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SectionB (3a-3c)
Writing
Let’s Communicate!
Unit8
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1. read and analyze the invitation letter and identify the key
elements, such as date, time, place and topic.
2. analyze the structure of the invitation letter.
3. write your own invitation letter.
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本单元教材写作情境为“邀请同学和家长参加讲座”,属于“人与社会”主
题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与
人际交往”以及“和谐家庭与社区生活”。常见的写作任务是描述自己与父母
在沟通中遇到的问题和困难,讲述个人生活或学习中遇到的困难并寻求建
议和帮助,提出改善亲子沟通或解决问题的建议和方法等。体裁多为记叙文、
议论文或书信、电子邮件等应用文。
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Lead in
What is the girl in front doing?
She is giving a speech in front of crowds.
If your school wants to invite a guest speaker to give a speech, what preparations should be made?
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Let’s share
Preparations
choose a topic
pick a place
decide the time
send an invitation
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What information is usually included in an invitation?
What will you do if you need to make an invitation? How do you write it?
Date
Time
Place
Activity
Now let’s learn how to write an invitation by reading this invitation!
Let’s think
Topic
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It’s an invitation to ________________________________ ________________
What’s the purpose of this invitation?
invite professor Jones to give a speech at the Education Talk event.
Let’s think
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Read an invitation letter for an event. Underline the date, time, place, and topic of the speech.
date and time
place
topic
What other information can we get from an invitation letter?
3a
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who we want to
invite
purpose
what the school can offer
simply introduce the event
show you’re looking forward to the reply
Read and find
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Is the language of the letter formal(正式) or informal?
The language is formal and polite.
To show respect to the guest speaker.
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Decide whether each sentence is the opening (O) or the closing (C) for an invitation letter.
____ A. Hoping to meet you there.
____ B. I’m writing to invite you to ...
____ C. I hope you’ll be able to make it.
____ D. We would like to invite you to ...
____ E. Looking forward to seeing you then.
C
C
C
O
O
3b
Opening: introduces the invitation (what + why).
Closing: encourages a
response or ends politely.
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Can you find more opening and closing sentences in the letter?
Opening sentences:
If you are able to attend the event, we will ...
If you can spare time to give a speech on ..., we are sure ...
The event is a great opportunity for ...
The event will take place at ...
Closing sentences:
We’re looking forward to your reply.
If you have any special needs, please let us know.
It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
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Minghua Middle School
10 December 20____
Dear Professor Jones,
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Education Talk event.The event will take place at 9 a.m. on 10th January. If you are able to attend the event,we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
The event is an excellent opportunity for students, parents, and teachers to hear new opinions and ideas. If you can spare the time to give a speech on teenagers' communication skills,we are sure the students will benefit a lot from you.
We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.”
Yours sincerely,
____
Beginning
Body
Ending
Salutation & Purpose of Invitation
When, where, arrangements
Significance of the participation
Request a reply
Polite ending & Signature
Let’s analyze
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Beginning
Body
Ending
Introduction (Salutation & Purpose of Invitation)
Dear ...,/We would like to invite you to.../I'd like to invite you to .../I wonder if you have time to.../I'm writing to invite you to ...
Content (When&Where&Arrangements&Significance)
When&Where: The event will take place at... on .../The activity will last for.../We will go there...
Arrangements: If you are able to attend..., we will.../In addition, there will be.../After... , we can .../We plan to ...
Significance: ... is an excellent opportunity for ..., ..., and ... to ... /If you can spare the time to ..., we are sure ... will benefit a lot from .../Through ..., we can learn ...as well as ...
Summary (Request a reply&Polite ending & Signature)
We are looking forward to your reply./It would be a ... to have you ... /If you're available to join us, please reply in... before... / Yours sincerely, .../Best regards, .../Thanks, ...
How do you invite people to the event?
Let’s summarize
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Let’s write
Dear students and parents,
We’d like to invite you to attend a speech_______________________
_____________________________
_____________________________
_____________________________
_____________________________
_____________________________
Yours sincerely,
Minghua Middle School
Behind the invitation lies the manners and culture.
Let people around us feel love and respect.
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(Unit 8 Section B 3c P79)
审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: ________________
3.时态: __________________
4.写作要点:① ____________;② ____________;③ __________________;④
__________
应用文
以第一人称为主
以一般现在时为主
讲座的时间
讲座的主题
为什么要参加讲座
表达期待
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思路点拨
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教材写作品读
Dear students and parents,
We would like to ①invite you to
attend an important speech at our
school. The speech will take place at 2
p.m.on 15th January in the school
hall,and the topic is “Effective Parent-
Child Communication”. 教材原句
①【Section B 3a】We would
like to invite you to give a
speech at our Education Talk
event.(invite sb.to do sth.邀请
某人做某事)
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②If you attend this speech,you
will find it good to improve your
communication skills.③It will be the
first time for many of you to listen to
such a professional talk. We are sure
that the knowledge talked about will be
helpful in building better relationships. ②【Section A 1d】 If you
come to my city,I’ll show you
around.(if引导的条件状语从
句)
【Section B 1b】Do you find it
hard to have a conversation
with a stranger?(find it+adj.+to
do sth.发现做某事是……的)
续表
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We are sure about the positive influence
this speech will bring.
We are ④looking forward to
seeing you there.
Best wishes! ③【Section B 2b】It was the
first time for my cousin to visit
Beijing.(it’s the first time for
sb.to do sth.某人第一次做某
事)
④【Section B 3a】We are
looking forward to your reply.
(look forward to期待)
续表
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Dear students and parents,
We’d like to invite you to attend a speech. It will be delivered by Professor Jones at our Education Talk event.
This event will take place at 9 a.m. on 10th January and last for 2 hours. If you can spare the time, you'd better arrive at the school hall ten minutes earlier to sign in.
In this speech, Professor Jones will talk about how to make education better and how to communicate with teenagers. All students and parents are expected to take part in this event. We're sure that you will benefit a lot from this event. You can also learn some communication skills.
We're looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Minghua Middle School
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开头句
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Education Talk event.
【教材Section B 3a】
仿写:我们想要邀请你加入我们的俱乐部。
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We would like to invite you to join our clubs.
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中间句
1.It was the first time for my cousin to visit Beijing.【教材Section B 2b】
仿写:这是你第一次加入俱乐部,所以一定要充分了解每个俱乐部。
_________________________________________________________________
_______
It’s the first time for you to join the clubs,so be sure to know every club well.
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2.What does the professor think is the best way to solve the problem?【教
材Section A 2b】
仿写:这也是加入一些俱乐部的最佳方式。
______________________________________
加宾语从句升格:这也是加入一些俱乐部以发现你真正感兴趣的事的最佳方式。
_________________________________________________________________
_____________
It’s also the best way to join some clubs.
It’s also the best way to join some clubs to find what you are really
interested in.
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结尾句
I hope you’ll be able to make it.【教材Section B 3b】
仿写:我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
_________________________________
I hope my advice is helpful to you.
【名言积累】
1.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。
2.Good communication is the bridge to success.良好的沟通是通往成功的桥
梁。
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假如你是李华,你的朋友John来信向你诉说自己对于第一次选择假期俱
乐部一筹莫展,请你根据邮件内容给他写一封80词左右的回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How is it going?I want to join some clubs in our school this winter
holiday. It’s my first time to join clubs so I don’t know what to do.
Could you give me some advice?
John
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审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________
4.写作要点:① ____________;② __________________________;③
________________
应用文
第二人称
一般现在时
写信的目的
关于加入俱乐部的具体建议
表达希望和祝愿
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思路点拨
know about the school clubs
choose your favourite club
think about the time you will spend in the club
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小试身手
Dear John,
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_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
I’m sorry to hear that you don’t know how to choose clubs. It’s best
not to run away when you have a problem. Here is my advice for you.
I think the first step is to know about the school clubs carefully. It’s
the first time for you to join the clubs,so be sure to know every club well.
What’s more,you’d better think about your hobbies and then choose clubs
according to them. It’s also the best way to join some clubs to find what
you are really interested in. Last but not least,you should make sure that
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_________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
the club works with your schedule. The schoolwork is also important,so
don’t spend too much time on club activities.
In a word,I hope you can solve your problem successfully and enjoy
yourself.
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Checklist Point(s)
Content Date and time of the speech (2 points)
Location and preparation (2 points)
Speech topic/theme(2 points)
Persuasive reasons (use if-clauses) (3 points)
Proper opening and closing (2 points)
Structure Beginning Body Ending (3 points)
Expressions Good expressions (2 points)
No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points)
Handwriting clean&tidy (2 points)
Check your partner’s article according to the checklist.
Let’s analyze
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Must-do 必做
1.Finish your writing and try to polish it according to the checklist.
Choose to do 选做
1. Collect if-clauses from daily life (such as advertisements, movie lines, books, etc.), with at least 5 examples. Analyze the logical relationships they express and their functions, and organize them into a document.
Homework
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