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2025-2026学年九年级英语上学期期末重难点突破(人教版)
专题17 期末复习之书面表达14篇(单元话题+期末模拟试题)
Units1-14单元话题
单元
话题
Unit 1 How can we become good learners?
学习英语的好方法并提出建议
Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
节假日活动
Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
礼貌的用语去询问信息及查询方位
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
对比自己以前和现在在外貌、性格和习惯上的变化
Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?
介绍中国传统手工艺
Unit 6 When was it invented?
描述物品的发明史
Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
关于家规并给出建议
Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.
根据相关信息做推断
Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
介绍自己喜爱的音乐或歌星
Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.
风俗习惯与文明礼仪
Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
事物对人的影响
Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
自己幸运或者不幸的一天
Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!
环境保护问题并提出建议
Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
初中三年的学习经历,感恩学校和老师
本套资料共14篇训练,从上到下每个单元依次对应1篇单元话题训练
书面表达期末模拟试题
1.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息,谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由,并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in the classroom
·fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
·facetoface communication
·colorful class activities
·team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet
·flexible (灵活的) timetable
a plan made by oneself
·online communication
·rich learning resources
·any place with the Internet
1.对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由,并提出你认为的不足;
2.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think ____________
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2.假如你是张平,你的美国好友Alice 将来中国游玩,她对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。请你根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个你觉得有特别意义的中国节日。
Alice: I like Chinese traditional culture, especially the spirit behind it. By the way, I also like Chinese food.
Spring Festival
·on the first day of lunar year
·a lot of celebrations
·dumplings
Lantern Festival
·on the fifteenth day of lunar year
·lantern show
·tangyuan
注意:
1.邮件需包含节日的相关信息,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.字数80词左右。
Dear Alice,
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3.假如你叫李丹,你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封80词左右的邮件给你的朋友们,介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3:00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站,沿着广场路走,直到经过兴业街,公园在左边;
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器;
3. 你的照相机坏了,能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照;
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球;
5. 那天天气会很好,大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
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Li Dan
4.你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日,你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识,给她回一封email。
要点包含:
要求:
1. 对比过去与现在的情况:日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面(各1条);
1. 所给信息完整表述;
2. 你认为最大的一个改变;
2. 分段,合理使用过渡词,使文章通顺并有逻辑;
3. 国家发生改变的原因(至少1 条);
3. 拼写,语法正确,表达流畅,书写干净整齐;
4. 你的感受(至少2条)。
4. 格式正确,120 词左右。
可能用到的短语:经济发展economic development 70周年70th anniversary
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5.假如你是Helen,上周日你和妹妹一起逛商场买衣服,你对自己和妹妹买的衣服很满意,并想把这份快乐与好朋友Lily分享,所以你就给她发了一封邮件,讲述你所买的衣物的情况。
提示:
1. 你买了一件杭州产的白色的丝绸连衣裙,你喜欢它的面料、颜色和款式。
2. 你妹妹买了一件广州产的蓝色的棉质牛仔裤。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。要求:
1. 文中要包含上面所给要点,须用上被动语态;
2. 词数:80左右。
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6.发明改变世界,不少中学生都梦想成为发明家。某英语报社正组织题为“My invention: ________”的征文活动,请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。
要点提示:
1. 你梦想的发明是什么?
2. 这项发明能帮你或他人解决什么问题?
3. 你为什么想发明这个东西?
要求:
1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。
2.开头已为你写出,不计入总词数。
I hope to invent a (an) _____________________________________________________________
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7.现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿学校。对此大家看法不一,有些人认为,此举不妥,手机方便和父母保持联系,也可以上网搜一些学习信息,很方便。但是,有些人持赞同态度,手机上信息太多,游戏太多,影响学习。对此,请你发表自己的看法。词数80词左右。
Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
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8.假如你是你们班的英语科代表,在这次分发试卷的时候发现了一张没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请分析一下这张试卷会是谁的。
内容包括:
(1) 因为字迹娟秀整齐,所以不会是男生的;
(2) 不会是玛丽或者露丝的,因为她们已经拿到卷子了;
(3) 补充一至两点个人想法。
注意:
(1) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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9.中国文化博大精深,各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等,数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命,丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,并结合你的经历,谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点:
1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式(art form);
2.喜欢的缘由;
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响;
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2. 80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Art plays an important role in my life. __________________________________________________
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10.假设你是林平,今年作为一名交换生在美国的一所中学学习,你的美国同学们对你的故乡——中国,很感兴趣,尤其是中国的餐桌礼仪,请以When in China, do as the Chinese do 为题,根据表格提示写一篇文章,向你的美国同学们介绍中国的饮食文化,80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。提示如下:
Information about Chinese food culture
How many...
3 meals a day
How to eat
with chopsticks
For breakfast
bread, noodles ...
For lunch and dinner
rice, meat, vegetables...
Table manners
1.when eating with older people
2.stick the chopsticks into the food
3...
When in China, do as the Chinese do
Meals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west. _________________________
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In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
11.每当大型考试来临,同学们都会表现出不同程度的紧张。请你以“How to relax when facing exams”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对缓解考试焦虑情绪的建议。
内容包括:
分析
考试焦虑的危害
建议
·端正考试态度,制定科学的学习计划;
·听听音乐,放松心情;
·……
·……
(请再自拟两点内容)
注意:
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右。
How to relax when facing exams
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12.生活当中总是充满意外,每个人都有各种各样的经历:倒霉的、开心的、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的……请你根据下面提示以“An unlucky day”为题写一篇短文,描述自己的经历,并谈谈感受。
1. 2020年6月2日早晨起来的时候,意识到上学要迟到,空着肚子跑去公交车站;2. 赶到公交车站时,公交车已经开走了,因此走路去上学;3. 到学校后,发现把作业落在家里了;4. 语文课发卷子时,发现考试不及格,很沮丧;5. 回家时撞到一个老人。
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13.假设你是李华,请你针对多个城市频繁出现的雾霾(haze)天气,给某英文报社的热点话题专栏写一篇短文,分析造成雾霾的原因,并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。
要点:
1.汽车排放的有毒气体(poisonous gas);
2.不遵守规则燃烧的垃圾;
3.来自化工厂(chemical plants)的烟和飞尘(smoke and flying dust)。
注意:
1.人们为保护环境而采取的行动至少列两条;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词数80词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution. _________________________________________________________________
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14.假如你是校报编辑,最近你就初三学生的学习和生活做了一项调查,发现同学们有一些共同的烦恼。请你根据调查出来的结果,给同学们提出建议并陈述理由。
烦恼
建议与理由
学习压力大,晚上很晚才睡
做好计划才能更好地利用时间复习
觉得父母给自己制订了太多规则
? (请补充)
考试前很紧张
? (请补充)
要求:
1. 词数80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 不得透露学校名、姓名等任何个人信息;
3. 写作要点包含以上表格中的内容,可适当发挥。
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
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参考答案
1.例文(1):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in the classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don’t need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have facetoface communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What’s more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can’t provide enough resources for me to choose from.
例文(2):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I like the modern learning on the Internet better.
First, I have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way, I can have more free time to arrange my life. Second, I can have online communication with people from all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. Besides, online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet, I can learn at any place. That’s really wonderful!
However, I think learning online for a long time is bad for my eyes. Also, sometimes I can’t control myself and I will do something like chatting with my friends or playing computer games. That will have a bad influence on my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,主要讨论了现代技术发展对学习方式的影响,表达了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:文章中提到了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好及其原因,同时也提到了这种方式的不足之处。写作的要点提示已给出,考生应围绕要点来展开写作,注意用词,避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先介绍现代技术对学习方式的影响,并表达自己对传统课堂学习方式的偏好。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明作者为什么喜欢传统课堂学习方式,包括有固定时间表、面对面交流、丰富多彩的课堂活动以及培养团队精神等。
第三步,书写总结。指出传统课堂学习方式的不足,如有时跟不上老师的节奏和资源选择有限。
[亮点词汇]
① what’s more还有……
② get along with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.例文:
Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you, because it is the most traditional festival in China. Spring Festival usually comes on the first day of lunar year. There are a lot of celebrations during Spring Festival. On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. People say happy New Year to each other. Children also receive lucky money. The family get together to have a big meal. Dumplings are the most traditional food.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的春节;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“时间、庆祝活动和美食”3个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①are very interested in 对……感兴趣
②introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
③lunar year 农历年
④get rid of 摆脱
⑤look forward to 期待着……
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. (If引导条件状语从句,遵循“主将从现”)
③On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. (to do作目的状语)
3.例文:
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player? And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍生日派对的时间和地点,邀请大家参加;
第二步,介绍如何到达派对地点,陈述交通路线;
第三步,介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作,请求朋友提供帮助;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
4.例文:
Dear Lucy,
Today is the 70th anniversary of the founding of new China. I feel very happy. There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. In the past, we were more inconvenient in our daily life, and now the traffic is very convenient. We can shop online, more importantly, we can buy things without cash. Our country implements nine-year compulsory education. I think the biggest change is students don’t have to pay any more for their books. I think that’s very good for some poor students. These changes are to make people live a better life. I am happy with these changes. Thanks to our country, thanks to our people. They make our life better and better. I want the motherland to be stronger and stronger, and you?
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点包含”中日常生活方面,交通方面,教育方面的介绍,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我们国家有很多变化”来引出重点介绍内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面、作者认为最大变化、发展原因、作者感受等”几个方面介绍国家发展相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。祝福祖国越来越强大并询问Lucy的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① in the past在过去
② shop online 网上购物
③ more importantly更重要的是
④ pay for支付
⑤ make sb do让某人做某事
⑥ Thanks to多亏
⑦ stronger ang stronger越来越强大
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. (there be句型,表示某地有某物)
② I think that’s very convenient for some poor students. (I think+宾语从句)
5.例文:
Dear Lily,
I had a good time with my sister last Sunday. We went shopping happily and bought beautiful clothes.
I bought a white silk dress. It was made in Hangzhou. It feels very soft and comfortable, and it fits me well. I like its material, color and style very much. My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. They were made in Guangzhou. They were cheap and just cost fifty yuan. She looks very cool in the blue jeans, so she loves them a lot.
After that, we went back home. We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much.
Yours,
Helen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏任何信息提示,可根据需要适当添加内容,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题;
第二步,介绍自己以及妹妹买的衣服;
第三步,表达对这次购物的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be made in 制造于
② enjoy oneself 过得快活,感到愉快
[高分句型]
① My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. (which引导非限定性定语从句)
② We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much. (because引导原因状语从句)
6.例文:
My invention: Super Shoes
I hope to invent a kind of super shoes.
Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. This is a great waste. And lost shoes are also bad for the environment. If I could invent a kind of super shoes, there would be no such waste.
This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet. You don’t have to worry about your shoes being too small or too tight. In addition, if the shoes are dirty, they will start the automatic cleaning function between 12:00 a.m. and 3:00 a.m., and it will automatically dry. So your shoes always look clean. If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.
These shoes can not only help us save some time for cleaning and massage, but also are environmentally friendly. It is also good for us to protect the environment. The most important thing is that the shoes are cheap.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,写自己的一项发明;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括想要发明的东西、能解决的问题以及发明的原因等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍想要发明的是什么;
第二步,具体介绍想要发明的原因;
第三步,介绍发明物能解决的问题。
第四步, 总结发明物的优点。
[亮点词汇]
① throw away扔掉
② be bad for对……有害
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.例文:
Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
These days, more and more students have their own smart phones. Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
Some people believe that students can take their phones to school. They think parents can get in touch with their children at any time. And students can do useful things by phones. It’s very convenient.
However, some people disagree that. They say smart phones can make students pay little attention to their study. They say some students often play computer games on that.
In my opinion, it’s OK to have smart phones at school, but school must have rules about how to use them correctly. Smart phones can be great help if they are used properly.
【详解】1.题干解读:现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿制学校。在大家看法不一的情况下,请发表一下自己的看法。
2.写作指导:本文是发表自己的看法的文章,所以本文的时态主要以一般现在时为主,人称主要使用第三人称;陈述赞同使用手机的理由反对使用手机的理由,最后发表自己对在学校使用手机的看法;保证内容完整,结构清晰条理。
8.例文:
We had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it but it got full marks. Whom can it belong to?
It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. Rose, Mary, and Lucy are good at handwriting. It can’t be Mary’s or Rose’s because they have got their papers already. So it must be Lucy’s. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. So I think it must be hers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:需围绕“无名满分试卷归属”展开推理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代背景,说明昨天进行了考试,现在正在发试卷,发现一份无名满分试卷;
第二步,逐步推理排除,先排除男生,再排除已领试卷的Rose和Mary;
第三步,得出结论,结合Lucy生病在家且英语成绩好的情况,推断试卷一定是Lucy的。
[亮点词汇]
①hand out分发
②belong to属于
③be good at擅长
④do well in在……方面做得好
[高分句型]
①There’s a paper without a name on it but its mark is full. (there be结构)
②It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. (because引导原因状语从句)
9.例文:
Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.
When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.
I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式,谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作:第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么;第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由;第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
10.例文:
When in China, do as the Chinese do!
Meals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west.
In China, we have 3 meals a day, breakfast, lunch and dinner. We eat with chopsticks instead of knives and forks. We often eat bread, noodles or porridge for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, we usually eat rice, meat, vegetables or soup. If you plan to visit our country, it’s very important to learn about some of our table manners. First, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. Second, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. Finally, while you are eating, you shouldn’t put your bowl of rice on the table, you are expected to pick up your bowl!
In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“When in China, do as the Chinese do!”为题,介绍我们中国的饮食文化。提示要点要写全。
写作指导:本文应以第二人称为主;时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照表格进行写作。可采用分段的形式,使文章结构清晰,第一段总说中国的饮食在某些方面与西方的不同,第二段具体介绍中国的饮食文化,第三段总结收尾。要保证语言通顺,行文连贯;注意语法正确,无标点和大小写错误。
11.例文:
How to relax when facing exams
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam.
Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. So it’s necessary for us to learn to relax. I think it’s very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and listening to some music can help reduce the stress. We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Follow my advice and you will be better at facing exams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:需涵盖考试焦虑的危害、至少四个建议,需注意行文连贯,词数控制在80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出考试焦虑的普遍现象;
第二步,分析考试焦虑的危害,说明其对健康和学习的负面影响;
第三步,提出具体建议;
第四步,总结全文,呼吁遵循建议,更好地面对考试。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to对……有害
②have a right attitude towards对……有正确的态度
③scientific study plan科学的学习计划
④reduce the stress减轻压力
⑤balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. (not only ... but also ...并列结构,清晰阐述焦虑的双重危害)
②Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. (what引导宾语从句,解释考试的本质,逻辑清晰)
③We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. (such as举例说明运动方式,使建议更具可操作性)
12.例文:
An unlucky day
Life is full of the unexpected. I still remember the unlucky day I have experienced. It happened on June 2nd, 2020.
When I woke up that morning, I realized I would be late for school. I rushed out without breakfast. By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. I had to walk to school. After getting into the classroom, I found I had left my homework at home. Then, when I saw my Chinese exam report, I was very upset because I hadn’t passed the exam. I was sad the whole day. Finally, I ran into an old man on my way home after school. Luckily, he was not badly hurt.
What an unlucky day!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:要点已给出,根据要点描述自己的经历,不要遗漏自己对于这段经历的感受,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述这段经历发生的时间;
第二步,按照时间顺序阐述这段经历的具体情况;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① wake up 醒来
② be late for 迟到
③ rush out 冲出
④ run into 撞倒
[高分句型]
① When I woke up that morning, I realized I would be late for school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left.(by the time引导的时间状语从句)
③ Then, when I saw my Chinese exam report, I was very upset because I hadn’t passed the exam.(because引导的原因状语从句)
13.例文:
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution.
What are the reasons behind the terrible weather? First, the number of cars has been increasing in the last few years, and they produce too much poisonous gas. Second, a lot of rubbish is burnt without following the rules. Besides, smoke and flying dust from chemical plants add to the problem.
It is time for us to fight against air pollution. We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. Planting more trees can also help to improve the air quality.
Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕城市雾霾问题分析原因并号召环保行动;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③要求:需涵盖给定的雾霾原因要点,至少两条环保行动,行文连贯且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明雾霾频发的现状,引出对空气污染的关注;
第二步:从汽车尾气、垃圾违规焚烧、化工厂烟尘三个维度分析雾霾成因;
第三步,提出至少两条环保行动建议,呼吁人们立即行动。
[亮点词汇]
①poisonous gas有毒气体
②chemical plants化工厂
③flying dust飞尘
④improve air quality改善空气质量
[高分句型]
①What are the reasons behind the terrible weather? (特殊疑问句引出原因分析)
②It is time for us to fight against air pollution. (“It is time for sb. to do sth.”句型,强化呼吁语气)
③We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. (“instead of”结构,作方式状语)
14.例文:
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late. Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed. What’s more, before a test, it is very stressful for them because they are afraid of getting bad grades.
In fact, there are some suggestions to help them solve these problems. On the one hand, students should make a good plan to make full use of time. On the other hand, they can communicate with their parents and friends when they feel unhappy. It is helpful for them to solve the problems. Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:需包含初三学生的共同烦恼及对应的建议和理由等信息,可适当发挥,使文章通顺、完整,词数80~120词,开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明校报对初三学生学习和生活的调查结果;
第二步,阐述学生的共同烦恼(学习压力大晚睡、觉得父母规则多、考试前紧张);
第三步,给出解决这些烦恼的建议及理由;
[亮点词汇]
①in common共同的
②make full use of充分利用
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late.(make sb. do sth.结构,说明学习压力的影响)
②Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed.(which引导非限制性定语从句,说明父母规则多的影响)
③On the one hand,students should make a good plan to make full use of time.(on the one hand用于分点阐述,使建议更有条理)
④Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.(倒装句,强调解决问题的方法的重要性)
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专题17 期末复习之书面表达14篇(单元话题+期末模拟试题)
Units1-14单元话题
单元
话题
Unit 1 How can we become good learners?
学习英语的好方法并提出建议
Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
节假日活动
Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
礼貌的用语去询问信息及查询方位
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
对比自己以前和现在在外貌、性格和习惯上的变化
Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?
介绍中国传统手工艺
Unit 6 When was it invented?
描述物品的发明史
Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
关于家规并给出建议
Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.
根据相关信息做推断
Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
介绍自己喜爱的音乐或歌星
Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.
风俗习惯与文明礼仪
Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
事物对人的影响
Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
自己幸运或者不幸的一天
Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!
环境保护问题并提出建议
Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
初中三年的学习经历,感恩学校和老师
本套资料共14篇训练,从上到下每个单元依次对应1篇单元话题训练
书面表达期末模拟试题
1.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息,谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由,并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in the classroom
·fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
·facetoface communication
·colorful class activities
·team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet
·flexible (灵活的) timetable
a plan made by oneself
·online communication
·rich learning resources
·any place with the Internet
1.对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由,并提出你认为的不足;
2.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think ____________
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2.假如你是张平,你的美国好友Alice 将来中国游玩,她对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。请你根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个你觉得有特别意义的中国节日。
Alice: I like Chinese traditional culture, especially the spirit behind it. By the way, I also like Chinese food.
Spring Festival
·on the first day of lunar year
·a lot of celebrations
·dumplings
Lantern Festival
·on the fifteenth day of lunar year
·lantern show
·tangyuan
注意:
1.邮件需包含节日的相关信息,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.字数80词左右。
Dear Alice,
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3.假如你叫李丹,你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封80词左右的邮件给你的朋友们,介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3:00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站,沿着广场路走,直到经过兴业街,公园在左边;
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器;
3. 你的照相机坏了,能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照;
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球;
5. 那天天气会很好,大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
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Li Dan
4.你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日,你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识,给她回一封email。
要点包含:
要求:
1. 对比过去与现在的情况:日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面(各1条);
1. 所给信息完整表述;
2. 你认为最大的一个改变;
2. 分段,合理使用过渡词,使文章通顺并有逻辑;
3. 国家发生改变的原因(至少1 条);
3. 拼写,语法正确,表达流畅,书写干净整齐;
4. 你的感受(至少2条)。
4. 格式正确,120 词左右。
可能用到的短语:经济发展economic development 70周年70th anniversary
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5.假如你是Helen,上周日你和妹妹一起逛商场买衣服,你对自己和妹妹买的衣服很满意,并想把这份快乐与好朋友Lily分享,所以你就给她发了一封邮件,讲述你所买的衣物的情况。
提示:
1. 你买了一件杭州产的白色的丝绸连衣裙,你喜欢它的面料、颜色和款式。
2. 你妹妹买了一件广州产的蓝色的棉质牛仔裤。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。要求:
1. 文中要包含上面所给要点,须用上被动语态;
2. 词数:80左右。
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6.发明改变世界,不少中学生都梦想成为发明家。某英语报社正组织题为“My invention: ________”的征文活动,请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。
要点提示:
1. 你梦想的发明是什么?
2. 这项发明能帮你或他人解决什么问题?
3. 你为什么想发明这个东西?
要求:
1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。
2.开头已为你写出,不计入总词数。
I hope to invent a (an) _____________________________________________________________
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7.现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿学校。对此大家看法不一,有些人认为,此举不妥,手机方便和父母保持联系,也可以上网搜一些学习信息,很方便。但是,有些人持赞同态度,手机上信息太多,游戏太多,影响学习。对此,请你发表自己的看法。词数80词左右。
Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
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8.假如你是你们班的英语科代表,在这次分发试卷的时候发现了一张没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请分析一下这张试卷会是谁的。
内容包括:
(1) 因为字迹娟秀整齐,所以不会是男生的;
(2) 不会是玛丽或者露丝的,因为她们已经拿到卷子了;
(3) 补充一至两点个人想法。
注意:
(1) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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9.中国文化博大精深,各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等,数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命,丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,并结合你的经历,谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点:
1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式(art form);
2.喜欢的缘由;
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响;
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2. 80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Art plays an important role in my life. __________________________________________________
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10.假设你是林平,今年作为一名交换生在美国的一所中学学习,你的美国同学们对你的故乡——中国,很感兴趣,尤其是中国的餐桌礼仪,请以When in China, do as the Chinese do 为题,根据表格提示写一篇文章,向你的美国同学们介绍中国的饮食文化,80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。提示如下:
Information about Chinese food culture
How many...
3 meals a day
How to eat
with chopsticks
For breakfast
bread, noodles ...
For lunch and dinner
rice, meat, vegetables...
Table manners
1.when eating with older people
2.stick the chopsticks into the food
3...
When in China, do as the Chinese do
Meals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west. _________________________
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In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
11.每当大型考试来临,同学们都会表现出不同程度的紧张。请你以“How to relax when facing exams”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对缓解考试焦虑情绪的建议。
内容包括:
分析
考试焦虑的危害
建议
·端正考试态度,制定科学的学习计划;
·听听音乐,放松心情;
·……
·……
(请再自拟两点内容)
注意:
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右。
How to relax when facing exams
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12.生活当中总是充满意外,每个人都有各种各样的经历:倒霉的、开心的、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的……请你根据下面提示以“An unlucky day”为题写一篇短文,描述自己的经历,并谈谈感受。
1. 2020年6月2日早晨起来的时候,意识到上学要迟到,空着肚子跑去公交车站;2. 赶到公交车站时,公交车已经开走了,因此走路去上学;3. 到学校后,发现把作业落在家里了;4. 语文课发卷子时,发现考试不及格,很沮丧;5. 回家时撞到一个老人。
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13.假设你是李华,请你针对多个城市频繁出现的雾霾(haze)天气,给某英文报社的热点话题专栏写一篇短文,分析造成雾霾的原因,并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。
要点:
1.汽车排放的有毒气体(poisonous gas);
2.不遵守规则燃烧的垃圾;
3.来自化工厂(chemical plants)的烟和飞尘(smoke and flying dust)。
注意:
1.人们为保护环境而采取的行动至少列两条;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词数80词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution. _________________________________________________________________
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14.假如你是校报编辑,最近你就初三学生的学习和生活做了一项调查,发现同学们有一些共同的烦恼。请你根据调查出来的结果,给同学们提出建议并陈述理由。
烦恼
建议与理由
学习压力大,晚上很晚才睡
做好计划才能更好地利用时间复习
觉得父母给自己制订了太多规则
? (请补充)
考试前很紧张
? (请补充)
要求:
1. 词数80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 不得透露学校名、姓名等任何个人信息;
3. 写作要点包含以上表格中的内容,可适当发挥。
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
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参考答案
1.例文(1):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in the classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don’t need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have facetoface communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What’s more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can’t provide enough resources for me to choose from.
例文(2):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I like the modern learning on the Internet better.
First, I have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way, I can have more free time to arrange my life. Second, I can have online communication with people from all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. Besides, online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet, I can learn at any place. That’s really wonderful!
However, I think learning online for a long time is bad for my eyes. Also, sometimes I can’t control myself and I will do something like chatting with my friends or playing computer games. That will have a bad influence on my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,主要讨论了现代技术发展对学习方式的影响,表达了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:文章中提到了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好及其原因,同时也提到了这种方式的不足之处。写作的要点提示已给出,考生应围绕要点来展开写作,注意用词,避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先介绍现代技术对学习方式的影响,并表达自己对传统课堂学习方式的偏好。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明作者为什么喜欢传统课堂学习方式,包括有固定时间表、面对面交流、丰富多彩的课堂活动以及培养团队精神等。
第三步,书写总结。指出传统课堂学习方式的不足,如有时跟不上老师的节奏和资源选择有限。
[亮点词汇]
① what’s more还有……
② get along with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.例文:
Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you, because it is the most traditional festival in China. Spring Festival usually comes on the first day of lunar year. There are a lot of celebrations during Spring Festival. On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. People say happy New Year to each other. Children also receive lucky money. The family get together to have a big meal. Dumplings are the most traditional food.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的春节;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“时间、庆祝活动和美食”3个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①are very interested in 对……感兴趣
②introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
③lunar year 农历年
④get rid of 摆脱
⑤look forward to 期待着……
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. (If引导条件状语从句,遵循“主将从现”)
③On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. (to do作目的状语)
3.例文:
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player? And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍生日派对的时间和地点,邀请大家参加;
第二步,介绍如何到达派对地点,陈述交通路线;
第三步,介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作,请求朋友提供帮助;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
4.例文:
Dear Lucy,
Today is the 70th anniversary of the founding of new China. I feel very happy. There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. In the past, we were more inconvenient in our daily life, and now the traffic is very convenient. We can shop online, more importantly, we can buy things without cash. Our country implements nine-year compulsory education. I think the biggest change is students don’t have to pay any more for their books. I think that’s very good for some poor students. These changes are to make people live a better life. I am happy with these changes. Thanks to our country, thanks to our people. They make our life better and better. I want the motherland to be stronger and stronger, and you?
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点包含”中日常生活方面,交通方面,教育方面的介绍,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我们国家有很多变化”来引出重点介绍内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面、作者认为最大变化、发展原因、作者感受等”几个方面介绍国家发展相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。祝福祖国越来越强大并询问Lucy的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① in the past在过去
② shop online 网上购物
③ more importantly更重要的是
④ pay for支付
⑤ make sb do让某人做某事
⑥ Thanks to多亏
⑦ stronger ang stronger越来越强大
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. (there be句型,表示某地有某物)
② I think that’s very convenient for some poor students. (I think+宾语从句)
5.例文:
Dear Lily,
I had a good time with my sister last Sunday. We went shopping happily and bought beautiful clothes.
I bought a white silk dress. It was made in Hangzhou. It feels very soft and comfortable, and it fits me well. I like its material, color and style very much. My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. They were made in Guangzhou. They were cheap and just cost fifty yuan. She looks very cool in the blue jeans, so she loves them a lot.
After that, we went back home. We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much.
Yours,
Helen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏任何信息提示,可根据需要适当添加内容,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题;
第二步,介绍自己以及妹妹买的衣服;
第三步,表达对这次购物的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be made in 制造于
② enjoy oneself 过得快活,感到愉快
[高分句型]
① My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. (which引导非限定性定语从句)
② We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much. (because引导原因状语从句)
6.例文:
My invention: Super Shoes
I hope to invent a kind of super shoes.
Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. This is a great waste. And lost shoes are also bad for the environment. If I could invent a kind of super shoes, there would be no such waste.
This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet. You don’t have to worry about your shoes being too small or too tight. In addition, if the shoes are dirty, they will start the automatic cleaning function between 12:00 a.m. and 3:00 a.m., and it will automatically dry. So your shoes always look clean. If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.
These shoes can not only help us save some time for cleaning and massage, but also are environmentally friendly. It is also good for us to protect the environment. The most important thing is that the shoes are cheap.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,写自己的一项发明;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括想要发明的东西、能解决的问题以及发明的原因等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍想要发明的是什么;
第二步,具体介绍想要发明的原因;
第三步,介绍发明物能解决的问题。
第四步, 总结发明物的优点。
[亮点词汇]
① throw away扔掉
② be bad for对……有害
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.例文:
Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
These days, more and more students have their own smart phones. Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?
Some people believe that students can take their phones to school. They think parents can get in touch with their children at any time. And students can do useful things by phones. It’s very convenient.
However, some people disagree that. They say smart phones can make students pay little attention to their study. They say some students often play computer games on that.
In my opinion, it’s OK to have smart phones at school, but school must have rules about how to use them correctly. Smart phones can be great help if they are used properly.
【详解】1.题干解读:现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿制学校。在大家看法不一的情况下,请发表一下自己的看法。
2.写作指导:本文是发表自己的看法的文章,所以本文的时态主要以一般现在时为主,人称主要使用第三人称;陈述赞同使用手机的理由反对使用手机的理由,最后发表自己对在学校使用手机的看法;保证内容完整,结构清晰条理。
8.例文:
We had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it but it got full marks. Whom can it belong to?
It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. Rose, Mary, and Lucy are good at handwriting. It can’t be Mary’s or Rose’s because they have got their papers already. So it must be Lucy’s. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. So I think it must be hers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:需围绕“无名满分试卷归属”展开推理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代背景,说明昨天进行了考试,现在正在发试卷,发现一份无名满分试卷;
第二步,逐步推理排除,先排除男生,再排除已领试卷的Rose和Mary;
第三步,得出结论,结合Lucy生病在家且英语成绩好的情况,推断试卷一定是Lucy的。
[亮点词汇]
①hand out分发
②belong to属于
③be good at擅长
④do well in在……方面做得好
[高分句型]
①There’s a paper without a name on it but its mark is full. (there be结构)
②It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. (because引导原因状语从句)
9.例文:
Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.
When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.
I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式,谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作:第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么;第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由;第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
10.例文:
When in China, do as the Chinese do!
Meals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west.
In China, we have 3 meals a day, breakfast, lunch and dinner. We eat with chopsticks instead of knives and forks. We often eat bread, noodles or porridge for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, we usually eat rice, meat, vegetables or soup. If you plan to visit our country, it’s very important to learn about some of our table manners. First, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. Second, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. Finally, while you are eating, you shouldn’t put your bowl of rice on the table, you are expected to pick up your bowl!
In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“When in China, do as the Chinese do!”为题,介绍我们中国的饮食文化。提示要点要写全。
写作指导:本文应以第二人称为主;时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照表格进行写作。可采用分段的形式,使文章结构清晰,第一段总说中国的饮食在某些方面与西方的不同,第二段具体介绍中国的饮食文化,第三段总结收尾。要保证语言通顺,行文连贯;注意语法正确,无标点和大小写错误。
11.例文:
How to relax when facing exams
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam.
Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. So it’s necessary for us to learn to relax. I think it’s very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and listening to some music can help reduce the stress. We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Follow my advice and you will be better at facing exams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:需涵盖考试焦虑的危害、至少四个建议,需注意行文连贯,词数控制在80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出考试焦虑的普遍现象;
第二步,分析考试焦虑的危害,说明其对健康和学习的负面影响;
第三步,提出具体建议;
第四步,总结全文,呼吁遵循建议,更好地面对考试。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to对……有害
②have a right attitude towards对……有正确的态度
③scientific study plan科学的学习计划
④reduce the stress减轻压力
⑤balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. (not only ... but also ...并列结构,清晰阐述焦虑的双重危害)
②Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. (what引导宾语从句,解释考试的本质,逻辑清晰)
③We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. (such as举例说明运动方式,使建议更具可操作性)
12.例文:
An unlucky day
Life is full of the unexpected. I still remember the unlucky day I have experienced. It happened on June 2nd, 2020.
When I woke up that morning, I realized I would be late for school. I rushed out without breakfast. By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. I had to walk to school. After getting into the classroom, I found I had left my homework at home. Then, when I saw my Chinese exam report, I was very upset because I hadn’t passed the exam. I was sad the whole day. Finally, I ran into an old man on my way home after school. Luckily, he was not badly hurt.
What an unlucky day!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:要点已给出,根据要点描述自己的经历,不要遗漏自己对于这段经历的感受,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述这段经历发生的时间;
第二步,按照时间顺序阐述这段经历的具体情况;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① wake up 醒来
② be late for 迟到
③ rush out 冲出
④ run into 撞倒
[高分句型]
① When I woke up that morning, I realized I would be late for school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left.(by the time引导的时间状语从句)
③ Then, when I saw my Chinese exam report, I was very upset because I hadn’t passed the exam.(because引导的原因状语从句)
13.例文:
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution.
What are the reasons behind the terrible weather? First, the number of cars has been increasing in the last few years, and they produce too much poisonous gas. Second, a lot of rubbish is burnt without following the rules. Besides, smoke and flying dust from chemical plants add to the problem.
It is time for us to fight against air pollution. We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. Planting more trees can also help to improve the air quality.
Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕城市雾霾问题分析原因并号召环保行动;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③要求:需涵盖给定的雾霾原因要点,至少两条环保行动,行文连贯且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明雾霾频发的现状,引出对空气污染的关注;
第二步:从汽车尾气、垃圾违规焚烧、化工厂烟尘三个维度分析雾霾成因;
第三步,提出至少两条环保行动建议,呼吁人们立即行动。
[亮点词汇]
①poisonous gas有毒气体
②chemical plants化工厂
③flying dust飞尘
④improve air quality改善空气质量
[高分句型]
①What are the reasons behind the terrible weather? (特殊疑问句引出原因分析)
②It is time for us to fight against air pollution. (“It is time for sb. to do sth.”句型,强化呼吁语气)
③We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. (“instead of”结构,作方式状语)
14.例文:
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late. Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed. What’s more, before a test, it is very stressful for them because they are afraid of getting bad grades.
In fact, there are some suggestions to help them solve these problems. On the one hand, students should make a good plan to make full use of time. On the other hand, they can communicate with their parents and friends when they feel unhappy. It is helpful for them to solve the problems. Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:需包含初三学生的共同烦恼及对应的建议和理由等信息,可适当发挥,使文章通顺、完整,词数80~120词,开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明校报对初三学生学习和生活的调查结果;
第二步,阐述学生的共同烦恼(学习压力大晚睡、觉得父母规则多、考试前紧张);
第三步,给出解决这些烦恼的建议及理由;
[亮点词汇]
①in common共同的
②make full use of充分利用
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late.(make sb. do sth.结构,说明学习压力的影响)
②Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed.(which引导非限制性定语从句,说明父母规则多的影响)
③On the one hand,students should make a good plan to make full use of time.(on the one hand用于分点阐述,使建议更有条理)
④Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.(倒装句,强调解决问题的方法的重要性)
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