内容正文:
Teaching and Learning Design
选择性必修Book2 Unit5 First Aid
教学设计
Period 7
Teaching and learning contents: Using Language—Writing
Comprehensive teaching and learning objectives:
By the end of this period, the students will have been able to:
1) Learn about the features of narrative writing;
2) Learn about how to write a narrative essay;
3) Practise writing a narrative essay to share your story about providing first aid.
Teaching and learning important points:
1) Learning about the features of narrative writing;
2) Learning about how to write a narrative essay;
3) Practising writing a narrative essay to share your story about providing first aid.
Teaching and learning difficult point:
1) Learning about the structure and language features of the passage;
2) Learning about how write to write an essay about your diet;
3) Practising writing an essay about your diet.
Teaching and learning procedure:
Step 1 Revision and Leading in
Activity 1 Revision and Leading in
1. Check the answer to the reading comprehension exercises and review the main content of the text and language items learned in the previous period.
2. Lead in the learning topic of this period and introduce the learning objectives.
Step 2 Learning about the main writing techniques and language features of a travel journal
Activity 2 Learning about the features of narrative essay and the structure of the text
1. Learn about the features of a narrative essay.
Writing a narrative essay: A narrative essay tells a story. Like all good stories, it has three parts: the set-up, the conflict, and the conclusion. The set-up tells you about who, what, and where. The conflict always involves a challenge or difficulty that the characters face. The conclusion is the end of the story, where the problem in Part 2 has been solved.
2. Talk about the structure of the text.
Part 1 (Paragraphs 1-2) The story of a chocking incident.
Part 2 (Paragraphs 3-6) The introduction of the Heimlich manoeuvre.
Part 3 (Paragraph 7) Comments on the chocking incident.
Step 3 Writing guidance
Activity 3 Writing guidance—Learning how to write a narrative essay
1. Talk about the writing requirements. Use what you have learnt to write a narrative essay that shares a story about providing first aid.
2. Work in pairs. Discuss your experiences of giving first aid in an emergency. If neither of you have any experiences, discuss stories you have read or heard about, or think up a situation.
A situation for reference:
根据下列提示,用英文写一篇文章。
时间:9月6日下午
地点:镇子旁的河边
人物:你和一群伙伴
事件:你和伙伴们正在河边玩足球,突然一个叫小华的伙伴落入水里。他不会游泳。你马上跳到河里把他救起来,打完电话叫救护车之后,对他进行急救。最后小华成功获救。
2 Write an outline of the three or parts in your story. Then think of a good quote to sum things up. The following table may help you.
Questions
Key words
Part 1
Who? What? Where?
Part 2
The process?
Part 3
The end?
Part 4
Any comments?
3. Think of some words and expressions that might be used when you write a narrative essay that shares a story about providing first aid.
Useful expressions:
chock on…, hold sb.’s throat with sb.’s face turning bed,
help sb. to his/her feet, force out, slap the victim’s back, give firm slaps to one’s upper back,
wrap your arms around his/her waist, make a fist,
place it in the upper part of sb.’s stomach, grab your fist,
push up and into her/his stomach in one motion,
in urgent situations, stay calm,
call the ambulance without delay, be suitable for, if possible
4. Read the sample writing for reference (The structure).
Sample writing 1
On September 6th, I played football with my friends at the river bank near town. Suddenly, one of my friends, Xiao Hua, fell into the river by accident.
Since Xiao Hua couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water, I jumped into the river in no time and rescued him finally. Then we called 120 for an ambulance at once. Although taken out of water, Xiao Hua was unconscious at that time. We could not wait any more. First, I laid him down, pressed his breast and squeezed out the water. Then, I performed mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing to blow air into his lungs.
It was the first aid I learned in the school that helped him breathe again.
Sample writing 2
One morning, David was working at his home office while watching his infant daughter Jane who was crawling on the floor. Suddenly, he noticed that she had picked something up and put it in her mouth. Then she began to move like she was struggling.
He quickly jumped from his chair and ran over and picked her up. Going back to his chair, he held her in his lap and saw that she was still struggling with a frightened look on her face. However, she was not crying or making a sound. He carefully opened her mouth to see if there was obstruction. Not finding anything, he then gave her a few hard slaps on her back. It worked! Within seconds a small button fell from her mouth onto the floor, and she was breathing once again. Thanks to David’s quick thinking, Jane was saved.
David now teaches life-saving techniques at the local college, and he uses this story to impress upon students the need for quick action. “When seconds count,” he said, “an ambulance is often minutes away.”
Step 4 Writing practice
Activity 4 Writing practice
1. Practice writing the first draft about your narrative essay to share a story about providing first aid. Use the checklist as your writing standards.
2. (If time permits,) Exchange drafts with a partner and revise each other’s draft, using the checklist as criteria.
Step 5 Summary and evaluation
Activity 5 Summary
Summarize the main contents of this period briefly by emphasizing how to write a narrative essay to share a story about providing first aid.
Activity 6 Self-evaluation
Guide the students to reflect on their learning of this period by considering the following aspects.
1. How is your writing performance? (Good/Fairly good/Moderate/Just so so/Poor)
2. What will you do to improve your writing after class?
Homework:
1. Complete the writing and work in pairs to evaluate each other’s writing before handing in the writing.
2. Complete the vocabulary and grammar exercises in Assessing Your Progress.
3. Complete some more exercises in the reference book.
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