第11讲 说明文和议论文写作-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

In that art lesson,our teacher guided us to explore the world of watercolor painting.We learned about different brush strokes and color combinations.The teacher demonstrated how to create different textures and effects using watercolor,such as the softness of a cloud or the vividness of a flower.Then,we were given the chance to practice and create our own paintings. This art lesson was truly remarkable.It not only improved my artistic skills but also allowed me to express my creativity and imagination freely.It made me realize that art is a powerful form of self-expression and communication.Moreover,it taught me the importance of patience. (三)宣传稿 参考范文： Yesterday afternoon,I visited an art exhibition with the theme of traditional Chinese painting in the hall on the floor of the library, which was in the charge of the Students'Union. I did appreciate having such a precious chance to visit such an awesome exhibition.Seeing loads of Chinese paintings by students on display,I felt as if I were walking in the fairyland.Honestly speaking,I wish that I could visit it once again if time permits.Not only did the exhibition widen my knowledge about Chinese culture, but also it enriched my after-class life. I figure that if you lack relevant knowledge of traditional Chinese painting,then grasp this opportunity without hesitation. 六、倡议书&通知&日记 (一)倡议书 参考范文： Dear fellow students. I am excited to announce the launch of our school's themed activity "Happy Learning,Healthy Living".The purpose is to promote a balanced lifestyle by combining study and relaxation effectively. During our busy schooldays,it is important that we make the most of our break time.We encourage everyone to use their class breaks wisely by engaging in activities that help refresh the mind and body.This could include taking a short walk outside,doing some stretching exercises,chatting with friends,or even reading a book to unwind. Let's strive for a harmonious blend of work and rest to ensure a productive and fulfilling academic journey. The English Club (二)通知 参考范文： Notice Our school will host a student photography exhibition,whose title is"Forge Ahead on a New Journey".The exhibition aims to showcase our efforts and advancements in the contemporary era.It will be held in the lecture hall on May 3,2025. Participants each can submit three photos,focusing on technological innovations,social change,environmental concerns, and personal growth.All entries in the high-resolution digital format must be sent to the Students'Union by April 25th with a brief description. Looking forward to your inspiring submissions! The Students'Union 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ 14 (三)日记 参考范文： Monday 30th September,2024 This morning,some tourists from the UK visited the porcelain exhibition in our city museum.As a volunteer guide of this section, I took them to experience the porcelain culture of China. On arriving at the exhibition hall,the tourists were impressed by the delicate porcelain ware.I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of porcelain culture,including its profound history and its rich varieties.Afterwards,I showed the exquisite craftsmanship in a porcelain workshop.Amazed at every procedure,the foreign visitors took many pictures. It hit me that traditional culture like porcelain culture was of great charm and huge value.I am so proud to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 第10讲 记叙类写作 一、人物介绍 参考范文： The Most Unforgettable Teacher There are many unforgettable people around us.But for me the most unforgettable is my English teacher,Mr Liu. What impressed me is his great qualities.He gave us the greatest gift a good teacher offers-an awakening of a passion for learning.He led us to the beauty of the English language. Furthermore,I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lectures were humorously delivered. Although it is nearly five years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our classmates,and he will stay in my heart forever. 二、新闻报道 参考范文： A Flea Market Last Friday,the Students'Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground,aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs. The event featured students selling various items,from books to handmade crafts,creating a lively marketplace atmosphere.The flea market gained enthusiastic participation from both sellers and buyers. Many students took the opportunity to clear their possessions while earning some extra income.Buyers found unique treasures and eco- friendly alternatives to new products,contributing to a greener lifestyle among students. Overall,the event was a success,which not only provided a platform for students to exchange goods but also promoted a sense of environmental awareness. 第11讲 说明文和议论文写作 一、图表作文 参考范文： Factors that Influence the Applicants'Choices of Major Our school newspaper recently conducted a survey of "Factors that Influence the Applicants'Choices of Major". 40- In the survey,"career prospects"emerges as the most significant,accounting for 35%of the decision-making process. This shows the practical approach many applicants adopt when selecting their academic major.They seek majors that do not necessarily correspond to the trends but offer opportunities for advancement,competitive salaries,and stability. Different factors mean different preferences.Individuals are seeking paths that lead to their own goals. 二、图画作文 参考范文： Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people's life in recent years. In the past,people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What's more,people have easy access to the Internet,which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes,even if they are in two different continents. In a word,people have an easier life nowadays 三、评论 参考范文： The online class was absolutely wonderful.Themed on the Appreciation of Classic Poetry,it unfolded the etemal charm of classic poetry to us.Online as it was,this class created a totally immersive atmosphere. The highlight of the class was the short clip named "When Li Bai Meets William Wordsworth".By comparing the differences and similarities of these two great romantic poets,the video gave us a new insight into their writing skills and the emotions hidden behind the lines.It also triggered our passion to explore more about the ever-lasting beauty of poems. Honestly,it would be better if more interactive elements,such as mini-games or real-time comments,are included in this class Generally speaking,it was truly fantastic. 第五部分写作之读后续写 第15讲续写有方法一如何写 I.翻译句子 1.She had expected to be the last one to cross the finish line,but instead she had come in the middle of the pack. 2.Eva realized that she had underestimated her own abilities. 3.She also learned a valuable lesson:sometimes,the only way to overcome a challenge is to break it into smaller,more manageable parts. 4.This experience gave her a new sense of confidence in her abilities and laid a solid foundation for her to face other challenges in the future. 5.Confident and adventurous,she focused on learning the routes to her classes and the cafeteria instead of trying to memorize the entire layout of the building at once. 一 1 6.She also made a point of exploring the building during her free time,so that she could gradually become familiar with the different hallways and rooms. 7.With this new strategy,Eva found that the school building was no longer a source of stress for her. 8.In fact,she even began to enjoy exploring the different parts of the building and discovering new places. 9.Reflecting on the series of accomplishments,she was fully aware that with a willing heart,a workable strategy,as well as immediate action,nothing is impossible! Ⅱ.连句成篇 When Coach Pitt said "Nice work !to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.She had expected to be the last one to cross the finish line,but instead she had come in the middle of the pack.Eva realized that she had underestimated her own abilities.She also learned a valuable lesson:sometimes,the only way to overcome a challenge is to break it into smaller,more manageable parts.This experience gave her a new sense of confidence in her abilities and laid a solid foundation for her to face other challenges in the future. Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building.Confident and adventurous,she focused on learning the routes to her classes and the cafeteria instead of trying to memorize the entire layout of the building at once.She also made a point of exploring the building during her free time,so that she could gradually become familiar with the different hallways and rooms. With this new strategy,Eva found that the school building was no longer a source of stress for her.In fact,she even began to enjoy exploring the different parts of the building and discovering new places.Reflecting on the series of accomplishments,she was fully aware that with a willing heart,a workable strategy,as well as immediate action,nothing is impossible! 第16讲读后续写话题演练 一、个人成长 步骤二：思 作者一直把自己深深埋在地下，甚至扼杀自己的成长和潜力。 (心理活动描写) 应该像松树一样向外生长，踏出自己的舒适区。 决定参加艺术营，告知妈妈自已的决定。（与前文协同）》 一开始遇到陌生人很紧张。 慢慢地走出舒适区，和同样热爱艺术的人成为朋友，共同探讨艺 术，个人得到成长。很快艺术营接近尾声，作者带着友谊和成长 回来。 最强劲的成长往往来自对未知世界的探索。 步骤三：写 I.翻译句子 1.With Mr Weston's comment lingering in my mind,I realized that I had been burying my own roots too deep,suffocating my growth and potential,no matter how often I was told about my talent in drawing. 2.Unknowingly,I had always turned a deaf ear,forgetting to spread my roots outward,to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. 3.Encouraged by Mr Weston's words,I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out 4.Maybe,just like the pine,I needed to branch out and grow in a different direction to flourish. 参考答案 答。第11讲 说明文和议论文写作 一、图表作文 1写作技法| 根据调查结果，我们可以看出，学生年龄越大，他们庆 祝母亲和同学生日的可能性就越大。 图表一般是对某个具体问题的调查统计，往往能反 映出一个普遍的问题，学生在描述完内容时需要过渡到 3.韵味无穷结尾句 普遍现象。写图表作文时需要介绍图表中讲了什么，数 DFrom where I stand,each of us should give our 据有什么变动，反映了哪些问题和趋势，并分析问题背 mothers a blessing wherever we are 后的原因，结合自身谈谈解决措施或给出观点。 从我的立场来看，无论我们在哪里，我们每个人都应 但是，每一篇作文的要求会有所差异，部分作文不 该给我们的母亲一个祝福 需要分析原因，给出自己的观点和理由即可。学生在写 2In my opinion,we should make full use of bike- 作之前需要仔细阅读题干及要求，明确要点，避免遗漏。 sharing for the sake of the environment and our health. 具体写作结构为： 在我看来，为了环境和我们的健康，我们应该充分利 用共享单车。 图 首段：引出话题并介绍图表内容 表作 主体：根据信息总结出规律或找出问题出现的原因 写作模板 文 尾段：给出自已的观点，提出相应的解决方案 As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/ 常用表达 picture, (具体问题/现象)has been on the 1.吸引眼球开头句 rise/decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/ DIt can be seen from the chart/diagram/graph/table/ decreasing from in to in figures/statistics that... (变化幅度).From the sharp rise/.decline in 从图表/表格/数据中我们可以看到… the chart,it goes without saying that (问题/ 2 From the table/figures/data/results/information 趋势) above,it can/may be seen/concluded/estimated/ There are at least two good reasons accounting for calculated/inferred that... (具体问题/现象).in one hand, 从以上的表格/数据/结果/信息中，我们可以看到/总 (原因一).in the other hand, is due to the 结/估计/计算/推断… fact that (原因二).In addition, is 2.亮点出彩篇中句 responsible for (原因三).Maybe there are DYet for various reasons,many students don't want to some other reasons to show But it is generally improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of the students believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly think that they can just use a computer,so there is no convincing. need to waste time improving their handwriting. As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view 然而，由于各种原因，许多学生不想提高他们的书写。 that (个人观点).I am sure my opinion is 51.5%的学生认为他们只需要使用电脑就可以了，所 both sound and well-grounded. 以没有必要浪费时间来提高他们的书写。 典例展示 2And 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.10.9 (2022·全国乙卷改编)学校英文报正在开展以 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless. Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论 32.2%的人认为他们忙于学习，没有时间练习。 请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容 10.9%的人认为练习写字没有用。 包括： 3According to the result of the survey,we can see 1.学习活动状况描述； that the older the students are,the more likely they are 2.简单评论； to celebrate their mothers'and classmates'birthdays. 3.你的建议。 -105- 第四部分写作之文体突破 写 注意： Learning English Beyond the Classroom 1.词数100左右； There are many things we can do to leam English 2.请按如下格式作答。 well. 65% 50% 18% 12% 读英语 听英语 看英语浏览英语 书籍 歌曲 电影学习网站 学生英语学习活动调查结果（人数百分比） 满分范文 名师点评 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 1.词汇美 There are many things we can do to learn English well.DAs the chart 采用：use→adopt shows,students adopt different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. 占比，占据：make up→account for The percent of the students 2who listen to English songs is as high as 我认为：in my view-→as far as I am concerned 65%.50%of them watch English movies while only18%read English2.句式美 books.Those 3who visit English-learning websites account for 12%.The 本文运用了多样化的高级句式： figures of the chart suggest that there are a variety of ways to learn ①as引导非限制性定语从句： English beyond the classroom with the development of modern ②③who引导定语从句： technology.Students can choose what they like to enrich their English- ④that引导宾语从句： leaming experiences. ⑤so that引导结果状语从句。 As far as I am concerned,students should do more listening and3.结构关 speaking 5so that they can develop their communication skills. 文章运用了三段式结构，结构清晰明了。 实战演练 Factors that Influence the (2024·辽宁大连模拟)你校英文报做了“Factors Applicants'Choices of Major that Influence the Applicants'Choices of Major”的问卷 调查。请你选择其中一个因素写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.该因素的数据描述； 2.该因素的驱动原因分析。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 suggestions from others other factors 5% 1% personal interests career prospects 25% 35% location of universities market demand 10% 24% 二、图画作文 1写作技法 活动；二是单图议论类，通过单张图画揭示某一现象；三 是对比图类，通过几幅图画的对比，反映今昔变化或得 图画作文是近年来高考应用文写作考查的热点之 一，要求学生将画面信息运用英语思维转换成英语短 出某一结论。在此，我们主要探讨单图议论文的写作。 单图通常是提供一幅图并配以相关的文字提示。学生 文，旨在避免学生运用汉语思维布局谋篇。图画作文可 不仅要仔细观察图画所传达的表面信息，还要深刻挖掘 以分为三种类型：一是组图记叙类，通过组图叙述一个 该幅图画所表达的深层含义。具体写作结构为： 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -106- 首段：描述图画内容 2Hard work pays off.We should take pains to 图画作文 主体：描述图画所揭示的问题/现象 improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for 结语：提出建议或表达个人感想 the future. 努力工作会有回报的。我们应该努力通过学习来提 常用表达 高自已，为未来做好准备。 1.吸引眼球开头句 1写作模板 DIn the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in cartoon/picture, (图画内容总概括).It can the wall and he was absorbed in his reading. easily be seen that (揭示图画寓意). 在这幅画中，我们可以看到一个男孩穿着破旧的衣 There are many reasons responsible for this 服，坐在一张破旧的木桌边，上面放着一堆书。一缕 phenomenon/case/instance and the following are the 微弱的光线从墙上的一个小洞射进来，他在全神贯注 typical ones.The first reason is that (理由 地看书。 -)The second reason is that (理由二).The 2From the picture we can see a family of three third reason is that/A case in point is that (理 walking on a long red carpet.The son,well dressed, 由三) waves proudly in the middle while the father behind Considering all these reasons/this situation/ bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front Confronted with such a problem,I think we need to take rolls out the carpet,sweating. some positive measures.On the one hand, (方 从图中我们可以看到一家三口走在长长的红地毯上。 法/建议一).On the other hand,it is necessary for us to 儿子穿着得体，在中间骄傲地挥手，后面的父亲弯下 (方法/建议二).Only in this way can 腰去拿夹克，前面的母亲在铺地毯，满头大汗。 (总结自己的观点/建议/态度). 2.亮点出彩篇中句 典例展示】 DThis is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese (2024·山东济宁模拟)4月22日为世界地球日。 idiom.The boy,being poor,couldn't afford even a 你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在 candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to "steal"light 留言板上发一个帖子，内容包括： from his neighbor's house to read at night. 1.图片简介； 这是一个著名的古代的中国成语故事。这个男孩很 2.个人感想。 穷，连一支蜡烛都买不起，于是他在墙上钻了一个洞， “偷”了邻居家的光，晚上读书。 2The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. 这个故事的寓意是：不遗余力地获取知识，无论情况 Earth Day 多么困难都不要轻易气馁。 注意： 3 It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that 1.词数80左右； children are the focus of families,shouldering the hope 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 of their parents. 这表明了一个现在普遍的现象，孩子是家庭的焦点， 肩负着父母的希望。 3.韵味无穷结尾句 DIt is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. 重要的不是故事本身，而是故事所反映的内容。 -107- 第四部分写作之文体突破 写。 满分范文 名师点评 On World Earth Day,I came across two powerful images on an international 1.词汇美 website.One portrays our planet sweating and frowning,1 expressing its 偶然发现：encounter-一→come across exhaustion while the other one,by contrast,showcases Earth's continuous and generous blessings. 展示：display-→showcase 显然地：clearly-→obviously The powerful images set me thinking.Obviously,the planet's tiredness symbolizes the harm 2 caused by human activities,such as deforestation. 一定会：be sure to→be bound to 2.句式关 pollution,and climate change.Yet,our generous Earth,the ultimate giver of gifts, 本文运用了多样化的高级句式： makes us feel guilty for not fully appreciating and safeguarding its generosity.These ①现在分词短语作状语： images awaken a sense of guilt and an urgent need to protect the Earth. ②过去分词短语作定语： 3It's high time that we banded together to preserve and restore our Earth. ③t作形式主语。 By embracing sustainable practices,minimizing our carbon footprint,and advocating 3.结构美 for environmentally responsible policies,we are bound to pave the way for a 文章运用了三段式结构，结构清晰明了。 sustainable future. 1实战演练 注意： (2024·陕西西安模拟)根据以下图画，写一篇英 1.词数80左右； 语短文，描述今昔通信方式的变化，以及这些变化给人 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 们的生活带来的影响。 配 (letter)(public telephone) (mobile phone) (Internet Before Now 三、评论 1写作技法】 which attracted many students as well as teachers to appreciate traditional Chinese culture. 评论属于议论文范畴，通常围绕学生所参加的某项 上周日，我们学校在学校美术馆举办了第一届“中国 活动进行写作，要求学生简要描述参加某项活动的经历 传统文化节”，吸引了许多学生和老师来欣赏中国传 和感受，并发表评论及建议等。写作时要精练地概括活 统文化。 动的内容，具体描述活动的某个细节并对这一细节进行 2.亮点出彩篇中句 简要评论，或者描述个人感受（或提出建议），内容要准 DAs a participant,I was deeply impressed by the 确、全面。具体写作结构为： enthusiasm and creativity of my fellow students. 首段：描述活动概况 作为参与者，同学们的热情和创造力给我留下了深刻 评论 主体：描述参与活动的感受或对活动作简要评论 的印象。 结语：提出建议或表达个人感想 2It was inspiring to see so many young people 常用表达 embracing Chinese language and culture 看到如此多的年轻人接受汉语语言和文化，我深受 1.吸引眼球开头句 鼓舞。 DOn May Day,Li Yue and I went to Sunshine 3It helped me gain a deeper understanding of English Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. culture and gave me an opportunity to appreciate the “五一劳动节”那天，我和李跃去了阳光敬老院，做了 diverse talents of my peers. 一些志愿者工作。 它帮助我对英语文化有了更深的了解，并给了我一个 2Last Sunday,our school held the first "Traditional 机会去欣赏同龄人的各种才能。 Chinese Cultural Festival"in the school art gallery, 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -108- 3.韵味无穷结尾句 1典例展示1 DAs far as I'm concerned,doing housework benefits (2024·浙江杭州模拟)假定你是某国际学校学生 students greatly 李华，最近刚参加了你校科技工作坊举办的“3D打印” 在我看来，做家务对学生大有好处。 科创作品展览活动。请给本校英语报写一则评论，内容 2For one thing,it helps cultivate the right view of the 包括： world,life and values and develop an interest in doing 1.活动特色； physical labor. 2.参与体验； 一方面，它有助于培养正确的世界观、人生观和价值 3.改进意见。 观，培养对体力劳动的兴趣。 注意： 1写作模板 1.词数80左右； (活动名称)is wonderful.It is an 2.请按如下格式作答。 excellent showcase of (活动概括) Impressions from the 3D Printing Exhibition The (活动)features various From to the diversity makes the (活动)unique and engaging (活动 描述一).Besides, (活动描述二).I found the (话动)both enjoyable and educational.I learned a lot about how to (个人感受一)and I also enjoyed (个人感受二).（活动感受） I suggest Hopefully,there will be more chances for to (个人建议) 满分范文 名师点评 1.词汇关 Impressions from the 3D Printing Exhibition 举办：hold-host Last week,I attended a 3D printing exhibition 1hosted by our school 许多：lots of-→an abundance of technology workshop,2 where an abundance of 3D art creations were 然而：however-nevertheless displayed,which surprised us all. 相信：believebe convinced I couldn't feel more excited to visit the different 3D printed products,such as2. printed art creations,animals,foods and even model planets.Also,the speeches 本文运用了多样化的高级句式： 3given on 3D printing technology were considered as a highlight to help us ①③过去分词短语作定语： better understand the theory,function and practice of 3D technology. ②where引导非限制性定语从句： Nevertheless.I am convinced that it would be better if the maximum ④f引导条件状语从句。 number of visitors could be limited for better experience. 3.结构美 文章运用了三段式结构，结构清晰明了。 实战演练 The online class was absolutely wonderful. 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