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四、逸闻趣事
(2024·贵州贵阳模拟)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
步骤一:读
There was a small village in the heart of a big jungle.DSurrounded by the
magnificent mountains and in the shade of green trees,the villagers were used to
their robotic daily tasks.None of them had the imagination or the will to try
something new,except for one girl named Hannah.
3Hannah was one of the few people in the village who could read and
write.She was an adventurous spirit with an imagination far beyond her time.
[读要素]
She loved to explore and would spend hours in the woods looking for new
When:one aftemoon
things.
Where:in the heart of a big jungle,an abandoned cottage
Who:Hannah.Hannah's friends.Hannah's mother
One afternoon,5while exploring,she came upon an abandoned cottage.
Even though Hannah's mother had strictly wamed her not to go wandering in
What:Hannah discovered an abandoned cottage filled
abandoned places,her curiosity got the best of her.She tiptoed slowly to the
with dusty books and decided to take some home to read
door and slowly opened it and she was left astonished.6In front of Hannah was
sharing her discovery with her friends.
a room full of books!The books were covered with dust,but they seemed to
Why:Hannah's curiosity and love for exploration led her
sparkle in the sunlight,just waiting to be explored.7Hannah's excitement was
to discover the cottage despite her mother's warnings.
visible on her face as she jumped up and down with joy!
[读主题
It was breathtaking for Hannah as she realized that she had found a hidden
人与社会—知识的力量与勇于探索的精神。
treasure.She knew in her heart that she desired to read all of them,so she
[读人物]
quickly got to work..She dusted the books,the shelves,.and what was left of③体现了Hannah热爱阅读和知识。
the furniture.Hannah swept and dusted all day long until she realized that it was
④体现了Hannah的好奇心强
dark and she had to go back to her home.But she couldn't leave without reading
⑧体现了Hannah乐于分享。
at least one book,so Hannah picked two books and decided to read them at her
O展示了Hannah乐观积极、有责任感的品质
home.
[读冲突
She met her friends on the way home who were fascinated by what Hannah
本文的主要矛盾冲突在于Hannah的求知欲和勇于探索
的精神与她周围环境的保守和缺乏理解之间的冲突。
was carrying.
In her excitement,Hannah shared everything with her friends.She
[读伏笔]
was thinking that her friends would share her excitement but instead,she just
③Hannah是村里少数能读写的人之一,为她后来发现
heard a roar of laughter!10Hannah was confused by this reaction first,but then
书籍的价值、渴望阅读并从中获取知识埋下了伏笔。
she realized that they really needed the help from books for change.
⑦Hannah的兴奋与期待为后续她决定阅读这些书籍并
注意:
可能因此发生改变埋下了伏笔。
1.续写词数应为150左右;
⑨朋友的反应为后续Hannah面临的挑战埋下了伏笔。
2.请按如下格式作答
[读语言]
So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.
①过去分词短语作状语。
②对比修辞手法。
⑤状语从句的省略。
⑥倒装。
She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she wanted to share the
'gold”with everyone..
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第五部分写作之读后续写
步骤二:思
6.于是,Hannah邀请了少数能读写的人一起加入他们。
So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.
(who引导定语从句)
衔接句:
过渡句:
7.不久,他们著名的故事在村子里传开了,吸引了越来
衔接句:
越多的人来参加阅读。(现在分词短语作状语)
She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she
wanted to share the“gold”with everyone.
8.渐渐地,Hannah成功地激发了人们对阅读的兴趣,那
衔接句:
座旧小屋变成了阅读的天堂。(arouse)
过渡句:
升华句:
9.分享你的技能不仅能帮助你自己,也能成为那些在寻
步骤三:写
找方向时挣扎的人的一线希望。(动名词短语作主
1.翻译句子
语;not only.but also.)
So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.
1.她回到家,整夜都在阅读书中隐藏的冒险故事。(过
去分词短语作定语)
Ⅱ.连句成篇
So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.
2.第二天,她又冲向小屋,读了更多的书。(where引导
非限制性定语从句)
3.当沉浸在阅读的魅力中时,Hannah似乎打开了通往
一个更大的外部世界一—文学、艺术、科学和历史的
大门。(状语从句的省略;asf引导表语从句)
4.书籍为她提供了无尽的灵感,Hannah决心与她的村
民分享阅读的力量。(offer;share)
She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she
wanted to share the“gold”with everyone.
She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she
wanted to share the“gold”with everyone.
5.将此作为她的任务,Hannah开始每天在她的小屋讲
故事,但只有她最好的朋友们和家人来听。(现在分
词短语作状语)
2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ
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I.翻译句子
1.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him
2.Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and
excitement.
3.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected heroes,
Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated shopkeeper
lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter.
4.The moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream-
to own a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around
him,Tommy felt his face burning.
5.Naturally,the money earned by walking his neighbor's dog didn't
go to any superman figurine.
6.Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a
heavy shopping bag full of stuff.
7.Focusing on nothing but the homeless woman on the pavement,
Tommy was racing back as fast as he could.
8.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf.
9.As it was snowing harder and harder,people were going down the
hustling and bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before.
10.No sooner had Tommy approached her than he stuffed the
shopping bag into her hands.
11."Good evening.You may need this."With these words,
Tommy left for his warm home.
12.Seeing Tommy off in the dark night,the woman murmured
"thanks"again and again,tears of gratitude blurring her eyes.
13.On that cold and snowy night,little Tommy became a hero for
the homeless woman.
14.It also dawned on him that to be a superhero only needs a willing
heart rather than a superpower.
Ⅱ.连句成篇
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking
intensely.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him.
Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and
excitement.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected
heroes,Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated
shopkeeper lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter.The
moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream-to own
a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around him,
Tommy felt his face burning.Naturally,the money earned by
walking his neighbor's dog didn't go to any superman figurine.
Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a
heavy shopping bag full of stuff.Focusing on nothing but the
homeless woman on the pavement,Tommy was racing back as fast
as he could.
The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last
time.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf.As it was
snowing harder and harder,people were going down the hustling and
bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before.No sooner had
Tommy approached her than he stuffed the shopping bag into her
hands."Good evening.You may need this."With these words,
Tommy left for his warm home.Seeing Tommy off in the dark
night,the woman murmured "thanks"again and again,tears of
gratitude blurring her eyes.On that cold and snowy night,little
Tommy became a hero for the homeless woman.It also dawned on
him that to be a superhero only needs a willing heart rather than a
superpower.
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四、逸闻趣事
步骤二:思
回到家,汉娜继续阅读:第二天,她又去了小屋,读更多的书。
沉浸在阅读的魅力中,汉娜了解了更多知识。
汉娜决心与她的村民分享阅读的力量
汉娜将此作为她的任务,天天在她的小屋里讲故事,但是只有朋
友和家人来听。
经过努力,逐渐地来听的人越来越多。汉娜成功地激发了人们对
阅读的兴趣。
分享你的技能不仅能帮助你自已,也能成为那些在寻找方向时挣
扎的人的一线希望。
步骤三:写
I.翻译句子
1.She went home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales
hidden in the book.
2.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read
more books.
3.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as if Hannah
opened the doors to a much bigger outside world-literature,art,
science and history.
4.Books offered her endless inspiration and Hannah determined to
share the power of reading with the people of her village.
5.Making this her task,Hannah started telling tales every day at her
cottage,but only her best friends and family came to the readings.
6.So,Hannah invited the few people who could read and write to
join them together.
7.Before long,the word of their famous tales spread through the
village,appealing to more and more people to attend the readings.
8.Gradually,Hannah successfully aroused people's interest in
reading and the old cottage became a paradise for reading
9.Sharing your skill will not only help yourself,but also be a ray of
hope for someone struggling to find their way.
Ⅱ.连句成篇
So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.She went
home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales hidden in the
book.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read
more books.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as
if Hannah opened the doors to a much bigger outside world-
literature,art,science and history.Books offered her endless
inspiration and Hannah determined to share the power of reading with
the people of her village.
She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she wanted to
share the "gold"with everyone.Making this her task,Hannah
started telling tales every day at her cottage,but only her best friends
and family came to the readings.So,Hannah invited the few people
who could read and write to join them together.Before long,the
word of their famous tales spread through the village,appealing to
more and more people to attend the readings.Gradually,Hannah
successfully aroused people's interest in reading and the old cottage
became a paradise for reading.Sharing your skill will not only help
yourself,but also be a ray of hope for someone struggling to find
their way.
五、遇险获救
步骤二:思
可以借鉴原文第一段,用拟人修辞手法描述主人公的绝望。
出乎主人公预料的是—救授队出现。
主人公惊讶纳闷,寻求解释。
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