第16讲 三、互助友善-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

5.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"I'm so proud of you,Tessa.You're going to have an amazing time." 6.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm. 7.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art. 8.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together. 9.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. 10.The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. Ⅱ.连句成篇 His words made me pause and think.With Mr Weston's comment lingering in my mind,I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep,suffocating my growth and potential,no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. Unknowingly,I had always tumed a deaf ear,forgetting to spread my roots outward,to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. Encouraged by Mr Weston's words,I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out.Maybe,just like the pine,I needed to branch out and grow in a different direction to flourish.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"Im so proud of you,Tessa. You're going to have an amazing time. The next Monday,I signed up for the camp.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. 二、亲情友情 步骤二：思 Danny心理描写：惊讶（男孩回来做什么）但是不生气。 小男孩道歉，Danny表示理解。 两个人成为好朋友，开心去夜行。 父亲看到快乐的Danny的反应。 Danny和父亲分享在度假营期间发生的事情。 Danny意识到宽恕、理解和给别人机会的重要性。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. 2.Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down. 3.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture. 4.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen. 5.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk. 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ 1 6.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt. 7.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. 8.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy,he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm. 9.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement, eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend. 10."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable ! Danny exclaimed enthusiastically. 11.With a teasing grin,Father replied,"Well done,lad!So, according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?" 12.Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp. 13.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset. Ⅱ.连句成篇 As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt approaching him.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerfiu Danny.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy, he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement,eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable!"Danny exclaimed enthusiastically.With a teasing grin,Father replied, "Well done,lad!So,according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?"Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset 三、互助友善 步骤二：思 思考老人的话语，看看身边的两个平凡英雄，明白老人讲的道理， 决定做没有超能力的英雄。 用自己辛苦赚来的钱帮助那个无家可归的人，不买小塑像而是买 吃的东西。 冲回去找那个无家可归的人一—寒风中瑟瑟发抖的女人。 夜色中行人匆匆，没有人为她停留。 Tommy把买的东西给她，女人感谢Tommy。 真正的超级英雄不需要超能力，而是有一颗帮助他人的心。 2 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him 2.Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and excitement. 3.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected heroes, Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated shopkeeper lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter. 4.The moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream- to own a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around him,Tommy felt his face burning. 5.Naturally,the money earned by walking his neighbor's dog didn't go to any superman figurine. 6.Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a heavy shopping bag full of stuff. 7.Focusing on nothing but the homeless woman on the pavement, Tommy was racing back as fast as he could. 8.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf. 9.As it was snowing harder and harder,people were going down the hustling and bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before. 10.No sooner had Tommy approached her than he stuffed the shopping bag into her hands. 11."Good evening.You may need this."With these words, Tommy left for his warm home. 12.Seeing Tommy off in the dark night,the woman murmured "thanks"again and again,tears of gratitude blurring her eyes. 13.On that cold and snowy night,little Tommy became a hero for the homeless woman. 14.It also dawned on him that to be a superhero only needs a willing heart rather than a superpower. Ⅱ.连句成篇 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.His mind raced fast and a great idea occurred to him. Initial confusion on his face gave way to determination and excitement.Raising his head and looking around at the two respected heroes,Tommy decided to learn from the caring and dedicated shopkeeper lady as well as the fearless and devoted firefighter.The moment he realized he only thought of his so-called dream-to own a superman figurine,and completely ignored others around him, Tommy felt his face burning.Naturally,the money earned by walking his neighbor's dog didn't go to any superman figurine. Instead,with a determined look,he decided to offer the woman a heavy shopping bag full of stuff.Focusing on nothing but the homeless woman on the pavement,Tommy was racing back as fast as he could. The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time.The woman was shaking like a trembling leaf.As it was snowing harder and harder,people were going down the hustling and bustling street,ignoring the woman as he did before.No sooner had Tommy approached her than he stuffed the shopping bag into her hands."Good evening.You may need this."With these words, Tommy left for his warm home.Seeing Tommy off in the dark night,the woman murmured "thanks"again and again,tears of gratitude blurring her eyes.On that cold and snowy night,little Tommy became a hero for the homeless woman.It also dawned on him that to be a superhero only needs a willing heart rather than a superpower. 一 1 四、逸闻趣事 步骤二：思 回到家，汉娜继续阅读：第二天，她又去了小屋，读更多的书。 沉浸在阅读的魅力中，汉娜了解了更多知识。 汉娜决心与她的村民分享阅读的力量 汉娜将此作为她的任务，天天在她的小屋里讲故事，但是只有朋 友和家人来听。 经过努力，逐渐地来听的人越来越多。汉娜成功地激发了人们对 阅读的兴趣。 分享你的技能不仅能帮助你自已，也能成为那些在寻找方向时挣 扎的人的一线希望。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.She went home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales hidden in the book. 2.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read more books. 3.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as if Hannah opened the doors to a much bigger outside world-literature,art, science and history. 4.Books offered her endless inspiration and Hannah determined to share the power of reading with the people of her village. 5.Making this her task,Hannah started telling tales every day at her cottage,but only her best friends and family came to the readings. 6.So,Hannah invited the few people who could read and write to join them together. 7.Before long,the word of their famous tales spread through the village,appealing to more and more people to attend the readings. 8.Gradually,Hannah successfully aroused people's interest in reading and the old cottage became a paradise for reading 9.Sharing your skill will not only help yourself,but also be a ray of hope for someone struggling to find their way. Ⅱ.连句成篇 So she did not give up on the books in the cottage.She went home and all night long,she read the adventurous tales hidden in the book.The next day,she rushed to the cottage again,where she read more books.While immersed in the charm of reading,it seemed as if Hannah opened the doors to a much bigger outside world- literature,art,science and history.Books offered her endless inspiration and Hannah determined to share the power of reading with the people of her village. She knew it would be a difficult journey,but she wanted to share the "gold"with everyone.Making this her task,Hannah started telling tales every day at her cottage,but only her best friends and family came to the readings.So,Hannah invited the few people who could read and write to join them together.Before long,the word of their famous tales spread through the village,appealing to more and more people to attend the readings.Gradually,Hannah successfully aroused people's interest in reading and the old cottage became a paradise for reading.Sharing your skill will not only help yourself,but also be a ray of hope for someone struggling to find their way. 五、遇险获救 步骤二：思 可以借鉴原文第一段，用拟人修辞手法描述主人公的绝望。 出乎主人公预料的是—救授队出现。 主人公惊讶纳闷，寻求解释。 3- 参考答案三、互助友善 (2024·山西太原模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 步骤一：读 [读要索 DIt was a cold.snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could,focusing When:a cold,snowy evening on nothing but his destination-the shop on the street corner.Two weeks ago he saw Where:on the way to the shop on the figurines(小塑像)of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and②felt he had to have one. street corner He had been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to fulfil his little Who:Tommy,a homeless woman,an old dream.He was so excited,barely noticing the world around him.3Maybe that's why he man,a shopkeeper lady,a firefighter tripped over the legs of a homeless woman,who was sitting on the pavement,her back What:Tommy's journey to buy a superhero against the wall..④He said“sorry”and moved on to his destination.. figurine and his encounter with the old man Once he entered the shop,he went straight to the shelves with figurines like Hulk Why:to buy a Marvel superhero figurine Thor,Captain America,Iron Man,and many more-all of his admired heroes.5With 「读主题 his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman. 人与社会—一善良、同理心与英雄精神的 “You like these,true believer?” 真谛。 Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on [读人物] his face. ②体现了Tommy有梦想、有目标、勒奋、有责 “Y-yes,.Yes,they're awesome！”answered Tommy..(⑥They're strong and fast 任感。 and help other people a lot..."the boy looked at figurines in admiration."I wish I could ④显示了Tommy具有同情心。 be a superhero too.” ⑥显示了Tommy崇拜英雄、渴望成为英雄。 “Then become one！”said the old man.. 读冲突] “How?”Tommy asked in surprise.“Idon't have any superpowers..” 本文的矛盾冲突主要体现在Tommy的内心追 "And why would you need them?"the old man smiled.7Seeing the confusion on 求与外部实际情况的不对等，以及他对“成为 the boy's face,he put his hands on Tommy's arms."Did you know that the shopkeeper 超级英雄”这一概念从误解到理解的转变 lady over there has a disabled husband?She has been working hard and taking care of him 过程。 for years.I have never heard a word of complaint from her.And this person..."he [读伏笔] pointed at a redhead man,who just entered the shop."He's a firefighter:he has saved ①外面冷，为这个无家可归的人在受到帮助以 countless lives.He never gives up,no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be. 后感到内心热埋下了伏笔。 The old man looked Tommy in the eye and smiled."You don't need a superpower ③为续写部分Tommy如何帮助这个无家可归 to be a hero for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind,not in the 的人埋下了伏笔。 muscles,but in the heart." ⑦老人举例教导他成为超级英雄不需要超 注意： 能力。 1.续写词数应为150左右； ⑧成为超人不在其外而在其内在：心。 2.请按如下格式作答。 读语言1 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely ①环境描写，烘托天气寒冷的氛围。 ②⑤情感描写，通过描述对这些小塑像的喜 The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time. 爱，与下文放弃购买而帮助无家可归的人形成 对比。 ⑥使用了直接引语。 步骤二：思 The homeless woman was right there,where he saw Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes her last time. thinking intensely. 衔接句： 衔接句 过渡句： 过渡句： 升华句： 衔接句 -129- 第五部分写作之读后续写 写。 步骤三：写 9.雪越下越大，人们沿着熙熙攘攘的街道来来往往，像 I.翻译句子 他以前一样无视那个女人。（时间状语从句；现在分 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes 词短语作状语) thinking intensely. 1.他的脑子转得很快，突然想到一个好主意。(occur to) 10.Tommy一 走近她，就把购物袋塞到她的手里。 (倒装) 2.他脸上最初的困惑变成了决心和兴奋。(give way to) 11.“晚上好。你可能需要这个。”说完这些话，Tommy 走向了他的温暖的家。（直接引语） 3.Tommy抬起头，环顾四周，看着两位受人尊敬的英 雄，他决定向那位关怀和奉献的女店主和那位无畏奉 12.看着Tommy在黑夜中离开，那个女人一遍又一遍地 献的消防员学习。（现在分词短语作状语；as well 低声说着“谢谢”，感激的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。 as) (现在分词短语作状语：独立主格结构) 4.当Tommy意识到他只想着自己所谓的梦想一拥有 13.在那个寒冷的大雪之夜，小Tommy成了那个无家可 一个超人雕像，而完全忽视了周围的人时，他感到自 归的女人的英雄。（介词短语） 己的脸在燃烧。(the moment引导时间状语从句) 14.他也明白了，成为超级英雄只需要一颗心甘情愿的 5.当然，帮邻居遛狗赚来的钱没有用来买任何超人雕 心，而不是超能力。(t作形式主语；动词不定式短 像。（过去分词短语作定语） 语作主语) 6.相反，带着坚定的表情，他决定给那个女人一个装满 Ⅱ.连句成篇 东西的沉重的购物袋。（介词短语）》 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. 7.注意力只集中在人行道上那个无家可归的女人身上， Tommy以最快的速度跑了回来。（现在分词短语作 状语) The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time. The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time. 8.那个女人像一片颤抖的叶子一样颤抖着。（比喻）》 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -130-