can swim fast, but she can’t ride a bike. Peter can play football very well, but he can’t do kung fu. Mike is good at playing ping-pong, but he can’t skate. Lucy can do kung fu, but she can’t play basketball. 二、【参考范文】 My favorite sport star My favorite sport star is Ma Long. He is a great ping-pong player. He plays ping-pong very well and wins many games. I like him because he is cool and hard-working. I want to play ping-pong like him in the future. 三、【参考范文】 Mike: Hello! My name is Mike. I'm new here. Nana: Hello, Mike! I'm Nana. Nice to meet you. Mike: Nice to meet you too. Do you know the way to the museum? Nana: Yes, I do. It’s not far from our school. Mike: Great! How can I get there? Nana: Go straight on and turn right at the Rainbow Bookshop. Mike: Is the museum next to the bookshop? Nana: No, it’s next to the park. Mike: Thank you, Nana! Nana: You’re welcome! 四、【参考范文】 My favorite sport star Welcome to my town. The school is opposite the park. The Job Centre is between the school and the supermarket. The supermarket is opposite the bank. The museum is on the left side of the park, and it is opposite the hospital on Hongxin Road.  五、【参考范文】 Do you love pandas? Our zoo is looking for a panda keeper to join our team! You have to be good with animals, healthy and strong. And you also need to know a little about pandas. Every day, your job is to clean the pandas’ houses, prepare food for the pandas and tell people about the pandas. If you are the right person, call us at 1234567! 六、【参考范文】 My Dream Job My dream job is to be a firefighter. I will work in a big fire station in my city. I will work with other brave firemen every day. At work, I will put out fires and help people in need. I think this job is great. 七、【参考范文】 My Friend Wang Qian My cousin is Wang Qian. He is twenty-one years old. His favourite sport is basketball. He often plays it with his friends after work. His favourite animal is the lion because he thinks it is strong and cool. He can do kung fu very well. He is a cook. He is good at making food. He works at a Chinese restaurant. 八、【参考范文】 Hello, I'm Yang Hua. Welcome to Sunny Clothes Shop! We have many nice clothes for you. A pair of socks is only five yuan. A pair of red shoes is forty-five yuan. A pair of blue shorts is sixteen yuan. And a pair of blue trousers is twenty-eight yuan. Fifty yuan for two. Come and buy nice clothes here! 九、【参考范文】 Look at this cute robot! Its head is a rectangle. Its eyes are triangles, and its mouth is a triangle too. Its ears are triangles as well. Its body is a rectangle. Its legs are rectangles, and its feet are triangles. Its arms are rectangles, and its hands are circles. I think my robot is very lovely! 十、【参考范文】 My favourite animal My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white. It has got four legs ,two black eyes and a short tail. It can climb trees and sleep in the tree. Its favourite food is bamboo. It’s very fat and cute. ( 第 2 页 共 8 页 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $