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该初中英语课件围绕“表达音乐与电影偏好”主题，核心知识点为运用定语从句描述喜好及理由。课堂导入通过呈现流行、轻音乐等多种音乐类型及动作片、喜剧等电影类型，结合“I like music that...”等例句引导学生模仿，搭建从词汇积累到句子表达再到段落写作的学习支架，衔接从基础句型到篇章写作的知识点脉络。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、思维品质与学习能力培养，通过“审题立意-谋篇布局-积句成篇”三步写作法，搭配不同类型例句库、范文剖析及升格技巧（如定语从句、时间状语从句运用）。例如提供《My Favorite Song》范文展示结构，练笔任务引导学生迁移运用，助力学生提升语言表达与逻辑组织能力，教师可借助系统步骤与素材高效开展写作教学。

单元写作讲练 Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Tang原创课件 小红书Tang 1 To review key phrases and sentences that express preferences. To learn to write a passage about your favorite kind of music/movie and your favorite song/movie. To check yourself. Learning objectives What kind of music do you like? pop music I like music that I can dance to it. I like music that can make me relax. What kind of music do you like? light music I like music that is quiet. I like music that can make me comfortable. What kind of music do you like? rock music I like music that is loud and energetic. I like music that can make me excited. What kind of music do you like? Children's songs I like music that is lively. I like music that can make me happy. What kind of music do you like? Chinese folk music I like music that I can sense both beauty and the sadness. I like music that can make me think about the pain and wounds. What kind of movie do you like? action movies I like movies that make me excited. I like movies that teach me to face difficulties bravely . What kind of movie do you like? comedies I like movies that make me relaxed. I like movies that help me to keep the good mood. What kind of movie do you like? cartoons I like movies that is interesting. I like movies that give me something to think about. What kind of movie do you know? scary movies I like movies that make me scared but excited. I like movies that can help me replease my presssure. What kind of movie do you know? documentaries I like movies that provide plenty of information. I like movies that I can learn more about history. Favorite kind of music/movie Why I like this song/movie Why I like this kind of music/movie How this song/movie makes me feel Favorite song/movie Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie Historical drama Makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives Gone with the Wind It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast. Deeply moved-sad about the effects of war, but I'm hopeful for the human spirit. It’s one of the best movies of all time. What kind of music or movies do you like best? What is your favorite song/ movie? Make notes in the chart below. 3a Use your notes to write an article for a newspaper or magazine to tell people about your favorite kind of music/movie and your favorite song/movie. Useful expressions： My favorite kind of music/movie is… I like… because … It was…by… When I listen to /watch it, I feel… I think you should listen to/watch it too because … 3b 本单元以“Music and Movies”为话题，通过对音乐和电影等相关材料的学习，学生能够学会谈论自己的兴趣、爱好，准确地表达自己对某事物的好恶，感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。 话题分析 person 人称 第一人称: I like…best. I feel…when I listen to/watch… 第三人称： My favorite movie/song is ……. It is about…. 注意主次人称，避免导致人称混乱 tense 时态 一般现在时 I like movies/songs that ……. 一般过去时 When I first watched /listened to it , I felt…… 写作思路点拨 引入话题：My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day. 介绍自己喜欢的音乐：When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up… 表达自己的观点：Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best. 主要用定语从句来表达自己偏爱的音乐和事物，并阐述自己的观点。 17 My Favorite Song My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day. Usually I like songs that have great lyrics or rhythm. When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up, songs like Big Big World are my first choice because they are delightful and easy to follow. The lyrics may be simple, but very cheerful, and the rhythm, too.When I sing along with them, I feel refreshed and relaxed. If I’m stressed out or uneasy, I love to listen to songs that are gentle and quiet, Our Canon in D is my favorite, which is performed by two people, a guitarist and a singer. The guitar player is great, the lyrics are comforting and the singer sings perfectly. After listening to it, I’ll calm down and gain my strength again. Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best. Sample writing: 开篇点题 展开描述 结尾总述 18 It's time to write! 一阶段：审题立意 某英语报社正在向学生征稿，题目是“my favorite movies”。 假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文向该报社投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的电影并说明理由。 要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，不少于80字。 人称：第一人称 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时 19 二阶段：谋篇布局 总述 具体介绍 表达感情 My name is... In my spare time, I like movies which... My favorite movie is... The story is about... He is born to... However, his tries his best to... It makes me... ... influence me a lot. What's more, the songs... In short/In a word, the movie... It is well worth watching. Outline: 20 sing along with 跟着……—起唱 in spare time 在空闲时间 cheer up（使)变得更高兴;振奋起来 plenty of 大量;充足 depend on 视……而定;取决于 be born in/on 出生于 try one ‘s best to do sth. 尽全力做某事 stick to 坚持;固守 not only ... but also... 不但……而且…… in this way 这样;通过这种方法 remind... of .../ make... recall... 提醒……;使……想起…… be full of/ be filled with 充满;装满 短语储备 三阶段：积句成篇 21 范文欣赏 My Favorite Movie I'm Li Hua. My favorite movie is Transformers. This film was made by a famous director who is named Michael Bay in America. I am shocked by the high-techs and computer special effects that it uses. I like it very much because it has plenty of huge scenes and famous movie stars. Besides, when I see it I feel very happy for its wonderful story, and it teaches me to respect anybody who protects us. This film tells us that we should be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also has a lot of robot toys that I like. I think you should watch it because it not only can cheer you up but also gives you a strong heart and confidence. In a word, the movie is really fantastic. It is well worth watching. 22 Key points Check Good Structure 3’ Good sentences 3’ Correct grammar/spelling 5’ Good logic 2’ Tidy writing 2’ 互评 Check List 中考 第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 Peer-editing 24 ◆开头句 ①We had a discussion about the topic “My Favorite Movie”. ②Music tells us who we are. It also lets us know the world in a different way. ◆中间句 ①He thinks it is exciting to enjoy watching an exciting superhero save the world just in time. ②Liu Ping likes watching comedies. They can help him relax after a long week at school. 25 ◆结尾句 ①I believe you will fall in love with this kind of music. ②Every time I watch this movie,I feel nervous but amused,and I also learn how to overcome difficulties in life. 【名言积累】 ①Music is the universal language of mankind.音乐是全人类共同的语言。 ②Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.音乐是治疗心灵苦恼的药。 26 假如你是王红，在今天的班会上，同学们讨论了“我最喜爱的电影”， 并对在电影院里如何做一名文明的观影者（well-mannered movie watcher） 交流了想法。你的笔友Jack对班会的内容很感兴趣，请你根据以下内容，给 Jack写一封100词左右的电子邮件。 写作要点： 1.所有同学都参加了今天的班会; 2.同学们最喜爱的电影：（1）刘平：喜剧片;（2）周雷：功夫片; 3.谈谈在电影院里如何做一名文明的观影者。 27 ▶▶审题指导 1.文体：应用文 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称 3.时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 4.写作要点：①介绍班会主题；②介绍同学们最喜爱的电影；③谈谈在电影 院如何做一名文明的观影者 28 ▶▶思路点拨 29 ▶▶范文赏析 ___________ ________________________ Now let me introduce today’s class meeting to you. All the students in our class ①were in the class meeting. We had a discussion about the topic “My Favorite Movie”.②Liu Ping likes watching comedies. They can help him relax after a long week at school.③Zhou Dear Jack, How is everything going? 30 Lei likes kung fu movies about superheroes,because those superheroes always save the world just in time. We also ④had different ideas about how to be a well-mannered movie watcher in the cinema. In my opinion,even if we are with our friends,⑤we should keep the voice down in public.⑥Speak softly for a short time on the phone and try to keep away from others. The above are all about the class meeting. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Hong 31 Dear Jack, How is everything going?Now let me introduce today’s class meeting to you. 升格技巧 技巧一:巧用短语 take part in和 come up with 分别升格①④ 32 All the students in our class ①____________ the class meeting. We had a discussion about the topic “My Favorite Movie”.②___________________________ ________________________________________________ _______ ③______________________________________ ________________________________________________ 技巧二:巧用that 引导的定语从句 和who 引导的定 语从句分别升格 ②③ took part in Liu Ping likes watching comedies that can help him relax after a long week at school. Zhou Lei likes kung fu movies about superheroes who always save the world just in time. 续表 33 We also ④_____________ different ideas about how to be a well-mannered movie watcher in the cinema. In my opinion,even if we are with our friends, ⑤______________________________________________. ⑥___________________________（当你正在使用手机 的时候）,speak softly for a short time on the phone and try to keep away from others. The above are all about the class meeting. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Hong 技巧三:巧用it’s better for sb.to do sth.句型升格 ⑤ 技巧四:巧用when 引导的时间状语 从句升格⑥ came up with it’s better for us to keep the voice down in public When you are using a phone 续表 34 艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困 难挫折时，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你的成长过程中，是不 是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请 你以“My Favorite ____”为题，介绍你最喜爱的一本书、一首歌或者一部电 影。 35 参考要点： 1.作品介绍； 2.喜爱的理由； 3.…… 注意事项： 1.词数：100左右； 2.短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 36 ▶▶审题指导 1.文体：________ 2.人称：__________ 3.时态：____________ 4.写作要点：①____________;②______________ 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 ①作品介绍 ②喜爱的理由 37 ▶▶思路点拨 （温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲） Movie Of all kinds of movies,adventure movis are my favorite. ①Introduce your favorite movie②The reason why you like it best Every time I watch this movie,I feel nervous but amused,and also learn how to overcome difficulties in life. 38 ▶▶小试身手 My Favorite _______ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Movie Of all kinds of movies,adventure movies are my favorite. The first reason is that the heroes are so smart and brave that they can overcome every difficulty in the end！Besides,they are always full of actions and surprises. Among those movies,the most impressive one for me is Jumanji which is acted by the famous actor Robin McLaurim Williams. I love the movie best because I can see the growth of a young man and 39 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ learn a lot from him. At first,the main character Alan was shy and lonely. However,he became more confident and easy-going during the exciting adventure. Every time I watch this movie,I feel nervous but amused,and I also learn how to overcome difficulties in life. $