专题10 书面表达（专项训练）六年级英语寒假专项提升（人教PEP版）

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 一、审题搭框架，不跑题 1. 明确题型与要点 先圈出题目要求的核心信息（如介绍朋友需写 “外貌、爱好、特长”，介绍房间需写 “物品位置”），避免遗漏得分点。 2. 套用固定结构 · 介绍类短文 开头：点明对象（This is my best friend Lily./This is my bedroom.） 中间：分述特征（用比较级写外貌She is taller than me.、用时态写动作She is reading a book now.、用方位词写位置There is a desk near the window.） 结尾：表达感受（I like her very much./My bedroom is so nice.） · 日常活动类 开头：定场景 / 时间（On weekends, I usually have a busy day.） 中间：按顺序写动作（用first/then/next衔接，如First, I get up. Then I do my homework.） 结尾：总结心情（I feel happy on weekends.） · 应用文（便条 / 贺卡） 便条：顶格写称呼（Dear Tom,）→ 正文说事由 → 右下角署名（Your friend, Amy） 贺卡：开头祝福语（Happy Teachers’ Day!）→ 正文表感谢 / 祝福 → 署名 二、加分小技巧 1. 适当加入课本固定短语（listen to music/next to），让语句更地道； 2. 用 1-2 个修饰词（a cute cat/a big desk）丰富内容，避免句子干瘪； 3. 保持卷面整洁，单词书写工整，减少涂改。 小试牛刀 1．书面表达。 假如你是Lily，请根据图文信息写一篇关于上学方式、爱好、梦想职业，以及实现梦想计划的自我介绍。 要求：条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、书写规范，可适当发挥，不少于5句话。 2．【新趋势·表文转换】书面表达。 请根据表格中的信息，向大家介绍你的新笔友彼得的基本情况、上学方式、爱好特长、日常生活、理想职业等。要求语句通顺，表达准确，语言流畅，不少于5句话。 Name: Peter Age: 11 City: Sydney Ways to go to school Hobbies Daily life Dream job by bus playing football; singing play football; read stories scientist Come and see my new pen pal. 3．【新题型·思维导图】书面表达。 时光荏苒，一学期的学校生活转瞬即逝。寒假即将来临，你都有些什么计划呢？请结合思维导图以My winter vacation plan为题描述你的寒假计划 要求：1. 书写规范、工整。 2. 语句通顺，无语法错误，可适当发挥想象。 3. 不少于5句话(开头已给出，不计入总句数)。 Word bank: see a film, visit my grandparents, take a trip; sister, brother, friend... My winter vacation plan Winter vacation is coming. I have some plans for my winter vacation. 4．【新趋势·表文转换】假如你是Jim，你有一个新笔友，请根据以下表格信息介绍一下自己并说说你的周末计划。 要求： 1.语句通顺、语意连贯，可适当发挥； 2.书写规范，正确使用标点，注意单词中字母的大小写；不少于5句话。 Information(信息) Name(姓名) Jim Ways to go to work (通勤方式) by subway Job (工作) postman Hobbies(爱好) reading books Work place (工作地) post office Plans for this weekend (周末计划) buy some books Dear Tom, My name is Jim. What are you going to do this weekend? Yours, Jim 5．春节快要到了，请为自己制定一份春节计划，不少于5句，图片可供参考，注意句子大小写与标点。 A plan for Spring Festival When: Feb. 9th What: Spring Festival is coming. My family are going to get together. I’m going to _________________________________________________________________. My 6.书面表达。 小禹正在向Jim和Lily介绍他的笔友Peter。请你根据图片，帮助完成介绍。 This is my pen pal, Peter. He is 11 years old. He is from New Zealand. He goes to school by ______ . He likes ______ and doing kung fu. He often ______ sports on the weekend. He is going to be a ______. 7．请你也向Jim和Lily介绍一位你的笔友或朋友吧，不少于3句话。 This is my pen pal/ friend. He/ She . 8．【新题型·思维导图】书面表达。 某英语报社正在开展“我爱我家”的征文活动，请以 “My Family” 为题，根据思维导图提示，用英语来介绍一下吧。要求：格式正确、条理清楚、语句通顺，不少于5个完整的句子。 My Family 9．书面表达。 Lily和家人计划在寒假去旅游，请根据给出的提示，以“A Happy Trip”为题写一篇短文，字数在40字左右。 Time: winter vacation Where: Beijing Who: parents, brother, Lily How: train, plane What: go to the museum, the Great Wall, the park A Happy Trip Winter vacation is coming. Lily is going to 10．书面表达：假如你是Jack，请你阅读上一题的来信后给Tim回一封信，内容包括你的爱好，父母信息，寒假计划等，不少于5句话。 参考词汇：play basketball, teacher, doctor, visit my grandparents, take a trip ... 参考句型：I like... My... is... He/ She works... I am going to... Dear Tim, I’m Jack. I live in Fengcheng. 11．写作。 马上要放寒假了，学校推出“宁海城区一日游City Walk”活动，以“City Walk is fun”为题，请先制定计划，然后行动打卡吧！要求：(1)写清去什么地方，将要做什么事情，可参考提示；(2)用合适的时态，40个词以上。 提示：Yuelong Hill跃龙山，Xiake Gym Park霞客体育公园，Ninghai Library宁海图书馆，Tianming Lake Park天明湖公园，City God Temple 城隍庙…… 12．书面表达。 请以“My dream job(我的梦想工作)”为题，结合自己的性格特点、兴趣爱好、擅长或经常做的事情等，写一写你将来的梦想工作。 要求：1. 围绕主题，条理清晰，语句通顺，时态正确，书写规范。 2. 不少于40词，题目已给出，不计入总词数。 