第三部分 写作高分的2大技巧-【红对勾讲与练·写作突破】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（人教版）

写作突破 第三部分写作高分的2大技巧 第7讲 字顺意畅的衔接词 衔接（过渡）性词汇的使用是让语言连贯的常用手 5.表示因果关系的过渡性词汇：because,as,since, 段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启 for,thanks to,due to,because of,so,therefore,as a 下的衔接（过渡）性词汇是非常有必要的。 result/consequence,owing to等。 写作必备。 (2024·全国甲卷书面表达)Therefore,we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further 1.表示起始关系的过渡性词汇：above all,to development of transportation. begin/start with,recently,nowadays,according to,with 因此，我们需要努力学习，为交通的进一步发展做 the development of等。 出贡献。 (2023·新课标I卷应用文写作)To begin with, 6.表示递进关系的过渡性词汇：besides,in randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced addition,additionally,what's more,furthermore, language abilities within the groups. moreover,what's worse,to make matters worse,worse 首先，随意分组可能会导致小组内不平衡的语言 stil等。 能力。 (2023·浙江1月卷应用文写作)What's more, 2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词汇：first,firstly,first you can try different kinds of workouts,such as jogging, of all,then,later,in the end,finally,at last,after that, biking,or swimming. afterwards,since then,meanwhile等。 更重要的是，你可以尝试不同类型的锻炼，如慢跑、 (2024·全国甲卷书面表达)Firstly,shared 骑自行车或游泳。 bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, 7.用来列举事实的过渡性词汇：such as,for offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. 首先，共享单车已经成为城市出行的象征，为短途 example/instance,take...for example,that is to say,as 旅行提供了一种经济且环保的替代选择。 follows,in other words等。 3.表示并列关系的过渡性词汇：and,or,as well (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)I started by as,not only...but (also )...either...or...,neither... sketching the contours of the main elements,such as trees nor.,not.but等。 and flowers. (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)The painting not 我首先画出主要元素的轮廓，比如树和花。 only represented the scene but also mirrored the 8.用来表达观点的过渡性词汇：in my opinion,in peacefulness I sensed. my view,from my point of view,as far as I am 这幅画不仅再现了场景，也反映了我感受到的 concered,as for me,personally等。 宁静。 (2023·全国乙卷书面表达)n my opinion,skiing 4.表示转折关系的过渡性词汇：but,yet,however, has always been a challenging and interesting sport while,otherwise,on the contrary,in spite of,regardless 在我看来，滑雪一直是一项具有挑战性和有趣的 of等。 运动。 (2023·全国乙卷书面表达)In the beginning,it 9.用来总结的过渡性词汇：in short,in brief,in was quite difficult to read the notes.However,it did not conclusion,in a/one word,to sum up,all in all,on the demoralize me. whole,.in general,generally speaking等。 起初，我很难看懂音符。然而，这并没有打击我的 (2021·全国乙卷书面表达)in conclusion,we 士气。 should have a good understanding of its advantages and 2烟勾·讲与练·高三英语RJ -74- disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空 more efficient above all,for another,personally,recently,besides, 总之，我们应该很好地了解它的优点和缺点，并找 meanwhile,for one thing,in a word 到一种适当的方法使我们的学习更有效率。 it has been a great public concern that 小试身手。 students lack self-protection awareness. There is a lack of social experience among students, 】.根据括号内的提示完成句子 and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great 1.We have many subjects, significance to us all.2. _security comes (例如语文、数学、英语、音 first.Without security,we can achieve nothing and 乐、艺术等) cannot live up to parents' expectations. 2. (总之)，playing basketball enriches my _protecting ourselves contributes to the life and makes me more confident. healthy development,which is associated with the 3 (就我个人而言)，all our happiness of every family.4. it also helps to classmates have learned a lot from our communication build a more harmonious society. and the various activities. 5. in order to protect us students, 4. (首先)，the name of the movie is we should strengthen our security Growing Together,which is about the development of awareness.7. _when accidents occur,we our beloved school. should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for 5. (而且)，listening to some soft help.The government also plays a leading role in music does relax your mood and give you a new start. protecting students.8. only by the combined 6 (相反)，smart phones not only efforts of every side involved can we live and study in take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to harmony. our health. 第8讲 合理恰当的细节添加 在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数80左 2.增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染 右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定 等内容 了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加 (2020·新高考I卷应用文写作)Every runner tried 细节”。 their best to finish the task. 写作必备。 每个赛跑者都尽全力完成任务。 Every runner tried their best to finish the task, 1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明 with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. (2024·淅江1月卷应用文写作)Desk stretches 3.增添事件的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等 involve performing a series of stretching exercises right at 内容 your desk I will take part in some social activities. 桌面伸展运动包括在你的办公桌前进行一系列伸 我将参加一些社会活动。 展练习。 