话题1介绍一位身边的优秀同学-2025-2026学年英语期末写作复习八年级上册（沪教牛津版）

初中英语写作专项突破 (沪教牛津版初二上册) 写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范 写作话题1：介绍一位身边的优秀同学 适用年级： 初二上册 对应版本： 沪教牛津版 常考题日： A Good Classmate My Excellent Friend 一、 话题解读 本话题沪教牛津版初二上册写作的重点。常以“A Good Classmate”“My Excellent Friend” 等为题，考察学生用英语介绍身边优秀同学的基本信息、突出品质及具体事例的能力，在单 元测试和期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。 二、核心词汇与短语 1.核心难点词汇： 1.excellent/'ekselent/adj.优秀的 2.diligent./'d虹lid3nt/adj.勤奋的 3.intelligent/in'telrd3ant/adj.聪明的 4.responsible /rI'sppnsebl/adj.负责的 5.cooperative /keu'pperetv/adj..合作的 6.creative /kri'ertrv/adj.有创造力的 7.confident'kpnfrdent/adj.自信的 8.positive /'ppzetrv/adj.积极的 9.talented'taelentrd/adj..有天赋的 10.devote/dr'vatv.致力于 11.achieve /e'ti:v/v.取得成就 12.encourage/in'krrd3/V.鼓励 2.常用短语： 2 1.get along well with与…相处融洽 2.be good at擅长 3.work hard at努力学习/做… 4.help sb.with sth.帮助某人做某事 5.take part in参加 6.make progress取得进步 7.set a good example树立好榜样 8.in one's spare time在某人的业余时间 9.be willing to愿意做… 1O.have a positive attitude towards对…有积极态度 11.as a result结果 12.try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事 三、高级句型模板 1.结构：One of the most excellent students in our class is...我们班最优秀的学生之一是 … One of the most excellent students in our class is Tom,who is both diligent and intelligent. 2.结构：Not only.but also..不仅…而且… Not only does she work hard at all subjects,but also she is always willing to help classmates with their studies. 3.结构：tis+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.对某人来说做某事是…的 It is responsible of him to take part in various class activities and try his best to organize them well. 4.结构：The reason why..is that..…的原因是… The reason why many classmates respect her is that she has a positive attitude towards difficulties and never gives up. 5.结构：Compared with.,…与…相比，… Compared with other students,she is more creative in solving problems and often comes up with new ideas. 6.结构：What|admire most about her is..我最敬佩她的是… 例句：What I admire most about her is that she devotes most of her spare tim to helping others,which sets a good example for us. 7.结构：Although/Though.,.尽管…，… Although she has achieved great progress in her studies,she still keeps working hard to improve herself. 四、满分范文示范 My Excellent Classmate One of the most excellent students in our class is Lucy,who is both diligent and intelligent. She not only works hard at all subjects but also is always willing to help classmates with their studies. Lucy is good at math and science,and she often comes up with creative ideas to solve difficult problems.Compared with other students,she is more cooperative in group work and always tries her best to make the team better.It is responsible of her to take part in various class activities and organize them well.In her spare time,she devotes herself to reading and painting,which makes her more talented. The reason why many classmates admire her is that she has a positive attitude towards challenges and never gives up.She gets along well with everyone and often encourages us to face difficulties bravely.As a result,she has achieved great progress in both studies and personal development,setting a good example for all of us. Although she is already very excellent,Lucy still keeps working hard to improve herself. What I admire most about her is that she is confident and modest at the same time.I hope I can learn from her and become a better student like her.