内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(沪外版八年级上册)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题U1:描述一次体育活动或比赛经历
适用年级:
八上
对应版本:
沪外版
常考题目:
My Favorite Sports Activity An Unforgettable Sports Game
一、
话题解读
本话题是沪外版八年级上册写作的重点。常以“My Favorite Sports Activity”“An Unforget-
table Sports Game”等为题,考察学生用英语描述体育活动或比赛的过程、感受及收获的能
力,在单元测试、期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.compete /kem'pi:t/v.竞争
2.cooperate /keu'ppareIt/v.合作
3.determination/d虹,t3:mr'neIn/n.决心
4.exhausted /Ig'z:std/adj.筋疲力尽的
5.final/'faInl/n.决赛
6.injure/'ind3e(r)/v.使受伤
7.participate /pa:'tsIpert/V.参加
8.performance/pa'f:mans/n.表现
9.perseverance/p3:se'VIerens/.n.毅力
10.referee/,refa'ri:l/n.裁判
11.strategy/'straeted.3iln.策略
12.victory'vIkteri/n.胜利
2.常用短语:
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1.take part in参加
2.cheer for为…欢呼
3.on the playground在操场上
4.in the end最后
5.fall down摔倒
6.get ready for为…做准备
7.keep going继续前进
8.pass the ball传球
9.score a goal进球
10.work together一起努力
11.with great effort努力地
12.win the game赢得比赛
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:It was+时间/地点+that+事件(强调句)
It was on the playground that our class had the most unforgettable bas-
ketball final last Friday.
2.结构:Not only.but also.(不仅…而且…)
Not only did we cooperate perfectly by passing the ball quickly,but also
we encouraged each other when we felt exhausted.
3.结构:The+比较级.,the+比较级.(越…越…
The louder our classmates cheered for us,the stronger our determination
to win the game became.
4.结构:Althoug h/Though,we still...(尽管…,我们仍然…)
Although Tom injured his knee when he fell down,he kept going with great
effort until the end.
5.结构:What impressed me most was that..(给我印象最深的是…)
例句:What impressed me most was that our team scored the winning goal in
the last minute through teamwork.
6.结构:It took us.to…(我们花费.…做某事)
It took us two weeks of hard training to prepare for the final competition.
7.结构:Nitho ut..,we couldn't have..(没有…,我们不可能…)
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Without the referee's fair judgment and our perseverance,we couldn't
have achieved such a wonderful performance.
8.结构:The moment..,I realized that..(那一刻…,我意识到…)
The moment the whistle blew,I realized that victory belonged to every
member of our team.
9.结构:As soon as..,we started to..(一…,我们就开始…)
例句:As soon as we arrived at the playground,we got ready for the match by
warming up and discussing strategies.
10.结构:tis+adj.+for us+to learn that.(我们了解到…是…的)
It is important for us to learn that cooperation is more valuable than indi-
vidual performance in a team sport.
四、满分范文示范
My Unforgettable Basketball Final
It was on the playground that our class had the most unforgettable basketball final last Friday.
I was so excited to participate in the game as a team member.
It took us two weeks of hard training to prepare for the final competition.Every afternoon,we
practiced passing the ball and discussing strategies with our coach.As soon as we arrived
at the playground on that day,we got ready for the match by warming up and encouraging
each other.
The game started,and we competed fiercely with the other team.Not only did we cooperate
perfectly by passing the ball quickly,but also we encouraged each other when we felt ex-
hausted.The louder our classmates cheered for us,the stronger our determination to win the
game became.Although Tom injured his knee when he fell down,he kept going with great
effort until the end.What impressed me most was that our team scored the winning goal
in the last minute through teamwork.The moment the whistle blew,I realized that victory
belonged to every member of our team.
Without the referee's fair judgment and our perseverance,we couldn't have achieved such
a wonderful performance.It is important for us to learn that cooperation is more valuable
than individual performance in a team sport.This experience will always stay in my memory
and remind me of the power of teamwork and perseverance.