If possible,I will take part in some social >Desk stretches involve performing a series of activities so that I can know more about society. stretching exercises right at your desk.You can stretch 件，结果) your neck,shoulders,arms,and legs without needing I need a good rest.I'll do some reading. any special equipment 我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。 -75- 第三部分写作高分的2大技巧 写。 I need a good rest because I do feel tired after best taste,we truly enjoyed them and were proud of the the hard work of all these years.I'll do some reading fruits of our labor. for fun,as well as for knowledge.(原因，目的) 4.The event was of great help to us. 4.结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡 议等 (我们不仅意识到为未来的 Although I was very tired this summer holiday,I 职业规划是很重要的)，we also knew how to choose felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受) majors that will lead us to our favorite jobs. 尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到很 5.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their 高兴。 English lessons. I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. (令我高兴的是，他 (评价) 们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高). 我认为这样的活动很有必要，也很有意义。 6.Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you life and and that you can enjoy your new school life.( (尽全力为我们的环境做出更多贡献). 我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享 Ⅱ.根据中文提示，补全短文并背通 受新的学校生活。 1. (为了 It is a duty for us students to protect our school 更好地将中国文化元素融人英语学习中)，our school environment and make it clean.(倡议) launched an English speech contest themed "My favourite 作为学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们 Chinese History Stories"in the auditorium at 9:00 am last 的职责。 Friday. 小试身手。 The activity consisted of three parts.2. I.根据括号内的提示完成句子 (首先，每位参赛者就一个中国故事发表演讲)and then 1.Last Friday,the Students'Union in our school was asked to make an impromptu speech according to the organized a flea market on the playground, questions given by the judges,3. (旨在鼓励资 (这受到了观众的热烈欢迎).The last part 源回收和满足个人需求)。 was evaluating and presenting the trophies to the award 2.I have no doubt that you'll bounce back more strongly winners. (因为你 This activity was a huge success,4. 一直是一个专注的学生) (它鼓励我 (虽然我们包的饺子形状不一)and might not have the 们承担起责任，向世界传播我们辉煌的中国文化)： 2对闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -76-参 第一部分写作必备的基础表达 第1讲简单不凡8种基本句型 I.完成句子 1.began to breathe hard 2.gave him a big hug 3.was a refreshing break 4.made a terrible mistake 5.started at our school gate 6.there is a bridge Ⅱ.利用八种基本句式，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 1.you will mainly learn Tang poetry 2.You'd better make full preparations before class 3.which makes it easy for you to go through the class 4.If there is anything that I can help you 第2讲整齐和谐的并列句 I.用适当的并列连词填空 1.and 2.or 3.but 4.Either 5.so 6.while Ⅱ.用并列连词完成句子 1.and gave it to me 2.but also enhanced my willingness to take inspiration from natu 3.so it's perfect for our school environment 4.while building a healthy habit takes a shorter time 第二部分写作增分的高级表达 第3讲不同凡响的亮点词汇 I.请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分 1.regarding/concerning/related to 2.inform 3.As a consequence opportunity 4.various/a variety of/varieties of/a large number of 5.Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore/In addition 6.Bear in mind/Keep in mind Ⅱ.请用亮点词汇替换下面作文中的黑体部分并背诵 1.more than 2.rapidly 3.set up 4.An increasing number of 5.available 6.charming 7.severe 8.influence/impact 9.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned 第4讲简明扼要的非谓语动词 I.用非谓语动词升级句子 1.You might have heard of the Music Festival to be held in school 2.written by foreign friends 3.With the dough figurine finished/The dough figurine finished 4.Feeling quite sorry for that Ⅱ.使用非谓语动词，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 1.mentioned in the e-mail 2.get/have your problem settled 3.to smile at your classmates 4.your wish to make friends 5.try talking with a classmate 6.Having regained your confidence 考答案 第5讲画龙点晴的主从复合句 【.用主从复合句完成句子 1.where you can stay for a week 2.There is no doubt that 3.how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun 4.What I want to stress Ⅱ.使用主从复合句，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 1.which brought me lots of happiness 2.what impressed me most 3.because it made me feel at home 4.that/which)you offered us 5.in which I was able to open my heart to your friends 6.(that)the unforgettable experience will be kept in my mind forever 第6讲风格独具的特殊句式 I.用特殊句式完成句子 1.Not only was painting outdoors a refreshing change 2.it's a good idea to make your reservations 3.So excited and privileged am I to hear the news re 4.it was his perseverance and determination that Ⅱ.使用特殊句式，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 1.When it came to my hometown 2.It was the river that 3.it is a great pity that 4.Not only are there no fish left 5.It is a chemical factory nearby that 6.can we live a happy life 第三部分写作高分的2大技巧 第7讲字顺意畅的衔接词 I.