第16讲 一、个人成长-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

In the survey,"career prospects"emerges as the most significant,accounting for 35%of the decision-making process. This shows the practical approach many applicants adopt when selecting their academic major.They seek majors that do not necessarily correspond to the trends but offer opportunities for advancement,competitive salaries,and stability. Different factors mean different preferences.Individuals are seeking paths that lead to their own goals. 二、图画作文 参考范文： Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people's life in recent years. In the past,people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What's more,people have easy access to the Internet,which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes,even if they are in two different continents. In a word,people have an easier life nowadays 三、评论 参考范文： The online class was absolutely wonderful.Themed on the Appreciation of Classic Poetry,it unfolded the etemal charm of classic poetry to us.Online as it was,this class created a totally immersive atmosphere. The highlight of the class was the short clip named "When Li Bai Meets William Wordsworth".By comparing the differences and similarities of these two great romantic poets,the video gave us a new insight into their writing skills and the emotions hidden behind the lines.It also triggered our passion to explore more about the ever-lasting beauty of poems. Honestly,it would be better if more interactive elements,such as mini-games or real-time comments,are included in this class Generally speaking,it was truly fantastic. 第五部分写作之读后续写 第15讲续写有方法一如何写 I.翻译句子 1.She had expected to be the last one to cross the finish line,but instead she had come in the middle of the pack. 2.Eva realized that she had underestimated her own abilities. 3.She also learned a valuable lesson:sometimes,the only way to overcome a challenge is to break it into smaller,more manageable parts. 4.This experience gave her a new sense of confidence in her abilities and laid a solid foundation for her to face other challenges in the future. 5.Confident and adventurous,she focused on learning the routes to her classes and the cafeteria instead of trying to memorize the entire layout of the building at once. 一 1 6.She also made a point of exploring the building during her free time,so that she could gradually become familiar with the different hallways and rooms. 7.With this new strategy,Eva found that the school building was no longer a source of stress for her. 8.In fact,she even began to enjoy exploring the different parts of the building and discovering new places. 9.Reflecting on the series of accomplishments,she was fully aware that with a willing heart,a workable strategy,as well as immediate action,nothing is impossible! Ⅱ.连句成篇 When Coach Pitt said "Nice work !to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.She had expected to be the last one to cross the finish line,but instead she had come in the middle of the pack.Eva realized that she had underestimated her own abilities.She also learned a valuable lesson:sometimes,the only way to overcome a challenge is to break it into smaller,more manageable parts.This experience gave her a new sense of confidence in her abilities and laid a solid foundation for her to face other challenges in the future. Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building.Confident and adventurous,she focused on learning the routes to her classes and the cafeteria instead of trying to memorize the entire layout of the building at once.She also made a point of exploring the building during her free time,so that she could gradually become familiar with the different hallways and rooms. With this new strategy,Eva found that the school building was no longer a source of stress for her.In fact,she even began to enjoy exploring the different parts of the building and discovering new places.Reflecting on the series of accomplishments,she was fully aware that with a willing heart,a workable strategy,as well as immediate action,nothing is impossible! 第16讲读后续写话题演练 一、个人成长 步骤二：思 作者一直把自己深深埋在地下，甚至扼杀自己的成长和潜力。 (心理活动描写) 应该像松树一样向外生长，踏出自己的舒适区。 决定参加艺术营，告知妈妈自已的决定。（与前文协同）》 一开始遇到陌生人很紧张。 慢慢地走出舒适区，和同样热爱艺术的人成为朋友，共同探讨艺 术，个人得到成长。很快艺术营接近尾声，作者带着友谊和成长 回来。 最强劲的成长往往来自对未知世界的探索。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.With Mr Weston's comment lingering in my mind,I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep,suffocating my growth and potential,no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. 2.Unknowingly,I had always turned a deaf ear,forgetting to spread my roots outward,to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. 3.Encouraged by Mr Weston's words,I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out 4.Maybe,just like the pine,I needed to branch out and grow in a different direction to flourish. 参考答案 答。 5.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"I'm so proud of you,Tessa.You're going to have an amazing time." 6.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm. 7.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art. 8.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together. 9.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. 10.The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. Ⅱ.连句成篇 His words made me pause and think.With Mr Weston's comment lingering in my mind,I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep,suffocating my growth and potential,no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. Unknowingly,I had always tumed a deaf ear,forgetting to spread my roots outward,to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. Encouraged by Mr Weston's words,I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out.Maybe,just like the pine,I needed to branch out and grow in a different direction to flourish.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"Im so proud of you,Tessa. You're going to have an amazing time. The next Monday,I signed up for the camp.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. 二、亲情友情 步骤二：思 Danny心理描写：惊讶（男孩回来做什么）但是不生气。 小男孩道歉，Danny表示理解。 两个人成为好朋友，开心去夜行。 父亲看到快乐的Danny的反应。 Danny和父亲分享在度假营期间发生的事情。 Danny意识到宽恕、理解和给别人机会的重要性。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. 2.Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down. 3.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture. 4.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen. 5.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk. 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ 1 6.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt. 7.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. 8.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy,he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm. 9.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement, eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend. 10."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable ! Danny exclaimed enthusiastically. 11.With a teasing grin,Father replied,"Well done,lad!So, according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?" 12.Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp. 13.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset. Ⅱ.连句成篇 As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt approaching him.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerfiu Danny.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy, he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement,eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable!"Danny exclaimed enthusiastically.With a teasing grin,Father replied, "Well done,lad!So,according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?"Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset 三、互助友善 步骤二：思 思考老人的话语，看看身边的两个平凡英雄，明白老人讲的道理， 决定做没有超能力的英雄。 用自己辛苦赚来的钱帮助那个无家可归的人，不买小塑像而是买 吃的东西。 冲回去找那个无家可归的人一—寒风中瑟瑟发抖的女人。 夜色中行人匆匆，没有人为她停留。 Tommy把买的东西给她，女人感谢Tommy。 真正的超级英雄不需要超能力，而是有一颗帮助他人的心。 2第16讲 读后续写话题演练 一、个人成长 (2024·广东广州模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 步骤一：读 This Friday brought a mix of emotions-both excitement and disappointment- all because of a flyer from school.When I got home,Mum saw the flyer in my hand and asked,"What's this?" “A flyer for a five-day art camp,”I explained.“But Emily can'tgo.” “Would you like to attend?”Mum asked.“You've always loved art.”Her读要素] words reminded me of what Emily had said earlier,"DTessa.you're the real When:Friday artist.My brother thought the roses I painted were rocket ships."I sighed.Mum Where:Tessa's home and outside near the Westons patted my back.2She knew I had a hard time jumping into something with nopine tree familiar faces around.“Maybe next year.” Who:Tessa,her mother,Emily,Mr Weston ③“Maybe,.”I echoed..Then I told Mum I wanted to go outside to draw the What:Tessa considered attending an art camp but was Westons'pine tree )She nodded with an encouraging smile. unsure due to shyness.She drew a pine tree,receiving As I walked into the bright sunshine,I couldn't help but think about the art praise and knowledge from Mr Weston. camp.I wished I felt a little bit braver.Emily could make friends with a whole Why:Tessa received the flyer about the art camp from bus of kids in ten minutes,5but my stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a school. heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers...By the time I started drawing,I [读主题 had made up my mind to forget about the art camp. 人与自我—勇敢尝试，勇于挑战自我可以改变 I began by drawing the pine tree's strong and straight trunk,and then added 自己。 the beautiful branches,making sure the upper ones lifted gently towards the sun. 读人物] ⑥Lost in my work,I jumped when I heard Mr Weston speak up,⑦“You've ①作者热爱艺术，有艺术天赋。 done a great job showing the strength of that tree on paper." ④作者性格比较胆小。 “Thanks,”I smiled,glancing up. ⑦Mr Weston的赞关再一次证明作者的艺术天赋。 As I drew the needles to the branches.Mr Weston told me something I never [读冲突] knew about pines:8If you plant the root ball too deep,the tree dies.Their roots ②作者不擅长和陌生人交往。（冲突1） grow out,not down-to get enough water and grow tall. ③作者想去，但是害怕和陌生人相处。（冲突2） "You have a good eye,Tessa.With these words,Mr Weston nodded [读伏笔] goodbye. ⑧像松树向外才能生长一样，作者需要勇敢走出舒适 注意： 区，直面自己的恐惧，才能成长。 1.续写词数应为150左右； 读语言] 2.请按如下格式作答。 ⑤心理描写，表示紧张。 His words made me pause and think. ⑥形容词短语作状语。 ⑦直接引语的使用。 ⑧暗喻的使用。 The next Monday,I signed up for the camp. -125- 第五部分写作之读后续写 步骤二：思 The next Monday,I signed up for the camp. His words made me pause and think. 6.当我走进一个满是陌生面孔的房间时，我的胃仍然感 衔接句： 觉像一只在狂风暴雨中颠簸的小船。（时间状语从 过渡句： 句；比喻) 衔接句： The next Monday,I signed up for the camp. 7.但随着时间的流逝，我发现自己放开了，和其他跟我 衔接句： 一样热爱艺术的营员交朋友。(with复合结构；定语 从句) 过渡句： 升华句： 步骤三：写 8.出乎我的意料，我们甚至一起探索了新的技术和风 I.翻译句子 格。(beyond) His words made me pause and think. L.Weston先生的话语萦绕在我的脑海中，我意识到，不 管我多少次被告知我在绘画方面的天赋，我都把自己 9.不知不觉，艺术营接近尾声，但我带着对自己的新信 的根埋得太深了，扼杀了我的成长和潜力。(wth复 心和新的友谊离开了。（并列句） 合结构；no matter+疑问词) 10.Weston家院子里那棵高耸的松树不断提醒着我，最 2.不知不觉中，我总是置若罔闻，忘记了向外伸展自己 强劲的成长往往来自对未知世界的冒险。（定语 的根，忘记了寻找营养，忘记了触摸天空。（现在分词 从句) 短语作状语) Ⅱ.连句成篇 3.在Weston先生的话的鼓舞下，我决定重新审视自己 His words made me pause and think. 的生活方式，并开始拓展自己的领域。（过去分词短 语作状语) 4.也许，就像松树一样，我需要伸出手，向外伸展，才能 茁壮成长。（比喻） The next Monday,I signed up for the camp. 5.那天晚上晚些时候，当我告诉妈妈我的决定时，她给 了我一个温暖的拥抱，说：“我真为你骄傲，Tessa。你 会玩得很开心的。”（时间状语从句） 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -126-