Unit 5 Nature's Temper.(写作提升)-2025-2026学年八年级新教材英语下册基础知识专项讲练(新教材人教版)

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Unit 5 Nature's Temper. (写作提升) 描述一场自然灾害 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元以“自然灾害”为话题,写作任务常围绕讲述过去发生的一场自然灾害而展开,相应地描述人物活动或灾害的影响。在写这类文章时,时态多用一般过去时和过去进行时,人称多用第一人称。写作时,注意写清事件发生的时间、地点,事件所涉人物,事件的过程和结果,以及面对灾害时人们的应对措施。本单元相关话题写作素材有:   (1)We were... when the .. started.当.....开始的时候,我们正在.....(2)It was . ..while we were ... 当我们正在......的时候......   (3)... was scary, but it also brought everyone closer together... .......很可怕,但它也让每个人都走得更近了。   (4)It meant that...was possible. 这意味着......是可能的。   (5)He jumped into action right away and rushed to... 他立即行动起来,冲过去......   (6)People were screaming and running as fast as they could when they saw ...   当人们看到......时,他们尖叫着,拼命地跑。 (7)This true story shows... 这个真实的故事告诉我们...... (8)It rained cats and dogs.下着倾盆大雨。   (9)All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky.突然,天空中响起了雷声。   (10)The wind was too strong for me to ... 风太大了,我不能...... ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假如你是Daming,你所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪,幸运的是,暴风雪持续时间并不长,你们全家安然无恙。请你根据写作要点的提示,描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动。  写作要点: 1.写明暴风雪发生的时间:yesterday evening 2.暴风雪发生时全家人都在做什么:My mother was ...   3.暴风雪发生时的心情:scared.   4.暴风雪发生的后果:all safe  写作要求:   1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;   2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;   3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰,80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was__________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 一、 自然灾害类型 / 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1. 地震 - earthquake 2. 洪水 - flood 3. 台风 - typhoon 4. 泥石流 - mudslide 5. 干旱 - drought 6. 海啸 - tsunami 7. 森林火灾 - forest fire 8. 龙卷风 - tornado 9. 暴雪 - snowstorm 10. 冰雹 - hail 11. 火山爆发 - volcanic eruption 12. 沙尘暴 - sandstorm 13. 雷暴 - thunderstorm 14. 山体滑坡 - landslide 二、 灾害发生与过程 1. 袭击 - hit / strike 2. 爆发 - break out / erupt 3. 蔓延 - spread 4. 席卷 - sweep across 5. 倾泻而下 - pour down 6. 持续 - last / go on 7. 引发 - cause / lead to 8. 突发 - happen suddenly 9. 肆虐 - rage 10. 侵袭 - invade 三、 灾害破坏与影响 1. 摧毁 - destroy 2. 损坏 - damage 3. 倒塌 - collapse 4. 伤亡 - casualties 5. 断电 - power cut 6. 无家可归 - homeless 7. 淹没 - submerge 8. 掩埋 - bury 9. 中断 - cut off 10. 污染 - pollute 11. 饥荒 - famine 12. 废墟 - ruins 13. 失踪 - missing 14. 交通瘫痪 - traffic paralysis 15. 通讯中断 - communication breakdown 四、 救援与应对行动 1. 救援 - rescue 2. 志愿者 - volunteer 3. 捐款捐物 - donate money and goods 4. 重建 - rebuild 5. 疏散 - evacuate 6. 急救 - first aid 7. 救援队 - rescue team 8. 提供庇护 - provide shelter 9. 分发物资 - distribute supplies 10. 恢复 - recover 11. 预警 - early warning 12. 防灾措施 - disaster prevention measures 13. 医疗队 - medical team 14. 清理废墟 - clear up the ruins 五、 环境与后续影响 1. 生态破坏 - ecological damage 2. 土地侵蚀 - soil erosion 3. 温室效应 - greenhouse effect 4. 气候变化 - climate change 5. 栖息地破坏 - habitat destruction 6. 灾后心理创伤 - post-disaster trauma 7. 水资源短缺 - water shortage 8. 农作物受损 - crop damage 句型积累 一、 开头句(引出灾害/交代背景) 1. One day last summer, a terrible typhoon suddenly hit our city. 去年夏天的一天,一场可怕的台风突然袭击了我们的城市。 2. In 2023, a strong earthquake broke out in Sichuan Province, causing great damage. 2023年,四川省发生了一场强烈的地震,造成了巨大的损失。 3. Last month, a heavy rain lasted for three days and led to a serious flood in our town. 上个月,一场大雨持续了三天,导致我们镇上爆发了严重的洪水。 4. People still remember the big snowstorm that swept across the north of China in 2022. 人们仍然记得2022年席卷中国北方的那场大暴雪。 二、 中间句(描述灾害过程/破坏影响/救援行动) (1) 描述灾害过程 1. The wind was blowing strongly and the rain was pouring down heavily outside. 