内容正文:
英语沪教版八年级上册
Pets
and
us
Lesson 4 Writing
Unit8
Learning objectives
01
分析、总结范文的框架和语篇模式以及语言特点;
02
仿照范例,写一篇介绍心目中最理想宠物的文章;
03
通过互评与修改提升写作质量与批判性思维。
重点
重点
通过本课时的学习,学生能够:
What's your favourite pet? Why?
Think and say
My favourite pets are ______________. Because they are ________________.
dogs/cats/pigs...
clever/honest...
a. 记叙文
b. 说明文
c. 议论文
Skim and choose
Skim the article and choose the correct answer.
What’s the type of this article?
1
What’s the structure of this article?
2
a. 总-分
b. 分-总
c. 总-分-总
Read and answer
1
What pet does Wang Yao think is perfect?
Read and answer
2
Why does Wang Yao think cats are the perfect pets?
Read and fill
clean
cleaning themselves
relieve themselves
cover their own waste
quiet
much quieter
your neighbours will complain that it makes a loud noise
easy
look after
staying indoors
walk their cats
Cats
Opinions
Reasons
Facts/examples
Read and analyze
Introduction:
State your opinions
1. List your reasons
+
2. Give examples/facts
Conclusion: state your opinions again
Structure
Body
Read and analyze
Useful expressions
How does the author make the writing clearer and more logical?
By using linking words.
Read and analyze
Function Words / Phrases
State an opinion
List reasons
Give examples/facts
Concluding
I think that...
Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
In addition...; If ..., it is unlikely that ...
For these reasons, I believe that...
Useful expressions
Read and learn
Today’s task
Remember to include the following sections in your article:
Tip
Introduction: State your opinion.
Body: Give facts or examples to support your opinion.
Conclusion: State your opinion again.
Step 1
Plan and write
Think about what animal makes the perfect pet and why. Use the tips below to help you plan your article.
Plan and write
Reason 2: . Examples/facts: .
Reason 3: . Examples/facts: .
Reason 1: . Examples/facts: .
My Perfect Pet: __________
Step 1
Plan: Choose an animal. Brainstorm 3 reasons and examples.
Think and write
10 mins
Step 2
Now write your article.
Start
Time up
Check your structure!
Use linking words!
Give examples!
Check and revise
☐ I stated my opinion clearly in the introduction and the conclusion.
☐ I gave at least three reasons to support my opinion.
☐ I provided examples or facts for each reason.
☐ I used linking words correctly and I used the words and expressions
that I learnt in this unit .
☐ I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Step 3
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
Summary
Firstly, Secondly, In addition, Finally...
连接词
I believe that... / For example,... / In my opinion,.../ For this reason...
表达句式
Introduction
Body (reasons + examples)
Conclusion
结构
Writing: The Perfect Pet
Homework
Finish revising the composition and write a neat final copy.
Basic
Design a poster to recommend your chosen “perfect pet” by using both images and text.
Extend
bye
Bye-
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