内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(沪外版八年级上册)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题4:介绍一项手工制作或实验过程
适用年级:
八上
对应版本:
沪外版
常考题目:
如何制作风筝/一次有趣的科学实验
一、
话题解读
本话题是沪外版八年级上册写作的重点。常以“如何制作风筝”“一次有趣的科学实验”等为
题,考察学生用英语描述手工制作步骤或实验过程的能力,在单元测试和期中期末考试书面
表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.scissors/'SIzeZ/n.剪刀
2.glue /glu:/n.胶水
3.craft/kra:ft/n.手工艺品
4.material./mat虹eril/n.材料
5.decorate/dekerert/v.装饰
6.measure/me3a(r)/v.测量
7.fold /feuld/v.折叠
8.cut/KAt/V.剪切
9.stick/strk/v.粘贴
10.shape /eIp/n.形状
11.create/kri'eIt/v.创造
12.exhibition/eksI'bIfn/n.展览
2.常用短语:
2
1.step by step逐步地
2.cut out剪出
3.fold in half对折
4.stick together粘在一起
5.prepare materials准备材料
6.follow the instructions按照说明
7.in the end最后
8.as a result结果
9.show off展示
10.with the help of在…的帮助下
11.a piece of一张/块
12.make a model制作模型
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:Prefer to create crafts rather than buy ready-made ones宁愿制作手工艺品而不愿
购买成品
I prefer to create paper models rather than buy them from stores because
it brings me a sense of achievement.
2.结构:Not only does crafting develop patience,but also it improves hands-on skills制作
不仅培养耐心,而且提升动手能力
Not only does making origami develop my patience,but also it improves
my ability to follow instructions carefully.
3.结构:It is necessary for us to prepare materials step by step before starting开始前逐步
准备材料对我们来说是必要的
It is necessary for us to prepare scissors,glue and colored paper step by
step before making a paper lantern.
4.结构:The reason why|enjoy this craft is that it allows me to show off my creativity我喜
欢这项手工的原因是它能让我展示创造力
The reason why I enjoy making model planes is that it allows me to show
off my design ideas at the school exhibition.
5.:Compared with simple folding,cutting out detailed shapes requires more concen
tration与简单折叠相比,剪出精细形状需要更高专注力
Compared with folding paper in half,cutting out animal shapes requires
more concentration and careful measurement.
6.:What I like most is the moment when different materials are stuck together into a
beautiful shape我最喜欢的是不同材料被粘成美丽形状的那一刻
例句:Vhat I like most is the moment when colorful paper pieces are stuck
together into a lovely flower shape.
7.:Although the process seems complicated at first,following the steps makes it easier
尽管过程起初看似复杂,但按步骤操作会变简单
Although folding the paper crane seems complicated at first,following
the instructions makes it much easier to complete.
四、满分范文示范
Making a Paper Lantern
I prefer to create crafts rather than buy ready-made ones,and making a paper lantern is one
of my favorite activities.Not only does crafting develop patience,but also it improves
hands-on skills,which I think is very important for students.
The reason why I enjoy making paper lanterns is that it allows me to show off my
creativity.First,it is necessary for us to prepare materials step by step before start-
ing.We need a piece of red paper,scissors,glue,a string and a candle.Then,I measure
the paper to make sure it is the right size.After that,I fold the paper in half and cut out
some beautiful patterns with scissors.Compared with simple folding,cutting out de-
tailed shapes requires more concentration,so I have to be very careful.Next,I stick the
two ends of the paper together to form a cylinder shape.Finally,I decorate the lantern with
some colorful stickers and tie a string at the top.In the end,I put a candle inside,and the
lantern looks really beautiful when the candle is lit.
What I like most is the moment when different materials are stuck together into a
beautiful shape.Although the process seems complicated at first,following the in-
structions makes it easier.Last month,I made a paper lantern and showed it off at the
school exhibition.Many classmates praised my craft,and I felt very proud.With the help of
this interesting activity,I have learned how to create things with my own hands and enjoy
the happiness of making.