参考句型：I am…    My hobby is…      I’m good at…    I often…     I want to be… My dream job 13．书面表达。 根据问题提示，以“Bob’s uncle”为题写一篇短文，至少五句话，可以适当发挥。 (开头已给出, 不计入总句数。) ●What does he do? ●How does he go to work? ●What are his hobbies? ●Where is he going? ●What is he going to do there? Bob’s uncle This is Bob’s uncle. 14．书面表达。 同学们，请根据自己的实际情况，写一写你和家人上学或上班的出行方式吧。 要求：1．文章中不能出现自己的真实姓名（可用Amy、Mike等替代）； 2．语句通顺，书写规范； 3．全文总计不少于6句话。 参考词汇: father, mother, brother, sister, go to school, goes to work, on foot, by bus, by bike, by car, by electric bike (电动自行车), by subway... Hello, my name is ______. I’m a student. I go to school __________. My father 15．【新题型·思维导图】你了解中国的传统节日吗？让我们一起走进 2023的春节和中秋节吧！请你根据导图和范文中的信息进行仿写，至少写五句，词汇供参考，可适当创新，注意卷面整洁。 参考词汇: Mid-Autumn Festival；Sept. 29th in 2023；autumn；cool；eat mooncakes；happy In China, there are some big festivals. My favourite festival is Spring Festival. It will be on Jan. 22nd in 2023. It’s in winter. The weather is cold, sometimes it’s snowy. We will get together. We’re going to eat Jiaozi. We will be excited about the festival! In China, there are some big festivals. 16．书面表达。 同学们，在过去的很长一段时间里，全民抗“疫”，涌现出许多感人的事迹和平凡伟大的人。长大之后，你想做什么样的工作呢？为了实现自己的梦想，你会怎么做呢？ 请以“Hobbies and jobs”为题目，写一写吧！要求：（1）条理清晰，语句连贯；（2）书写规范、清晰：（3）给出的提示词可以选用，也可不用，不少于50个单词。 （提示词：play football、read books、do Kung fu、cook、nurse、doctor、scientist、. head teacher、police officer、businessman等） Hobbies and jobs 参考答案 1．范文：     I am Lily. I like reading stories. I often go to school on foot. I want to be a pilot. I will study hard and stay healthy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍莉莉。阐述爱好，上学方式，梦想职业以及实现梦想的计划等。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：reading stories读故事，on foot步行，pilot飞行员，study hard努力学习，stay healthy保持健康 参考句型：I am…；I like…；I often…；I want to…；I will… 2．范文： Come and see my new pen pal. His name is Peter. He is 11. He is from Sydney. He goes to school by bus. He likes playing football and singing. He often plays football and reads stories. He wants to be a scientist. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格中的信息，介绍新笔友彼得。然后再阐述他的基本情况、上学方式、爱好特长、日常生活、理想职业等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Sydney悉尼，by bus坐公共汽车，playing football踢足球，singing唱歌，read stories读故事，scientist科学家 参考句型：His name is …； He is …；He goes to school …； He likes …；He often ...；He wants to be a ... 3．范文： My winter vacation plan        Winter vacation is coming. I have some plans for my winter vacation. First, I want to visit my grandparents with my parents, and we will eat delicious food together. Second, I plan to see a funny film on Sunday. Third, I will take a short trip to the mountain with my friends. Finally, I will finish my winter vacation homework carefully. I hope I can have a happy and meaningful winter vacation. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己的寒假计划，人称用第一人称，时态用一般将来时，同时注意句子数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：plans计划；visit探望；delicious美味的；film电影；finish完成；happy开心的 参考句型：I want to...；I plan to...；I will... 4．范文： Dear Tom, My name is Jim. I’m a postman. I work in a post office. I usually go to work by subway. I like reading books in my free time. I’m going to buy some books in the bookshop this weekend. What are you going to do this weekend? Yours, Jim 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己，包括姓名，工作，交通方式，工作地点，爱好以及周末计划。文章时态为一般现在时和一般将来时态，注意句意连贯，内容简洁并要符合题干的句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：postman邮递员，post office邮局，subway地铁，hobby爱好，weekend周末 参考句型： I’m...；I work...；I usually...；I like...；I’m going to... 5．