Unit 8 Green Living （单元应用文写作精练）英语北师大版必修第三册

Unit 8 Green Living 绿色生活 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题： 调查报告 调查报告是一种用于系统收集、整理和分析数据，并基于调查结果撰写书面报告的文体。其核心目的是客观呈现事实、分析问题，并提出个人观点或建议，常用于校园调查、社会现象分析等场景。 写作框架： 第一段 说明调查背景、目的、对象 第二段 分点陈述调查结果，可使用数据、比例 第三段 发表个人看法，提出建议或呼吁 写作词汇短语： 1. 开头引入调查 conduct a survey / carry out an investigation 开展一项调查 find out / look into / explore 查明 / 调查 / 探究 Recently a survey has been done to... 最近开展了一项调查，旨在…… I made a survey on... 我做了一项关于……的调查 2. 陈述调查结果 The results are as follows: 结果如下： As the diagram shows, ... 如图所示，…… According to the survey/data, ... 根据调查/数据，…… 3. 表达对比与分类 On the other hand, ... 另一方面，…… while / whereas 而 / 然而（用于对比） divided into... categories 被分为……类 fall into... groups 可归入……组 4. 提出个人观点 In my opinion, ... 在我看来，…… From my perspective, ... 从我的角度来看，…… I believe/think that... 我相信/认为…… It is clear that... 很明显…… 5. 表达建议与呼吁 I suggest that... 我建议…… It would be better if... 如果……会更好 I hope we can... 我希望我们能…… Let’s work together to... 让我们一起努力…… 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. In order to better understand ..., a survey was conducted among ... in .... 为了更好了解...，我们于...在....中开展了一项调查。 2. This report aims to present the findings of a recent survey on ..., which involved .... 本报告旨在呈现近期一项关于...的调查结果，该调查涵盖了...。 【中间句】 1. 引出数据：As is shown in the chart/table, .... 如图表所示，...。 2. 对比呈现：While ..., only .... This significant difference indicates that... 虽然...，但仅有...。这一显著差异表明…… 3. 分析原因：The high/low percentage of... may be attributed to/result from .... ……的高/低比例可归因于...。 【结尾句】 1. 总结：In summary, the survey highlights the fact that .... 总之，本次调查突显了...这一事实。 2. 建议：Therefore, it would be advisable to .... Also, ... might be another effective solution. 因此，建议...。同时，...或许是另一个有效的解决方案。 写作模板： A Survey Report on [调查主题] In order to investigate [调查主题]， our group conducted a survey among [调查对象， e.g., 300 students from our school] last [时间]. The main purpose was to find out [具体目的]. The survey results are presented as follows. First, an overwhelming majority of respondents ([数据]%) reported that [发现一]. Additionally, about [数据]% of them indicated that [发现二]. However, only [数据]% stated that [发现三]. The data clearly shows that [分析发现的趋势或问题]. The possible reason might be that [简要分析原因]. This gap between [A] and [B] needs our attention. In conclusion, the survey reveals that [总结核心结论]. To address this, we suggest that [具体建议一]. Moreover, it would be helpful if [具体建议二]. （2022·全国乙卷·高考真题）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 假定你是李华，最近学校组织了一次名为“绿色交通去上学”的活动，针对同学们对于此次活动的态度你在班上做了一次调查。请根据表格信息，用英语写一篇调查报告向校英语报投稿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 观点 比例 理由 支持 70% 1.汽车带来了空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2.骑自行车的益处：节约能源、有益健康等 反对 30% 骑自行车上学浪费时间且不安全 _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（18-19高一下·河南鹤壁·月考）假定你是李华，最近你就“高中生是否应利用课余时间打工”这一话题在全校范围内进行了调查。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇调查报告并发表在校英语报上。 态度 所占比例 理由 结论 赞成 30％ 1.可以了解外面的世界 2.有助于经济独立 …… 反对 70％ 1.    学生的主要任务是学习 2.    兼职工作有不安全因素 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·全国·模拟预测）近期，你校英文报就你校高中生每日英语口语练习时间做了调查，请你结合图表信息写一篇调查报告。内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 陈述你的看法； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24高一下·广东茂名·期末）假定你是李华，上周你校英语俱乐部开展了以“Are You For Or Against Space Exploration?”为题的调查。请你使用图表中的调查报告写一篇英文报道。内容包括： 1.调查时间、主题、对象； 2.调查结果描述和分析； 3.简单评价。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2022·全国·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报的记者，近日就某校高中生如何度过暑假做了一次调查，请结合表格信息写一篇调查报告，内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 陈述你的看法。 暑期活动类别 人数占比 学习 71% 外出旅游 30% 参加社会实践 15% 帮忙做家务 8% 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（18-19高一上·福建·期中）你是李华。某英文报社想了解你校高一新生入学来的学习生活适应情况，以下是你的调查报告，请将调查内容及个人观点用英文写信告诉报社负责人。 60%的学生认为 40%的学生认为 我的观点 1.高中学习并不轻松； 2.科目难度大，课后作业多； 3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动 1.适应并喜欢高中生活； 2.课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅 …… 注意: 1. 词数100左右，通知开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不要提及真实的校名和人名； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇: course课程；exercise锻炼；benefit 对……有益；adapt to适应 Dear sir, Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 8 Green Living 绿色生活 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题： 调查报告 调查报告是一种用于系统收集、整理和分析数据，并基于调查结果撰写书面报告的文体。其核心目的是客观呈现事实、分析问题，并提出个人观点或建议，常用于校园调查、社会现象分析等场景。 写作框架： 第一段 说明调查背景、目的、对象 第二段 分点陈述调查结果，可使用数据、比例 第三段 发表个人看法，提出建议或呼吁 写作词汇短语： 1. 开头引入调查 conduct a survey / carry out an investigation 开展一项调查 find out / look into / explore 查明 / 调查 / 探究 Recently a survey has been done to... 最近开展了一项调查，旨在…… I made a survey on... 