8 Unit 8 主题作文指导-【学海风暴】2024-2025学年七年级下册英语同步练习课件（人教版·新教材）

该初中英语课件围绕“童话故事”主题，聚焦记叙文写作教学，核心训练一般过去时运用与第三人称叙事能力。通过主题探究明确体裁特点，以“素材积累（开头/中间/结尾句型）—写作模板—高分范文”为学习支架，帮助学生从句型积累逐步过渡到完整篇章构建。 亮点在于以语言能力和思维品质为核心，提供“讲述故事”句型库（如“Once upon a time...”开头句）和“开头—经过—结果”三段式模板，结合思路点拨强调事件顺序，培养逻辑表达。写作练兵从提示性仿写（白雪公主）到自主分享（My favorite story），提升学习能力。学生能掌握叙事结构与时态规范，教师可直接利用素材和范文开展教学，提高课堂效率。

《学海风暴》七年级英语RJ版 · 下册 Unit 8　　Once upon a Time 主题作文指导 1 本单元以传说和童话故事为主题,让学生展开想象讲述或编写有趣的、富含一定哲理的童话故事,常用一般过去时。设题形式以记叙文为主。 “讲述故事”常用句型 【开头句】 1.Once upon a time,there was a duckling. 2.Long ago,there was a beautiful princess named Snow White. 【中间句】 1.He was born ugly. 2.The hunter felt pity for Snow White and let her leave. 3.Then Snow White met seven dwarfs in the forest… 【结尾句】 1.Finally,a prince saved Snow White and got married to her. 2.From the story,I learnt that… 3.We are heroes of ourselves. 4.If we put in more effort,nothing is impossible. 根据下面提供的内容用英语写一篇童话故事。 1.很久以前,有一位漂亮的白雪公主。在她很小的时候她妈妈就去世了。 2.她的继母命令猎人把白雪公主杀了。 3.猎人可怜公主,让她离开了。 4.白雪公主在森林里遇到了七个小矮人,小矮人们决定保护她。 5.她的继母装扮成老农妇,用有毒的苹果毒死了白雪公主。 6.小矮人们发现白雪公主的尸体后,把她装进一口玻璃棺材里。 7.最终,一位王子救了公主并娶了她。 Long ago,there was a beautiful princess named Snow White. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1.要求按照提示内容写一篇关于白雪公主的童话故事,体裁应为记叙文; 2.根据事件发生的先后顺序描述故事情节。 3.注意句子的时态,应采用一般过去时,人称为第三人称。 Long ago,there was a beautiful princess named Snow White.When she was very young,her mother died. Her stepmother ordered a hunter to kill her.The hunter felt pity for Snow White and let her leave.Then Snow White met seven dwarfs in the forest and they decided to protect her. Her stepmother disguised herself as an old farm woman and killed Snow White with a poisonous apple. When the seven dwarfs found the princess dead,they put her body into a glass coffin.Finally,a prince saved Snow White and got married to her. 有些故事可以让我们在轻松一笑中明白一些道理。请你以“My favorite story”为题,写一篇英语短文,跟大家分享一下你最喜欢的故事。 写作要点: 1.What’s your favorite story?2.What’s the story about?3.What can you learn from the story? 要求: 1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My favorite story I love reading a lot.One of my favorite stories is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains.Long long ago,Yu Gong wanted to move away two mountains with his family.Although many people didn’t think he could do it,he didn’t give up.They kept on digging day after day,year after year.At last a god was deeply moved and he sent two gods to help take the mountains away.  　　From the story,I learn that anything is possible if we work hard.When we face some difficulties,we shouldn’t give up easily.We can never know what’s possible unless we try to make it happen.　　  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $