专题10 书面表达（专项训练）五年级英语寒假专项提升（外研版三起）

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 一、审题搭框架，不跑题 1. 明确题型与要点 先圈出题目要求的核心信息（如介绍朋友需写 “外貌、爱好、特长”，介绍房间需写 “物品位置”），避免遗漏得分点。 2. 套用固定结构 · 介绍类短文 开头：点明对象（This is my best friend Lily./This is my bedroom.） 中间：分述特征（用比较级写外貌She is taller than me.、用时态写动作She is reading a book now.、用方位词写位置There is a desk near the window.） 结尾：表达感受（I like her very much./My bedroom is so nice.） · 日常活动类 开头：定场景 / 时间（On weekends, I usually have a busy day.） 中间：按顺序写动作（用first/then/next衔接，如First, I get up. Then I do my homework.） 结尾：总结心情（I feel happy on weekends.） · 应用文（便条 / 贺卡） 便条：顶格写称呼（Dear Tom,）→ 正文说事由 → 右下角署名（Your friend, Amy） 贺卡：开头祝福语（Happy Teachers’ Day!）→ 正文表感谢 / 祝福 → 署名 二、加分小技巧 1. 适当加入课本固定短语（listen to music/next to），让语句更地道； 2. 用 1-2 个修饰词（a cute cat/a big desk）丰富内容，避免句子干瘪； 3. 保持卷面整洁，单词书写工整，减少涂改。 小试牛刀 1．假如你是Wang Meng，请根据下面导图提示介绍你一天的学习及生活情况吧。 要求：①仔细审题，书写规范、工整。②条理清晰，语句通顺，不少于6句话。 My School Day Hi, I’m Wang Meng. I’m a pupil in Dianbai Primary School. 2．【新题型·思维导图】书面表达。 随着“双减政策”的实施，同学们有更多的时间走进大自然，欣赏祖国的大好河山。假如你是Daming，请根据思维导图提示，以“My trip”为题，发挥你的想象，写一写最让你难忘的一次旅行吧！ 要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，不少于50词。 3．书面表达。 请根据框架所给的信息，以“In the classroom”为题写一篇小作文。 要求：1. 语句通顺。2. 不少于4句话。3. 完整的小作文用手写体规范书写在四线三格上，字迹整洁美观。 句型结构 参考词汇短语 There are _____. But there are _____. The pupils are _____. ... pupils, twenty, crayons, give out, in the class, girls, boys, sing ... In the classroom 4．写作。根据下列图表及提示写一篇短文。 When: last Sunday Where: a supermarket Who: father, mother and I What: … How much: … wishes (愿望……)任选一个 5．同学们，合理安排好时间可以提高学习效率。王涛制定了作息时间表，他想与朋友Jack分享。请你根据思维导图和提示词，帮他把信写完，开头和结尾已给出。要求：语句通顺，书写规范，至少写5句。(可适当发挥哦！) Dear Jack, How are you? I made a timetable(时间表). I get up at 7:00. What do you think of my timetable? Yours, Wang Tao 提示词：get up，go to school，play football，have dinner，do my homework，watch TV... 6．至少写五个句子。 请你根据表格提示，介绍下面的男孩。不少于五句话。 Name Age Likes Can Can’t Jack 11 7．【新题型·思维导图】根据思维导图的提示，描述你的周末。 My Weekend I went to with my last weekend. We went there by . We and flew a kite in the park. We had . 8．请以“Last Sunday”为题，介绍你上周日的活动情况，要求语句通顺，不少于6句话。 参考词汇：do morning exercises, skip, do my homework, draw pictures, listen to music, watch TV, cook good food Last Sunday I was busy last Sunday. I do morning exercises at eight o’clock. 9．写作。 假如你是Daming，请选出你上周末的活动。(至少3个) watched TV; played football/basketball; read books; did my homework; played games; washed clothes 根据所选活动把下面邮件补充完整。 要求：邮件需要包含所选活动，可适当拓展；字数不少于20词。(邮件开头、结尾已给出，不算入总词数) To: Susan@tom.com From: Daming@qq.com Subject: My weekend. Dear Susan, Yours, Daming 10．在教室里，我们有一些班规。如：你可以认真听讲、读写；不能跟同学在课堂上交谈；不能在教室里大声喧哗；在课堂上不准吃东西喝水；不能在教室里乱跑等。请根据下列图片提示，用Class Rules为题写一篇短文。（不少于5个完整的句子） 提示：可用You can…/Don't…的句型结构。            11．【新题型·思维导图】请以“My School Life”为题，根据思维导图的提示，介绍一下你的学校生活。 要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯，书写清晰、整洁。 2. 至少写出5句完全正确的话。 Hello! My English name is 12．请根据下列图片及提示词，以“My trip”为题，写一篇小作文。 参考词汇：by car; Tian'anmen Square ; the Great Wall; photos 具体要求：1. 语法正确，语句通顺，书写清晰，规范完整 ； 2. 注意时态哦！不少于五句话，文章开头已给出。 My trip Last Sunday I went to Beijing with my family. 13．请以“My last weekend”为题写一篇作文。 要求: 1. 语法正确,语句通顺连贯,合乎逻辑,书写认真规范; 2. 不少于5句,可自由发挥。 My last weekend On Saturday did my homework cleaned my room watched TV …… On Sunday visited friends played chess read books …… My last weekend 参考答案 1．范文： My School Day Hi, I’m Wang Meng. I’m a pupil in Dianbai Primary School. I go to school at 8:00 in the morning. My school starts at 8:30. I have lunch at 12:00 in my school. I play football with my friends at 4:30. After school, I go home at 5:30. After dinner, I do my homework. I go to bed at 9:00. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称介绍一天的学习及生活情况，注意文章时态为一般现在时并符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：pupil小学生，go to school去上学，in the morning在早上，have lunch吃午餐，after school放学，after dinner晚饭后 参考句型：I go to school…；I play…；After school, I… 2．