我做了一项关于……的调查 2. 陈述调查结果 The results are as follows: 结果如下： As the diagram shows, ... 如图所示，…… According to the survey/data, ... 根据调查/数据，…… 3. 表达对比与分类 On the other hand, ... 另一方面，…… while / whereas 而 / 然而（用于对比） divided into... categories 被分为……类 fall into... groups 可归入……组 4. 提出个人观点 In my opinion, ... 在我看来，…… From my perspective, ... 从我的角度来看，…… I believe/think that... 我相信/认为…… It is clear that... 很明显…… 5. 表达建议与呼吁 I suggest that... 我建议…… It would be better if... 如果……会更好 I hope we can... 我希望我们能…… Let’s work together to... 让我们一起努力…… 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. In order to better understand ..., a survey was conducted among ... in .... 为了更好了解...，我们于...在....中开展了一项调查。 2. This report aims to present the findings of a recent survey on ..., which involved .... 本报告旨在呈现近期一项关于...的调查结果，该调查涵盖了...。 【中间句】 1. 引出数据：As is shown in the chart/table, .... 如图表所示，...。 2. 对比呈现：While ..., only .... This significant difference indicates that... 虽然...，但仅有...。这一显著差异表明…… 3. 分析原因：The high/low percentage of... may be attributed to/result from .... ……的高/低比例可归因于...。 【结尾句】 1. 总结：In summary, the survey highlights the fact that .... 总之，本次调查突显了...这一事实。 2. 建议：Therefore, it would be advisable to .... Also, ... might be another effective solution. 因此，建议...。同时，...或许是另一个有效的解决方案。 写作模板： A Survey Report on [调查主题] In order to investigate [调查主题]， our group conducted a survey among [调查对象， e.g., 300 students from our school] last [时间]. The main purpose was to find out [具体目的]. The survey results are presented as follows. First, an overwhelming majority of respondents ([数据]%) reported that [发现一]. Additionally, about [数据]% of them indicated that [发现二]. However, only [数据]% stated that [发现三]. The data clearly shows that [分析发现的趋势或问题]. The possible reason might be that [简要分析原因]. This gap between [A] and [B] needs our attention. In conclusion, the survey reveals that [总结核心结论]. To address this, we suggest that [具体建议一]. Moreover, it would be helpful if [具体建议二]. （2022·全国乙卷·高考真题）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 【答案】Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lack→shortage 加强：strengthen→enhance 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句) 假定你是李华，最近学校组织了一次名为“绿色交通去上学”的活动，针对同学们对于此次活动的态度你在班上做了一次调查。请根据表格信息，用英语写一篇调查报告向校英语报投稿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 观点 比例 理由 支持 70% 1.汽车带来了空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2.骑自行车的益处：节约能源、有益健康等 反对 30% 骑自行车上学浪费时间且不安全 _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Recently our school held an activity called “Green Transport to School”，which calls on the students to ride bicycles to school.I made a survey on our classmates' attitudes towards this activity. 70% of our classmates support it for two reasons.One reason is that riding a bicycle can be energy-saving and is good for our health.The other reason is that cars lead to air pollution and traffic jams. But just opposite to the supporters，others think if the school is far away from home，it is not only unsafe but also a waste of time riding to school. All in all, in my opinion, riding to school is a very good choice if you're not in a hurry and if the weather is fine. 1．（18-19高一下·河南鹤壁·月考）假定你是李华，最近你就“高中生是否应利用课余时间打工”这一话题在全校范围内进行了调查。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇调查报告并发表在校英语报上。 态度 所占比例 理由 结论 赞成 30％ 1.可以了解外面的世界 2.有助于经济独立 …… 反对 70％ 1.    学生的主要任务是学习 2.    兼职工作有不安全因素 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I’ve carried out a survey among us students on whether students should take part-time jobs,whose results are as follows. 30% of the students surveyed are in favor of the idea .First of all,they think part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance to know the outside world.Besides,they hope to be economically independent. However,70% of the students are against it, believing that students should focus on studying rather than making money.In addition, they doubt whether it is always safe to take part-time jobs. In conclusion,it’s beneficial for students to take part-time jobs if everything is in perfect condition 【分析】这是图表类作文，是一篇调查报告。要求就“高中生是否应利用课余时间打工”这一话题根据表格内容，用英语写一篇调查报告并发表在校英语报上。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构：总分总法 要点：1.赞成的人的比例，理由 2.反对的人的比例，理由 3.结论 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） carry out；survey；as follows；part-time jobs；in favor of；provide sb. with sth.；hope to do；be against；focus on；mak money；in addition；in conclusion；in perfect condition等 第三步：连词成句 1. I’ve carried out a survey among us students on whether students should take part-time jobs 2. They think part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance to know the outside world 3. 70% of the students are against it, believing that students should focus on studying rather than making money. 4.They doubt whether it is always safe to take part-time jobs. 5. It’s beneficial for students to take part-time jobs if everything is in perfect condition 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） First of all,…Besides,…In addition,…In conclusion,….；However；if；rather than等 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’ve carried out a survey among us students on whether students should take part-time jobs, whose results are as follows.使用了whose引导的定语从句；70% of the students are against it, believing that students should focus on studying rather than making money.使用了非谓语动词，还有短语focus on，rather than，make money等；they doubt whether it is always safe to take part-time jobs.使用了whether引导的宾语从句；it’s beneficial for students to take part-time jobs if everything is in perfect condition使用了it+be+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句式和if从句等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2．（2024·全国·模拟预测）近期，你校英文报就你校高中生每日英语口语练习时间做了调查，请你结合图表信息写一篇调查报告。内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 陈述你的看法； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】佳作展台 A survey on the time students spend practising spoken English daily was carried out1   by our school’s English newspaper. And it has been found that 59% of the students devote less than 30 minutes to2   spoken English practice3 . Students sparing4 over 30 minutes to practise5 account for6 22%. Additionally, there’re 19% of students reporting no daily oral practice. It is encouraging to see that a majority of students engage in7 regular spoken English exercises8   . However, there’s still a good portion of9 students who do not prioritize10 oral practice at all. Therefore, further efforts should be made to raise awareness of11 the importance of sufficient 12 spoken English practice. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生结合图表信息写一篇高中生每日英语口语练习时间的调查报告。 【详解】1.词汇积累 调查：survey→investigation 另外：additionally→moreover 然而：however→nevertheless 因此：therefore→hence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Students sparing over 30 minutes to practise account for 22%. 拓展句：Students who spare over 30 minutes to practise account for 22%. 【点睛】[高分句型1] And it has been found that 59% of the students devote less than 30 minutes to spoken English practice. (运用了it做形式主语，that引导主语从句) [高分句型2] However, there’s still a good portion of students who do not prioritize oral practice at all. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 3．（23-24高一下·广东茂名·期末）假定你是李华，上周你校英语俱乐部开展了以“Are You For Or Against Space Exploration?”为题的调查。请你使用图表中的调查报告写一篇英文报道。内容包括： 1.调查时间、主题、对象； 2.调查结果描述和分析； 3.简单评价。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Are You For Or Against Space Exploration? Last week, our school’s English Club conducted a survey among students, exploring the topic of “Are You For Or Against Space Exploration?” The survey was conducted over a period of three days, engaging a wide range of students. The results were intriguing, revealing a clear majority in favor of space exploration. Specifically, 62% of the respondents expressed their support for the cause, citing reasons such as scientific advancement, the search for extraterrestrial life, and the potential for new resources. In contrast, 38% of the students opposed space exploration, mainly citing concerns about cost, risks to astronauts, and potential harm to Earth’s environment. In conclusion, the survey has sparked a lively discussion among students, which fostered critical thinking and awareness of the complexities surrounding space exploration. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。上周你校英语俱乐部开展了以“Are You For Or Against Space Exploration?”为题的调查。要求考生使用图表中的调查报告写一篇英文报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 主题：topic→theme 实施：conduct→carry out 总之：in conclusion→in short 培养：foster→develop 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The results were intriguing, revealing a clear majority in favor of space exploration. 拓展句：The results were intriguing, which revealed a clear majority in favor of space exploration. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The results were intriguing, revealing a clear majority in favor of space exploration. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] In conclusion, the survey has sparked a lively discussion among students, which fostered critical thinking and awareness of the complexities surrounding space exploration. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 4．（2022·全国·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报的记者，近日就某校高中生如何度过暑假做了一次调查，请结合表格信息写一篇调查报告，内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 陈述你的看法。 暑期活动类别 人数占比 学习 71% 外出旅游 30% 参加社会实践 15% 帮忙做家务 8% 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Recently a survey of how students spent the summer holidays was carried out in a senior high school. As is shown in the chart, the majority of students, as many as 71%, devoted themselves to studying while 30% went traveling. Students participating in social practice activities account for 15%, followed by 8% who helped with the housework. The figures suggest there are various ways to spend the summer holidays. As far as I’m concerned, apart from studying, students should spare some time to relax and explore the wonderful world so that they can have well-rounded development. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就某校高中生如何度过暑假做了一次调查，请结合表格信息写一篇调查报告。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in→ take part in 各种各样的：various → all kinds of 除了：apart from→ except 致力于做某事：devoted oneself to doing→ commit oneself to doing 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Recently a survey of how students spent the summer holidays was carried out in a senior high school. 拓展句：Recently a survey, which was carried out in a senior high school, is about how students spent the summer holidays. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As is shown in the chart, the majority of students, as many as 71%, devoted themselves to studying while 30% went traveling.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As far as I’m concerned, apart from studying, students should spare some time to relax and explore the wonderful world so that they can have well-rounded development.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句。） 5．（18-19高一上·福建·期中）你是李华。某英文报社想了解你校高一新生入学来的学习生活适应情况，以下是你的调查报告，请将调查内容及个人观点用英文写信告诉报社负责人。 60%的学生认为 40%的学生认为 我的观点 1.高中学习并不轻松； 2.科目难度大，课后作业多； 3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动 1.适应并喜欢高中生活； 2.课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅 …… 注意: 1. 词数100左右，通知开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不要提及真实的校名和人名； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇: course课程；exercise锻炼；benefit 对……有益；adapt to适应 Dear sir, Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li hua 【答案】Dear sir, Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school. As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are different. 60% of the students think that life in senior high school is not relaxing. Firstly, the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities. On the contrary, others say they quite adapt to the new life and begin to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which benefit them a lot. As far as I'm concerned, we should balance our study and other activities. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better. Yours, Lihua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，将调查内容及个人观点告诉报社负责人 。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 结构：总分总 要求： 1. 简要陈述调查报告 2. 调查报告的结果 1）大多数人认为不适应高中生活，以及原因（学习压力大，作业难且多，没时间锻炼） 2）一部分人认为适应高中生活，以及原因（课程有趣，课外活动丰富） 3.发表自己的看法（适应或不是因，简要陈述愿意） 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） on the one hand…on the other hand…/it is not easy for sb to do sth/ feel stressed/have time to do sth/ take exercise/ adapt to/ benefit from 第三步：连词成句 1.    As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are different. 2.    On the one hand 60% of the students think they can’t adapt to high school life. 3.    Because it is not easy for them to catch up with studies. 4.  Most of the subjects are difficult. 5.    With too much homework, they can not spare any time to take exercise. 6.    One the other hand, some of the students adapt their new life very well. 7.  They think there are more afterschool activities, which they can benefit from. 8.  They also think the courses are more interesting and challengeable than junior ones.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词） 1. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least… 2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for 3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last 4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语） 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如: Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.该句中的which引导非限定性定语从句；使用了倒装句，例如：Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.该句中only+状语位于句首，句子部分倒装。也是用了一些固定短语，例如：on the contrary/ as far as I'm concerned/ balance…and…等。文章思路清晰，表达简洁，上下文衔接自然，一些句法和短语的应用为文章增色添彩。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $