Unit 4 Time to celebrate写作专项导学案 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

该初中英语导学案以“节日坚守岗位者的责任与奉献”为单元主旨，围绕“人物信息、工作职责、节日工作经历、个人评价”设计写作目标，通过“思路点拨-模板示范-范文分析-素材积累-填空练习”的递进式任务，构建从基础表达到综合运用的完整学习路径。 亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识的主题写作设计，通过“写作模板仿写”“节日工作经历描述”等任务，引导学生运用核心词汇和一般现在时，在逻辑结构中渗透奉献精神，培养思维品质。评价标准明确内容、语言、结构维度，为教师单元复习提供系统指导，助力学生提升写作能力与价值认知。

Unit 4 Time to celebrate 主题写作：A Person on Duty During Festivals 一、写作目标 1. 内容目标：能围绕“人物信息、工作职责、节日工作经历、个人评价”四个核心要点完成短文，体现“节日坚守岗位者的责任与奉献”的单元主旨。 2. 语言目标：能运用本单元核心词汇（如duty、stand by、give up、busy、safe等）和一般现在时，写出语法准确、表意连贯的简单句子。 3. 结构目标：能按照“介绍人物→ 说明职责→ 描述节日经历→ 表达评价”的逻辑完成短文，符合段落写作的简洁性和完整性要求。 二、题目解析 这是单元“Reading for writing”板块的段落写作任务，核心是描述一位节日期间坚守岗位的人，需紧扣阅读素材中“冷文英医生节日坚守急诊岗位”的故事，结合具体职业（如警察、医生、护士等），突出“平凡人坚守岗位的奉献精神”的单元主题。 · 需覆盖的要点： a. 介绍人物的姓名和职业； b. 说明该职业的主要工作职责； c. 描述人物在节日期间的工作经历（如更忙碌、没时间陪家人等）； d. 表达对该人物的评价和感受。 三、思路点拨 采用“总-分-总”的基础结构，分4步展开： 1. 第一步：介绍人物→ 用一句话点明人物的姓名和职业，比如“Zhang Jian is a policeman in our city.”； 2. 第二步：说明职责→ 简单描述该职业的核心工作，比如“His job is to keep people safe and help people in trouble.”； 3. 第三步：描述节日经历→ 写人物在节日期间的工作状态，比如“He is much busier during festivals and has little time with his family.”； 4. 第四步：表达评价→ 用一句话说出对人物的看法，比如“I think his hard work is great and he is a hero in our life.”。 四、写作模板 Zhang Jian is a policeman in our city. His main duties are to keep people safe and help people in trouble. During festivals, Zhang Jian is much busier than usual. He has to work all day and has little time to stay with his family. Sometimes he even works without a break to help people who need him. I think Zhang Jian is a very great person. His hard work shines brighter than fireworks, and we should thank people like him for their dedication. 五、优秀范文 英文范文 Li Na is a nurse in a big hospital. Her job is to look after patients and help doctors with their work every day. Festivals are always busy for Li Na. During the Spring Festival, she is much busier than usual. She has to stand by all the time and can’t go home to have family meals with her parents. She often misses her family, but she never gives up her work because she wants to help sick people get better soon. In my eyes, Li Na is a kind and brave person. Her duty makes our festivals safer and happier. I think her hard work is more beautiful than any festival fireworks, and I’m very thankful to nurses like her. 中文译文 李娜是一家大医院的护士。她的工作是每天照顾病人，还帮助医生做工作。 节日对李娜来说总是很忙碌。春节期间，她比平时忙得多。她必须时刻待命，不能回家和父母一起吃团圆饭。她经常想念家人，但从来没有放弃工作，因为她想帮助病人快点好起来。 在我看来，李娜是一个善良又勇敢的人。她的坚守让我们的节日更安全、更快乐。我觉得她的辛勤付出比任何节日烟花都更美好，我非常感谢像她一样的护士。 六、素材积累 （一）描述人物信息的短语/句型 1. [Name] is a/an + 职业 (policeman/nurse/doctor). 2. He/She works in a + 地点 (hospital/police station). 3. a hard-working person 4. a kind nurse/ brave policeman （二）描述工作职责的短语/句型 1. His/Her duty is to + 工作内容 (keep people safe/look after patients). 2. He/She has to + 工作动作 (help people in trouble/stand by every minute). 3. look after patients 4. help doctors with work 5. keep the city safe （三）描述节日工作经历的短语/句型 1. During festivals, he/she is much busier. 2. He/She has little time to stay with family. 3. He/She works without a break. 4. He/She misses his/her family but never gives up work. （四）表达个人评价的短语/句型 1. I think he/she is + 形容词 (great/kind/brave). 2. His/Her hard work shines brighter than fireworks. 3. We should thank people like him/her. 4. His/Her dedication makes our festivals better. 七、写作填空练习 根据单元内容，完成关于节日坚守岗位人物的短文（每空填1个简单词）。 Wang Li is a ______ (1) in a hospital. Her job is to look after ______ (2) and help doctors with their work. During festivals, Wang Li is much ______ (3) than usual. She has to ______ (4) by every minute and has little time to be with her ______ (5). She misses them, but she never ______ (6) up her work. I think Wang Li is a ______ (7) person. Her hard work shines brighter than ______ (8), and we all thank her for her work. 参考答案 1. nurse 2. patients 3. busier 4. stand 5. family 6. gives 7. great 8. fireworks 八、评价标准 评价维度 优秀（4-5分） 良好（3分） 待改进（1-2分） 内容完整性 覆盖“人物、职责、节日经历、评价”所有要点，体现“奉献精神”的主题 覆盖3个核心要点，主题体现较浅 缺少1个及以上要点，看不出主题 语言准确性 用对本单元基础词汇，句子简单通顺，几乎没有语法错误 能用部分基础词汇，有1-2个小语法错误但不影响理解 词汇用错多，语法错误多，读不懂句意 结构规范性 按“介绍人物→ 说职责→ 讲经历→ 谈评价”的顺序写，语句衔接自然 顺序基本清晰，衔接有点生硬 顺序混乱，句子之间没有联系 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $