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Unit 1 Face values 推荐“你认识的最美的人”
应用文写作精练
写作主题
识
主题:推荐“你认识的最美的人”(推荐信)
写作框架:
开头
点明推荐对象及推荐缘由,引出人物的“美”体现在何处。
主体
分2-3点介绍人物的品质/事迹(如善良、敬业、勇敢等),结合具体事例支撑。
结尾
总结人物的闪光点,再次强调推荐理由,表达敬意。
写作词汇短语:
1. inner beauty 内在美
2. noble character 高尚的品格
3. be devoted to 致力于
4. selfless dedication 无私奉献
5. warm-hearted 热心的
6. go out of one's way 特地;不怕麻烦
7. lend a hand 帮忙
8. set a good example 树立好榜样
9. optimistic 乐观的
10. resilient 坚韧的
11. face difficulties bravely 勇敢面对困难
12. modest 谦虚的
13. hardworking 勤奋的
14. responsible 有责任心的
15. care for 关心;照顾
16. make a difference 产生影响
17. generous 慷慨的
18. honest 诚实的
19. trustworthy 值得信赖的
20. perseverance 毅力
21. kindness 善良
22. perseverance in doing sth. 坚持做某事
23. volunteer work 志愿工作
24. put others first 先为他人着想
25. admirable 令人敬佩的
26. respectable 值得尊敬的
27. earn the respect of 赢得……的尊重
28. in my eyes 在我看来
29. be worthy of 值得
30. shining point 闪光点
写作句型:
1. I am writing to recommend sb. as the "most beautiful person" I know.(我写这封信是为了推荐某人作为我认识的“最美的人”。)
2. What makes him/her stand out is his/her extraordinary inner beauty.(让他/她脱颖而出的是其非凡的内在美。)
3. Not only is he/she kind-hearted, but also he/she is always ready to help others.(他/她不仅心地善良,而且总是乐于助人。)
4. It is his/her selfless dedication that has touched many people around him/her.(正是他/她的无私奉献感动了身边很多人。)
5. Whenever others are in trouble, he/she will never hesitate to give a hand.(每当别人遇到困难,他/她都会毫不犹豫地伸出援手。)
6. He/She has set a great example for us with his/her practical actions.(他/她用实际行动为我们树立了很好的榜样。)
7. Despite facing great difficulties, he/she remains optimistic and positive.(尽管面临巨大困难,他/她依然乐观积极。)
8. What impresses me most is his/her perseverance in pursuing his/her goals.(最让我印象深刻的是他/她追求目标的毅力。)
9. He/She has been devoting himself/herself to volunteer work for many years.(他/她多年来一直致力于志愿工作。)
10. It is no exaggeration to say that he/she is a person with a golden heart.(毫不夸张地说,他/她是一个心地善良的人。)
11. In my opinion, true beauty lies not in appearance but in one's character.(在我看来,真正的美不在于外表,而在于品格。)
12. He/She always puts the needs of others before his/her own.(他/她总是把别人的需求放在自己的前面。)
13. His/Her kindness and generosity have earned him/her great respect from everyone.(他/她的善良和慷慨赢得了所有人的极大尊重。)
14. I believe he/she is fully worthy of the title of the "most beautiful person".(我相信他/她完全配得上“最美的人”这一称号。)
15. If you get to know him/her, you will surely be moved by his/her qualities.(如果你了解他/她,你一定会被他/她的品质所感动。)
16. His/Her story teaches us that inner beauty is the most precious thing in the world.(他/她的故事告诉我们,内在美是世界上最珍贵的东西。)
17. There is no doubt that he/she is one of the most admirable people I have ever met.(毫无疑问,他/她是我见过的最令人敬佩的人之一。)
18. He/She never complains about the hardships and keeps helping others silently.(他/她从不抱怨艰辛,默默帮助他人。)
19. It is his/her sense of responsibility that makes him/her take on more tasks voluntarily.(是他/她的责任感让他/她主动承担更多任务。)
20. I sincerely hope that more people can learn from his/her noble spirit.(我真诚地希望更多人能学习他/她的高尚精神。)
写作模板:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend Li Hua, my classmate, as the "most beautiful person" I know. What makes her stand out is not her appearance, but her extraordinary inner beauty and selfless dedication.
Firstly, Li Hua is a warm-hearted girl who always goes out of her way to help others. Last term, when our classmate Wang Ming was ill and missed a lot of lessons, she spent her weekends tutoring him patiently, which helped Wang Ming catch up with the class quickly. Secondly, she has been devoted to volunteer work for two years. She often goes to the local nursing home to chat with the elderly, help them clean their rooms and prepare meals, bringing joy to their lives. Besides, Li Hua is very resilient. Even when she faced great pressure in her studies, she never gave up and always encouraged her classmates to keep going.
In my opinion, true beauty lies in one's character, and Li Hua is the best example of this. Her kindness, perseverance and selflessness have earned her great respect from all of us. I believe she is fully worthy of the title of the "most beautiful person".
If you want to know more about her, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
【2025全国一卷--告知信】假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
(2026届浙江省永嘉中学高三上学期第一次联考模拟英语试题(本校开学考))假定你是李华,与同班同学王磊在高一时于志愿服务队共事一年。现王磊竞选校学生会环保部部长,请你结合阅读理解第一节短文A内容,用英文为他写一封推荐信,内容包括:
1.说明你的推荐资格;
2.运用具体事例证明其组织能力,分析他的能力如何匹配新岗位。
注意:写作词数应为80词左右。写作格式已在答题卷中给出。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.(2025届浙江省宁波市等3地县域教研联盟高三下学期二模英语试题)假设你是李华,你校学生会正在为“高三励志墙”征集英文标语。请你给负责此次活动的外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的标语
2.推荐理由
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
2.(2025届湖南省邵阳市大联考)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征集关于“健康生活”的文章,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 健康生活的重要性;
2. 你保持健康生活的方式;
3. 呼吁大家养成健康生活习惯。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2025届湖北省高中名校联盟)假定你是李华, 你校英语俱乐部将举办“我为学校发展献一策”活动。请针对部分班级菜园由家长代劳的现象写一篇发言稿, 内容包括:
(1)阐述现象;
(2)提出措施。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Suggestion for School Development
Good afternoon, everyone!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
4.(2025届浙江省金华十校联考)假定你是某国际学校学生李华。为了帮助师生放松身心,提升校园幸福感,你校打算设立一个“元气补给站” (A Refresh Corner) ,现向全体师生征求设计意见,请你写一篇短文,内容包括:
(1) 描述你的设计;
(2) 阐述设计理由。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Refresh Corner on Campus
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5.(24-25高三上·江苏苏州·期末)假定你是李华,学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival)。请你给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他担任评委(judge),内容包括:
1. 戏剧节的时间、地点;
2. 举办戏剧节的目的;
3. 期待他的回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from your class.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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Unit 1 Face values 推荐“你认识的最美的人”
应用文写作精练
写作主题
识
主题:推荐“你认识的最美的人”(推荐信)
写作框架:
开头
点明推荐对象及推荐缘由,引出人物的“美”体现在何处。
主体
分2-3点介绍人物的品质/事迹(如善良、敬业、勇敢等),结合具体事例支撑。
结尾
总结人物的闪光点,再次强调推荐理由,表达敬意。
写作词汇短语:
1. inner beauty 内在美
2. noble character 高尚的品格
3. be devoted to 致力于
4. selfless dedication 无私奉献
5. warm-hearted 热心的
6. go out of one's way 特地;不怕麻烦
7. lend a hand 帮忙
8. set a good example 树立好榜样
9. optimistic 乐观的
10. resilient 坚韧的
11. face difficulties bravely 勇敢面对困难
12. modest 谦虚的
13. hardworking 勤奋的
14. responsible 有责任心的
15. care for 关心;照顾
16. make a difference 产生影响
17. generous 慷慨的
18. honest 诚实的
19. trustworthy 值得信赖的
20. perseverance 毅力
21. kindness 善良
22. perseverance in doing sth. 坚持做某事
23. volunteer work 志愿工作
24. put others first 先为他人着想
25. admirable 令人敬佩的
26. respectable 值得尊敬的
27. earn the respect of 赢得……的尊重
28. in my eyes 在我看来
29. be worthy of 值得
30. shining point 闪光点
写作句型:
1. I am writing to recommend sb. as the "most beautiful person" I know.(我写这封信是为了推荐某人作为我认识的“最美的人”。)
2. What makes him/her stand out is his/her extraordinary inner beauty.(让他/她脱颖而出的是其非凡的内在美。)
3. Not only is he/she kind-hearted, but also he/she is always ready to help others.(他/她不仅心地善良,而且总是乐于助人。)
4. It is his/her selfless dedication that has touched many people around him/her.(正是他/她的无私奉献感动了身边很多人。)
5. Whenever others are in trouble, he/she will never hesitate to give a hand.(每当别人遇到困难,他/她都会毫不犹豫地伸出援手。)
6. He/She has set a great example for us with his/her practical actions.(他/她用实际行动为我们树立了很好的榜样。)
7. Despite facing great difficulties, he/she remains optimistic and positive.(尽管面临巨大困难,他/她依然乐观积极。)
8. What impresses me most is his/her perseverance in pursuing his/her goals.(最让我印象深刻的是他/她追求目标的毅力。)
9. He/She has been devoting himself/herself to volunteer work for many years.(他/她多年来一直致力于志愿工作。)
10. It is no exaggeration to say that he/she is a person with a golden heart.(毫不夸张地说,他/她是一个心地善良的人。)
11. In my opinion, true beauty lies not in appearance but in one's character.(在我看来,真正的美不在于外表,而在于品格。)
12. He/She always puts the needs of others before his/her own.(他/她总是把别人的需求放在自己的前面。)
13. His/Her kindness and generosity have earned him/her great respect from everyone.(他/她的善良和慷慨赢得了所有人的极大尊重。)
14. I believe he/she is fully worthy of the title of the "most beautiful person".(我相信他/她完全配得上“最美的人”这一称号。)
15. If you get to know him/her, you will surely be moved by his/her qualities.(如果你了解他/她,你一定会被他/她的品质所感动。)
16. His/Her story teaches us that inner beauty is the most precious thing in the world.(他/她的故事告诉我们,内在美是世界上最珍贵的东西。)
17. There is no doubt that he/she is one of the most admirable people I have ever met.(毫无疑问,他/她是我见过的最令人敬佩的人之一。)
18. He/She never complains about the hardships and keeps helping others silently.(他/她从不抱怨艰辛,默默帮助他人。)
19. It is his/her sense of responsibility that makes him/her take on more tasks voluntarily.(是他/她的责任感让他/她主动承担更多任务。)
20. I sincerely hope that more people can learn from his/her noble spirit.(我真诚地希望更多人能学习他/她的高尚精神。)
写作模板:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend Li Hua, my classmate, as the "most beautiful person" I know. What makes her stand out is not her appearance, but her extraordinary inner beauty and selfless dedication.
Firstly, Li Hua is a warm-hearted girl who always goes out of her way to help others. Last term, when our classmate Wang Ming was ill and missed a lot of lessons, she spent her weekends tutoring him patiently, which helped Wang Ming catch up with the class quickly. Secondly, she has been devoted to volunteer work for two years. She often goes to the local nursing home to chat with the elderly, help them clean their rooms and prepare meals, bringing joy to their lives. Besides, Li Hua is very resilient. Even when she faced great pressure in her studies, she never gave up and always encouraged her classmates to keep going.
In my opinion, true beauty lies in one's character, and Li Hua is the best example of this. Her kindness, perseverance and selflessness have earned her great respect from all of us. I believe she is fully worthy of the title of the "most beautiful person".
If you want to know more about her, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
【2025全国一卷--告知信】假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目,在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
利用:capitalize on → use
担当:serve as → act as
注意:pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句:Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.(运用了since引导的状语从句)
(2026届浙江省永嘉中学高三上学期第一次联考模拟英语试题(本校开学考))假定你是李华,与同班同学王磊在高一时于志愿服务队共事一年。现王磊竞选校学生会环保部部长,请你结合阅读理解第一节短文A内容,用英文为他写一封推荐信,内容包括:
1.说明你的推荐资格;
2.运用具体事例证明其组织能力,分析他的能力如何匹配新岗位。
注意:写作词数应为80词左右。写作格式已在答题卷中给出。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Student Union Committee,
As Wang Lei’s classmate and former teammate in our Grade 10 volunteer group, I am qualified to recommend him based on our year-long collaboration. I witnessed his exceptional organizational skills when he coordinated a campus recycling campaign. He delegated tasks to 30 volunteers, resolved scheduling conflicts, and ensured all materials were collected within 48 hours — demonstrating precise logistics management.
His ability to execute complex projects aligns perfectly with the Environmental Minister role. For instance, he redesigned collection routes to improve efficiency by 40%, proving he transforms plans into actionable solutions. Wang Lei doesn’t just lead; he inspires teams toward sustainable goals.
I wholeheartedly endorse his application. (100 words)
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,为竞选校学生会环保部部长的同班同学王磊写一封英文推荐信,内容包括说明推荐资格、用具体事例证明其组织能力并分析该能力与新岗位的匹配度。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
有资格的:qualified→eligible
合作:collaboration→cooperation
提高:improve→enhance
激励:inspire→motivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As Wang Lei’s classmate and former teammate in our Grade 10 volunteer group, I am qualified to recommend him based on our year-long collaboration.
拓展句:As Wang Lei’s classmate and former teammate in our Grade 10 volunteer group, I think I am qualified to recommend him based on our year-long collaboration.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I witnessed his exceptional organizational skills when he coordinated a campus recycling campaign.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】For instance, he redesigned collection routes to improve efficiency by 40%, proving he transforms plans into actionable solutions.(运用了现在分词形式作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
1.(2025届浙江省宁波市等3地县域教研联盟高三下学期二模英语试题)假设你是李华,你校学生会正在为“高三励志墙”征集英文标语。请你给负责此次活动的外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的标语
2.推荐理由
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, excited to contribute to the English motivational slogan collection for senior students. My suggested slogan is: “Rise with perseverance. Reach for the Stars.”
The slogan highlights two key elements. First and foremost, “perseverance” emphasizes the importance of persistence through challenges, which aligns with the demanding senior journey. Besides, “reach for the stars” encourages ambitious goals while maintaining a hopeful tone. “Rise” and “Reach” create a rhythmic flow, making it easy to remember. Additionally, the metaphor of “stars” symbolizes limitless potential, inspiring students to strive beyond their comfort zones.
I believe this slogan balances practicality and motivation, perfectly capturing the spirit of senior students. I’d appreciate it if you could consider my idea.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你校学生会正在为“高三励志墙”征集英文标语,要求考生给负责此次活动的外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强调:highlight→emphasize
此外:besides→in addition
保持:maintain→keep
无限的:limitless→infinite
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:“Rise” and “Reach” create a rhythmic flow, making it easy to remember.
拓展句:“Rise” and “Reach” create a rhythmic flow, which makes it easy to remember.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, “perseverance” emphasizes the importance of persistence through challenges, which aligns with the demanding senior journey. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, “reach for the stars” encourages ambitious goals while maintaining a hopeful tone.(运用了while引导的状语从句的省略)
2.(2025届湖南省邵阳市大联考)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征集关于“健康生活”的文章,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 健康生活的重要性;
2. 你保持健康生活的方式;
3. 呼吁大家养成健康生活习惯。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】应用文参考范文1
A healthy life serves as the bedrock of both academic excellence and overall well-being. Without physical and mental fitness, we are bound to struggle with daily tasks and miss out on life’s pleasures. To maintain my health, I stick to a balanced diet, rich in fruits and vegetables. Additionally, I work out regularly, which not only strengthens my body but also relieves stress. Equally importantly, I ensure sufficient sleep to recharge my energy.
Let’s take immediate action to embrace healthy habits. Only in this way can we enjoy a vibrant life and achieve our full potential.
应用文参考范文2
A healthy lifestyle acts as the cornerstone of personal growth and social contribution. Without maintaining physical vitality and mental stability, we would find it challenging to pursue dreams or embrace life’s beauty.
Personally, I adhere to three principles: consuming nutritious meals with whole grains and leafy greens, exercising for 30 minutes daily through jogging or yoga, and maintaining a consistent sleep schedule. Such routines not only enhance my immunity but also sharpen my focus during study sessions.
Let us jointly cultivate healthy habits. Only by doing so can we truly unlock life’s possibilities and create lasting value for society. (85 words)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿,要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:1. 健康生活的重要性;2. 你保持健康生活的方式;3. 呼吁大家养成健康生活习惯。
【详解】1.词汇积累
基石:bedrock→footstone
另外:additionally→in addition
经常地:regularly→on a regular basis
压力:stress→pressure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Equally importantly, I ensure sufficient sleep to recharge my energy.
拓展句:What is equally important is that I ensure sufficient sleep to recharge my energy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Additionally, I work out regularly, which not only strengthens my body but also relieves stress. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can we enjoy a vibrant life and achieve our full potential. (运用了部分倒装句)
3.(2025届湖北省高中名校联盟)假定你是李华, 你校英语俱乐部将举办“我为学校发展献一策”活动。请针对部分班级菜园由家长代劳的现象写一篇发言稿, 内容包括:
(1)阐述现象;
(2)提出措施。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Suggestion for School Development
Good afternoon, everyone!
