U8写一封建议信或投诉信-2025-2026学年英语期末写作复习八年级上册（沪外教版）

初中英语写作专项突破 (沪外版八年级上册) 写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范 U8:写一封建议信或投诉信 适用年级： 八上 对应版本： 沪外版 常考题日： 给学校食堂的建议信/对社区噪音的投诉信 一、 话题解读 本话题是沪外版八年级上册写作的重点。常以“给学校食堂的建议信”“对社区噪音的投诉 信”等为题，考察学生用英语表达建议或投诉观点、阐述理由及提出解决方案的能力，在单 元测试和期中期末考试书面表达中出现频率较高。 二、核心词汇与短语 1.核心难点词汇： 1.suggestion/sa'd3 eston/n.建议 2.complaint /kem'pleInt/n.投诉 3.improve /Im'pru:vN.改进 4.dissatisfied/dIs'saetrsfard./adj.不满意的 5.inconvenience/Inken'vi:niens/n.不便 6.request/rI'kwest/v.请求 7.solve /splv/v.解决 8.maintain/meIn'tein/v.维持 9.respond/rI'spp nd/v.▣应 10.apologize /e'ppled3aIz.道歉 11.reasonable /'ri:.zneb/adj.合理的 12.urgent/'3:d3 ent/adj.紧急的 2.常用短语： 2 1.make a complaint提出投诉 2.put forward提出 3.in my opinion在我看来 4.look forward to期待 5.deal with处理 6.as soon as possible尽快 7.due to由于 8.take action采取行动 9.be responsible for对…负责 10.inconvenient for对…不便 11.with regard to关于 12.express my concern表达我的担忧 三、高级句型模板 1.结构：I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with..我写信是为了表达对…的不满 I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service in your restaurant. 2.结构：I would like to put forward a few suggestions on how to.我想就如何…提出一 些建议 I would like to put forward a few suggestions on how to improve the library facilities. 3.结构：It is inconvenient for us to..due to..由于…，我们…很不方便 It is inconvenient for us to study in the classroom due to the loud noise from the construction site. 4.结构：|strongly request that you take action to solve..as soon as possible.我强烈要求 你们尽快采取行动解决… I strongly request that you take action to solve the problem of broken chairs in the classroom as soon as possible. 5.结构：With regard to..,I suggest that..关于…，我建议… With regard to the school cafeteria,I suggest that more healthy food op- tions be provided. 6.结构：The reason why I make this complaint is that..我提出此投诉的原因是… 3 The reason why I make this complaint is that the product I bought last week does not work properly. 7.结构：I look forward to your response and believe that..will be improved soon.我期待 你的回复，并相信…会很快得到改善 I look forward to your response and believe that the bus schedule will be improved soon. 8.结构：Although we understand that.,we still hope you can..尽管我们理解…，但我 们仍希望你们能… Although we understand that the staff are busy,we still hope you can respond to our complaints more quickly. 9.结构：It is reasonable for us to expect.我们期望…是合理的 It is reasonable for us to expect a clean and tidy environment in the school bathroom. 10.结构：To solve this problem,it is urgent that.为了解决这个问题，…是紧急的 To solve this problem,it is urgent that the school repairs the broken windows before winter comes. 11.结构：I would appreciate it if you could..如果你能…，我将不胜感激 I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions and make the necessary changes. 12.结构：Maintaining..is important for..维持…对…很重要 Maintaining good order in the library is important for students'study. 四、满分范文示范 A Letter of Complaint to the School Library Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the current conditions of the school library. As a Grade 8 student,I visit the library almost every day,but recently I have encountered several problems that cause great inconvenience. The reason why I make this complaint is that the library has become very uncomfortable for studying.First,many chairs are broken,so it is inconvenient for us to sit and read due to the unstable seats.Second,the bookshelves are often messy,making it difficult to find the books we need.Third,the lighting is too dim in some corners,which is bad for our eyes. With regard to these issues,I would like to put forward a few suggestions.I strongly request that you take action to solve the problem of broken chairs as soon as possible.It is rea- sonable for us to expect a clean and tidy environment,so please ask the staff to organize the bookshelves regularly.To solve the lighting problem,it is urgent that you replace the old bulbs with brighter ones. Maintaining a good library environment is important for students'study.Although we under- stand that the school may have limited funds,we still hope you can deal with these problems seriously.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions and make the necessary improvements.I look forward to your response and believe that the library will be improved soon. Yours sincerely,Li Ming