Unit 4 Time to celebrate写作专项导学案 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

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Unit 4 Time to celebrate

主题写作:A Person on Duty During Festivals

一、写作目标

  1. 内容目标:能围绕“人物信息、工作职责、节日工作经历、个人评价”四个核心要点完成短文,体现“节日坚守岗位者的责任与奉献”的单元主旨。
  1. 语言目标:能运用本单元核心词汇(如duty、stand by、give up、busy、safe等)和一般现在时,写出语法准确、表意连贯的简单句子。
  1. 结构目标:能按照“介绍人物→ 说明职责→ 描述节日经历→ 表达评价”的逻辑完成短文,符合段落写作的简洁性和完整性要求。

二、题目解析

这是单元“Reading for writing”板块的段落写作任务,核心是描述一位节日期间坚守岗位的人,需紧扣阅读素材中“冷文英医生节日坚守急诊岗位”的故事,结合具体职业(如警察、医生、护士等),突出“平凡人坚守岗位的奉献精神”的单元主题。

•     需覆盖的要点:

  1.         介绍人物的姓名和职业;
  1.         说明该职业的主要工作职责;
  1.         描述人物在节日期间的工作经历(如更忙碌、没时间陪家人等);
  1.         表达对该人物的评价和感受。

三、思路点拨

采用“总-分-总”的基础结构,分4步展开:

  1. 第一步:介绍人物→ 用一句话点明人物的姓名和职业,比如“Zhang Jian is a policeman in our city.”;page number 0

 

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  1. 第二步:说明职责→ 简单描述该职业的核心工作,比如“His job is to keep people safe and help people in trouble.”;
  1. 第三步:描述节日经历→ 写人物在节日期间的工作状态,比如“He is much busier during festivals and has little time with his family.”;
  1. 第四步:表达评价→ 用一句话说出对人物的看法,比如“I think his hard work is great and he is a hero in our life.”。

四、写作模板

Zhang Jian is a policeman in our city. His main duties are to keep people safe and help people in trouble.

During festivals, Zhang Jian is much busier than usual. He has to work all day and has little time to stay with his family. Sometimes he even works without a break to help people who need him.

I think Zhang Jian is a very great person. His hard work shines brighter than fireworks, and we should thank people like him for their dedication.

五、优秀范文

英文范文

Li Na is a nurse in a big hospital. Her job is to look after patients and help doctors with their work every day.

Festivals are always busy for Li Na. During the Spring Festival, she is much busier than usual. She has to stand by all the time and can’t go home to have family meals with her parents. She often misses her family, but she never gives up her work because she wants to help sick people get better soon.

In my eyes, Li Na is a kind and brave person. Her duty makes our festivals safer and happier. I think her hard work is more beautiful than any festival fireworks, and I’m very thankful to nurses like her.

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