内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(冀教版初三)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题4:创作简单诗歌或讲述寓言故事并析寓意
适用年级:
初三
对应版本:
冀教版
常考题目:
创作一首关于自然的短诗并赏析/讲述一则动物寓言故事并分析寓意
一、话题解读
本话题是冀教版初三写作的重点。常以“创作一首关于自然的短诗并赏析”“讲述一则动物寓
言故事并分析寓意”等为题,考察学生运用文学体裁表达思想情感及提炼寓意的能力,在单
元测试、期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.fable/'feIbl/n.寓言
2.poem/'paIm/n.诗歌
3.moral/'mprel//n.寓意
4.symbol/'sImbl/n.象征
5.metaphor/metefe(r)/n.隐喻
6.rhythm/rram/n.节奏
7.verse /v3:s/n.诗句
8.character/'kaerekte(r)/n.角色
9.moral/'mprel/n.寓意
10.allegory/'aelegeri/n.寓言故事
11.imagination /I,med3I'neIjn/n.想象力
12.theme/i:m/mn.主题
2.常用短语:
2
1.tell a story讲故事
2.in the form of以…形式
3.teach a lesson给.一个教训
4.use symbols使用象征
5.convey a message传达信息
6.learn from从…学习
7.once upon a time从前
8.long,long ago很久很久以前
9.as a result结果
10.in conclusion,总之
11.the moral of the story故事的寓意
12.create a poem创作诗歌
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:Prefer to create a poem rather than tell a fable宁愿创作诗歌而不愿讲述寓言
I prefer to create a poem with vivid symbols rather than tell a fable with
simple characters.
2.结构:Not only can a fable convey a message,but also it can teach a lesson寓言不仅能
传达信息,而且能给人教训
Not only can Aesop's fables convey moral messages,but also they can
teach children valuable life lessons.
3.结构:It is important for a poem to have rhythm and metaphor诗歌有节奏和隐喻是重要
的
例句:It is important for a good poem to have natural rhythm and creative
metaphor.
4.结构:The reason why寓言故事are popular is that they have deep moral寓言故事受欢
迎的原因是它们有深刻寓意
例句:The reason why寓言故事like"The Ant and the Grasshopper”are popular
is that they have deep moral about hard work.
5.结构:Compared with simple poems,.寓言故事are easier to understand与简单诗歌相比,
寓言故事更容易理解
例句:Compared with abstract poems,.寓言故事with clear plots are easier foi
students to understand.
6.结构:What I like most about poems is their use of imagination我最喜欢诗歌的地方是它
们对想象力的运用
What I like most about ancient Chinese poems is their clever use of imag-
ination and symbols.
7.结构:Although writing a poem is difficult,it can improve our creativity尽管写诗很难,但
它能提高我们的创造力
Although writing a rhyming poem is difficult,it can greatly improve our
language creativity and imagination.
四、满分范文示范
The Little Sparrow and the Phoenix Feather
Once upon a time,there lived a little sparrow in the forest.He loved to collect shiny things
until one day he found a golden phoenix feather."With this_of beauty,I will become the
most wonderful _in the woods!"he sang proudly.
Every morning,the sparrow showed off the feather to other animals."Look at my_of great-
ness!"he chirped.But when a storm came,he refused to build a warm nest,saying,"A
phoenix wouldn't waste time on such simple things!"As a result,his feather got blown away,
and he shivered in the cold.
An old owl then told him,"The _of this _is that true value lies not in_,but in practical
wisdom.”
Not only can this story convey a message about humility,but also it teaches us to
focus on real needs.Compared with chasing shiny appearances,building solid skills
is like creating a poem with lasting rhythm-simple yet full of meaning.What I like
most about this tale is how it uses imagination to show that even small creatures can
learn big lessons.
In conclusion,just as the sparrow finally built his nest,we should remember:true growth
comes from what we do,not what we possess.