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Period 4
写作点拨
如何写议论文
要想写好议论文,必须掌握好议论文的
有关知识:
1.主要结构:引论一本论一结论
2.三要素:论点、论据、论证
3.论证方式:立论、驳论
4.主要论证方法:事实论证、道理论
证、事实与道理相结合论证等。首先要明确
写作要求,再根据要求确定论证方式,继而
采用恰当的论证方法,运用相应的论据对论
点进行论证。
5.常用写作模式:议论文通常采用三段
式的论证模式。引论部分,首先提出主张
或看法,或分析存在的某些问题。本论部
分,首先确定论证方式,再用恰当的论证
方法,运用事实论据或道理论据对论点进行
论证。结论部分,即通过严密的分析与论证
之后,总括全文,阐述主张或提出解决问题
的方法。
6.常用模板:议论文写作时可以套用常
用的词汇、短语和句型。议论文不同的部分
阐述的侧重点不同,因此每一部分能套用的
词汇、短语和句型亦有所区别。
第一部分,套用相关句型来引出议论。
(1)Recently,our class have had a heat-
ed discussion about whether...
(2)These years,some students are inter-
ested in...
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(3)Now,some people hold the view
that.…
(4)I'm writing to tell you about the
discussion we have had about...
(5)There are two opinions on it.
(6)Opinions are divided on the question.
第二部分,采用关联词和句型列举事实
依据,采用正反对比或归纳推理的方法,证
明所持观点的正确性及表明其所持有的
态度。
(1)Besides/In addition/Apart from it/
What's more/Above all...
(2)For example.../There are...such as...
and so on.
(3)On one hand...on the other hand...
(4)First...Second...Third...
(5)On the contrary/However/While.../But..
(6)At the same time,we should...
(7)If...I believe we will...
(8)As we see/As we all know/As far as I
know...
(9)Of all students,40%of them think..but
others do not agree.
(10)Some people believe that...but oth-
ers say/consider that...
(11)Some students are for the idea /are
in favor of it/agree to it,while /but /however
others are against it/disagree to it.
第三部分,引用表示因果关系的关联词
语、总结性的语句来强调和重申所提出的观
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点,或者引用某些特定的短语和句型来揭示
观点,也可以礼貌地征求对方的建议。
(1)In a word.../In short.../In brief...
(2)As a result.../Therefore...
(3)No doubt doing something is.../There
is no doubt that...
(4)So in a word,we should.../Only in
this way can we...
(5)Generally speaking,most students
think we should...
(6)In fact/As a matter of fact,we can...
(7)So,for something,I suggest that we
should do...
(8)In my opinion,I think...
(9)I have my own view about it,I
think...
(10)Personally,I believe it is...
(11)Now,we really don't know what to
do about it.Could you tell us some good
advice and help us out?
除了学会套用一些常用的句型和短语
外,还需要掌握一定量的英语基础知识,根
据书面表达题的具体内容和要求,灵活地选
用句式“There be'”强调句式“Itis.that.”
省略句式“if necessary”动词的非谓语形式
“todo/doing/done”等。另外,根据句子语
气的需要,可以在英语句中适当地增加一些
情态s动词“should/.can/may/had better/must'”
以及句与句之间合理使用一些并列、递进、
转折等关系的关联词语。这样,议论文的结
构会更加严谨,更具说服力和感染力。
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典例赏析
随着现代科学技术的发展,越来越多的
人每日都要因为不同的原因去使用计算机。
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之
一,它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但
是,过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利
影响。下面请你以鼠标作为切入点,根据提
示写一篇议论性的短文。
提示:
1.鼠标的必要性:操作计算机,上网
冲浪…
2.鼠标的便利用途:
点击,移动,插入,拷贝,删除:
编辑文本,搜索信息;
收发邮件,选购商品;
点播音乐,下载电影。
3.如果过分依赖鼠标,会…
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题导引】
1.本题要求写一篇议论文。时态以一般
现在时来书写为最佳。
2.计算机的使用问题一直以来都是一个
热点话题,学生对此并不陌生,同时提示较
为详细,但要注意,本题的切入点是鼠标的
使用,不要偏离主题。
3.本篇议论文的书写难点是要做到有理
有据,真正做到论述具体、得当,具有较强
的说服力。
【参考范文】
Recently,with the development of mod-
ern technology,more and more people begin
to use computers for a variety of reasons.
They hold the view that the mouse is a most
effective device used by people to communi-
cate with computers.
As we all know,it is almost impossible
for most people to operate computer without a
mouse,let alone surf the Internet.On the one
hand,with the functions of inserting,deleting,
moving and copying,it enables us to edit text,
browse web pages and download what we
want.On the other hand,it can even bring us
a flood of music,movies and PC games.
A convenient tool can certainly make our
work easier,however,it sometimes doesn't
help in a positive way.There is no doubt that
too much information on our fingertips leaves
little room for knowledge pursuing.In fact,
relying too much on mouse makes us lazier
and less creative both mentally and physically.
【词句品鉴】
高级词汇
effective,convenient,enable,positive
精彩短语
with the development of,used by,in
和关联词
fact
They hold the view that...
增分句型
As we all know...
There is no doubt that...
【名师点评】
本篇议论文思路清晰、模式精准、要点
齐全、结构完整、层次清晰。合理运用了关
联词语和增分句型,使整个语篇内容紧凑,
论证充分。
Unit 3 SEA EXPLORATION
写作模板
(1)论点提出要清晰:
They hold the view that...
(2)论证陈述要全面,务必包括正反两
方面:
...it is almost impossible for...
...however,it sometimes doesn't...
(3)论据给出要详尽、有说服力:
On the one hand...
On the other hand...
There is no doubt that...
In fact.…
读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续
写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
There has one word that is on the lips of
Americans,day and night,"sorry".
One time as I was walking on the street,
a young man ran by hurriedly,brushing a-
gainst my handbag.Even as he continued on
his way,he turned back and said“sorry”to
me.Even in a rush,he didn't forget to apolo-
gize.Another time,I went shopping with my
best friend.After we got on an elevator,care-
lessly I stepped on a man's foot.However,al-
most at the same time,we both said "sorry".I
thought it interesting:was it really necessary
for him to apologize?
What made me the most impressive was
that experience.The other day,I went to buy
some fruits in a supermarket.After I bought
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some apples,the salesman was giving me the
change,but I wasn't ready for it,and a coin
dropped on the ground.“I'm sorry,”he said
while bending down to pick it up.I was
puzzled...why would he apologize when it was
my fault?
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已
为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
As soon as possible
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(3)she had been arrested (4)have made several arrests
Ⅱ.重点句式讲解
2.increases;increasing
Ⅲ.小试牛刀
1.merciful 2.possessions 3.possession 4.is
5.possessing 6.to 7.at 8.increasing 9.As 10.going
V.语篇填空
1.to 2.exploration 3.killing 4.are hunted 5.it
6.To understand 7.which/that 8.better 9.as 10.ability
Period 3 Grammar
1.(1)to get down (2)To apply
2.(1)to protect (2)to amuse
3.(1)to overcome (2)to give (3)to realize
4.(1)to deliver (2)to become/to be
5.(1)①to be discussed②to make(2)to live
on (3)to show/express (4)to leave (5)to come
(6)to say
6.(1)②to acquire;to enlarge(2)①to make
②to be forgotten(3)②to have been
Unit 4
Culture Background Analysis
1-5 TTFTF
Period 1 Reading and Thinking
I.重点知识讲解
1.(1)delivered (2)a parcel of (3)parceled up
2.(1)was jammed (2)is anxious to
3.(1)is eager for (2)is anxious to
4.(1)gather dust (2)dusty 5.a chorus of
6.(1)livedupto (2)to find (3)have been tried
7.(1)to (2)adapted from
8.(1)to (2)with
9.(1)make a great difference (2)on
10.(1)shaded (2)shades (3)puts me in the shade
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【参考范文】
Paragraph 1:
As soon as possible I apologized to him,"I'm sorry,
and it is my fault."Stretching out one of my hands to
fetch the coin,I found a big smile appearing on his face.
Without any word,I felt his gratitude.Seeing the long
line behind me,he soon devoted himself to his work
again.
Paragraph 2:
Next day,I went there to go shopping as usual.When
I wanted to check out,I sought for the former salesman on
purpose.Fortunately I found him with ease.When he
caught sight of me,"hello"was his first reaction and
happily said "I believe I will not say sorry to you this
time".That is the beginning of our friendship.Everyone
tries to behave as Americans do,because it is believed that
"sorry"can cool tempers,stop friction,show kindness and
even promote friendshi.
SHARING
11.riper 12.participating in
13.(1)dragged (2)drag your feet
14.a privilege
Ⅲ.小试牛刀
一、用所给单词的适当形式填空
1.jammed 2.was dusting 3.adaptation
4.participants 5.is dragging
二、按要求完成下列句子
1.Tom was weeding the garden,when he was hit by a
stone from nowhere without mercy.
2.In your last mail you doubted whether it was
necessary to ask for an extended lunch hour.
3.The fascinating scenery was a sight to behold so
that I definitely couldn't drag myself away.
4.It was a privilege for me to participate in the