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Unit 1 Past and present
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:过去和现在,今昔对比,社会发展
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化着。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢? 假设你是李华,学校社团举办主题为“Changes in our lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇英语文章投稿。
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.文章必须包含所有提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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2.随着科技的发展,我们的生活发生了日新月异的变化。请根据以下提示内容,以“How life changes!”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
In the Past
Now
How to get information
newspaper, radio, TV
smartphone, computer
Living condition (条件)
old and dirty houses
new and clean houses
Communication
letter, postcard
email, WeChat, QQ
Shopping
go to nearby shops
要求:1.文章必须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
How life changes!
Great changes have taken place in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, people are living a better life than before.
3.学校英文报正在举行题为“The Changes”的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇短文投稿。
提示:1. What are the changes in my life? (environment, living conditions, transport)
2. What are the changes about myself? (two points)
3. What is my feeling about the changes?
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3. 词数在100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
The Changes
There are many changes in my life and myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.在过去二十年里,你的家乡已发生了巨大的变化。请根据表格中的要点,以“Changes in my hometown”为题,介绍家乡的过去和现在,并谈谈自己的感受。词数80至100。
过去
现在
小村庄,房子旧,人少
现代化小镇,高楼林立,人们搬进新公寓
道路又少又窄;人们步行或骑车
道路更多更宽;人们乘公交车、出租车,开小汽车
商铺较少
有超市、医院和现代化学校
感受……(自拟)
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5.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示,从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化,并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.近些年来, 中国发生了巨大变化,令人振奋。假设你是海外华人Mr Li,回到了阔别许久的故乡,你把故乡人生活的巨大变化及自己的感受写在博客上,与大家分享。
过去
现在
居住
大家庭挤在小房子里
崭新、明亮的大公寓
通讯
书信
手机;网络……
娱乐
看电视,读报,听收音机……
玩电脑;旅行,例如:去主题公园,享受自然之美……
交通
自行车;步行
公交车;地铁;出租车;自己开车
要求:
1. 要求语句通顺,意思连贯,表达清楚,语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可作适当发挥。
3. 字数在90词个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
4. 不出现真实姓名和校名等。
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives over the years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.目前,一种全新的交通工具“共享单车”(shared bicycles)正风靡全国,受到年轻人的喜爱。请你以“Shared Bicycles”为题向中学生英文报投稿。写一篇英语短文,介绍共享单车的优点(至少三条),同时提醒大家要注意骑行安全(至少两条)。
提示词:pollution,easy…park,cost,traffic rules
要求:1)内容完整,意思清楚,表达通顺,书写规范;2)词数80 词左右;3)不得出现真实的姓名,校名。
Shared Bicycles
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8.我的家乡是一座古老而美丽的小城,近几年来,在党和国家的惠民政策帮助下,家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。假如你是该市一所学校的学生,请你根据以下提示,以“Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文。内容必须包括表格中提示的要点:
过去
旧房;河水肮脏;步行或骑自行车……
现在
高楼;河水清澈;乘公交车或小汽车……
将来
展望家乡的未来(至少1~2句)
Changes in My Hometown
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◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
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10.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是 “Changes Around Us”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
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Unit 1 Past and present
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:过去和现在,今昔对比,社会发展
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化着。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢? 假设你是李华,学校社团举办主题为“Changes in our lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇英语文章投稿。
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.文章必须包含所有提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Changes in our lives
With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. First, in the past, people had to go to the market to buy things. Nowadays, they are used to shopping online. Second, they used to walk to other places, but now they take the bus or the underground. Third, people communicated with their parents or friends by sending letters before. Now, the way of communication has also changed. People can make video calls on their mobile phones, just like talking face to face. Finally, there were some small and old houses in the past, but now you can see many shops and tall buildings. All in all, as time goes by, people’s lives are getting better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文;
②时态:采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,条理清晰,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍我们的生活发生了变化;
第二步,具体阐述有哪些变化;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of 随着……的发展
②communicate with 与……交流
③all in all 总之
[高分句型]
①People can make video calls on their mobile phones, just like talking face to face.(动名词短语作宾语)
②All in all, as time goes by, people’s lives are getting better and better.(比较级+and+比较级)
2.随着科技的发展,我们的生活发生了日新月异的变化。请根据以下提示内容,以“How life changes!”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
In the Past
Now
How to get information
newspaper, radio, TV
smartphone, computer
Living condition (条件)
old and dirty houses
new and clean houses
Communication
letter, postcard
email, WeChat, QQ
Shopping
go to nearby shops
要求:1.文章必须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
How life changes!
Great changes have taken place in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, people are living a better life than before.
【答案】参考范文:
How life changes!
Great changes have taken place in our lives.
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV to get the latest information. But now they use smart phones and computers. People in the past lived in old and dirty houses. How about now? They live in new and clean houses. As for the ways of communication, they once communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards. But now, emails, WeChat and QQ are widely used. Besides, they used to go to the shop to buy things. Now they prefer to shop online.
In a word, people are living a better life than before.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,对比过去与现在的生活变化,体现科技进步对生活方式的影响;
② 时态:以一般过去时描述过去的情况,以一般现在时描述现在的情况;
③ 提示:围绕“获取信息、居住条件、交流方式、购物方式”四个方面展开对比描写,最后进行总结。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,概括生活发生巨大变化;
第二步,分别介绍过去与现在在获取信息、居住条件、交流方式、购物方式上的不同;
第三步,总结变化带来的积极影响,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① in the past 在过去
② listen to 听
③ as for 至于
④ used to 过去常常
⑤ shop online 网上购物
⑥ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV to get the latest information.(并列谓语)
② As for the ways of communication, they once communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards.(as for引导话题)
③ In a word, people are living a better life than before.(in a word总结)
3.学校英文报正在举行题为“The Changes”的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇短文投稿。
提示:1. What are the changes in my life? (environment, living conditions, transport)
2. What are the changes about myself? (two points)
3. What is my feeling about the changes?
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3. 词数在100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
The Changes
There are many changes in my life and myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Changes
There are many changes in my life. For example, in the past, the factory often put the waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, people used to live in short and old houses before, but now most of them have moved into bright and modern buildings instead. What’s more, a lot of families have their cars now while they travelled only by bicycles or on foot years ago.
On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. Now, I like reading more than before. Reading not only helps me learn a lot about the world but also helps me relax after class. Also, I am more confident than before. I believe the coming future will be brighter and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,涵盖了生活中的变化以及 “我” 自身的变化,注意围绕这些要点展开,可适当补充细节以凸显变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先从环境、居住条件、出行方式等方面介绍生活中的变化;
第二步,再描述 “我” 自身在阅读和自信心方面的变化,并对未来进行展望。
[亮点词汇]
①take action 采取行动;
②instead 反而,代替;
③on the other hand 另一方面;
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, in the past, the factory often put the waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment.(but 连接两个并列分句,体现过去与现在的对比)
②Reading not only helps me learn a lot about the world but also helps me relax after class.(not only...but also... 连接两个并列的谓语短语)
4.在过去二十年里,你的家乡已发生了巨大的变化。请根据表格中的要点,以“Changes in my hometown”为题,介绍家乡的过去和现在,并谈谈自己的感受。词数80至100。
过去
现在
小村庄,房子旧,人少
现代化小镇,高楼林立,人们搬进新公寓
道路又少又窄;人们步行或骑车
道路更多更宽;人们乘公交车、出租车,开小汽车
商铺较少
有超市、医院和现代化学校
感受……(自拟)
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【答案】 Changes in my hometown
In the past twenty years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
It used to be a small village with old houses and few people. The roads were few and narrow, and people usually walked or rode bikes. There were only a few shops. However, it has become a modern town now. Tall buildings stand everywhere and people have moved into new apartments. The roads are wider and more, and people can take buses, taxis or drive cars. Moreover, there are supermarkets, hospitals and modern schools.
I feel proud of these changes. They make our lives more convenient and comfortable. I believe my hometown will be better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇根据给定要点进行对比描述的材料作文,主题为家乡在过去二十年的变化。
②时态:主要运用 “一般过去时” 描述家乡过去的状况,“一般现在时” 展现家乡现在的面貌。
③提示:题目明确给出了过去和现在家乡在居住环境、交通、基础设施等方面的特点作为写作要点。写作时需全面涵盖这些要点,并且可适当增添相关细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接点明主题,引出家乡在过去二十年发生了巨大变化这一核心内容,让读者迅速了解文章主旨。
第二步,对比过去情况和现在情况进行了详细描述,使之一目了然,文章脉络更清晰。
第三步,写出作者的感受,并对家乡未来充满信心,使文章内容更加完整,富有情感。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去曾经是
②take place发生
③moreover此外,而且
[高分句型]
①It used to be a small village with old houses and few people.(使用used to be)
②I believe my hometown will be better in the future.(宾语从句)
5.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示,从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化,并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
In terms of traffic, we used to mainly travel by bike or bus. Nowadays more people drive cars for daily trips, and high-speed railways make long-distance travel much faster. As for study, students had few books to read and mostly studied alone in the past. However, now we can do more reading and take part in various group work, which improves our cooperation ability. When it comes to travel, not only can we go to more places abroad, but also online travel offers new experiences. In terms of the environment, we’ve realized its importance. We are planting more trees and working to reduce pollution.
These changes have brought us a more convenient and colorful life. They show the progress of society and make our future more promising.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括思维导所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接表明发生了巨大变化,引出文章的核心话题,为后文具体阐述变化做铺垫。
第二步,从交通、学习、旅行和环境四个角度,具体对比过去和现在的不同;
第三步,总结升华,强调变化的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of 就……而言
②take place 发生
[高分句型]
①However, now we can do more reading and take part in various group work, which improves our cooperation ability. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②When it comes to travel, not only can we go to more places abroad, but also online travel offers new experiences. (when引导时间状语从句、not only… but also…引导并列复合句)
6.近些年来, 中国发生了巨大变化,令人振奋。假设你是海外华人Mr Li,回到了阔别许久的故乡,你把故乡人生活的巨大变化及自己的感受写在博客上,与大家分享。
过去
现在
居住
大家庭挤在小房子里
崭新、明亮的大公寓
通讯
书信
手机;网络……
娱乐
看电视,读报,听收音机……
玩电脑;旅行,例如:去主题公园,享受自然之美……
交通
自行车;步行
公交车;地铁;出租车;自己开车
要求:
1. 要求语句通顺,意思连贯,表达清楚,语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可作适当发挥。
3. 字数在90词个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
4. 不出现真实姓名和校名等。
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives over the years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives over the years.
In the past, a big family had to live in a small house. People kept in touch with relatives and friends by writing letters. They watched TV, listened to the radio or read newspapers for news and other information. Children used to go to school on foot or by bike.
Now more and more people live in big and bright flats. People can talk to others over the telephone or on the Internet. Almost every family has computers. They often play computer games. Sometimes, they go travelling in their free time. For example, they go to some theme parks like Disneyland for a visit. They also enjoy the natural beauty in Jiuzhaigou. Today, people still ride their bikes to school or work, but they can also travel by bus, taxi or underground. More and more families have their own cars.
In a word, people live better than before. I’m so excited to see these changes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”、“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:描述故乡生活的变化及个人感受,需包括居住、通讯、娱乐、交通等方面的对比,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引入主题,说明回到故乡后看到的变化。
第二步:具体描述居住、通讯、娱乐、交通等方面的变化,并加入个人感受。
第三步:总结感受,表达对故乡变化的欣喜与自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①keep in touch保持联系
②used to do过去常常做某事
③for example例如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①Now more and more people live in big and bright flats.(比较级+and+比较级,表达“越来越……”)
②Today, people still ride their bikes to school or work, but they can also travel by bus, taxi or underground.(but连接的并列句)
7.目前,一种全新的交通工具“共享单车”(shared bicycles)正风靡全国,受到年轻人的喜爱。请你以“Shared Bicycles”为题向中学生英文报投稿。写一篇英语短文,介绍共享单车的优点(至少三条),同时提醒大家要注意骑行安全(至少两条)。
提示词:pollution,easy…park,cost,traffic rules
要求:1)内容完整,意思清楚,表达通顺,书写规范;2)词数80 词左右;3)不得出现真实的姓名,校名。
Shared Bicycles
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【答案】例文:
Nowadays, a brand new form of transportation called Shared Bicycles is gaining popularity among young people across the country. A large number of colorful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets. About tens of thousands of bicycles have been in service.
Bike-sharing has brought some advantages. People can use them easily. Riding is good exercise and is good for our health. It helps to reduce traffic stress. It also helps to protect the environment. What’s more, using shared bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But it has caused some problems. Some people can’t use bicycles properly. Some people can’t return shared bicycles in time. Sometimes because shared bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way.
We should pay attention to safety when riding shared bicycles. We shouldn’t ride too fast to avoid bike crashes. We shouldn’t ride across the road to avoid traffic accidents. I hope we should take good care of shared bicycles. I hope that people should keep bicycles in order after riding them. In a word, the best way to be safe is to be careful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍共享单车正风靡全国,受到年轻人的喜爱。
第二步,介绍共享单车的优缺点。
第三步,提醒大家要注意骑行安全。
[亮点词汇]
①a large number of 大量的
②be good for对……有好处
③in time及时
[高分句型]
①Sometimes because shared bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope that people should keep bicycles in order after riding them. (that引导宾语从句)
8.我的家乡是一座古老而美丽的小城,近几年来,在党和国家的惠民政策帮助下,家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。假如你是该市一所学校的学生,请你根据以下提示,以“Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文。内容必须包括表格中提示的要点:
过去
旧房;河水肮脏;步行或骑自行车……
现在
高楼;河水清澈;乘公交车或小汽车……
将来
展望家乡的未来(至少1~2句)
Changes in My Hometown
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【答案】例文
Changes in My Hometown
Over the past ten years, there have been great changes in my hometown. In the past, the houses in our hometown were very old. The water in the rivers was very dirty. People used to walk or ride bikes to go to work. But now, many people in my hometown have moved into tall buildings. The rivers are clean and people can swim in them. People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work. Life now is much easier. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍家乡的变化,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示家乡发生了很大变化;
第二步,详细介绍家乡过去和现在的情况;
第三步,表达对将来的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③move into搬进
[高分句型]
I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. (宾语从句)
◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
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【答案】例文
Changes around us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
As for travel, many people enjoy travelling in their spare time. Some people like travelling online and more and more people can afford to travel abroad. Our studies are also changing. For example, more and more students show an interest in reading and more group work and discussions are done in class, which can help us learn more. More and more people have their own cars. At the same time, more and more people prefer to walk to school instead of driving. And high-speed trains make people travel faster and easier. Our environment changes a lot, too. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner. We often take a walk happily in the park.
In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接描写我们身边的变化。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“旅游”、“交通”和“环境”,以及“学习”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,重述主题,展望未来
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③afford to do sth,承担得起做某事
④For example例如
⑤help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
⑥At the same time同时
⑦prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事
⑧instead of代替,而不是
⑨make sb.+形容词比较级 使某人更……的
⑩look forward to期待
[高分句型]
For example, more and more students show an interest in reading and more group work and discussions are done in class, which can help us learn more. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是 “Changes Around Us”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
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【答案】范文:
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
When it comes to travel, people now prefer to book tickets online and travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more popular. In terms of entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and people are taking part in more outdoor activities to keep healthy.
All these changes show that our lives are becoming more colorful and convenient.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题——我们周围发生的变化;
第二步、根据提示内容,分别从旅行、学习、娱乐等方面具体阐述这些变化;
第三步、总结这些变化带来的影响并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to更喜欢
②book tickets online在线订票
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①When it comes to travel, people now prefer to book tickets online and travel to distant places quickly and conveniently。(时间状语从句)
②For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more popular。(定语从句)
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