U6描述一处山川景色-2025-2026学年英语期末写作复习七年级上册（沪外教版）

初中英语写作专项突破 (沪外版初一上册) 写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范 写作话题U6:描述一处山川景色 适用年级： 七上 对应版本： 沪外版 常考题日： An Unforgettable Mountain Trip The Beautiful Scenery of Huangshan 一、 话题解读 本话题沪外版七年级上册写作的重点。常以“An Unforgettable Mountain Trip”“The Beautiful Scenery of Huangshan'”等为题，考察学生用英语描述山川自然景观、表达游览感受及运用 方位和感官描写的能力，在单元测试和期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。 二、核心词汇与短语 1.核心难点词汇： 1.magnificent/meeg'nIfrsnt/adj.壮丽的 2.towering'taverIn/adj..高耸的 3.serene/se'ri:n/adj.宁静的 4.picturesque/,pIktfe'resk/adj..如画的 5.winding /'waIndIn/adj.蜿蜒的 6.lush/adj.茂密的 7.glorious/'glb:ries/adj.辉煌的 8.majestic/ma'd3 estrk/adj.雄伟的 9.tranquil/'traenkwIl/adj..平静的 10.spectacular./spek'taekjeler/adj..壮观的 11.craggy/kraegi/adj..多峭壁的 12.misty/'mIsti/adj.多雾的 2.常用短语： 2 1.rise into the sky拔地而起 2.be covered with被…覆盖 3.at the foot of在…脚下 4.in the distance在远处 5.a sea of clouds云海 6.flow down流下 7.look like看起来像 8.be surrounded by被…环绕 9.from top to bottom从上到下 10.stand ta屹立 11.take one's breath away令人惊叹 12.a variety of各种各样的 三、高级句型模板 1.结构：With+n.+doing,.随着…，… With the sun rising slowly,the craggy mountains are covered with a misty veil in the early morning. 2.结构：Not only..but also.不仅…而且… Not only do the towering peaks rise into the sky,but also a winding river flows down from top to bottom. 3.结构：tis+adj+to do sth.+that.做某事…，以至于… It is spectacular to stand at the foot of the mountain that we can see a sea of clouds in the distance. 4.结构：The place where.is.……的地方是… The place where the lush forests meet the tranquil lakes is truly pic- turesque. 5.结构：Compared with.,.seems more.…与…相比，…似乎更… 例句：Compared with the city's noise,the mountain's serene atmosphere seems more attractive to visitors. 6.结构：What makes it most charming is..使它最迷人的是… What makes it most charming is the magnificent sunset painting the ma jestic rocks golden. 7.结构：Althoug h.,it still...尽管…，它仍然… Although the path is steep,it still attracts many hikers who want to enjoy the glorious views. 四、满分范文示范 A Picturesque Mountain Scene Last summer,I visited a__area in the countryside.The first sight that took my breath away was the towering peaks rising into the sky,covered with lush green forests With the sun rising slowly,the craggy mountains were wrapped in a misty veil,making ev- erything look like a fairyland.Not only do the mountains stand tall and majestic,but also a winding river flows down from top to bottom,singing softly as it goes.The place where the river meets the tranquil lake at the foot of the mountain is truly picturesque. It is spectacular to climb to the top that we can see a sea of clouds in the distance.Compared with the city's busy life,the mountain's serene atmosphere seems more attractive.What makes it most charming is the glorious sunset painting the rocks golden every evening Although the hiking path is sometimes steep,it still attracts many visitors who want to enjoy the natural beauty. This place is surrounded by a variety of wildflowers and birds,making it a perfect spot to relax.I will never forget this amazing experience!