2026难中考英语一轮复习 环保建议类写作讲堂课件

该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦书面表达中的环保建议类写作核心考点，依据中考评分标准，明确内容要点齐全、结构逻辑清晰、词汇语法准确及上下文连贯的考查要求。通过“现状-建议-呼吁”三段式提纲梳理，结合分层建议（节约用水电、节约纸张、节约粮食等）归纳常考要点，对接一类文评分标准中“要点齐全、有亮点”的高分要求，体现备考针对性。 课件亮点在于“基础表达-高分升级”的阶梯式训练，如将简单建议句升级为It's necessary to do sth.等高分句型，运用In the first place等衔接词提升连贯性，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。通过环保建议写作实例，示范从12分初稿到14-15分终稿的升级过程，具体指导“要点分层+亮点句型”突破方法，帮助学生掌握书面表达得分技巧，教师可依此开展高效冲刺教学，提升复习效果。

环保建议类写作讲堂 1、评分时,先根据文章和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。 2、评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性(好词好句)及上下文的连贯性。(衔接词,第二段用上,分层。) 3、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 4、如果书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。 评分标准 一类文 (13-15分) 二类文 (9-12分) 三类文 (5-8分) 四类文 (0-4分) 要点齐全 结构逻辑清晰 语法正确 有亮点 要点齐全 结构逻辑清晰 有少量语法错误 无亮点 要点不全 结构逻辑不清晰 语法错误较多 无亮点 无要点 无结构 无逻辑 无亮点 写作练习 地球是我们的家园,我们作为地球的主人,就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活,只要我们不污染地球的环境,不浪费地球的能源,就能够让我们的周围变得更绿,生活变得更美好。作为中学生,我们应该怎么做呢?谈谈你的想法。 内容应该包括以下几点: 1、节约用水、用电; 2、节约纸张,循环使用旧课本,保护森林; 3、节约粮食,在更多的土地上种树。 要求:短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;80词左右。 环保建议类提纲 第一段:结合题目说现状 第二段:说建议,应该做到123+n (最多4个,给出5个可以整合成4个。) 第三段:呼吁一起来行动 动笔时 紧跟提纲写句子 第一段:我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。(万能句)所以我们要......(+过渡句) The environment around us is becoming worse and worse.And there is more pollution.So we need to protect the environment. 动笔时 紧跟提纲写句子 第二段的过渡句 To protect the environment, we should take action. 动笔时 紧跟提纲写句子 第二段:应该做到123 第一、我们应该..... Firstly 第二、我们应该..... Secondly 第三、我们应该..... Lastly should 动笔时 紧跟提纲写句子 第二段:应该做到123 Firstly,we should 节约用水,用电...... save water and electricity Secondly ,we should节约纸张,循环使用旧课本,保护森林; save paper , recycle old books, protect we should save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.(保护森林) 把主动变被动,使句子多样性。 Lastly, we should节约粮食,在跟多的土地上种树; save food and plant more trees on the farm. 第二段 To protect the environment, we should take action.Firstly,we should save water and electricity.Secondly,we should save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Lastly, we should save food and plant more trees on the farm. 第三段:呼吁一起来行动 Let's join hands and protect the environment! Let's protect the environment! The environment around us is becoming worse and worse.And there is more pollution.So we need to protect the environment. 第一段:结合题目说现状 第二段:说建议,应该做到123+n 第三段:呼吁一起来行动 To protect the environment, we should take action.Firstly,we should save water and electricity.Secondly,we should save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Lastly, we should save food and plant more trees on the farm. Let's join hands and protect the environment! 初步形成 最高12分 一起学升级-高分句型 we should 列举:Such as 句型改为:It's + adj.+to do sth. 变should 为 had better do sth.或be supposed to do sth. 节约用水、用电 To protect the environment, we should take action.Firstly,we should save the resources around us,such as water, electricity and so on.Secondly,it is necessary for us to save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Lastly, we had better save food and plant more trees on the farm. 第二段升级后 一篇作文出现2至3个高分句型最佳。 The environment around us is becoming worse and worse.And there is more pollution.So we need to protect the environment. To protect the environment, we should take action.Firstly,we should save the resources around us,such as water, electricity and so on.Secondly,it is necessary for us to save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Lastly, we had better save food and plant more trees on the farm. Let's join hands and protect the environment! 焕然一新 你认为这样就是高分了吗? firstly secondly lastly 连接词 in the first place 第一 what's more;besides;in addition 第二 last but not least 第三 Tips 两点/方面 on one hand... on the other hand 四点/方面 in the first place 第一 what's more; 第二 moreover;besides;in addition 第三 last but not least 第四 In the first place,we should save the resourses around us,such as water, electricity and so on.What's more,it is necessary for us to save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Last but not least, we had better save food and plant more trees on the farm. 升级后 The environment around us is becoming worse and worse.And there is more pollution.So we need to protect the environment. To protect the environment, we should take action.In the first place,we should save the resourses around us,such as water, electricity and so on.What's more, it is necessary for us to save paper.All the used textbooks should be recycled.Thus,fewer trees will be cut down again.Last but not least, we had better save food and plant more trees on the farm. Let's join hands and protect the environment! 大功告成 14-15分 $