专题10 书面表达（专项训练）六年级英语寒假专项提升（外研版三起）

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 一、审题搭框架，不跑题 1. 明确题型与要点 先圈出题目要求的核心信息（如介绍朋友需写 “外貌、爱好、特长”，介绍房间需写 “物品位置”），避免遗漏得分点。 2. 套用固定结构 · 介绍类短文 开头：点明对象（This is my best friend Lily./This is my bedroom.） 中间：分述特征（用比较级写外貌She is taller than me.、用时态写动作She is reading a book now.、用方位词写位置There is a desk near the window.） 结尾：表达感受（I like her very much./My bedroom is so nice.） · 日常活动类 开头：定场景 / 时间（On weekends, I usually have a busy day.） 中间：按顺序写动作（用first/then/next衔接，如First, I get up. Then I do my homework.） 结尾：总结心情（I feel happy on weekends.） · 应用文（便条 / 贺卡） 便条：顶格写称呼（Dear Tom,）→ 正文说事由 → 右下角署名（Your friend, Amy） 贺卡：开头祝福语（Happy Teachers’ Day!）→ 正文表感谢 / 祝福 → 署名 二、加分小技巧 1. 适当加入课本固定短语（listen to music/next to），让语句更地道； 2. 用 1-2 个修饰词（a cute cat/a big desk）丰富内容，避免句子干瘪； 3. 保持卷面整洁，单词书写工整，减少涂改。 小试牛刀 1．假如你是Sam，你有一些来自中国的明信片。请根据图片提示，向你的朋友介绍一下这些明信片吧。 The Changjiang River the West Lake the Huangshan Mountain the Great Wall 要求：1.书写规范，认真； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺； 3.40词左右。 2．【新趋势·表文转换】书面表达。 John想交一个新朋友，请根据表格信息，帮他写一篇自我介绍，首尾句已给出。 要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，语法正确。 2. 至少写7句话，涵盖表格中的所有信息，也可适当拓展。 name John age twelve from Hong Kong, China ability (能力) can speak Chinese, can write in English... favourite colour red... favourite animal dog... favourite food dumplings... hobby reading books... Hello, boys and girls. I am John. Do you want to be my new friend? 3．【新考点·传统文化】请根据以下提示，仿照下面的文章，以“My favourite festival”为题目写一篇小短文。 My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Lantern Festival. It is after the Spring Festival. The Lantern Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. On this day, we have a big family dinner. We eat yuanxiao. They are sweet. We hang lanterns. We see the dragon dances. The dragon is long and it’s beautiful. The Lantern Festival is a good time for families to be together(在一起). It’s a nice festival. I love it 要求：1. 可以仿写和借鉴，但不能抄写阅读文章。 2. 不出现真实姓名和校名。 3. 书写工整、规范，标点正确。 4. 条理清晰，语句通顺。(不少于5句话) 参考节日：the Mid-Autumn Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival, the Spring Festival... My favourite festival My favourite festival is 4．书面表达。 图书馆能为我们提供一个安静的读书环境。那么，在图书馆，我们需要遵守哪些规则呢？要求：用上“Don’t...”“Please...”句型。不少于5句话。 提示：shout，talk，run，jump，play football，quiet，stand in line 等。 The library rules 5．学习之余，你有什么兴趣爱好呢？请以 My Hobby／Hobbies为题写一篇不少于三句话的小短文介绍你的爱好。 参考句型：My hobby is… I like… because… My Hobby／Hobbies 6．【新题型·思维导图】书面表达。 请根据自己的实际情况及思维导图提示，以“Something about me”为题写一篇短文介绍一下你自己。 要求：1.思路清晰，书写规范；2.不少于5 句话。 Something about me Hello! My English name is 7．【新趋势·表文转换】同学们，周末马上到了，你打算怎样度过一个愉快的周末呢?请根据表格内容提示，快来给自己制定一个周末计划吧! 要求：(1)书写工整，卷面整洁。(2)语句通顺，表达正确。(3)不少于5句话。 Day Morning Afternoon Evening Saturday clean my room do homework go to the supermarket Sunday go to the bookstore read books watch TV My Weekend Plan I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I’m going to 8．【新考点·传统文化】春节是中国最重要的传统节日之一，根据图片提示描述一下你和你的家人在春节都会做些什么吧。          要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯，书写清晰、整洁。2. 至少写出5句完全正确的话。 参考词汇：clean the house，buy new clothes，have a big family dinner，say "Happy New Year!"，watch a lion dance The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival. It's Chinese New Year. 9．Jim是你新认识的笔友，请根据方框中已给出的信息，以“My pen friend”为题用英文写一篇 小短文来介绍他。不少于5句话。 Name: Jim Age: 12 From: London, the UK Abilities: speaking English and Chinese well, writing in Chinese, helping me with my English Hobbies: riding bikes, doing kung fu My pen friend 10．书面表达。 中国有很多美丽的城市，你最喜欢或最想去哪里呢？请试着用你所学过的语言知识介绍你喜欢或者想去的城市，比如它的位置、人口、景点、美食等。 提示：My favourite city is…／I want to go to… It’s in the…  There is / are….  It’s… 要求：条理清晰，意思明确连贯；句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范；有作文题目；不少于40个单词。 参考答案 1．范文： Look! I have got some postcards from China. They are very beautiful.This is the Changjiang River.It's very long and famous. This is the West Lake. It's very beautiful.It's in Hangzhou.This is the Huangshan Mountain. It's very high and beautiful. It's in Anhui.And this is the Great Wall.It's very long and strong. Many people from all over the world visit the Great Wall every year. 2．范文： Hello, boys and girls. I am John. I am twelve. I am from Hong Kong, China. I can speak Chinese. I can write in English. My favourite colour is red. My favourite animal is a dog. My favourite food is dumplings. I like reading books. Do you want to be my new friend? 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求帮助约翰根据表格信息，写一篇自我介绍。然后再阐述年龄，来自哪里，能力，最喜欢的颜色、动物和食物，爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：twelve十二，speak Chinese讲汉语，write in English用英语写，red红色，dog狗，dumplings饺子，reading books看书 参考句型：I am …； I can …；My favourite … is ...； I like … 3．范文：                                                             My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It’s usually in January or February. It is the most important festival in China. On the first day of the Spring Festival, we wear our new clothes. And we visit our family and friends. We get together and have a big dinner. We often eat dumplings. They are delicious. It’s a great festival. I love it! 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My favourite festival”为题目写一篇小短文。然后再阐述最喜欢的节日是什么，日期，做的事情和吃的食物等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：the Spring Festival春节，January一月，February二月，important重要的，wear穿，visit看望，get together聚在一起，have a big dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，eat dumplings吃饺子，delicious美味的 参考句型：My favourite festival is …； It’s …；On the first day of …, we ...； We …；They are ... 4．参考范文： The library rules We must obey the library rules. Don't shout or talk loudly in the library. Please be quiet. Don’t run or jump. Don’t play football or any other games here. Please stand in line quietly while you are waiting. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“The library rules”为题目写一篇短文，主要介绍图书馆需遵守和禁止做的事情，注意用所给句型和词汇，注意卷面和书写，并不少于5句话。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：shout 喊，talk 讲话，run 跑步，jump 跳，play football 踢足球，quiet 安静的，stand in line 排队 参考句型：Don’t......; Please...... 5．范文：                                                          My Hobby／Hobbies I like listening to music best, because it makes me relaxed. When I am tired, I will listen to some quiet music. It can make me fall asleep very quickly. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以My Hobby／Hobbies为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述喜欢做的事情及原因。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：listen to music听音乐，relaxed放松的，tired累的，quiet轻柔的，fall asleep入睡 参考句型：I like …；When I …；It can … 6．范文：                                                         Something about me Hello! My English name is Amy. I’m twelve years old. I have got many dolls. Collecting dolls is my hobby. I often play the piano on the weekend. I want to visit the US. There’s a Chinatown in New York. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Something about me”，并根据实际情况和思维导图，写一篇短文。然后再阐述姓名，年龄，爱好，经常做的事情，想参观哪里等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：twelve12，ride a bike骑自行车，play the piano弹钢琴，the US美国，Chinatown唐人街 参考句型：I’m …； I have got ...；.... is my hobby.；I often …； I want to …；There is ... 7．范文： I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I’m going to clean my room. In the afternoon, I am going to do homework. I’m going to go to the supermarket with my mother in the evening. On Sunday morining, I’m going to go to the booksore. I’m going to buy a book. In the afternoon, I’m going to read books. I’m going to watch TV in the afternoon. 【详解】1.  题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的周末计划。然后再阐述周末要做的具体事情。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.  参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Saturday星期六，Sunday星期日，go to the supermarket去超市，go to the bookstore去书店 参考句型：In the morning/afternoon/evening, I’m going to… 8．例文： The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival. It's Chinese New Year. It is in January or February. We do many things for the Spring Festival. We clean the house. We buy new clothes. We have a big family dinner. We say "Happy New Year!" We watch a lion dance. Kids can get lucky money. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出中国最重要的传统节日之一—春节。然后再阐述在春节作者及家人都会做些什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：the Spring Festival春节，January一月，February二月，lion dance狮舞，lucky money压岁钱 参考句型：It is in….；We do…；We clean/buy/have/say/watch…；Kids get… 9．例文： My pen friend I have a pen friend. His name is Jim. He is twelve years old. He comes from London, the UK. He can speak English and Chinese well. He can write in Chinese. He often helps me with my English. He likes riding bikes and doing kung fu. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的笔友，然后在阐述他的姓名，年龄，喜好及能力等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词的数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：London伦敦，the UK英国，Chinese中文，ride bikes骑自行车，do kung fu练武功 参考句型：I have...；He is...；He can...；He often helps...；He likes... 10．范文： There are many beautiful cities in China. My favourite city is Kunming. It is in the southwest of China. It has got more than eight million people. It has a long history. It’s warm all the year. There are beautiful flowers everywhere. There are many restaurants in Kunming. You can enjoy Kunming over-the-bridge rice noodles. It tastes very delicious. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用自己所学的语言知识介绍自己喜欢或者想去的城市，内容可以写它的位置、人口、景点、美食等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：beautiful漂亮的，China中国，favourite最喜欢的，Kunming昆明，history历史，restaurant餐馆，delicious美味的 参考句型：My favourite city is…； There are…；It is…；It has…；You can enjoy…； It’s… 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $