内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(沪教牛津版初三)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题9:介绍一位心中的英雄及其贡献
适用年级:
初三
对应版本:
沪教牛津版
常考题目:
My Hero I The Hero in My Heart
一、
话题解读
本话题是沪教牛津版初三写作的重点。常以“My Hero”“The Hero in My Heart”等为题,考
察学生用英语介绍心中英雄的事迹、阐述其贡献及表达个人感悟的能力,在单元测试、期中
期末和中考书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.heroic /he'reuIk/adj..英雄的
2.contribution/,kpntrI'bju:Jn/n.贡献
3.inspire/in'spaIe(r)/v.激励
4.courage/'kArId:3/n.勇气
5.determination/dt,t3:mI'neIn/n.决心
6.devote/dr'vtv.致力于
7.achieve/ei:v/v.实现
8.significant/sIg'nIfIkent/adj..重要的
9.selfless/'selfles/adj.无私的
10.overcome/,ava'kAm/V.克服
11.admire /ed'maa(r/v.敬佩
12.legacy/'legesi/n.遗产
2.常用短语:
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1.look up to尊敬
2.make a difference产生影响
3.devote oneself to致力于
4.in the face of面对
5.set a good example树立好榜样
6.work hard for为…努力
7.never give up永不放弃
8.be proud of为…自豪
9.play an important role in在…中起重要作用
10.contribute to为…做贡献
11.with great effort付出巨大努力
12.inspire sb.to do sth.激励某人做某事
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:Prefer to worship real-life heroes rather than fictional characters宁愿崇拜现实中的
英雄而非虚构人物
I prefer to worship real-life heroes rather than fictional characters because
their contributions are tangible and inspiring.
2.:Not only did he/she make significant contributions,but also set a good example for
generations不仅做出重要贡献,还为后人树立榜样
Not only did Marie Curie make significant contributions to science,but
also set a good example for women pursuing careers in STEM.
3.结构:It is selfless of sb.to devote oneself to helping others某人致力于帮助他人是无私
的
It is selfless of Mother Teresa to devote herself to helping the poor and
sick in Calcutta.
4.:The reason why I admire him/her is that he/she overcame great difficulties with
determination我敬佩他/她的原因是他/她以决心克服重重困难
The reason why I admire Helen Keller is that she overcame blindness and
deafness with extraordinary determination to become a writer and educator.
5.:Compared with ordinary people,heroes have the courage to face challenges bravel
与普通人相比,英雄有勇气勇敢面对挑战
Compared with ordinary people,firefighters have the courage to face
dangerous fires bravely to save lives.
6.结构:What inspires me most is his/her never--give-up spirit when facing failures最激励
我的是他她面对失败时永不放弃的精神
What inspires me most is Thomas Edison's never-give-up spirit when
facing hundreds of failures in inventing the light bulb.
7.:Although his/her work was not recognized at first,it eventually contributed to social
progress尽管他/她的工作起初未被认可,但最终为社会进步做出贡献
Although Albert Einstein's theory of relativity was not fully understood at
first,it eventually contributed to revolutionary advancements in physics and tech-
nology.
四、满分范文示范
My Hero:Marie Curie
I prefer to worship real-life heroes rather than fictional characters because their contributions
are tangible and inspiring.Among all the heroes I admire,Marie Curie stands out as the most
remarkable one.
The reason why I admire her is that she overcame great difficulties with determination in
a male-dominated scientific world.Born in Poland,she moved to France to pursue higher
education with great effort.It is selfless of Marie Curie to devote herself to scientific re-
search even when facing poor working conditions and limited resources.Not only did she
make significant contributions to science by discovering radium and polonium,but also set
a good example for women pursuing careers in STEM.Her work played an important role
in the development of modern medicine,especially in cancer treatment,which truly made a
difference in millions of lives.
What inspires me most is her never-give-up spirit when facing failures and health problems
caused by radiation.She once said,"Nothing in life is to be feared;it is only to be under-
stood."This attitude encourages me to overcome challenges in my studies and daily life.I
look up to her not only for her scientific achievements but also for her selfless dedication and
courage.
Marie Curie's legacy continues to inspire generations.She taught us that with courage and
determination,we can achieve great things and contribute to society.I am proud to have
such a heroic figure to admire,and I hope to follow her example to work hard for my dreams
and make meaningful contributions to the world.
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