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(2022·全国甲卷书面表达)As a consequence, 它的目的是唤起世界对保护海洋的认识，因为海洋 keeping our oceans clean and safe is of vital significance. 对人类的生存至关重要。 因此，保持我们的海洋清洁和安全具有至关重要的 2.should→be supposed to应该，理应；contribute 意义。 to→nake a contribution to对…做出贡献 attractive有吸引力的；appealing有吸引力的；elegant优 (2024·全国甲卷书面表达)Therefore,we are beautiful 关的；charming迷人的 supposed to study hard and make a contribution to the (2023·全国乙卷书面表达)Cooking has always further development of transportation. been an attractive activity to me,as I love trying 因此，我们应该努力学习，为交通的进一步发展做 出贡献。 different cuisines and experimenting with flavors. 烹任对我来说一直是一项有吸引力的活动，因为我 3.finally-→in the end最后；get→gain/acquire得 到；many-various许多；know→have a good knowledge 喜欢尝试不同的菜肴和尝试不同的味道。 of精通… tough艰难的，棘手的；challenging具有挑战性的 difficult/ (全国Ⅱ卷)In the end,all of us not only gained complex复杂的，难以理解的；puzzling/confusing令人 hard various fresh and tasty fruits,but also had a good 困惑的：complicated复杂的：tricky难对付的 knowledge of green food. 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -68- 最后，我们不仅收获了各种新鲜可口的水果，还对 4.Moreover,as Beijing has hosted many 绿色食品有了很好的了解。 )international games,it won't be too difficult to 4.understand→have a better understanding of更好 hold another major sporting event here. 地理解… 5.Besides )you'd better bring some (2021·浙江6月卷应用文写作)It is likely that meaningful gifts,such as a bunch of flowers or some you can have a better understanding of the art of fresh fruits. traditional Chinese painting through the exhibition. 6.Remember that you should avoid 通过这次展览，你可能会更好地了解中国传统绘画 getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet. 艺术。 Ⅱ.请用亮点词汇替换下面作文中的黑体部分并背诵 5.find→come across偶然发现；interest-→attract Dear Jason, 吸引 I'm very happy to hear from you and know about (2021·新高考I卷应用文写作)The first time I your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to tell you came across the newspaper three years ago,I was deeply something about my home city Quanzhou. attracted by the content which mainly focuses on the Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. daily routine of youngsters. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten 三年前，我第一次接触到这份报纸，就深深地被它 years.New bridges and roads have been built,high-rise 的内容所吸引，它主要关注年轻人的日常生活。 buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and 6.consider-take...into consideration考虑 more schools and hospitals are useful for the native (2023·新课标I卷应用文写作)Should it be people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city. possible,I truly hope you can take my suggestions into But there are still some problems,such as heavy traffic in consideration rush hours and serious air pollution,which have a bad 如果可能的话，我真心希望您能考虑一下我的 effect on people's daily life.I think Quanzhou should 建议。 develop healthily and scientifically so that we could have 小试身手。 a better home city in the future. Yours, I.请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分 Li Hua 1.By attending activities of this kind,students have 1.very→ learned a lot about )Chinese 2.fast→ poetry and traditional culture. 3.built-→ 2.I know that you are interested in traditional Chinese 4.More and more→ culture,so I am writing to tell )you that 5.use ful-→ there will be a calligraphy camp held in our school this 6.beautiful-→ winter vacation. 7.serious→ 3.Therefore )I cherish every second 8.effect→ and every chance to learn and put all my 9.I think→ heart into study. 第4讲简明扼要的非谓语动词 众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会使句子与句 写作必备。 子之间的关系显得松散，让人觉得单调乏味；而文章中 过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换不但使作文 写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进 的句型多样、句子活泼，而且结构紧凑、言简意赅。 行转换，使其成为较高级的句式。转换时，只需两步。 -69- 第二部分写作增分的高级表达 写。 第一步：写出两个简单句。 (2024·浙江1月卷应用文写作)When asked how DThe boys were making the most of time. she made it,she proudly shared the mind trick with Pitt. 2They wanted to finish the work earlier. 当被问及她是如何做到的时候，她自豪地与皮特分 第二步：保留句①，用非谓语动词改写句②。 享了这个心理技巧 The boys were making the most of time so as)to finish the work 3.compared with/to..与…做比较 earlier. (2023·浙江1月卷)Compared to our small flat, (2023·新课标I卷应用文写作)This can hinder Bill's house seemed like a palace the progress of students as the more advanced one may 和我们的小公寓相比，比尔的房子就像是宫殿。 dominate the conversation.It leaves little room for the 4.be said/reported/considered to..据说/据报道/ other students to improve. (人们)认为… >This can hinder the progress of students as the Zhang Sanfeng,a Taoist,was said to have more advanced one may dominate the conversation, invented tai chi after drawing inspiration from a fight leaving little room for the other students to improve. 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 between a snake and a bird. 用非谓语动词转换复合句时，需转换的一般是从句 据说，道士张三丰从一场蛇鸟之战中汲取灵感，发 部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时 明了太极拳 态和语态即可，所以只需两步。 5.with+宾语+宾语补足语 第一步：写出一个复合句。 (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)During the class, Since you have realized that your time is limited,you'll have to I painted a landscape featuring the towering green trees study for your goals without anger or hesitation. and the clear blue sky,with a family of ducks 第二步：用非谓语动词转换since引导的原因状语从句，realize swimming in the lake. 与you之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，且表示已完成，故用动词ing 在课堂上，我画了一幅风景画，画中有高耸的绿树 形式的完成式作状语。 和湛蓝的天空，还有鸭群在湖里游泳。 Having realized that your time is limited,you'll have to study for (2024·新课标I卷读后续写)Finally,with just your goals without anger or hesitation. two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)When I hear that 最后，在只剩下两分钟的时候，我们赶到了公共汽 you are an enthusiast in painting,I could hardly wait to 车站。 share my delightful experience from our painting class. -Hearing that you are an enthusiast in painting,I 小试身手。 could hardly wait to share my delightful experience from I.用非谓语动词升级句子 our painting class. 1.You might have heard of the Music Festival.It will be 三、写作中含非谓语动词的常见结构 held in our school. 1.remain to be done有待于被做 Many questions have to be settled and much remains (非谓语动词作定语) to be done in our educational work. 我们的教育工作中还有许多问题要解决，还有许多 2.It carries articles which were written by foreign friends 事情要去做。 about the cultures of their home countries. 2.when/while/once/unless/although +doing/ →It carries articles done about the cultures of their home countries.(非谓语动 (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)It was wonderful 词作定语) to be outdoors,surrounded by nature,while expressing 3.The dough figurine was finished and I was extremely my creativity. excited. 置身户外，被大自然环绕，同时表达我的创造力，这 I was 真是太美妙了。 extremely excited.(with复合结构/独立主格结构) 2烟闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -70 4.I feel quite sorry for that.I begin to think about what 微笑).A smile speaks louder about4. to do to help (你交朋友的愿望)than any word.Your smile → I begin to think about what will show that you are friendly to them.Next, to do to help.(非谓语动词作状语) 5. (试着和同学交谈)who is as Ⅱ.使用非谓语动词，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 shy as you or who shares the same interest.You can Dear Shirley, discuss your studies with him or her,or you can also talk Glad to receive your e-mail.The problem 1. about your hobbies.Besides,if anyone is in trouble in (在邮件中提到的)is common among life or study,you should be ready to help him or her. middle school students.Don't worry about it too much. 6 (在重拾你的自信后)，you Follow the advice I give you,and you may can make as many friends as possible 2. (使你的问题得到解决). Yours, First of all,believe in yourself.The first thing you Li Hua must do is 3. (对你的同学 第5讲画龙点晴的主从复合句 主从复合句通常为定语从句、名词性从句和状语从 ->I'm glad to learn that you want a student 句，其中名词性从句又分为主语从句、宾语从句、表语从 volunteer,which I am quite interested in. 句和同位语从句。 二、丰富多样的名词性从句 写作必备。 名词性从句是高中阶段重要的语法项目之一，也是 写作中常用的高级表达。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、 一、润色添彩的定语从句 表语从句和同位语从句。 定语从句的使用能够反映出较高的语言运用能力， (2024·新课标I卷读后续写)I told him that 所以一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语 thanks to his generosity and timely help,everything 从句。 had gone smoothly. (2024·新课标I卷应用文写作)In a word,it was 我告诉他，多亏了他的慷慨和及时的帮助，一切都 进行得很顺利。 not just an art class;it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. (淅江卷)What you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign 总之，这不仅仅是一堂艺术课；它是我真正珍视的 culture. 与自然的一次亲密接触的时刻。 你告诉我的关于你的国家的事情开阔了我的视野， (2023·全国甲卷书面表达)He stressed the self- 激发了我对外国文化的兴趣。 cultivation,respect for elders,and the pursuit of 注意：在写作中，把两个简单句合并为一个含有名 knowledge,which serves as a guiding light in our fast- 词性从句的复合句，是一种质的升华。 paced and interconnected world. He said something at the meeting.His words were 他强调修身养性、尊长和求知，这是我们这个快节 very attractive. 奏、相互联系的世界的一盏指路明灯。 -What he said at the meeting was very attractive. 注意：在写作中，把两个简单句合并为一个含有 三、条理分明的状语从句 定语从句的复合句，就是从低级表达到高级表达的 状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比 转换。 较、方式、目的和结果状语从句。在英语写作中，状语从 I'm glad to learn that you want a student volunteer.I 句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用使作文更具吸 am quite interested in it. 引力。 -71- 第二部分写作增分的高级表达 写。 (2024·新课标I卷读后续写)ft's OK withⅡ.使用主从复合句，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 you,I can pay you then,with an additional 10 euros as a Dear David. gesture of my gratitude. I'm writing to express my grateful feeling to you. 如果你不介意的话，我那时可以付给你，并且再额 Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party last 外加10欧元以示我的感激之情。 week,1. (它给我带 小试身手。 来了很多快乐) During the party,2. (使我 I.用主从复合句完成句子 印象最深的)was your happy family.Both your parents 1.After that,you can go to Shanghai, were enthusiastic.I really enjoyed it 3. 之后你可以去上海，在那里你可以待一周。 (因为这使我感到非常自在). The dessert and other snacks 4. (你提供给我们的) nothing is more were tasty.In addition,the light music and candlelight important than health. 毫无疑问健康最重要。 created a nice and warm atmosphere,5. 3.While working,I realised (在这种 氛围中，我能够向你的朋友们敞开心扉) Thanks again for your dinner.I am sure 6. 在劳动的时候，我认识到在炎热的太阳底下干农活是 (这次难忘的 多么不容易。 经历会永远保存在我的心中). is that you'd better Yours, bring some gifts,such as a book or a Chinese knot. 我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中 Li Hua 国结。 第6讲风格独具的特殊句式 在写作中，合理地使用特殊句式，会提升作文的档 It wasn't until that moment that I realized I was 次。常用的特殊句式有强调句型、倒装句型和t句型。 so desperate for the prize to prove myself. 写作必备0 直到那一刻，我才意识到我非常渴望这个奖项来证 明自己。 一、突出重点的强调句型 二、平衡句子的倒装句型 强调句型可强调除谓语动词和表语外的其他任何 在写作中，倒装句的应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也 成分，如主语、宾语、状语等。它的灵活运用不仅有助于 比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。 增强表达效果，突出要强调的重点内容，还能彰显较强 1.“oly+状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。 的英语语言运用能力。其基本结构为“Itis/was+被强 (2023·新课标I卷应用文写作)Only in this way 调部分+hat/who+其他部分”。 can we achieve a relatively good result. 只有这样，我们才能取得一个比较好的结果。 (2024·新课标I卷读后续写)I gratefully informed 2.none,neither,nor,not,never,hardly,little, him that it was with his assistance that I didn't miss my seldom等否定词以及由no构成的表示否定含义的短语 important conference. 如at no time,by no means等置于句首时，句子用部分 我感激地告诉他，正是在他的帮助下，我才没有错 倒装。 过我的重要的会议。 (2024·浙江1月卷应用文写作)Not only does it 注意：在写作中，我们可以通过强调句型将句子提 enhance our physical well-being,but it also fosters a 高到一个新的层次。 sense of teamwork. (新高考I卷)I didn't realize how desperate I was 它不仅能增强我们的身体健康，还能培养团队合作 for the prize to prove myself until that moment. 的意识。 2对闪·讲与练·高三英语RJ -72 3.as引导让步状语从句时，表示“尽管”，句子用部 (2023·新课标I卷应用文写作)I'd appreciate it if 分倒装（表语或部分谓语提前）。 you could consider an alternative approach. Child as he is,he knows a lot about astronomy. 如果你能考虑另一种方法，我将不胜感激。 虽然他是个孩子，但他对天文学了解很多。 4.在“so/such..that.”结构中，当so/such位于句 小试身手。 首时，其后的句子用部分倒装 I.用特殊句式完成句子 So important is the conference that I can't afford to 1.(2024·新课标卷应用文写作) miss it! but it also allowed 这个会议太重要了，我不能错过！ me to see colors and shapes in a new light..(倒装) 5.here,there,now,then,out,in,up,down,on 在户外画画不仅是一种令人耳目一新的变化，而且它 the wall,in the room等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或 也让我以新的视角看待色彩和形状。 介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词而不是代词时，句子 2.But no matter when you travel, 用全部倒装。 at least 90 days in advance. In that picture,around the table with three books 但无论你什么时候去旅行，你最好至少提前90天 on it sit three students. 在那幅图中，三名学生坐在桌子周围，桌上有三 预订。 本书。 3.(2023·新课标1卷应用文写作) (2023·浙江1月卷)Here is some advice on how that you will hold an oral to make a trip by rail as pleasant as possible. English course for our students..(倒装) 以下是关于如何尽可能愉快地乘坐火车去旅行的 听到你们将为我们的学生举办一门英语口语课程的 些建议。 消息，我感到非常兴奋和荣幸 注意：在写作中，我们可以通过倒装让句子更高级。 4.(2022·新高考I卷读后续写)Although David was (202l·全国乙卷书面表达)We can truly enjoy the the last to finish. benefits of modern technology only by being smart online deeply moved all the audience.(强调句) learners 虽然戴维是最后一个完成比赛的，但正是他的毅力和 Only by being smart online learners can we 决心深深打动了所有观众。 truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology. Ⅱ.使用特殊句式，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 三、避免头重脚轻的t句型 1. (当谈到我的家乡时)，I 1.t作形式主语 always felt warm in my heart.There used to be a river to 在英语中，为了避免头重脚轻，经常用t作形式主 the south of my village,in which fish were swimming 语，而把真正的主语后置。真正的主语常为动词不定式 happily.2. (正是这条河)gave me a 或从句，有时也可以是动名词。灵活运用t句型可使文 lot of wonderful memories. 章更高级，结构更紧凑 But 3. (很遗憾)all these (2024·浙江1月卷应用文写作)t's a quick and good things are gone.4. 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