专题10 书面表达（专项训练）五年级英语寒假专项提升（外研版一起）

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 一、审题搭框架，不跑题 1. 明确题型与要点 先圈出题目要求的核心信息（如介绍朋友需写 “外貌、爱好、特长”，介绍房间需写 “物品位置”），避免遗漏得分点。 2. 套用固定结构 · 介绍类短文 开头：点明对象（This is my best friend Lily./This is my bedroom.） 中间：分述特征（用比较级写外貌She is taller than me.、用时态写动作She is reading a book now.、用方位词写位置There is a desk near the window.） 结尾：表达感受（I like her very much./My bedroom is so nice.） · 日常活动类 开头：定场景 / 时间（On weekends, I usually have a busy day.） 中间：按顺序写动作（用first/then/next衔接，如First, I get up. Then I do my homework.） 结尾：总结心情（I feel happy on weekends.） · 应用文（便条 / 贺卡） 便条：顶格写称呼（Dear Tom,）→ 正文说事由 → 右下角署名（Your friend, Amy） 贺卡：开头祝福语（Happy Teachers’ Day!）→ 正文表感谢 / 祝福 → 署名 二、加分小技巧 1. 适当加入课本固定短语（listen to music/next to），让语句更地道； 2. 用 1-2 个修饰词（a cute cat/a big desk）丰富内容，避免句子干瘪； 3. 保持卷面整洁，单词书写工整，减少涂改。 小试牛刀 1．书面表达。 请以My weekend plan为题，写一篇文章介绍自己的周末计划。 要求：1.用be going to句型。 2.不少于40词。 3.思路清晰，语句通顺和标点符号正确。 2．书面表达。 班会后，老师布置了一篇写作作业。要求大家以“Last Sunday”为题，写一写自己上周日的活动与感受！ 参考词汇：no classes, last Sunday, park, by bus, flowers, hungry, hamburger, sausage, thirsty, water/juice, happy 参考句型： I had... I went to... I saw.. I was... I ate... I drank... I was... 要求：1. 书写工整、语句通顺、语法正确。2. 不少于40个词。 Last Sunday 3．书面表达。 请以“My school”为题， 写一写你们学校这几年的变化！ 要求：语句通顺, 语法正确，不少于5句话。 参考句型：There was / were…before. There is / are…now. before now trees lots of, little tall playground small big …… …… …… 4．书面表达。 春节即将来临，这是我们最重要最喜爱的一个传统节日，请你以The Spring Festival为题，向你的朋友介绍一下中国的春节。 要求：1. 要点全面，观点正确，语义连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。 5．【新题型·思维导图】作文。 Sam参加“雪精灵”主题冬令营志愿者招募，需要录制一份V-log(短视频)，介绍上周末的经历和感受，并为冬令营的活动规则提供至少两个金点子。请根据思维导图和参考词汇帮助Sam撰写底稿。 word bank：not be late, bring warm clothes, wear masks(戴口罩), listen to teachers be kind be helpful 要求：不少于5句话，70个词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m Sam. 6．请以 Class Rules 为题，制定班级规则。 参考词汇：be quiet, study hard, read books, do your homework, eat, be late, run or jump ... 参考句型：You should...    You shouldn’t... 要求：1. 书写工整、语句通顺，语法正确。2. 不少于6句话。 Class Rules 7．寒假生活就要开始了，请根据以下提示写写你的假期计划。 内容包括：起床和睡觉的时间；读几本书；其它打算要做的事情等。 要求：1. 必须包含所有内容提示。 2. 语言连贯，不少于5句话。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总句数。 The winter vacation (假期) is coming. 8．假如你叫Li Ping，你的美国笔友Susan刚刚给你发来邮件，想了解一下中国学生学校生活的一些基本情况，那么接下来就请你赶紧动笔写封邮件告诉她吧。 内容提示： 1. How do you sit in class in China? 2. What do you often do in the morning and in the afternoon? 3. What time do you usually start and finish school? 具体要求： 1. 内容完整，语言通顺，层次清晰。 2. 卷面整洁，字迹工整，注意大小写和标点符号，可以适当发挥。 3. 40词左右，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Susan, I’m glad to get your email. I’m good. How are you doing? As I know, you want to know something about our school life. Now let me tell you. School is fun in our China. What about yours? Please reply. Love, Li Ping 9．你是Xiaoyong，下周将是你的朋友Daming的生日，请你写一写生日当天你们的打算吧。 要求：1. 语法正确，逻辑清晰，语意连贯，结构完整，书写规范。 2. 内容完整，不少于五句话。 3. 不能出现真实姓名和校名。 10．书面表达。 与同学们说说你最喜欢的节日，并介绍这个节日。 参考句型：1. My favourite festival is... 2. We eat... 3. We can... 要求：1. 注意大小写及标点符号。  2. 字迹工整，语法规范。 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺。          4. 字数不少于40个词。 My favourite festival 参考答案 1．例文： My weekend plan I’m going to have a busy but happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents. We’re going to have lunch together. In the afternoon, I’m going to read books in the library. On Sunday, I’m going to clean my room first. Then, I’m going to play football with my friends. I’m sure I’ll have a great time! 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以My weekend plan为题，用be going to句型介绍周末计划，需不少于40词，思路清晰、语句通顺。 参考词汇与句型：      参考词汇：visit grandparents看望祖父母，have lunch吃午餐，read books读书，clean the room打扫房间，play football踢足球；      参考句型：I’m going to...；On Saturday/Sunday, I’m going to...；We’re going to...；Then, I’m going to... 2．范文： Last Sunday I had no classes last Sunday. I went to the park by bus. I saw many beautiful flowers. I was hungry. I ate a hamburger and a sausage. I was thirsty too. I drank some water. I was very happy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Last Sunday”为题，用第一人称写一篇短文。包括去了哪里、交通方式、吃的食物以及活动的感受等等。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：no classes没有课，last Sunday上周日，park公园，by bus坐公共汽车，flowers花，hungry饿的，hamburger汉堡包，sausage香肠，thirsty渴的，water水，juice果汁，happy高兴的 参考句型：I had…；I went to…；I saw…； I was…；I ate...；I drank... 3．范文： My school Look, this is a picture of our school. There was a small playground before, but now there is a big playground. There were lots of small trees before, but now they are big and tall. There wasn’t a computer or a TV in the classroom before. But now there is a computer and a TV in the classroom. Our school is beautiful now. I like my school. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My school”为题，利用参考句型和图片，写出学校近几年的变化，注意文章时态为一般过去时和一般现在时，同时要符合语法和字数要求。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：before以前，now现在，tree树，playground操场，computer计算机，classroom教师 参考句型：There was / were…before.；There is / are...now. 4．范文： The Spring Festival The Spring Festival is important in China. It is my favorite festival. It’s a winter festival. It usually comes in January or February. Before the Spring Festival, people are very busy. We clean our houses and buy a lot of things. During the festival, families get together. We wear new clothes. We have big meals. We eat jiaozi. We set off fireworks. We watch TV. We play with our friends. Children can get lucky money. We say “Guo nian hao! ”to each other. We all have a good time! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“The Spring Festival”为题，向朋友介绍中国的春节，注意文章为一般现在时态，不得出现真实的人名或校名，书写规范并符合要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：important重要的，favourite festival最喜欢的节日，winter festival冬季节日，January一月，February二月，during在……期间，set off fireworks放烟花，lucky money压岁钱 参考句型：The Spring Festival is…；It usually comes in…；Before the Spring Festival…；During the festival…；We…；We all have a good time! 5．范文： Hello, everyone! I’m Sam. Last weekend, I went to the zoo with my father. We saw lots of animals there. I like pandas and monkeys best. I took some photos of them. We had a good time. For the winter camp, I think we should be kind and helpful. We should listen to teachers and don’t be late. We should bring warm clothes and wear masks. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以Sam的名义撰写参加冬令营志愿者的底稿，介绍上周末的经历和感受，并为冬令营的活动规则提供至少两个金点子。注意介绍上周末经历和感受是一般过去时。满足词数及句数的要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：took some photos拍照，had a good time玩的愉快，kind and helpful善良且乐于助人，listen to teachers听老师的话，don’t be late别迟到，bring warm clothes带上保暖的衣服，wear masks戴上口罩 参考句型：I’m…；I went…；We saw…；I like…best；For the winter camp, I think we should… 6．范文： Class Rules You should be quiet in class! You should study hard and read books in class! You should do your homework in class! You shouldn’t be late for class! You shouldn’t eat food in class! You shouldn’t run or jump in class! 【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍班级规则。可以做些什么以及不可以做些什么。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：be quiet安静的；study hard努力学习；read books读书；do your homework做作业；eat吃；be late迟到；run or jump跑或跳； 参考句型：You should…；You shouldn’t…； 7．范文： The winter vacation (假期) is coming. During the winter holiday, I'm going to get up at seven o'clock. I'm going to go to bed at nine o'clock. I will read four books. I'm going to visit my grandparents in Hainan. I will swim in the sea. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写一写自己的寒假计划。然后再阐述寒假的作息时间，读几本书，要去哪，做什么。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：get up起床，go to bed去睡觉，grandparents祖父母，Hainan海南 参考句型：During the winter holiday, I'm going to …； I will …；I am going to …； 8．范文： Dear Susan, I’m glad to get your email. I’m good. How are you doing? As I know, you want to know something about our school life. Now let me tell you. In China, we sit in lines in class. In the morning, we often have classes and do morning exercises. In the afternoon, we still have classes and play games. We usually start school at 8:20 and finish school at 4:30. School is fun in our China. What about yours? Please reply. Love, Li Ping 【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求以Li Ping的身份，写一封邮件给美国的笔友Susan，向她介绍一中国学生学校生活的基本情况。开头和结尾已给出，中间可以根据提示内容，写一写课堂座位排列方式，上午和下午的课程安排，上学放学时间等内容。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：sit in lines 成排坐；have classes上课；do morning exercises做早操；play games玩游戏；start开始；finish结束； 参考句型：In China, we...in class.；In the morning / afternoon, we often...；We usually star school at...and finish school at...； 9．范文： Hello, I’m Xiaoyong. My friend Daming’s birthday is coming next week. I am going to give him a surprise. We are going to have a birthday party for him. We are going to take some food and fruits to the party. I will give him a present. He likes reading. So I will give him a book. Next we will sing and dance at the party. We will be very happy that day. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出你的朋友Daming的生日，然后再阐述生日当天自己的打算。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：surprise惊喜，birthday party生日聚会，present礼物，sing and dance唱歌和跳舞 参考句型：I am going to…；We are going to…；I / We will… 10．范文：                                                                My favourite festival My favourite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s a very important Chinese festival. It’s usually in September or October. We often get together to have a big dinner. We eat mooncakes. We can watch the moon. We often have a good time. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My favourite festival”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述最喜欢的节日是什么，在该节日吃什么，做什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节，important重要的，Chinese中国的，September九月，October十月，get together聚在一起，mooncake月饼，watch the moon赏月 参考句型：My favourite festival is …；It’s …；We often …；We eat ...；We can ... 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $