内容正文:
Ⅱ.根据中文提示,补全短文并背诵
1.To better integrate Chinese cultural elements into English learning
2.First,every contestant delivered a speech in regard to a
Chinese story
3.which was well received by the audience
4.which encouraged us to shoulder our responsibilities to spread our
splendid Chinese culture to the world
第四部分写作之文体突破
第9讲应用文写作
一、申请信&推荐信&建议信
(一)申请信
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam.
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China during this
summer vacation.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are
wanted for a Chinese calligraphy exhibition to be held in the local art
gallery.Now I'm writing to apply for the position.
First of all,having been exposed to foreign teachers since a
young age,I can communicate freely with others in English.What's
more,years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer,
which will help a lot.The most important factor is that my related
knowledge will help the audience learn more about the Chinese
calligraphy.
All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified
volunteer.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into
consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)推荐信
参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown
this summer to try out the local cuisine.I highly recommend you to
sample a well-known traditional dish called xiao long bao,which is
a type of steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup.
The time-honoured dish originated from my hometown.It is
traditionally steamed in small bamboo baskets,hence the name xiao
long is literally small steaming baskets,and has become famous all
over China.You can easily find xiao long bao in most restaurants
and food stalls here.It's a must-try dish that you won't regret.
Looking forward to your visit and trying out some delicious xiao
long bao together.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)建议信
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the inaccuracies
found in the English descriptions of some Chinese artefacts at your
museum.
During my visit,I noticed that the explanation for a Tang
Dynasty vase was not only misleading but also historically incorrect.
I kindly suggest that your museum review and correct these
descriptions to ensure they accurately reflect the cultural heritage they
represent.It would also be beneficial to collaborate with Chinese
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cultural experts or institutions to guarantee authenticity and respect
for the artefacts.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信&求助信&祝贺信
(一)邀请信
参考范文:
Dear Gabriel,
I am delighted to hear that you will be visiting our school as an
exchange student.
I would like to extend a warm welcome to you and invite you to
join us in celebrating our school's anniversary next month.The
school anniversary is an important event for us,filled with various
activities such as performances,sports competitions,and cultural
exhibitions.It will be a great opportunity for you to experience our
school spirit and get to know more about our traditions and culture.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon and showing you
around our campus.If you have any questions or need any assistance
before your arrival,please feel free to reach out to me.
Yours.
Li Hua
(二)求助信
参考范文:
Dear Mr Smith.
I'm Li Hua from Class 5,Grade 3 of our school.I'm writing to
seek your help regarding idioms.I find it quite challenging to grasp
the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts.They often
confuse me,and I'm not sure how to interpret them correctly.I
know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning,and
am eager to improve my understanding of them.
I would really appreciate it if you could share some strategies or
tips on how to better understand and remember idioms.Your
guidance would be invaluable to me.Thank you very much for your
time and support
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)祝贺信
参考范文:
Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved second prize in our
Idiom Challenge Competition!Congratulations on your remarkable
accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off,and your success
is a testament to your efforts.This achievement is not only a credit
to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work,and I am sure that many more
successes await you in the future.Once again,congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
三、咨询信&告知信&感谢信
(一)咨询信
参考范文:
Dear Tom,
How's everything going?I cannot wait to tell you the good
news that my parents have just promised me to make a tour to
England after my graduation from senior high school.That will be a
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really good chance for me to experience English culture and improve
my oral English.I'm writing to ask you for some suggestions.
To start with,could you please offer me some advice on such
as where to stay,what to eat and how to travel in England?In the
meantime,I'd appreciate it if you could tell me some must-see
tourist attractions and arrangements for the tour.I'm sure your
advice will make my visit enjoyable and worthwhile.Moreover,I'd
like to invite you to visit China when it's convenient for you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours:
Li Hua
(二)告知信
参考范文:
Dear Eric】
I am excited to hear about your upcoming trip to Chongging!
Knowing you are enthusiastic about traditional Chinese culture,I am
writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the
Forbidden City,which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges
Museum.
Many cultural relics,including ancient calligraphy works,
paintings,books and porcelain vases,will be on display,which are
bound to cast light on ancient Chinese culture.To show respect for
our national treasure,food and drinks are not allowed while touring
the museum.Moreover,flashes are prohibited when you are taking
photos.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)感谢信
参考范文:
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your
participation in our radio program,"Live in China".Your insightful
comments and valuable suggestions made for a truly memorable
interview.
The response from our listeners was overwhelmingly positive,
and many have expressed their appreciation for your participation and
the depth of your insight.We greatly appreciate your willingness to
share your experiences and knowledge with our community.
We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the
future.Your insights and perspectives would be a valuable addition
to our discussions.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、道歉信&慰问信&投诉信
(一)道歉信
参考范文:
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am excessively sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the
reading report you assigned on time this Friday.Now,I am writing
to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later
submission.
I know I am supposed to finish it before the deadline,but
unfortunately,I was caught in a heavy rain and had a high fever the
day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now.
Therefore,I haven't finished the reading part yet,let alone the
report.
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I hope it would be kind of you to allow me to hand in my work
next Monday.Sorry again for the inconvenience and thanks for your
understanding.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)慰问信
参考范文
Dear Julia,
I'm really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-
esteem and made you doubt yourself.
Please remember that your worth is not determined by others'
actions or words.You are a strong and incredible person,full of
unique qualities and strengths.Don't let this incident define
you.Surround yourself with people who truly appreciate and support
you.Take some time to reflect on the things that make you special,
and focus on nurturing your self-confidence.
If there's anything I can do to support you,please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)投诉信
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your customers.I am writing to complain about an
order
I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks
ago,but I didn't receive them until yesterday.And much to my
disappointment,the books were so poorly packed up that the cover
of one book was torn.To make matters worse,I found one book
missing.
I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with these
problems.I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new
set of books to me.Besides,I'd like to be informed of the process
of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、演讲稿&征文投稿&宣传稿
(一)演讲稿
参考范文:
Honorable judges and fellow students,
It's my distinct pleasure and honor to share my perspective on
the responsible and intelligent use of artificial intelligence.
Generally speaking,there are numerous advantages of AI,such
as processing information at lightning speed and assisting us in
complex tasks,thus enhancing our ability to learn and grow.
Nevertheless,as we embrace these advancements,it is crucial to be
aware of the potential downsides.For instance,over-reliance on AI
can lead to a decrease in our ability to innovate and think critically.
In conclusion,as a student,it is imperative that we approach
AI with caution and wisdom.Only in this way can we reap its
benefits while minimizing any potential downsides.That's all.
Thank you.
(二)征文投稿
参考范文:
An Unforgettable Art Lesson
I'm Li Hua.I'd like to share an unforgettable art lesson that I
had at school.
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参考答案Kindly let me know when you
(咨询对方
注意:
何时有空).I hope
(表达自己的愿望).My
1.词数80左右;
best wishes for your further success.
2.请按如下格式作答。
Yours sincerely,
Dear Christ,
(署名)
典例展示
(2024·云南昆明模拟)假定你是李华,你的外国
笔友Christ最近被北京大学录取了。请你给他写一封
信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.你的感想;
Yours sincerely,
3.表达祝愿。
Li Hua
满分范文
名师点评
Dear Christ,
1.词汇关
DLearning the good news that you have been admitted to Beijing
表示我最真诚的祝贺:offer my sincerest congratulations
University,I am conveying my most genuine congratulations on your
-convey my most genuine congratulations
success.
见证:see→witness
2The past few years has witnessed your great enthusiasm for
实现目标:reach your aim→achieve your goal
Chinese learning and the tireless efforts you have put in achieving your
聪明的:clever-一→brilliant
goal.From my perspective,this admission is a reward 3that you richly
2.句式美
deserve and a testament to the saying "no pains,no gains".Beijing
本文运用了多样化的高级句式:
University is the dream university for countless students,4where not only
①现在分词短语作状语:
can you learn from distinguished professors,but you will also be
②无灵主语句:
accompanied by the most brilliant peers.
③that引导定语从句:
I wish you greater achievements in the future and I am looking forward
④where引导非限制性定语从句。
to seeing you in China
3.结构美
Yours sincerely,
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
LiHua
实战演练
Dear Terry,
(2024·山西运城模拟)假定你是李华,交换生
Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge
Competition)中荣获二等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,
内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
Yours,
2.请按如下格式作答。
Li Hua
三、咨询信&告知信&感谢信
(一)咨询信
说明写信目的
1写作技法
具体内容1
咨询信
咨询具体事宜
具体内容2
咨询信是写信人就自己不太熟悉、不理解或想要进
具体内容3
一步了解的事情及问题,向有关部门或个人请求解答时
所使用的信件。具体写作结构为:
表示感谢并期盼回复
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第四部分
写作之文体突破
写。
|常用表达
To start with,I'd like to
(具体内容一).
1.吸引眼球开头句
If convenient,could you please offer me some detailed
information about
(具体内容二)?What's
DI'm Li Hua,planning to...I'm writing to ask for/
more,I would be obliged if you
(具体内容三).
inquire some information/details about it.
I'm expecting to receive your early reply.Thank you
我叫李华,打算…,我写信是想了解/询问一些相关
in advance for your assistance.
信息/细节。
Yours sincerely,
2I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide
(署名)
me with information on/about/regarding/concerning...
我写信是想看看您是否有可能向我提供关于…的
典例展示
信息。
(2024·河北石家庄模拟)假定你是李华,正在加
2.亮点出彩篇中句
拿大渥太华学习。你计划寒假期间在当地旅行,请写一
DCould you be so kind as to tell me the time
封e-mail向旅行社询问相关信息。要点包括:
arrangement for...?
1.旅行信息;
您能告诉我…的时间安排吗?
2.当地特色;
2I'd also like to seek some help/information on...
3.注意事项。
我还想寻求一些有关…的帮助/信息。
注意:
3If there is anything else that needs special attention,
1.词数80左右;
please inform me at your convenience
2.请按如下格式作答。
如果还有其他需要特别注意的地方,请在您方便时告
Dear Sir or Madam,
诉我。
I am Li Hua,a Chinese student,studying in
3韵味无穷结尾句
Ottawa.I'm writing to
DI would be grateful for your early reply.
如能早日答复,不胜感激。
2I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your
earliest convenience.
我期待着在您方便的时候尽早得到肯定答复。
1写作模板
Dear
(称呼),
Yours sincerely,
I'm
(自我介绍).I'm writing to inquire
Li Hua
(总述咨询的内容).
满分范文
名师点评
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,a Chinese student,studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to 1.词汇关
ask for information about your agency's Ottawa's travel for the winter
对.感兴趣:be interested in-show interest in
vacation.
最后:finally→at length
My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the
注意:notice→be aware of
departure time and traveling routes?DAs we know,Ottawa is famous
感谢的:thankful-→grateful
for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more 2.
details about these.Besides,I also show interest in the local food there.
本文运用了多样化的高级句式:
How much do I have to pay for the travel?At length,are there other
①as引导非限制性定语从句:
things 2I should be aware of?
②省略关系词的定语从句。
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience
3.结构美
Yours sincerely,
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
Li Hua
2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ
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|实战演练
2The topic of...is required to cover..,such as...
(2024·浙江Z20联盟联考)假定你是李华,父母
…的话题要求包括…,例如…
答应你明年高三毕业后去英国观光旅游。请写信给英
3The next class is about calligraphy,for which you
国网友Tom,咨询以下事情:
should make some preparations.
1.食宿、交通等问题;
下一节课是书法,为此你应做一些准备。
2.必看景点与时间安排;
3.韵味无穷结尾句
3.邀请他到中国观光。
DPlease drop me a line if you are interested in it.
注意:
如果你对它感兴趣,请给我写封信。
1.词数80左右;
2If you want to know more detailed information,
2.请按如下格式作答。
please don't hesitate to let me know.
Dear Tom,
如果你想知道更详细的信息,请不要犹豫与我联系。
1写作模板
Dear
(称呼),
Recently,
(活动)will be
held
(时间、地点).On behalf of
Yours,
(活动组织方),I am writing to inform you of
Li Hua
some relevant details about it.
First and foremost.
(细节一)
(二)告知信
Furthermore
(细节二).To sum up,
写作技法
(细节三).
告知信是历年高考应用文写作的热门话题,就是告
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding,
知对方想要了解的事情和情况。告知的内容比较广泛:
perfectly mixing learning and fun.
如安排计划类、课外活动类、广告信息类、个人情况类
Yours.
旅游介绍类等。写告知信时,应该注意语言的简洁,准
(署名)
确无误地表达重点信息,把告知信所涉及的事由、时间、
地点以及事项交代清楚。具体的写作结构为:
典例展示】
开篇表明写作目的,简要写明要告知的事情
(2024·新课标I卷改编)假定你是李华,上周五
你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chis
告知信
写明告知的具体事项(时间、地点和活动内容等)
写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你完成的作品;
结尾强调注意事项、提出建议或表达祝愿
2.你的感想。
常用表达
注意:
1.吸引眼球开头句
1.词数80左右;
DI'm writing to inform you of some relevant details
2.请按如下格式作答。
about the International Short Video Contest.
Dear Chris,
我写信是想告诉你关于国际短视频大赛的一些相关
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a
细节。
park last Friday.
2This letter is intended to inform you that an English
speech competition will be held in our school this
weekend.
这封信是想通知您,本周末我们学校将举行英语演讲
比赛。
2.亮点出彩篇中句
DThe details of...are as follows.First,...Second,...
Besides,...
Yours,
…的细节如下。第一,…第二,…此外,…
Li Hua
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第四部分写作之文体突破
写。
满分范文
名师点评
Dear Chris,
1.词汇美
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last
特别的:special→extraordinary
Friday.
难忘的:unforgettable-→memorable
I painted the scenery of the park.1where the willow branches
记住:remember-→keep..in one's memory
were dancing in the breeze and several ducks were swimming in the
机会:chance-→opportunity
river peacefully and happily.The vibrant colors of the flowers,the 2.
sunlight 2reflecting off the water and the tranquil atmosphere all added
本文运用了多样化的高级句式:
color to the painting.
①where引导非限制性定语从句;
3It was such an extraordinary and memorable experience that I
②动词-ing形式短语作定语:
would always keep it in my memory.It not only provided me with an
③结果状语从句句型:such..that.…。
opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature,but also 3.
enhanced my willingness to take inspiration from nature in the future.
本文使用了以下过渡性词语:not only.but also.
Yours.
4.结构美
Li Hua
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
实战演练
常用表达
(2024·重庆模拟)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友
1.吸引眼球开头句
Eric近期将来重庆参观三峡博物馆。请你给他写一封
DI'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your
邮件告知参观博物馆的安排,内容包括:
unselfish assistance during...
1.博物馆近期的活动;
非常感谢您在…期间给予我的无私帮助。
2.参观的注意事项;
2I'm writing to convey/express my gratitude for your
3.对他到来的期待。
kind/generous help during...
注意:
我写信感谢您在…期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。
1.词数80左右;
2.亮点出彩篇中句
2.请按如下格式作答。
DThanks to the...you provided,I had a better
Dear Eric,
understanding of it.
I am excited to hear about your upcoming trip to
多亏您提供了…,我对它有了更好的理解。
Chongqing!
2There's no denying that it is difficult for me to...
without your help.
不可否认,如果没有您的帮助,…对我来说很难。
3You really added greatly to my convenience and
pleasure of the whole trip.
您确实给我整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。
3.韵味无穷结尾句
Yours.
DFrom the bottom of my heart,I sincerely thank you
Li Hua
for your timely help.
(三)感谢信
我从心底里感谢您的及时帮助。
1写作技法」
2Thanks again for your kind help./Again,I would
like to express our sincere thanks to you.
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人
对您的友好帮助再次表示感谢。/再次向您表示我们
表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬
衷心的感谢。
或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写
一封感谢信。具体写作结构如下:
写作模板
表达感谢之情,并说明感谢的事由
Dear
(称呼),
具体帮助1
I am
writing to convey/express my sincere
感
appreciation/gratitude for
(感谢的原因).fit
具体叙述对方给予的帮助
具体帮助2
had not been for/But for/Without your kindness and help
具体帮助3
公
(对方给予的具体帮助),I wouldn't have
再次表达谢意或回报意愿
(如果没有对方帮助的后果)。
2随勾·讲与练·高三英语RJ
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During the trip/week I
(感
1.表示感谢;
)I shall never forget
(事件)inmy
2.外教的帮助;
life.It was you who
(给出细节).Many
3.活动的反响。
thanks for all the things you have done in helping us
注意:
(细节事件).
1.词数80左右;
My appreciation is beyond any words.I will be more
2.请按如下格式作答。
than pleased if I can
(能做的事情)to repay
Dear Patrick,
your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
(署名)
1典例展示
(2024·湖南长沙模拟)假定你是学生会主席李
华,学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Wok
Yours,
Li Hua
Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。
活动已经圆满结束,请你给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
满分范文
名师点评
Dear Patrick
1.词汇美
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your kind help in
衷心的:sincere-→heartfelt
Work Creates a Better Life,Twhich has turned out to be a fascinating
惊人的:amazing→fascinating
success.
肯定:surely-→definitely
2It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation
激发:arouse→fuel
skills and creative suggestions on our show.3It was under your
大量:much→tremendous
professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of 2.
cooking,gardening,etc.Their impressive performances definitely
本文运用了多样化的高级句式:
fueled their passion for daily life skills.Most importantly,this
①which引导非限制性定语从句;
activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their
②t作形式主语:
tremendous confidence.
③强调句型;
Many thanks for your time and support.
④副词作状语
Yours,3.结构美
Li Hua
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
实战演练
Dear Mr Smith,
(2024·辽宁辽阳模拟)假定你是校电台访谈节目
“Live in China”的主持人李华,上周五你校外教
Mr Smith接受了你的访谈,节目播出后反响很好。请你
给外教Mr Smith写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议;
2.希望有机会再次来节目做客。
注意:
Yours,
1.词数80左右;
Li Hua
2.请按如下格式作答。
四、道歉信&慰问信&投诉信
(一)道歉信
表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意
写作技法
道
说明道歉的具体原因
道款歉信是指因过失或疏忽给别人带来麻烦或损失
后,写信给对方赔礼道歉的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道
再次表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施
歉信要写得坦率、诚恳。具体写作结构如下:
-89-
第四部分写作之文体突破
写。