Unit 7 Section Ⅵ Writing——正式电子邮件（课件PPT）-【金榜题名】2025-2026学年高一英语必修第三册高中同步学案（北师大版）

该高中英语课件聚焦正式电子邮件写作，涵盖文体结构、注意事项及常用句式，通过文体解读明确写作对象与语气，结合典型演练（如介绍学校变化）和跟踪训练（申请兼职修改材料），搭建从基础句式到实际应用的学习支架，衔接知识整合与综合训练。 其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，通过顺序连接词（First...Second...）和过渡词（besides, moreover）训练逻辑思维（思维品质），提供开头结尾句式模板提升表达准确性，典型演练中对比今昔变化强化时态运用，跟踪训练贴近生活场景。这既助学生掌握规范写作技巧，又培养问题解决能力，教师可依托系统资源高效开展教学。

Unit 7 　ART 　　Section Ⅵ　Writing——正式电子邮件 Unit 7 返回导航 1 目录 contents Part 01 基础梳理 新知落实 Part 02 语篇解读 要点领悟 Part 05 单元检测卷（一） Part 03 知识整合 核心突破 Part 04 综合训练 能力提升 Unit 7 返回导航 1 写作培优 精彩增分 返回导航 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 hear from take place used to in use be equipped with the number of... Unit 7 返回导航 1 发生了很大的变化 Great changes have taken place no longer what it used to be 内有 等 in which/where in which/where there are rooms Unit 7 返回导航 1 变得越来越好 become better and better Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 Unit 7 返回导航 1 单元检测卷（一） 点击进入 word Unit 7 返回导航 1 谢谢观看 Unit 7 返回导航 1 [文体解读] 本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的电子邮件。正式电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。 1．首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人，语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写词语，但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像中考中的书面表达题，就是正规的写作，就不能用俚语或缩写词语。 2．写电子邮件要直接，并多用短句，使意思清楚。当然，对重点部分要作详细介绍。试题中要求写的电子邮件，就必须根据(汉语或图画)提示，将要点写全，并注意语言的运用。 写电子邮件注意事项： 1．各要点之间需要使用First...，Second...，Third...或First of all...，Next...，Third...，Then...，Finally... 来表示顺序结构，不要使用阿拉伯数字。常用连接词还有： Firstly，I would like to... Secondly，could you...? Thirdly，I would be... Finally，I would like to... In addition to that，could you...? Another query I have is about... Something else I would like to ask about is... 2．要有过渡词句。由于平行的信息较多，所以除了上面的排序法以外，还应多使用一些衔接词或短语，表示递进关系：then，besides，moreover，in addition(to)，what's more，what's worse，similarly，in the same way...；表示转折关系：but，yet，however，still，though，otherwise，despite，regardless of，in spite of...。 3．句式要多样化。在文章中恰当地使用一些复合句、并列句、倒装句、虚拟语气、强调句型和非谓语等来调节文章的节奏。 4．一般要求在结尾对文章进行总结，可使用in a word，in short，briefly，generally speaking，finally，at last等总结性的词或短语。 5．写完后，一定要通读全文，并进行“四问”： (1)是否遗漏了要点？ (2)语句是否正确通顺？ (3)每段是否围绕中心展开？有没有中心句？结构安排是否合理？ (4)有没有过渡不太自然的地方？能否在此添加过渡词句？ [常用句式] ●精彩开头语 1．I'm happy/glad/pleased to receive your e­mail dated by May 1st. 很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。 2．I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England. 我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。 3．I'm sorry not to answer/reply to your e­mail in time because I have been busy these days. 很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。 4．I'm sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination. 得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。 5．I'm glad to receive your e­mail saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company.Congratulations to you. 我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。 6．I have been missing you a lot since we met last time. 自从我们上次见面以来，我一直很想你。 7．How are you getting on with your English study? 你英语学得怎么样了？ 8．I am sorry for not writing to you sooner. 很抱歉没有早点给你写信。 ●精华结尾语 1．In the end，I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。 2．I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. 盼望很快收到你的来信。 3．Please give my regards to your family. 请代我向你的家人问好。 4．If you have any more questions，please let me know. 如果你还有问题，请告诉我。 5．Wish you the best of health and success! 祝您身体健康，工作顺利。 6．I look forward to our next meeting. 期待我们的下次相见。 [典题演练] 假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你们学校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。请你根据下面的汉语提示，给他回一封电子邮件，介绍你们学校的变化。 三年前：一座教学楼，一个操场。 现状： 1．校园扩建，新建起了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等，体育设备齐全； 2．学生人数：从1000增加到2000； 3．绿化了校园。 注意：词数：80左右。 [审题谋篇] 1．本文要求写一封电子邮件，注意使用开头、结尾的常用句式和客套话语。 2．本文主要使用现在时态，在介绍三年前的情况时用过去时态。 3．本文可采用以下结构： (1)称呼语 (2)开头语 (3)介绍学校在这三年间的变化 (4)结束语 (5)落款(签名) [词汇热身] 1．收到……的来信 2．发生 3．过去常常 4．使用中 5．装备着 6．……的数目 [句式温习] 1．过去的三年间我们学校 。 in my school in the past three years. 2．我们的学校不再是三年前只有一座教学楼和一个操场的学校了。 Our school is three years ago，when there was only a teaching building and a playground. 3．其中一座楼是我们的教学楼， 音乐室、美术室、微机房 。 One of the buildings is a new classroom building， for music，art and computer teaching. 4．我相信我们的学校会 ，我希望你再来我们学校参观。 I believe my school will ，and I hope you will visit my school again. [连句成篇] Mr.Smith， I was pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right.Great changes have taken place in my school in the past three years.It is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only a teaching building and a playground.I'm happy to tell you that two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new classroom building，in which there are rooms for music，art and computer teaching.The other is the library，where there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.Besides，my school is well equipped with sports facilities.The number of the students has also grown from 1，000 to 2，000.What's more，we have planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I believe my school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit my school again. Yours， Li Hua [跟踪训练] 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms.Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】 Dear Ms.Jenkins， I'm writing to ask you for help.I'm applying for a part­time job in an overseas­funded corporation.I think it'll be a new challenge to me.Moreover，by doing the part­time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society. I've already written the application and resume.But I'm afraid that there are some mistakes about the words and format.So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor. Yours sincerely， Li Hua to me.Moreover，by doing the part­time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society. I've already written the application and resume.But I'm afraid that there are some mistakes about the words and format.So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor. Yours sincerely， Li Hua $