范文：         A plan for Spring Festival        I’m going to clean my house with my parents and brother. My mother is going to cook delicious food. We’re going to have a big dinner together on February 9th. Next day, we’re going to visit relatives and friends. We will say “Happy New Year!” to each other. How happy! 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己的春节计划。可以写一写春节在什么时候，将要做什么事情等。注意文章为一般将来时态，句子单词数量要符合要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：clean my house 打扫我的房间，have a big dinner together 吃团圆饭，visit relatives and friends 走访亲朋好友 参考句型：I’m going to… ；We’re going to… 6．bus; singing; plays; coach 7．范文：     This is my pen pal. He is 12 years old. He is from the UK. He goes to school on foot. He likes drawing and playing football. He is going to be a PE teacher. 【导语】本文主要介绍笔友的个人信息及爱好等。 6．句意：他乘公交车去上学。根据图片是by bus乘公交车，故答案为bus。 句意：他喜欢唱歌和练功夫。根据图片可知是sing唱歌，like doing sth喜欢做某事，所以该空用动名词singing，故答案为singing。 句意：他经常在周末做运动。play sports做运动，主语是第三人称单数，时态是一般现在时，该空用第三人称单数plays，故答案为plays。 句意：他将成为一名教练。根据图片可知可以是coach教练，故答案为coach。 7．1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍笔友。阐述其个人信息及爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：on foot 步行，play football 踢足球，PE teacher 体育老师 参考句型：He is…；He goes to school…；He likes…；He is going to… 8．范文： My Family There are four people in my family. My father, my mother, my little brother and I. My father is tall and fat. He likes reading books. He is a manager in a factory. He goes to work by car everyday.  My mother is short and thin. She likes singing. She is a teacher in a school. She goes to work on foot. My little brother is short and cute. He studies in a kindergarden. He likes playing football. I am a primary school student. I like dacing and drawing. I want to be a dancer in the future. I love my family. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以 “My Family” 为题，根据所给的思维导图提示介绍你的家人，包括他们的职业，工作地点，上班的交通方式，爱好及外貌特征，内容可合理延伸，文中时态用一般现在时，注意句子表达要准确并符合题干要求的句子数量。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：read books读书，manager经理，factory工厂，thin瘦的，on foot步行，cute可爱的，kindergarten幼儿园，primary school小学，in the future将来 参考句型： There are … people in … family; My father/mother is…；… likes doing sth; 主语+goes to work by+交通工具 9．范文：                                                                A Happy Trip   Winter vacation is coming. Lily is going to travel to Beijing with her parents and brother. They will go there by train first. Then they will take a plane back. In Beijing, they will go to the museum to learn about history, visit the Great Wall and go to the park to relax. They will have a happy trip! 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示，以“A Happy Trip”为题写一篇短文，字数在40字左右。注意句子时态为一般将来时。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：parents父母，brother哥哥/弟弟，train火车，plane飞机，go to the museum去博物馆，the Great Wall长城，the park公园 参考句型：They will go there…；Then they will…；In Beijing, they will…；They will… 10．例文： Dear Tim, I’m Jack. I live in Fengcheng. I am a student. I like playing basketball. My father is a teacher. He works in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. Winter holiday is coming. I am going to visit my grandparents with my father and mother. And we are going to take a trip. We will be very happy. Yours, Jack 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求给朋友写一封回信，内容包括爱好，父母信息和寒假计划等，人称主要用第一人称，时态用一般现在时态，同时注意句子数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：play basketball打篮球；teacher老师；school学校；doctor医生；hospital医院；winter holiday寒假；visit my grandparents看望我的(外)祖父母；take a trip去旅行 参考句型：I like...；My father/mother is a...；He/she works...； I am going to... 11．范文： City Walk is fun    The winter holiday is coming. We will have a city walk in Haining. We are going to Yuelong Hill. We will go hiking there. Then we will go to the Ninghai Library. We are going to have a rest there and read some books. Next, we will go to the Tianming Lake Park. We will have a picnic. At last, we will visit the City God Temple and enjoy the beautiful view. 【详解】1. 题干解读： 该题目要求以“City Walk is fun”为题，写一写要去的地方及将要做的事情，注意文章时态为一般将来时并符合单词数量要求。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：The winter holiday寒假，city walk城市步行，go hiking去徒步旅行，have a rest休息一下，have a picnic吃野餐，enjoy the beautiful view欣赏美景 参加句型：We will have…；We are going to… 12．范文： My dream job I’m Mike. I’m friendly. My hobby is playing football. And I’m good at it. I often play football with my good friends on the weekend. I want to be a football player. I should work hard. I think I can be a good football player one day. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求结合自己的性格特点、兴趣爱好、擅长或经常做的事情等，以“My dream job(我的梦想工作)”为题，写一写自己将来的梦想工作。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：friendly友好的，play football踢足球，be good at擅长，on the weekend在周六，football player足球运动员，work hard努力工作 参考句型：I am…；My hobby is…；I’m good at…；I often…； I want to be… 13．范文：                                                                Bob’s uncle This is Bob’s uncle. He is a businessman. He goes to work by car. He likes playing football. He is going to America. He is going there to do business. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Bob’s uncle”为题写一篇短文。然后再阐述职业，交通方式，爱好，要去哪及要做什么。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：businessman商人，by bus开车，play football踢足球，America美国，do business做生意 参考句型：He is …； He goes to work …；He likes …； He is going to … 14．范文： Hello, my name is Amy. I’m a student. I go to school on foot. My father is a worker. He goes to work by bus. My mother is a teacher. She goes to school by electric bike. My brother is a student, too. He goes to school on foot, too. 【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己及其家人上学或上班的出行方式。可注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：father爸爸；mother妈妈；brother哥哥；go to school去上学；goes to work去上班； on foot步行；by bus乘公交车；by electric bike 骑电动自行车 参考句型：I go to school…；My father is…；He goes to work…；My mother is…；She goes to work... 15．范文： In China, there are some big festivals. My favourite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival. It will be on Sept. 29th in 2023. It’s in autumn. The weather is cool. We will get together. We’re going to eat mooncakes. We will be happy about the festival! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称仿写介绍中国传统节日。注意文章顺序，主题明确，书写工整，不少于五句话，注意大小写，时态为一般将来时。 2.参考词汇和句型 参考词汇：Mid-Autumn中秋，cool凉爽的，mooncakes月饼，happy开心的，festival节日。 参考句型：my favourite festival is ...；the weather is...；we’re going to... 16．范文： Hobbies and jobs I am a person with a variety of hobbies and interests. I like PE, music and reading. I especially like doing sports. Such as football, basketball, badminton, table tennis and so on. Sports can make me strong. I will be a PE teacher in the future. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍爱好和工作。然后介绍自己的爱好，以及长大后想做什么样的工作，为了实现自己的梦想，你会怎么做呢。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型 参考单词： hobbies爱好； music音乐；reading阅读；doing sports做运动；football足球，table tennis乒乓球；strong强壮的；in the future在将来 参考句型：I am... ； I like...；Sports can make me...；I will be... 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $