专项05 书面表达（期末专项训练）四年级英语上学期（北京版·新教材）

专项05 书面表达 01 解题小技巧 02【题型一】 书面表达 解题小技巧 小学英语 “书面表达” 题型（含介绍类写作、命题作文、表格信息写作）核心考查时态运用、内容完整性及语句连贯性，掌握以下技巧可快速破题： 第一步：审题立意，确定框架 · 明确写作主题（如 “英语学习经历”“学科博览会通知”“理想一周”），按 “开头 + 中间 + 结尾” 搭建框架： · 开头：简洁交代主题或背景，如写演讲稿可写 “English was hard for me at first”；写通知可写 “Subject Fair is coming!”。 · 中间：围绕主题补充 2-3 个核心信息，用 “and/also/but” 串联，如描述特殊日子可写 “I usually do homework after school, but today I’m having a picnic”。 · 结尾：表达感受或发出号召，如写活动通知可写 “Come and join the fun!”；写个人经历可写 “What a happy day!”。 · 锁定时态：四年级以一般现在时为主（描述日常、爱好、能力），现在进行时为辅（描述当前动作），动词需匹配人称（第三人称单数用 “likes/has”，第一人称用 “like/have”）。 第二步：巧用提示，丰富内容 · 若若题目给中文提示 / 关键词（如 “最初觉得难、通过电影进步”），需全部融入文中，避免遗漏；若给表格（如 “姓名 - 爱好 - 理想职业”），按表格顺序展开，每类信息至少 1 句话。 · 补充细节：在核心信息后加简单修饰，如 “play basketball” 可扩展为 “play basketball with friends after school”；让内容更具体。 第三步：检查修正，保证规范、 · 语法层面：确认动词形式正确（如 “like doing”“want to be”）、时态一致（日常用一般现在时，当前动作用现在进行时）。 · 语句层面：避免重复用词（如 “happy” 可换 “great/wonderful”），确保每句有主谓结构（如 “I get up at 7:00”，不写 “Get up at 7:00”）。 · 格式层面：通知需写清 “时间、地点、内容”；演讲稿可适当用感叹句增强语气；命题作文需写标题，首字母大写。 【题型一】书面表达 （一） 请你根据思维导图的提示,描写一个你最喜爱的中国传统节日吧。要求不少于五句话。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 读表格信息，参照例文，从Xinxin和Leo中选择一个人物写一篇不少于5句话的短文。 Name Age Weather Feeling Thing he/she wants to do Thing he/she can do Ray 9 rainy happy play in the rain put on my raincoat Xinxin 8 windy excited fly a kite go to the park Leo 10 sunny happy play ping-pong outside play with friends My name is Ray. I’m 9 years old. Today is a rainy day. I’m happy, because I want to play in the rain. I can put on my raincoat. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 以“My feelings in a day”为题，记录一天中不同时刻的心情变化，说明原因并写下自己的感受。 不少于 5 句。 _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 书面表达。仿照例文描述自己的一天。                                                                             A Day at the Zoo(动物园的一天) Hello, I’m Guoguo. Today, I go to the zoo with my mom. I am excited because I see pandas. They are black and white, and they love eating bamboo. I learn that baby pandas are very small. I am happy. But then, I can’t find my mom near the monkey house. I am worried. A zookeeper helps me. We find her by the lake. I am happy again. I love animals! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 书面表达。请以My favourite Chinese festival为题，参考以下句型写作。不少于5句话。 参考句型：... is in/on ...; People often ...; I like ... My favourite Chinese festival _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 星期天杰克一家人在农场,杰克和他的爸爸在摘苹果,他的爷爷、奶奶在钓鱼,他的妈妈在收集鸡蛋。请根据提示写一篇短文,不少于五句话。 提示:on the farm, pick apples, fish, collect eggs, great fun ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案及解析 第 1 页 共 6 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【题型一】 （一）范文：                 My Favourite Chinese Festival My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is usually in September or October. On this day, families get together. People eat mooncakes, which are round and delicious. They also watch the bright full moon and talk about interesting stories. I love this festival because it makes me feel the warmth of family. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题，介绍自己最喜欢的传统节日。阐述该节日的时间，人们做的事情及人们吃的食物等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节，September九月，October十月，mooncake月饼 参考句型：My favourite Chinese festival is…；It is…； （二）范文：      My name is Xinxin. I’m 8 years old. Today is a windy day. I’m excited, because I want to fly a kite. I can go to the park. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求参照例文，介绍人物信息、天气等，人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：windy有风的，excited兴奋的，fly a kite放风筝，go to the park去公园 参考句型：My name is…；I’m…years old；Today is a…day；I’m…, because I want to…；I can… （三）范文：                   My feelings in a day Today is a busy day, and my feelings change a lot. In the morning, I feel worried because I can’t find my English book. I look everywhere, but it’s not in my schoolbag. “Don’t worry. Let me help you,” says my mom. Finally, we find it under the sofa. I feel happy again! At school, our teacher tells us we will have a picnic tomorrow. Wow, I’m so excited! I can’t wait to play with my friends. In the afternoon, my best friend Lily is sad. She loses her favorite pencil. I say, “Don’t cry. Let’s look for it together.” We find it in the classroom. Lily smiles, and I feel happy too. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My feelings in a day”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述一天中不同时刻的心情变化，说明原因并写下自己的感受。注意文章主要为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：busy忙碌的，worried担心的，happy高兴的，excited兴奋的，sad伤心的 参考句型：Today is …；In the morning, I feel …；Finally, we …； Wow, I’m so …；I can’t wait to ... （四）范文： Hello, I’m Lily. Today is the first day of school. I am worried because I think I will be late. When I get to school, I see my old friends. I am happy. Our new classroom is very nice. I am excited. This is a good day for me. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的一天。阐述一天中做的事情及情绪如何。注意文章为一般现在时。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：worried担心的，late迟到，happy高兴的，excited激动的 参考句型：Today is…；I am…；This is… （五）示例: My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. The moon on that day is very big, round and beautiful. People often look at the beautiful moon and eat mooncakes with their families. I like sweet mooncakes best, and mooncakes with meat are my parents’ favourite. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以My favourite Chinese festival为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述最喜欢的季节是什么，时间及在该节日做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节，September九月，October十月，mooncake月饼 参考句型：... is in/on …； People often …；I like … （六）Today is Sunday. Jack and his family are on the farm. There are many interesting things on the farm. Jack and his father are picking apples. These apples are big. His grandparents are fishing. His mother is collecting eggs. They have great fun there. $