根据括号内的提示完成句子 1.such as Chinese,maths,English,music and art 2.In short/In a word 3.As far as I'm concerned 4.To begin with/First of all 5.Besides/In addition/What's more/Moreover 6.On the contrary Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空 1.Recently 2.For one thing 3.For another 4.Meanwhile 5.Personally 6.above all 7.Besides 8.In a word our 第8讲 合理恰当的细节添加 【.根据括号内的提示完成句子 1.aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs 2.because you've always been a dedicated student 3.Although the dumplings we made were in different shapes 4.Not only did we realize it was important to make a plan for our future career 5.To my joy,they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me 6.try our best to make more contributions to our environment 137- 参考答案 答。 Ⅱ.根据中文提示，补全短文并背诵 1.To better integrate Chinese cultural elements into English learning 2.First,every contestant delivered a speech in regard to a Chinese story 3.which was well received by the audience 4.which encouraged us to shoulder our responsibilities to spread our splendid Chinese culture to the world 第四部分写作之文体突破 第9讲应用文写作 一、申请信&推荐信&建议信 (一)申请信 参考范文： Dear Sir or Madam. I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese calligraphy exhibition to be held in the local art gallery.Now I'm writing to apply for the position. First of all,having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English.What's more,years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot.The most important factor is that my related knowledge will help the audience learn more about the Chinese calligraphy. All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua (二)推荐信 参考范文： Dear Peter, I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown this summer to try out the local cuisine.I highly recommend you to sample a well-known traditional dish called xiao long bao,which is a type of steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup. The time-honoured dish originated from my hometown.It is traditionally steamed in small bamboo baskets,hence the name xiao long is literally small steaming baskets,and has become famous all over China.You can easily find xiao long bao in most restaurants and food stalls here.It's a must-try dish that you won't regret. Looking forward to your visit and trying out some delicious xiao long bao together. Yours, Li Hua (三)建议信 参考范文： Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern regarding the inaccuracies found in the English descriptions of some Chinese artefacts at your museum. During my visit,I noticed that the explanation for a Tang Dynasty vase was not only misleading but also historically incorrect. I kindly suggest that your museum review and correct these descriptions to ensure they accurately reflect the cultural heritage they represent.It would also be beneficial to collaborate with Chinese 2随内·讲与练·高三英语RJ -1 cultural experts or institutions to guarantee authenticity and respect for the artefacts. Thank you for your attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、邀请信&求助信&祝贺信 (一)邀请信 参考范文： Dear Gabriel, I am delighted to hear that you will be visiting our school as an exchange student. I would like to extend a warm welcome to you and invite you to join us in celebrating our school's anniversary next month.The school anniversary is an important event for us,filled with various activities such as performances,sports competitions,and cultural exhibitions.It will be a great opportunity for you to experience our school spirit and get to know more about our traditions and culture. I am looking forward to meeting you soon and showing you around our campus.If you have any questions or need any assistance before your arrival,please feel free to reach out to me. Yours. Li Hua (二)求助信 参考范文： Dear Mr Smith. I'm Li Hua from Class 5,Grade 3 of our school.I'm writing to seek your help regarding idioms.I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts.They often confuse me,and I'm not sure how to interpret them correctly.I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning,and am eager to improve my understanding of them. I would really appreciate it if you could share some strategies or tips on how to better understand and remember idioms.Your guidance would be invaluable to me.Thank you very much for your time and support Yours, Li Hua (三)祝贺信 参考范文： Dear Terry, I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment! Your dedication and hard work have paid off,and your success is a testament to your efforts.This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school. Keep up the good work,and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future.Once again,congratulations! Yours, Li Hua 三、咨询信&告知信&感谢信 (一)咨询信 参考范文： Dear Tom, How's everything going?I cannot wait to tell you the good news that my parents have just promised me to make a tour to England after my graduation from senior high school.That will be a 38-