8 Unit 7 主题作文指导-【学海风暴】2024-2025学年七年级下册英语同步练习课件（人教版·新教材 安徽专版）

该初中英语课件围绕“学校旅行”主题记叙文写作展开，通过主题探究明确写作要素（时间、地点、人物、经过、结果），结合素材积累（开头、中间、结尾常用句型）、写作模板（交代事件-叙述经过-归纳总结）及高分范文示范，构建“句型积累-结构搭建-范文模仿”的学习支架，帮助学生掌握记叙文写作脉络。 其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，通过“素材积累-模板构建-范文示范-写作练兵”的闭环设计，提供具体句型（如“Last Saturday, I went to the farm”）、结构模板及实践任务，提升学生语言表达准确性与逻辑组织能力（语言能力），同时通过任务驱动培养自主学习与问题解决能力（学习能力）。学生能系统掌握写作方法，教师可借助完整资源高效开展教学。

《学海风暴》七年级英语RJAH版 · 下册 Unit 7 　A Day to Remember 主题作文指导 1 主题探究 本单元话题为谈论学校旅行，主要描述旅行期间所发生的事情的经过及自己的感受。相关话题作文要求同学们写一篇关于学校旅行的文章，此文章以记叙为主，要说明事件发生的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果。在写作中，要分清主次，详略得当；另外，由于是写一次印象深刻的经历，故文中应有描述性的句子，比如描述人物的心理、感受和天气状况等。 素材积累 “谈论学校旅行”常用句型 【开头句】 1.Last Saturday，I went to the farm in the countryside. 2.It was sunny yesterday.We went on a school trip. 【中间句】 1.The weather was great./It was rainy./… 2.We went shopping in a big shopping mall. 3.We bought some lovely gifts for our friends. 4.We saw many old things and learned a lot about the history. 【结尾句】 1.All in all，we had a good time there. 2.That was a very exciting trip for me. 3.It was really a day to remember. 写作任务 请根据下面的要点提示，以“A school trip”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们班上周参观农场的情况。 要点： 1.参与人员； 2.活动时间； 3.活动的具体内容； 4.…… 注意： 1.文章内容应包括所有的要点，可适当发挥； 2.词数70左右。 A school trip 　　　 。 　　　 　 。　　　　　 　　　　 【思路点拨】 1.这是一篇类似于日记的学校旅行情况介绍，所以我们采用记叙文的体裁来叙述。 2.以第一人称为主。 3.采用一般过去时态。 【写作模板】 归纳总结 Last weekend，we visited…It was wonderful. In the morning…In the afternoon… All in all，we enjoyed ourselves there. 【高分作文】 A school trip Last weekend，we visited Red Star Farm in the countryside.It was wonderful.We did many exciting things there. In the morning，we milked cows and fed chickens first.Then we rode horses. In the afternoon，the farmers taught us how to grow the tomato plants and we watered the plants later.We learnt a lot about farming. When we got back，it was dark.It was really a day to remember.All in all，we enjoyed ourselves there. 写作练兵 上周五，你校老师组织学生们去人民公园（People’s Park）游玩。假如你是校英文报记者，请根据以下要点，就此活动写一篇题为“An unforgettable school trip”的英文报道。 要点： 1.天气情况；2.交通方式；3.活动内容：做游戏、爬山、野餐等；4.感受。 注意： 1.词数70左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 　 . . . . . . 。 　　　　　　 An unforgettable school trip Last Friday，our teacher took us to People’s Park.It was sunny.We went there by school bus.We got there at about ten o’clock.There were many people in the park.At first，we played some interesting games.And we also went climbing.Then we had lunch under a big tree.After that，we took some photos.At four o’clock in the afternoon，we went back home.We all sang happily on the bus. 　　All in all，we had a good day to remember.　　　　　　　　 $