外面狂风呼啸,大雨倾盆而下。 2. The earthquake shook violently for about one minute, and many buildings began to shake. 地震剧烈摇晃了大约一分钟,许多建筑物开始晃动。 3. The fire spread quickly through the forest because of the strong wind. 由于大风,火势在森林里迅速蔓延。 (2) 描述破坏与影响 1. Hundreds of houses were destroyed and thousands of people became homeless. 数百间房屋被摧毁,成千上万的人变得无家可归。 2. The flood submerged many villages and cut off the traffic between cities. 洪水淹没了许多村庄,中断了城市之间的交通。 3. There were some casualties in the disaster, and many people got hurt. 这场灾害中出现了一些人员伤亡,很多人受了伤。 (3) 描述救援行动 1. The rescue team arrived at the disaster area as soon as possible to save people. 救援队尽快赶到灾区开展救人工作。 2. Many volunteers came to help and donated a lot of food and water to the victims. 许多志愿者赶来帮忙,为受灾群众捐赠了大量的食物和水。 3. The government took action quickly to provide shelter and medical care for the homeless. 政府迅速采取行动,为无家可归的人提供住所和医疗救助。 三、 结尾句(总结感悟/展望未来) 1. Although the disaster was terrible, people showed their kindness and unity in the face of difficulties. 虽然这场灾害很可怕,但人们在困难面前展现出了善良与团结。 2. After the disaster, people worked together to rebuild their homes, and the city became more beautiful than before. 灾后,人们齐心协力重建家园,这座城市变得比以前更美丽了。 3. We should learn some disaster prevention knowledge so that we can protect ourselves better when disasters happen. 我们应该学习一些防灾知识,这样在灾害发生时就能更好地保护自己。 4. From this disaster, we know that nature is powerful, but human love is stronger. 从这场灾害中,我们明白了大自然很强大,但人间的爱更强大。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1.2023年7月末,北京门头沟区出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气,受损严重。人民众志成城,积极抗洪救灾。 假如你是李华,居住在门头沟区,你的笔友Peter非常关心你,想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请你用英文回复邮件,简述受灾的基本情况,谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。 提示问题: ●What was the place like during the flood? ●Who or what impressed you? ●How did you feel? 注意: (1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for your concerns._____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.上周六,泰州下了一场暴雪。请根据下面的要点提示,写一篇短文。 提示: 暴风雪的后果 小贴士 风刮得很厉害,积雪覆盖了路面,人们在暴风雪中艰难行走。 为了保证我们的生命安全,在遇见危险时,我们应该……。 天黑之后,温度降到零度以下,路上结冰,行车困难,路上发生多起交通事故。 有辆车撞到了大树上,驾驶员受伤严重,幸好有人拨打110报警求助。 注意: (1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Last Saturday, a heavy snowstorm hit Taizhou and it caused a lot of problems. _______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.澳大利亚曾发生过特大森林火灾。请根据思维导图,用英语写一篇短文。 要求:1. 短文内容须包括所有要点,表达清楚,语法正确,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Big fires once hit Australia. A lot of forests in the country were on fire. At that time the weather there was ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We have only one earth. We should do something to protect our earth. 4.假设三个月前,一场飓风(hurricane)袭击了你所居住的城市。请你发挥想象,根据以下要点和要求写一篇文章,描述飓风发生时的情况,并谈谈你的感悟。 写作要点:1. 灾难发生时,人们可以听到雷声,看到闪电;两小时后,飓风消失了。2. 在这次灾难中共有7人死亡、2400多座房屋倒塌。3. 灾难后,人们开始互救,许多警察和消防员也来救援。 写作要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.上周六,附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100词的文章,介绍该事件的情况,并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点: 1. 事件发生的时间和地点:上周六,附近的山里; 2. 事件发生的起因:雷电天气引燃了枯木,从而引发了森林火灾; 3. 事件发生的经过:19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火,没有人员伤亡。 参考词汇:消防车fire truck 救援队伍rescue team __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.上周六,附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100 词的文章,介绍该事件的情况,并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点: 1. 事件发生的时间和地点:上周六,附近的山里; 2. 事件发生的起因:雷电天气引燃了枯木,从而引发了森林火灾; 3. 事件发生的经过:19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火,没有人员伤亡; 4. 在日常生活中,我们如果遇到火灾,该如何应对? (给出至少两点建议) 参考词汇:消防车 fire truck    救援队伍rescue team ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.2025年1月7日西藏日喀则市定日县发生6. 8级地震(earthquake)。一些年轻的志愿者冒着零下十几度的寒冷前往地震灾区进行救援。请你根据以下图片提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍本次志愿者活动。 set up tents        search for the survivors      give away necessary things      provide meals and water 注意:(1)短文须包含以上提示信息,可适当发挥; (2)短文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称; (3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:disaster灾难;search 搜查;survivor幸存者 A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. ____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.假定你是学生李华,你所在的城市于昨天晚上发生了地震。请你以“A Big Earthquake”为题给英语周报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括: 受灾情况:1.损失严重,房屋被毁;2.死伤4, 000多人,8, 000人无家可归,许多人失踪;3.水、电等设施被毁坏。 急缺物资:淡水、食物、药品 赈灾措施:1.军人帮助挖掘,寻找幸存者;2.号召志愿者支援灾区,积极捐钱和献血。 注意: 1.词数80~100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 A Big Earthquake Last night a big earthquake hit my city. _____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.2023年12月,我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题,根据提示并结合所学内容,写一篇不少于80字的英语作文。 提示词: suffer (遭受), destroy (破坏), fall down, traffic (交通), suffer (遭受), send ①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do to do with (应对) the snowstorm? ③What should we do as a student? The Snowstorm _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运,暴风雪时间并不长,他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点: 1.写明暴风雪的时间:yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么:My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情:scared... 4.暴风雪的后果:all safe 提示词:luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名; 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯; 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 5 Nature's Temper. (写作提升) 描述一场自然灾害 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元以“自然灾害”为话题,写作任务常围绕讲述过去发生的一场自然灾害而展开,相应地描述人物活动或灾害的影响。在写这类文章时,时态多用一般过去时和过去进行时,人称多用第一人称。写作时,注意写清事件发生的时间、地点,事件所涉人物,事件的过程和结果,以及面对灾害时人们的应对措施。本单元相关话题写作素材有:   (1)We were... when the .. started.当.....开始的时候,我们正在.....(2)It was . ..while we were ... 当我们正在......的时候......   (3)... was scary, but it also brought everyone closer together... .......很可怕,但它也让每个人都走得更近了。   (4)It meant that...was possible. 这意味着......是可能的。   (5)He jumped into action right away and rushed to... 他立即行动起来,冲过去......   (6)People were screaming and running as fast as they could when they saw ...   当人们看到......时,他们尖叫着,拼命地跑。 (7)This true story shows... 这个真实的故事告诉我们...... (8)It rained cats and dogs.下着倾盆大雨。   (9)All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky.突然,天空中响起了雷声。   (10)The wind was too strong for me to ... 风太大了,我不能...... ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假如你是Daming,你所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪,幸运的是,暴风雪持续时间并不长,你们全家安然无恙。请你根据写作要点的提示,描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动。  写作要点: 1.写明暴风雪发生的时间:yesterday evening 2.暴风雪发生时全家人都在做什么:My mother was ...   3.暴风雪发生时的心情:scared.   4.暴风雪发生的后果:all safe  写作要求:   1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;   2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;   3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰,80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was__________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 一、 自然灾害类型 / 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1. 地震 - earthquake 2. 洪水 - flood 3. 台风 - typhoon 4. 泥石流 - mudslide 5. 干旱 - drought 6. 海啸 - tsunami 7. 森林火灾 - forest fire 8. 龙卷风 - tornado 9. 暴雪 - snowstorm 10. 冰雹 - hail 11. 火山爆发 - volcanic eruption 12. 沙尘暴 - sandstorm 13. 雷暴 - thunderstorm 14. 山体滑坡 - landslide 二、 灾害发生与过程 1. 袭击 - hit / strike 2. 爆发 - break out / erupt 3. 蔓延 - spread 4. 席卷 - sweep across 5. 倾泻而下 - pour down 6. 持续 - last / go on 7. 引发 - cause / lead to 8. 突发 - happen suddenly 9. 肆虐 - rage 10. 侵袭 - invade 三、 灾害破坏与影响 1. 摧毁 - destroy 2. 损坏 - damage 3. 倒塌 - collapse 4. 伤亡 - casualties 5. 断电 - power cut 6. 无家可归 - homeless 7. 淹没 - submerge 8. 掩埋 - bury 9. 中断 - cut off 10. 污染 - pollute 11. 饥荒 - famine 12. 废墟 - ruins 13. 失踪 - missing 14. 交通瘫痪 - traffic paralysis 15. 通讯中断 - communication breakdown 四、 救援与应对行动 1. 救援 - rescue 2. 志愿者 - volunteer 3. 捐款捐物 - donate money and goods 4. 重建 - rebuild 5. 疏散 - evacuate 6. 急救 - first aid 7. 救援队 - rescue team 8. 提供庇护 - provide shelter 9. 分发物资 - distribute supplies 10. 恢复 - recover 11. 预警 - early warning 12. 防灾措施 - disaster prevention measures 13. 医疗队 - medical team 14. 清理废墟 - clear up the ruins 五、 环境与后续影响 1. 生态破坏 - ecological damage 2. 土地侵蚀 - soil erosion 3. 温室效应 - greenhouse effect 4. 气候变化 - climate change 5. 栖息地破坏 - habitat destruction 6. 灾后心理创伤 - post-disaster trauma 7. 水资源短缺 - water shortage 8. 农作物受损 - crop damage 句型积累 一、 开头句(引出灾害/交代背景) 1. One day last summer, a terrible typhoon suddenly hit our city. 去年夏天的一天,一场可怕的台风突然袭击了我们的城市。 2. In 2023, a strong earthquake broke out in Sichuan Province, causing great damage. 2023年,四川省发生了一场强烈的地震,造成了巨大的损失。 3. Last month, a heavy rain lasted for three days and led to a serious flood in our town. 上个月,一场大雨持续了三天,导致我们镇上爆发了严重的洪水。 4. People still remember the big snowstorm that swept across the north of China in 2022. 人们仍然记得2022年席卷中国北方的那场大暴雪。 二、 中间句(描述灾害过程/破坏影响/救援行动) (1) 描述灾害过程 1. The wind was blowing strongly and the rain was pouring down heavily outside. 外面狂风呼啸,大雨倾盆而下。 2. The earthquake shook violently for about one minute, and many buildings began to shake. 地震剧烈摇晃了大约一分钟,许多建筑物开始晃动。 3. The fire spread quickly through the forest because of the strong wind. 由于大风,火势在森林里迅速蔓延。 (2) 描述破坏与影响 1. Hundreds of houses were destroyed and thousands of people became homeless. 数百间房屋被摧毁,成千上万的人变得无家可归。 2. The flood submerged many villages and cut off the traffic between cities. 洪水淹没了许多村庄,中断了城市之间的交通。 3. There were some casualties in the disaster, and many people got hurt. 这场灾害中出现了一些人员伤亡,很多人受了伤。 (3) 描述救援行动 1. The rescue team arrived at the disaster area as soon as possible to save people. 救援队尽快赶到灾区开展救人工作。 2. Many volunteers came to help and donated a lot of food and water to the victims. 许多志愿者赶来帮忙,为受灾群众捐赠了大量的食物和水。 3. The government took action quickly to provide shelter and medical care for the homeless. 政府迅速采取行动,为无家可归的人提供住所和医疗救助。 三、 结尾句(总结感悟/展望未来) 1. Although the disaster was terrible, people showed their kindness and unity in the face of difficulties. 虽然这场灾害很可怕,但人们在困难面前展现出了善良与团结。 2. After the disaster, people worked together to rebuild their homes, and the city became more beautiful than before. 灾后,人们齐心协力重建家园,这座城市变得比以前更美丽了。 3. We should learn some disaster prevention knowledge so that we can protect ourselves better when disasters happen. 我们应该学习一些防灾知识,这样在灾害发生时就能更好地保护自己。 4. From this disaster, we know that nature is powerful, but human love is stronger. 从这场灾害中,我们明白了大自然很强大,但人间的爱更强大。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1.2023年7月末,北京门头沟区出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气,受损严重。人民众志成城,积极抗洪救灾。 假如你是李华,居住在门头沟区,你的笔友Peter非常关心你,想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请你用英文回复邮件,简述受灾的基本情况,谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。 提示问题: ●What was the place like during the flood? ●Who or what impressed you? ●How did you feel? 注意: (1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for your concerns._____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for your concerns. Heavy rains occurred in Mentougou District, causing serious damage in July 2023. Many low-lying communities flooded again. The streets were full of muddy water. The PLA men arrived immediately to rescue the villagers of the flooded areas. And they did their best to fight against the flood. They supplied the villagers with fresh vegetables and food. Some medical teams were organized to help us so that we could have a healthy diet. After a long time, everything went on very well. And that was a sign of victory. I was deeply moved by these people. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文为一封电子邮件; ②时态:本文时态一般过去时为主; ③提示:需回答三个问题——洪水现场情况、印象深刻的人/事、个人感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步:简述灾情; 第二步:突出感人场景; 第三步:表达情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①occur v. 发生 ②be full of 充满 ③supply...with... 提供 [高分句型] ①Heavy rains occurred in Mentougou District, causing serious damage in July 2023.(现在分词作状语) ②Some medical teams were organized to help us so that we could have a healthy diet.(目的状语从句) 2.上周六,泰州下了一场暴雪。请根据下面的要点提示,写一篇短文。 提示: 暴风雪的后果 小贴士 风刮得很厉害,积雪覆盖了路面,人们在暴风雪中艰难行走。 为了保证我们的生命安全,在遇见危险时,我们应该……。 天黑之后,温度降到零度以下,路上结冰,行车困难,路上发生多起交通事故。 有辆车撞到了大树上,驾驶员受伤严重,幸好有人拨打110报警求助。 注意: (1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Last Saturday, a heavy snowstorm hit Taizhou and it caused a lot of problems. _______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last Saturday, a heavy snowstorm hit Taizhou and it caused a lot of problems. The wind was blowing strongly then and the thick snow covered the whole ground. People had to walk slowly through the deep snow. After it got dark, the temperature dropped below zero. What’s worse, the road was icy because of the low temperature and that made it very hard for drivers to drive cars. A lot of traffic accidents happened that night. A car crashed into a big tree and the driver was badly hurt. Luckily, someone called 110 for help. In order to keep ourselves safe, I think we should keep calm and call 110 for help. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“过去进行时”。 ③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步:开门见山,引出话题; 第二步:介绍暴风雪后果,详细描述天黑后情况; 第三步:书写结尾,给出安全小贴士。 [亮点词汇] ①the thick snow积雪 ②walk slowly缓慢行走 ③In order to为了 ④keep calm保持冷静 [高分句型] ①The wind was blowing strongly then and the thick snow covered the whole ground.(并列句) ②In order to keep ourselves safe, I think we should keep calm and call 110 for help.(动词不定式作目的状语) 3.澳大利亚曾发生过特大森林火灾。请根据思维导图,用英语写一篇短文。 要求:1. 短文内容须包括所有要点,表达清楚,语法正确,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Big fires once hit Australia. A lot of forests in the country were on fire. At that time the weather there was ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We have only one earth. We should do something to protect our earth. 【答案】 Big fires once hit Australia. A lot of forests in the country were on fire. At that time the weather there was hot and dry with less rain, creating perfect conditions for bush fires and forest fires to spread rapidly. The fires caused terrible results. Many buildings were destroyed, leaving people homeless. Thousands of koalas died, which broke our hearts. Thick smoke was everywhere, making the air hard to breathe. The possible causes include human activities, like throwing away cigarettes carelessly. I feel really sad and worried. We must learn from this and take action to prevent such disasters. We have only one earth. We should do something to protect our earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,描述了澳大利亚曾经发生的特大森林火灾; ②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”,描述过去发生的事件; ③提示:写作要点已给出,包括火灾的事实、结果、可能的原因以及个人感受。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节,使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引入话题。简要介绍澳大利亚曾经发生特大森林火灾的情况; 第二步,具体阐述。从火灾的事实(天气条件)、结果(建筑物损毁、动物死亡、烟雾弥漫)以及可能的原因(人类活动)几个方面进行详细描述; 第三步,表达感受。描述个人对此事件的感受,并呼吁大家采取行动保护地球。 [亮点词汇] ①on fire 着火 ②with less rain 降雨量少 ③create perfect conditions for 为……创造了完美的条件 ④break one's heart 使某人伤心 ⑤throw away 扔掉 ⑥learn from 从……中学习 [高分句型] ①At that time the weather there was hot and dry with less rain, creating perfect conditions for bush fires and forest fires to spread rapidly.(现在分词作结果状语) ②Thick smoke was everywhere, making the air hard to breathe.(现在分词作结果状语) ③Thousands of koalas died, which broke our hearts.(which引导的定语从句) 4.假设三个月前,一场飓风(hurricane)袭击了你所居住的城市。请你发挥想象,根据以下要点和要求写一篇文章,描述飓风发生时的情况,并谈谈你的感悟。 写作要点:1. 灾难发生时,人们可以听到雷声,看到闪电;两小时后,飓风消失了。2. 在这次灾难中共有7人死亡、2400多座房屋倒塌。3. 灾难后,人们开始互救,许多警察和消防员也来救援。 写作要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Three months ago, a hurricane hit my city. It was a scary natural disaster. In the beginning, the sky became dark. Everyone could hear a strange noise, but nobody knew what was happening. We heard the thunder and saw the lightning. Two hours later, the hurricane disappeared. During the disaster, seven people lost their lives. Over 2,400 houses fell down. Many people had nowhere to live. After the disaster, people began to help each other. Many police officers and firefighters came to help us, too. I think that we should learn how to keep ourselves safe when we are facing disasters. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”; ③提示:文章写作需要围绕“三个月前城市遭遇飓风”展开,涵盖飓风发生的前兆、灾害造成的人员与财产损失、灾后互助场景及从中得到的启示,考生应注意按时间逻辑梳理内容,适当补充灾害细节,确保不遗漏关键事件与感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出三个月前飓风袭击了自己的城市,点明这是一场可怕的自然灾害,引出对飓风经历的叙述; 第二步,具体叙述过程。先描述飓风发生前的前兆及飓风消失的时间,再说明灾害造成的损失,接着讲述灾后的互助情况; 第三步,书写结语。总结从这次经历中得到的启示。 [亮点词汇] ①hurricane飓风 ②natural disaster自然灾害 ③strange noise奇怪的声音 ④thunder and lightning雷电 ⑤lost their lives失去生命 ⑥fell down倒塌 ⑦nowhere to live无处可住 [高分句型] ①Everyone could hear a strange noise, but nobody knew what was happening.(what引导宾语从句) ②I think that we should learn how to keep ourselves safe when we are facing disasters.(that引导的宾语从句,when引导的时间状语从句) 5.上周六,附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100词的文章,介绍该事件的情况,并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点: 1. 事件发生的时间和地点:上周六,附近的山里; 2. 事件发生的起因:雷电天气引燃了枯木,从而引发了森林火灾; 3. 事件发生的经过:19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火,没有人员伤亡。 参考词汇:消防车fire truck 救援队伍rescue team __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last Saturday, a forest fire hit a nearby mountain. It’s said that lightning struck some dead wood and caused the fire. Nineteen fire trucks and ten rescue teams rushed to put out the fire. Luckily, no one was hurt in the fire. If a fire happens at your home, what should you do? First, you should call 119 for help at once. Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights. Third, be careful of the smoke. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth. Finally, get away from the house as soon as possible. If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍事件发生的时间、地点、起因和经过; 第二步,提出应对火灾的建议; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put out扑灭 ②turn off关闭 ③get away from逃离 [高分句型] ①Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights. (it固定句型) ②If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire. (if引导的条件状语从句) 6.上周六,附近的山里发生了火灾。请你帮学校校刊写一篇不少于100 词的文章,介绍该事件的情况,并就中学生需如何应对火灾提出建议。 要点: 1. 事件发生的时间和地点:上周六,附近的山里; 2. 事件发生的起因:雷电天气引燃了枯木,从而引发了森林火灾; 3. 事件发生的经过:19辆消防车、10支救援队伍赶赴现场扑灭大火,没有人员伤亡; 4. 在日常生活中,我们如果遇到火灾,该如何应对? (给出至少两点建议) 参考词汇:消防车 fire truck    救援队伍rescue team ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last Saturday, a forest fire hit a nearby mountain. It’s said that lightning struck some dead wood and caused the fire. Nineteen fire trucks and ten rescue teams rushed to put out the fire. Luckily, no one was hurt in the fire. If a fire happens at your home, what should you do? First, you should call 119 for help at once. Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights. Third, be careful of the smoke. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth. Finally, get away from the house as soon as possible. If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍事件发生的时间、地点、起因和经过; 第二步,提出应对火灾的建议; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put out扑灭 ②at once立刻 ③get away from远离 [高分句型] ①Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights.(it作形式主语) ②If you follow the advice above, you will protect yourself against the fire.(if引导条件状语从句) 7.2025年1月7日西藏日喀则市定日县发生6. 8级地震(earthquake)。一些年轻的志愿者冒着零下十几度的寒冷前往地震灾区进行救援。请你根据以下图片提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍本次志愿者活动。 set up tents        search for the survivors      give away necessary things      provide meals and water 注意:(1)短文须包含以上提示信息,可适当发挥; (2)短文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称; (3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:disaster灾难;search 搜查;survivor幸存者 A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. ____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A big earthquake happened on January 7, 2025, in Dingri, Xizang. In the face of the disaster, volunteers from all over the country went to Xizang to lend a helping hand. Although the weather was freezing cold at minus ten degrees or more, they were busy setting up tents for the victims. Some volunteers carefully searched for survivors. Others gave away necessary things like clothes and medicine, and provided meals and water. Their efforts brought hope and warmth to the disaster-stricken area. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点题,承接上文,说明西藏日喀则市定日县发生地震,引出下文; 第二步,说明救援主体以及细化救援活动; 第三步,书写结语,总结救援意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy doing sth.忙于做某事 ②search for寻找 ③give away赠送 [高分句型] Although the weather was freezing cold at minus ten degrees or more, they were busy setting up tents for the victims.(although引导的让步状语从句) 8.假定你是学生李华,你所在的城市于昨天晚上发生了地震。请你以“A Big Earthquake”为题给英语周报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括: 受灾情况:1.损失严重,房屋被毁;2.死伤4, 000多人,8, 000人无家可归,许多人失踪;3.水、电等设施被毁坏。 急缺物资:淡水、食物、药品 赈灾措施:1.军人帮助挖掘,寻找幸存者;2.号召志愿者支援灾区,积极捐钱和献血。 注意: 1.词数80~100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 A Big Earthquake Last night a big earthquake hit my city. _____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Big Earthquake Last night a big earthquake hit my city. The earthquake caused much damage to my city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed. At least 4, 000 people were killed or injured in the disaster and 8, 000 lost their homes. Even many more people were still missing. The electricity and water supply in my city were also destroyed. The people now are in great need of fresh water, food and medicine. Luckily, the soldiers have been sent to my city to help to dig for the survivors. I call on more volunteers to come to the disaster area to give a hand. I hope that more and more people can donate your money and blood for the disaster people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是材料作文; ②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步:表明写作意图。借用“昨晚,一场大地震袭击了我的城市。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——受灾情况、急缺物资和赈灾措施等均要一一阐述。 第三步:书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①at least至少 ②caused much damage造成了很多损害 [高分句型] ①I hope that more and more people can donate your money and blood for the disaster people. (宾语从句) 9.2023年12月,我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题,根据提示并结合所学内容,写一篇不少于80字的英语作文。 提示词: suffer (遭受), destroy (破坏), fall down, traffic (交通), suffer (遭受), send ①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do to do with (应对) the snowstorm? ③What should we do as a student? The Snowstorm _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Snowstorm In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. Many trees fell down, blocking the roads and destroying power lines. The traffic was seriously affected, and many people had to stay at home. Our country took quick action to deal with the snowstorm. The government sent rescue teams to clear the roads and restore the power supply. They also provided food and warm clothes for those in need. As students, we should also do our part. We can help clear the snow in our neighborhood or volunteer to help those affected. We should learn to understand how to deal with natural disasters. The snowstorm was a challenge, but with everyone’s efforts, we overcame it. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;   ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;   ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步,介绍这次暴雪的结果;   第二步,介绍我们国家是如何应对这次暴雪灾害的;   第三步,介绍作为学生应该做什么。   [亮点词汇] ①take quick action立刻行动 ②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物 ③those in need有需要的人 ④with everyone’s efforts在大家的努力下 [高分句型] In December 2023, some parts of our country suffered from a heavy snowstorm that was rarely seen before. (定语从句) 10.Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。很幸运,暴风雪时间并不长,他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Daming请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。 写作要点: 1.写明暴风雪的时间:yesterday evening 2.暴风雪时全家人都在做什么:My mother was... 3.暴风雪时的心情:scared... 4.暴风雪的后果:all safe 提示词:luckily...  Remember to... 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名; 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯; 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name is Daming. In my city, there was____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My name is Daming. In my city, there was a snowstorm yesterday evening. My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started. My father was watching TV, and my little sister was playing with her toys. I was doing my homework in my room. Suddenly, the wind howled loudly, and the snow fell heavily. We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected. Luckily, the storm didn’t last long. After it ended, we checked everything and felt relieved that we were all safe and sound. Remember to stay indoors during bad weather. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步,承接开头,首先描述暴风雪的时间及场景——昨天晚上暴风雪开始时家人的活动; 第二步,然后表达暴风雪时感到惊吓的心情; 第三步,最后总结暴风雪不久就结束了,大家都安然无恙,体现幸运的结局。 [亮点词汇] ①Suddenly突然 ②Luckily幸运地 ③remember to do sth记得做某事 [高分句型] ①My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started.(时间状语从句) ②We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected.(原因状语从句) $

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