内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(沪外版八年级上册)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题U5:分享一次志愿者服务经历
适用年级:
八上
对应版本:
沪外版
常考题日:
A Volunteer Experience My Unforgettable Volunteer Activity
一、
话题解读
本话题是沪外版八年级上册写作的重点。常以“A Volunteer Experience”“My Unforgettable
Volunteer Activity”等为题,考察学生用英语描述志愿者服务经历、分享活动中的感受与收获
的能力,在单元测试、期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.volunteer /,vplen'te(r)/n.志愿者
2.service/'s3 VIs/n.服务
3.experience/ik'spIeriens/n..经历
4.community/ke'mju:nati/n.社区
5.assist/a'sIst/.帮助
6.organize/':genaIz/v.组织
7.participate /pa:'tsIpert/v.参与
8.cooperate /keu'ppereIt/v.合作
9.responsible /rI'sppnsebl,/adj.有责任的
10.kindness/'kaIndnes/.n.善良
11.satisfaction/,saet扛s'faek[n/n.满意
12.meaningful/'mi:nInfl/adj..有意义的
2.常用短语:
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1.volunteer service志愿服务
2.take part in参加
3.help out帮助解决困难
4.clean up打扫千净
5.care for照顾
6.hand out分发
7.put up张贴
8.work together一起工作
9.make a difference有影响
10.in need需要帮助的
11.thank you for因…感谢
12.feel proud of为…感到自豪
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:Prefer to do sth.rather than do sth.宁愿做某事而不愿做某事
Last weekend,I preferred to participate in volunteer service in the com-
munity rather than stay at home watching TV.
2.结构:Not only..but also.不仅…而且…
例句:Volunteer service not only helps people in need but also brings me a
strong sense of satisfaction.
3.结构:tis+ad.+for sb.+to do sth.对某人来说做某事是…的
It is meaningful for teenagers to take part in organizing volunteer activities.
4.结构:The reason why..is that..…的原因是…
The reason why I felt proud of myself was that I assisted the elderly with
their daily needs patiently.
5.结构:Compared with.,.与…相比,…
Compared with other experiences,this volunteer service taught me more
about kindness and responsibility.
6.结构:Vhat I like most is..我最喜欢的是.
What I like most is working together with my teammates to clean up the
park and hand out food to the homeless.
7.结构:Although/Though,…尽管…,…
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Although the work was tiring,I never gave up because I knew I was making
a difference to the community.
四、满分范文示范
My Volunteer Service Experience
Last month,I participated in a volunteer service in our community,which became one of the
most meaningful experiences in my life.I preferred to join this activity rather than stay at
home playing games because I wanted to help people in need.
On that day,we volunteers first helped clean up the park near the community center.Some
of us picked up litter,and others swept the paths.After that,we went to the elderly home
to care for the old people.I assisted an 85-year-old grandma with reading newspapers and
talking about her past life.What I like most is seeing her smile when she shared stories with
me.We also handed out some fruits and snacks to them,and they kept saying"thank you
for your kindness".Although we felt a little tired after a whole day's work,we were all very
happy.
Volunteer service not only brings joy to others but also teaches us the importance of re-
sponsibility.The reason why I felt proud of myself was that I could make a difference to the
community through my small actions.Compared with other activities,this volunteer experi-
ence made me understand that helping others is a happy thing.It is meaningful for teenagers
to take part in such activities,and I will continue to be a volunteer to spread kindness.