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Thank you!
【答案】A Suggestion for School Development
Good afternoon, everyone! Today, I would like to talk about the phenomenon where some school gardening tasks are carried out by parents instead of students.
To resolve this, schools could schedule garden tasks as part of activity classes, where students can plant, weed, and harvest under teacher guidance. Also, we could organize practical activities related to gardening to enhance students` sense of responsibility and participation. Besides, parents could act as advisors instead of laborers, sharing their knowledge or guiding small groups, rather than doing the work themselves, which fosters our growth and keeps the initiative meaningful.
Lets reclaim our gardens and learn by doing!
Thank you!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生所在校英语俱乐部将举办“我为学校发展献一策”活动。请针对部分班级菜园由家长代劳的现象写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
而不是:instead of→rather than
与......相关:be related to →be connected with
增强:enhance→strengthen
培养:foster→cultivate
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:To resolve this, schools could schedule garden tasks as part of activity classes, where students can plant, weed, and harvest under teacher guidance.
拓展句:In order to solve this problem, schools are able to set garden tasks as a part of activity classes. In these classes, students have the opportunity to plant, weed and harvest with the guidance of teachers.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Today, I would like to talk about the phenomenon where some school gardening tasks are carried out by parents instead of students.(运用了 where 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】Besides, parents could act as advisors instead of laborers, sharing their knowledge or guiding small groups, rather than doing the work themselves, which fosters our growth and keeps the initiative meaningful.( which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(2025届浙江省金华十校联考)假定你是某国际学校学生李华。为了帮助师生放松身心,提升校园幸福感,你校打算设立一个“元气补给站” (A Refresh Corner) ,现向全体师生征求设计意见,请你写一篇短文,内容包括:
(1) 描述你的设计;
(2) 阐述设计理由。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Refresh Corner on Campus
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【答案】One possible version:
A Refresh Corner on Campus
To offer teachers and students a peaceful escape from heavy workload and academic pressure, “A Cozy Reading Haven” can be set up.
Nestled in a sunlit corner of the library, the Cozy Reading Haven offers both physical comfort and mental renewal. Designed with warm lighting and soft seating, this space minimizes distractions and promotes relaxation. Carefully selected inspirational books provide a mental escape, complemented by a refreshment station offering herbal teas and healthy snacks. Moreover, the wall is decorated with a dedicated encouragement board, allowing everyone to share motivational and uplifting messages.
With thoughtful design and deep comfort, this haven is where we can reset, restore and refresh.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投稿。要求考生写一篇短文,就学校打算设立一个“元气补给站”给出自己的设计并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:set up→ establish
提升:promote→ improve
此外:moreover→ what’s more
体贴的:thoughtful→ caring
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, the wall is decorated with a dedicated encouragement board, allowing everyone to share motivational and uplifting messages.
拓展句:Moreover, the wall is decorated with a dedicated encouragement board, which allows everyone to share motivational and uplifting messages.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To offer teachers and students a peaceful escape from heavy workload and academic pressure, “A Cozy Reading Haven” can be set up.(运用了非谓语动词担当状语)
【高分句型2】With thoughtful design and deep comfort, this haven is where we can reset, restore and refresh.(运用了where引导的表语从句)
5.(24-25高三上·江苏苏州·期末)假定你是李华,学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival)。请你给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他担任评委(judge),内容包括:
1. 戏剧节的时间、地点;
2. 举办戏剧节的目的;
3. 期待他的回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from your class.
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I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from your class. I’m writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to be a judge in our upcoming English Drama Festival.
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday. It aims to cultivate students’ proficiency in English expression. By participating in English dramas, students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures. What’s more, this event will provide an excellent platform for cross-cultural communication and interaction.
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封邀请信,要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,邀请他担任英语戏剧节的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere→ genuine
即将来临的:upcoming→ forthcoming
培养:cultivate→ foster
此外:What’s more→ Additionally
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday.
拓展句:The festival is scheduled for the school auditorium, with the event time spanning from 9 a.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It aims to cultivate students’ proficiency in English expression.(使用了动词不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】By participating in English dramas, students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.(使用了“not only…but also…”结构)
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