范文： My trip I am Daming. Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my family. We got there by train. We visited some famous places, like the Palace Museum, Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall. We took some beautiful photos. We also ate Peking Duck. It’s delicious. I was very happy. I hope I can visit Beijing again . 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以“My trip”为题，根据思维导图写一写自己难忘的经历。时态是一般过去时，人称是第一人称，同时注意词数的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：Beijing北京，Last summer holiday去年暑假，some famous places一些著名的地方，take photos拍照，Peking Duck北京烤鸭 参考句型：Last summer holiday, I went to...；We got there by...；We did... 3．范文： In the classroom      There are fifty pupils in the classroom. Twenty-eight are boys and twenty-two are girls. But there are fifty-one chairs. One is for the teacher. The pupils are having a party now. They are singing and dancing happily. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以“In the classroom”为题写一篇小作文。可以写一写教室里有什么，学生们在干什么等。注意文章为一般现在时态和现在进行时态，句子数量要符合要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：pupil 学生，crayon 彩笔，girls 沙女孩，boys 男孩，sing and dance 唱歌跳舞 参考句型：There are… ；They are… 4．范文： Last Sunday, I went to a supermarket with my father and mother. We made a shopping list. We bought many things there. We bought a bag of rice. It was forty-eight yuan. We bought 1.5 kilos of meat. It was thirty-six yuan. I like fruit. We bought a box of fruit. It was fifty yuan. My father likes fish. We bought a fish. It was sixty-eight yuan. My mother likes vegetables. We bought 2.5 kilos of vegetables. They were fifty yuan. I want to buy a toy car. Next time I will buy one. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图表及提示写一篇短文。然后再阐述时间，地点，买的物品及价钱，愿望。注意文章主要为一般过去时态和一般将来时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：shopping list购物清单，a bag of一袋，forty-eight48，kilo公斤，thirty-six36，fifty50，sixty-eighty68，toy car玩具汽车 参考句型：Last Sunday, I went to …；We bought …；It was …； They were …；I want to ...； 5．范文： Dear Jack, How are you? I made a timetable(时间表). I get up at 7:00. I go to school at 7:30. I play football with my friends at 5:30 p.m. I have dinner at 6:30 p.m. I do my homework at 7:00 p.m. I watch TV at 8:00 p.m. What do you think of my timetable? Yours, Wang Tao 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的作息时间表。然后再阐述几点做某事。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：go to school去上学，play football踢足球，have dinner吃晚饭，do my homework做作业，watch TV看电视 参考句型：I … at ...； 6．范文： This is Jack. He is a boy. He is 11 years old. He likes riding a bike. He can swim well. But he can’t jump high. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是根据表格提示，用第三人称来介绍这个男孩，从年龄、爱好、能力等方面来写，时态是一般现在时。要求：语句通顺，不少于五句话。 2. 参考词汇及参考句型： 参考词汇：name名字，ride a bike骑自行车，swim游泳，jump high跳高 参考句型：He is…；He likes…；He can…；He can’t… 7． My Weekend I went to Zhongshan Park with my parents last weekend. We went there by bike. We took a boat trip and flew a kite in the park. We had a good day. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图的提示，描述自己的周末。然后再阐述去哪了，和谁一起，怎么去的，做了什么，心情如何。注意文章为一般过去时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Zhongshan Park钟南山公园，by bike骑自行车，took a boat trip乘船旅行，had a good day度过了美好的一天 参考句型：I went to … with my ...； We went there by …；We …； 8．范文 Last Sunday I was busy last Sunday. I do morning exercises at eight o’clock. After breakfast, I cleaned my room, it was dirty but it is clean now. In the afternoon, I played badminton with my friends. In the evening, my brother and I ate some cookies, ice cream and drank some juice and milk, but I didn’t like chocolate. After I finished my homework, I watched TV and listened to music. I had a good time last Sunday! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写自己上周日的活动，语句通顺，符合句子数量要求，注意时态为一般过去时，。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：do morning exercises做早操,， skip跳绳，do my homework做我的作业,，draw pictures画画，listen to music听音乐，watch TV看电视，cook good food做好吃的 参考句型：After breakfast, I…；In the afternoon, I…；I ate…；I had…； 9．范文： Dear Susan, I was busy but happy last weekend. On Saturday morning I went to a bookstore by bus. I read many storybooks with my friends. In the afternoon, I washed clothes.On Sunday morning I did my homework. I played football with my friends in the afternoon. After dinner I watched TV. It was very funny. What a nice weekend! Yours,   Daming 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍上周末的活动。阐述上周末主要做了些什么事情。注意文章为一般过去时并要符合单词数量要求。 2. 参考词汇及句型： 参考词汇：watched TV看电视，played football踢足球，read books读书，did my homework做作业，washed clothes洗衣服 参考句型：I was…；On Saturday morning I…；In the afternoon, I… 10．例文 Class Rules Our school has school rules, and our class also has class rules. You can listen carefully, read and write in class. Don’t talk to classmates in class. And you can't talk loudly in the classroom. Do not eat or drink water in class. Don't run in the classroom. Please follow the rules! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一写我们的班规，如：你可以认真听讲、读写；不能跟同学在课堂上交谈；不能在教室里大声喧哗；在课堂上不准吃东西喝水；不能在教室里乱跑等。根据下列图片提示，用Class Rules为题写一篇短文。要求语句通顺，不少于5个完整的句子。 2.参考词汇及参考句型： 参考词汇：talk to交谈，listen carefully认真听讲，read读书，write写，talk loudly大声说话，eat吃，drink water喝水，run跑 参考句型：You can…；Don't… 11．范文： My School Life Hello! My English name is Mary. I get up at seven in the morning. My school starts at eight twenty. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class, I play games with my classmates. After school, I often play football with my friends. I can play football very well. I can’t play table tennis. But my friend Anna helps me. She teaches me how to play table tennis. We are all very happy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己的学校生活。然后根据思维导图的提示阐述一下学校上课的时间、在学校的活动、个人能力及感觉等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：school life学校生活；get up起床；start开始；four classes四节课；play games做游戏；play football踢足球；play table tennis打乒乓球；help帮助；happy高兴的； 参考句型：Hello! My English name is...；I get up...；My school starts...； I have...；After class, I play...；I can...；I can’t...；But my friend Anna helps ...；She teaches...；We are...； 12．参考例文： My trip Last Sunday I went to Beijing with my family. We arrived there at 8:00 in the morning. We went there by car. First we went to Tian'anmen Square . It is beautiful. Then we climbed the Great Wall. It is very old and long. The Great Wall is so great. There are many trees and flowers. There were lots of people. We took a lot of photos there. We had a good time. 【详解】1.题干分析：要求以“My trip”为题，根据图片和提示词写一篇旅游经历的作文。除了满足具体要求和句数要求外，按照提示写出旅游的时间、和谁去的、交通方式、参观的景点和拍摄了一些照片等内容。要用一般过去式。 2.参考词汇和参考句型： 参考词汇：by car坐车，Tian'anmen Square 天安门广场，the Great Wall长城，a lot of photos很多照片。 参考句型：We arrived…；We went there…；It is…；We took… 13．例文： My last weekend I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework. I also cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I watched TV and played basketball with my friends. On Sunday morning, I visited my friends. We played chess. In the afternoon, I read books and visited my grandparents. I had a busy but happy weekend. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的周末。然后再阐述周末做的具体事情。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：weekend周末；Saturday星期六，Sunday星期日，play basketball打篮球，play chess下棋，grandparents祖父母 参考句型：I was...；On Saturday morning, I ...；In the evening, I...；On Sunday morning, I...；In the evening, I...；I had... 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $