第16讲 五、遇险获救-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him 2.Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and excitement. 3.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected heroes, Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated shopkeeper lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter. 4.The moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream- to own a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around him,Tommy felt his face burning. 5.Naturally,the money earned by walking his neighbor's dog didn't go to any superman figurine. 6.Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a heavy shopping bag full of stuff. 7.Focusing on nothing but the homeless woman on the pavement, Tommy was racing back as fast as he could. 8.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf. 9.As it was snowing harder and harder,people were going down the hustling and bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before. 10.No sooner had Tommy approached her than he stuffed the shopping bag into her hands. 11."Good evening.You may need this."With these words, Tommy left for his warm home. 12.Seeing Tommy off in the dark night,the woman murmured "thanks"again and again,tears of gratitude blurring her eyes. 13.On that cold and snowy night,little Tommy became a hero for the homeless woman. 14.It also dawned on him that to be a superhero only needs a willing heart rather than a superpower. Ⅱ.连句成篇 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him. Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and excitement.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected heroes,Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated shopkeeper lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter.The moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream-to own a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around him, Tommy felt his face burning.Naturally,the money earned by walking his neighbor's dog didn't go to any superman figurine. Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a heavy shopping bag full of stuff.Focusing on nothing but the homeless woman on the pavement,Tommy was racing back as fast as he could. The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf.As it was snowing harder and harder,people were going down the hustling and bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before.No sooner had Tommy approached her than he stuffed the shopping bag into her hands."Good evening.You may need this."With these words, Tommy left for his warm home.Seeing Tommy off in the dark night,the woman murmured "thanks"again and again,tears of gratitude blurring her eyes.On that cold and snowy night,little Tommy became a hero for the homeless woman.It also dawned on him that to be a superhero only needs a willing heart rather than a superpower. 一 1 四、逸闻趣事 步骤二：思 回到家，汉娜继续阅读：第二天，她又去了小屋，读更多的书。 沉浸在阅读的魅力中，汉娜了解了更多知识。 汉娜决心与她的村民分享阅读的力量 汉娜将此作为她的任务，天天在她的小屋里讲故事，但是只有朋 友和家人来听。 经过努力，逐渐地来听的人越来越多。汉娜成功地激发了人们对 阅读的兴趣。 分享你的技能不仅能帮助你自已，也能成为那些在寻找方向时挣 扎的人的一线希望。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.She went home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales hidden in the book. 2.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read more books. 3.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as if Hannah opened the doors to a much bigger outside world-literature,art, science and history. 4.Books offered her endless inspiration and Hannah determined to share the power of reading with the people of her village. 5.Making this her task,Hannah started telling tales every day at her cottage,but only her best friends and family came to the readings. 6.So,Hannah invited the few people who could read and write to join them together. 7.Before long,the word of their famous tales spread through the village,appealing to more and more people to attend the readings. 8.Gradually,Hannah successfully aroused people's interest in reading and the old cottage became a paradise for reading 9.Sharing your skill will not only help yourself,but also be a ray of hope for someone struggling to find their way. Ⅱ.连句成篇 So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.She went home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales hidden in the book.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read more books.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as if Hannah opened the doors to a much bigger outside world- literature,art,science and history.Books offered her endless inspiration and Hannah determined to share the power of reading with the people of her village. She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she wanted to share the "gold"with everyone.Making this her task,Hannah started telling tales every day at her cottage,but only her best friends and family came to the readings.So,Hannah invited the few people who could read and write to join them together.Before long,the word of their famous tales spread through the village,appealing to more and more people to attend the readings.Gradually,Hannah successfully aroused people's interest in reading and the old cottage became a paradise for reading.Sharing your skill will not only help yourself,but also be a ray of hope for someone struggling to find their way. 五、遇险获救 步骤二：思 可以借鉴原文第一段，用拟人修辞手法描述主人公的绝望。 出乎主人公预料的是—救授队出现。 主人公惊讶纳闷，寻求解释。 3- 参考答案 救援人员的解释让主人公恍然大悟。 主人公得救，驶离岛屿。 希望会浴火重生。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.The cry of misery and desperation echoed through the air as he fell to his knees,tears mingling with the salty sea wind. 2.His prayers were seemingly unanswered and now,even the shelter he had painstakingly constructed lay in ruins 3.Not only did the fire consume the tangible evidence of his perseverance,but it also destroyed the fragile hope that had kept him going. 4.In the depths of despair,the survivor slept restlessly 5.But as the first rays of dawn painted the sky,he was awakened by the sound of a ship that was approaching the island. 6.Half in disbelief and half with hope in his weary eyes,before him stood rescuers. 7.Bewildered,he asked,"How did you know I was here?" 8.It dawned on the survivor that what seemed like a tragedy,the loss of his meager possessions and shelter,had unintentionally become a beacon that guided the rescue. 9.As he boarded the ship,leaving the island behind,the survivor looked back one last time. 10.The island,now fading into the horizon,as well as the burnt remains of the shelter stood as the witness of his perseverance. 11.The ship carried the survivor towards a new chapter and the survivor carried with him a firm belief that sometimes hope could emerge from the ashes,so it's crucial not to lose heart even if in the darkest moments. Ⅱ.连句成篇 "God,how could you do this to me !he cried.The cry of misery and desperation echoed through the air as he fell to his knees, tears mingling with the salty sea wind.His prayers were seemingly unanswered and now,even the shelter he had painstakingly constructed lay in ruins.Not only did the fire consume the tangible evidence of his perseverance,but it also destroyed the fragile hope that had kept him going.In the depths of despair,the survivor slept restlessly.But as the first rays of dawn painted the sky,he was awakened by the sound of a ship that was approaching the island. Half in disbelief and half with hope in his weary eyes,before him stood rescuers.Bewildered,he asked,"How did you know I was here?" The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke signal from the burning shelter.It dawned on the survivor that what seemed like a tragedy,the loss of his meager possessions and shelter,had unintentionally become a beacon that guided the rescue.As he boarded the ship,leaving the island behind,the survivor looked back one last time.The island,now fading into the horizon,as well as the bumt remains of the shelter stood as the witness of his perseverance.The ship carried the survivor towards a new chapter and the survivor carried with him a firm belief that sometimes hope could emerge from the ashes,so it's crucial not to lose heart even if in the darkest moments. 六、人与动物 步骤二：思 不确定性是什么，为什么？ 在Sarah的指令下，还有在训练中心学到的技能的帮助下，Buddy 慢慢适应了新的挑战，使不确定变成确定。 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ 一 1 目睹着Buddy慢慢适应，Saah坚信Buddy一定能融人这些孩子。 a remarkable change是什么？Buddy不再胆小，不再被遗弃；自闭 症儿童克服社会沟通困难，有了面部表情和手势。 有自闭症的孩子们变得乐观开朗，能够和他人进行交流。 人狗互愈，Sarah治愈了小狗，小狗治愈了有自闭症的孩子。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.It was the first time that Buddy had been left to help the children with autism alone at a brand new circumstance. 2.Initially,Buddy was cautious and uncertain of the new environment,while the children stared at him with wide eyes, unsure of what to expect. 3.Upon noticing the unease among them,Sarah stepped out instantly,gave him commands soothingly and instructed him patiently to approach one of the children. 4.The moment Buddy was introduced to the first child,something magical happened. 5.The child's face lit up with a smile,and Buddy nuzzled gently against his hand,as if sensing his need for comfort. 6.Having seen such a scene,Sarah was convinced that Buddy was bound to settle into the group and make a positive impact. 7.Obviously,the once shy and scared dog had transformed into a confident and courageous companion,bringing company and comfort to the children he interacted with. 8.The children,in turn,showed remarkable progress in their social skills and communication,with some even expressing themselves through gestures and facial expressions. 9.It was heartwarming to witness the bond that had formed between Buddy and the children. 10.It was also uplifting to witness that a journey of healing and transformation turned out to be another one,proving that sometimes the best healers are those who have experienced pain themselves. Ⅱ.连句成篇 Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty. It was the first time that Buddy had been left to help the children with autism alone at a brand new circumstance.Initially,Buddy was cautious and uncertain of the new environment,while the children stared at him with wide eyes,unsure of what to expect.Upon noticing the unease among them,Sarah stepped out instantly,gave him commands soothingly and instructed him patiently to approach one of the children.The moment Buddy was introduced to the first child,something magical happened.The child's face lit up with a smile,and Buddy nuzzled gently against his hand,as if sensing his need for comfort.Having seen such a scene,Sarah was convinced that Buddy was bound to settle into the group and make a positive impact. As the weeks progressed,Sarah noticed a remarkable change both in the children and Buddy.Obviously,the once shy and scared dog had transformed into a confident and courageous companion, bringing company and comfort to the children he interacted with. The children,in turn,showed remarkable progress in their social skills and communication,with some even expressing themselves through gestures and facial expressions.It was heartwarming to witness the bond that had formed between Buddy and the children.It was also uplifting to witness that a journey of healing and transformation turned out to be another one,proving that sometimes the best healers are those who have experienced pain themselves.五、遇险获救 (2024·重庆模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 步骤一：读 The waves crashed heavily against the rocks,the stormy sea swallowing the once powerful ship.The only survivor of the shipwreck was brought by the currents to the shore of a small,uninhabited island.1His desperate cries for help mixed with the roar of the storm.only to be swallowed by the ocean. 2Exhausted and disoriented,he lay on the sandy beach,thanking whatever forces had saved his life.After he surveyed the surroundings,he realized the harsh reality of 读要索] his isolation.3He prayed and scanned the horizon for any sign of rescue,but no help When:after a shipwreck.over some months appeared.In the midst of despair,he gradually awakened to the fact that he had to Where:an uninhabited island survive on this uninhabited island on his own.Driven by great determination.the Who:a shipwreck survivor survivor managed to build a shelter with the driftwood to protect him from the What:the survivor's struggle for survival elements,and to store his few possessions. Why:The shipwreck was caused by a storm. 5Days turned into weeks,and weeks into months.The survivor,once stuck in [读主题] his isolation,started exploring the island's hidden treasures.His routine became a dull 人与自然 逆境中的求生意志与自我超越 cycle of hunting for food,collecting rainwater,and scanning the horizon for any sign 读人物] of rescue.But the vast expanse of the ocean offered no comfort,no ship on the horizon ④体现了主人公在逆境中的坚韧不拔和自力更 to save him. 生的精神。 Despite his loneliness,the survivor clung to hope.The sunrises brought a ⑦体现了主人公充满希望、乐观的精神。 glimmer of optimism,and he kept scanning the horizon,searching for any trace of 读冲突] rescue. 本文的矛盾冲突主要体现在主人公所面临的生 Then,one fateful day,as he retumed from a fruitless search for food,8he wa 存挑战与他自身求生欲望之间的对抗。 greeted by a devastating sight-his shelter was on fire,and the smoke was rolling up to 读伏笔] the sky!The worst had happened-the fire had consumed all his possessions,leaving ③为续写部分的获救埋下了伏笔。 him nothing but the clothes on his back.Desperation and disbelief seized him as he ⑧这是主人公有幸得救的关键。 watched the smoke rise to the sky,a cruel demonstration of his misfortune. 读语言1 注意： ①情感描写+拟人修辞，凸显出幸存者的绝望。 1.续写词数应为150左右： ②形容词短语作状语。 2.请按如下格式作答。 ④过去分词短语作状语 "God,how could you do this to me !he cried. ⑤语言简洁有力，体现了时间慢慢拉长。 ⑥三个动名词短语体现了无聊循环的日常活动。 ⑨现在分词短语作结果状语， 0无灵主语句。 The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke signal from the burning shelter. 步骤二：思 The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke “God,how could you do this to me”he cried. signal from the burning shelter. 衔接句： 衔接句： 过渡句： 过渡句： 衔接句 升华句： -133- 第五部分写作之读后续写 步骤三：写 9.当他登上船，离开岛时，幸存者最后一次回头看了一 I.翻译句子 眼。（时间状语从句；现在分词短语作状语） “God,how could you do this to me”he cried. 1.当他跪倒在地，泪水和咸咸的海风混合在一起时，痛 苦和绝望的呼喊在空中回荡。（拟人；独立主格 10.现在渐渐消失在地平线上的岛，以及被烧毁的庇护 结构) 所的残迹，都是他坚持不懈的见证。(as well as) 2.他的祈祷似乎没有得到回应，现在，就连他苦心建造 的避难所也成了废墟。（定语从句） 11.这艘船载着幸存者走向了新的篇章，而幸存者也带 着一个坚定的信念，那就是有时希望会浴火重生，所 以关键是即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要失去信心。 (同位语从句：t作形式主语) 3.大火不仅烧毁了他坚持不懈的清晰证据，也摧毁了支 撑他走下去的脆弱的希望。（倒装） Ⅱ.连句成篇 4.在绝望的深渊中，幸存者不安地睡着。（介词短语）》 “God,how could you do this to me”he cried._ 5.但是，当第一缕晨光照亮天空时，他被一艘驶近岛的 船的声音惊醒了。（时间状语从句；定语从句） 6.他疲惫的眼睛里半带着怀疑，半带着希望，眼前站着 救援人员。（倒装） The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke signal from the burning shelter. 7.他迷惑不解地问：“你们怎么知道我在这里？”（直接 引语) The rescuers explained that they had seen the smoke signal from the burning shelter. 8.幸存者开始意识到，失去他少量的财产和住所，这似 乎是一场悲剧，却无意中成了指引救援的灯塔。(t 作形式主语) 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -134-