第16讲 二、亲情友情-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

二、亲情友情 (2024·山东济宁模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 步骤一：读 One morning,Father was helping Danny pack his bag for a holiday 读要索] camp.①“Do I really have to go,Father?”Danny asked hesitantly.“Son When:one morning before the camp),right after dinner sometimes the best lessons in life are learnt at camps,"Father encouraged. on the first day at camp But I never have the right words to say when talking to someone new, Where:at home,at the camp Danny complained.3Alright.let's make a deal.If you learn something Who:Danny,Father,Mr Halim,a boy in a green T-shirt good at this camp,this shall be the last holiday camp I sign you up for, What:Danny was sent to a holiday camp by his father.At Father responded with a proposal."Deal,"Danny replied. the camp,Danny's bottle of iced tea was knocked over by Right after dinner on the first day at camp,everyone was busy packing another boy,creating a mess.Mr Halim mistakenly assumed their bags in preparation for the night walk.Danny headed to the canteen to Danny was responsible and ordered him to clean it up. get a bottle of iced tea.Just as Danny was about to secure the bottle cap,he Why:Danny was sent to the camp to learn valuable life was caught off-guard as someone suddenly brushed past him and hit his arm. lessons. The bottle slipped out of his hands and fell onto the floor.Light brown [读主题] liquid flowed out,creating an ugly mess on the floor.Danny caught a flash 人与社会——宽容、理解在人际关系中的重要性 of a boy in a green T-shirt running off into the distance."How rude!"Danny 读人物] shouted,gritting his teeth."Not even an apology!" ①Danny犹豫不决 Just then,Mr Halim,the camp guide,approached Danny."What are ②Danny缺乏自信。 you doing here inste-"he asked but stopped midway when he saw the mess ⑥Danny承担责任，显示出他的责任感。 on the floor.“It wasn'tmel”Danny raised his voice in his defence.⑤ ⑦⑧Danny的宽容、谅解他人的品格。 "You'll fix this mess you created before we head out for the night walk,"Mr [读冲突] Halim remarked,walking off in a hurry before Danny could explain himself ④Danny被一个男孩撞到，弄洒了冰茶，男孩没有道歉，扬 “How unfortunate,”Danny thought to himself..“It wasn't even my fault 长而去，Danny觉得对方十分粗鲁。 to begin with."Getting down on his knees,he started wiping up the mess. 读伏笔】 Twenty minutes passed and the floor was dry.Danny managed to calm ③Danny因为和别人没有任何好说的，不愿意去度假营 himself down and think clearly.He recalled how Father had given him a 但是父亲和他达成协议鼓励他去，为后面Danny交到了 second chance when he broke his vase by mistake a week ago.8Realizing 个好朋友喜欢上去度假营，走出舒适区，以开放的心态拥 that what had happened just now might have been an accident,Danny 抱机会埋下伏笔。 resolved to let the past rest. ④为下文the boy in the green T-shirt回来道款埋下了 注意： 伏笔。 1.续写词数应为150左右； ⑤Danny清理干净之后要和大部队集合。 2.请按如下格式作答。 ⑦⑧Danny有很强的共情能力，想到自己打碎花瓶的事 As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt 情，觉得这一次也可能是an accident,他已经不再生气，后 approaching him. 文当the boy in the green T-shirt回来道歉的时候他应该是 不生气了，两人和好，成为好朋友。 The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerful 读语言] Danny. ①②③使用了直接引语。 ⑥⑧现在分词短语作状语 步骤二：思 The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the saw a cheerful Danny green T-shirt approaching him. 衔接句： 衔接句： 过渡句： 过渡句： 升华句： 衔接句 -127- 第五部分写作之读后续写 写。 步骤三：写 9.当他们开车回家时，Danny抑制不住自己的兴奋，急 I.翻译句子 切地分享有关这位新朋友的故事。（时间状语从句） As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt approaching him. 1.Danny感到既惊讶又带着一丝好奇，他想知道为什么 10.“我度过了一段美妙的时光，学到了一些真正有价值 这个男孩又回来了。（独立主格结构） 的东西！”Danny充满热情地叫道。（直接引语）》 2.显得很窘迫，男孩含糊地道歉，说很抱歉让Danny措 11.父亲带着揶揄的笑容回答说：“干得好，小伙子！所 手不及，把瓶子打翻了。（现在分词短语作状语） 以，根据我们最初的协议，这个度假营是最后一个 了，对吧？”（直接引语） 3.男孩的道歉来得出乎意料，Danny对男孩的姿态很吃 惊。（独立主格结构）》 12.Danny用力地摇着头，急切地请求再去一次度假营。 (现在分词短语作状语)》 4.Danny不是怀有怨恨，而是微笑着告诉男孩没关系， 意外是会发生的。（介词短语） 13.从那天起，Danny不仅意识到宽容、理解和给别人机 会的重要性，而且他更愿意走出自己的舒适区，以积 极的心态拥抱新的机会。（介词短语；倒装） 5.男孩如释重负，两人一边聊着天，一边走向夜行的会 合点。(with复合结构) Ⅱ.连句成篇 As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt approaching him. 6.有那么一会儿，他们双目相遇，然后他们突然笑了起 来，意识到彼此都释怀了。（介词短语；现在分词短语 作状语) 7.带着这份新结交的友谊，他们愉快地开始夜行。（介 词短语) The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerful Danny. The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerful Danny. 8.预料会发现一个灰心丧气的男孩，他却惊喜地看到 Danny和一个穿着绿色T恤的男孩兴致勃勃地交谈 着，脸上洋溢着喜悦和热情。（现在分词短语作 状语) 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -128-5.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"I'm so proud of you,Tessa.You're going to have an amazing time." 6.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm. 7.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art. 8.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together. 9.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. 10.The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. Ⅱ.连句成篇 His words made me pause and think.With Mr Weston's comment lingering in my mind,I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep,suffocating my growth and potential,no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. Unknowingly,I had always tumed a deaf ear,forgetting to spread my roots outward,to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. Encouraged by Mr Weston's words,I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out.Maybe,just like the pine,I needed to branch out and grow in a different direction to flourish.When I told Mum my decision later that evening,she pulled me into a warm hug,saying,"Im so proud of you,Tessa. You're going to have an amazing time. The next Monday,I signed up for the camp.As I walked into a room full of unfamiliar faces,my stomach still felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm.But with time ticking by,I found myself opening up,making friends with other campers who shared my love for art.Beyond my expectation,we even explored new techniques and styles together.Before I knew it,the camp neared the end,but I left with a newfound confidence in myself and new friendships. The towering pine tree in the Westons'yard serves as a constant reminder that the strongest growth often springs from venturing into the unknown world. 二、亲情友情 步骤二：思 Danny心理描写：惊讶（男孩回来做什么）但是不生气。 小男孩道歉，Danny表示理解。 两个人成为好朋友，开心去夜行。 父亲看到快乐的Danny的反应。 Danny和父亲分享在度假营期间发生的事情。 Danny意识到宽恕、理解和给别人机会的重要性。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. 2.Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down. 3.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture. 4.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen. 5.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk. 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ 1 6.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt. 7.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. 8.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy,he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm. 9.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement, eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend. 10."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable ! Danny exclaimed enthusiastically. 11.With a teasing grin,Father replied,"Well done,lad!So, according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?" 12.Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp. 13.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset. Ⅱ.连句成篇 As Danny got up to leave,he saw the boy in the green T-shirt approaching him.A sense of surprise mingled with a touch of curiosity,Danny was wondering why the boy came back again. Looking sheepish,the boy mumbled an apology,saying sorry for catching Danny off-guard and knocking the bottle down.The apology coming unexpectedly,Danny was taken aback by the boy's gesture.Instead of holding a grudge,Danny smiled and told the boy that it was okay,and that accidents happen.With a surge of relief sweeping over the boy,the two of them chatted away while walking towards the meeting point for the night walk.For a few brief moments,their gazes were locked,and then they burst into laughter,understanding the mutual relief they felt.With this newfound friendship,they joyfully embarked on the night walk. The next day when Father came to fetch Danny,he saw a cheerfiu Danny.Expecting to find a disheartened and defeated boy, he was pleasantly surprised to see Danny engaging in lively conversation with a boy in a green T-shirt,face radiating with joy and enthusiasm.As they drove home,Danny couldn't contain his excitement,eagerly sharing stories about his newfound friend."I had an amazing time and learned something truly valuable!"Danny exclaimed enthusiastically.With a teasing grin,Father replied, "Well done,lad!So,according to our initial deal,this camp is the last one,huh?"Danny shook his head vigorously,pleading eagerly for another trip to the camp.From that day on,not only did Danny appreciate the importance of forgiveness,understanding,and giving others a chance,but he was more willing to step out of his comfort zone and embrace new opportunities with a positive mindset 三、互助友善 步骤二：思 思考老人的话语，看看身边的两个平凡英雄，明白老人讲的道理， 决定做没有超能力的英雄。 用自己辛苦赚来的钱帮助那个无家可归的人，不买小塑像而是买 吃的东西。 冲回去找那个无家可归的人一—寒风中瑟瑟发抖的女人。 夜色中行人匆匆，没有人为她停留。 Tommy把买的东西给她，女人感谢Tommy。 真正的超级英雄不需要超能力，而是有一颗帮助他人的心。 2