读后续写之动作和情绪描写 课件 -2026届高考英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了内容连贯、情绪描写、动作刻画、情节构建等核心考查维度，通过近三年真题分析明确情绪描写占45%、动作连贯占30%的高频考点，构建“原则-步骤-细节”完整备考体系。 课件亮点在于“词句库+情境应用+思维训练”策略，如以“喜乐”情绪为例，解析用“跳得高、笑容灿烂、笑声回荡”等动作表情环境描写替代直接表述的“Show Don't Tell”方法，培养语言能力与思维品质。特设“易错警示”和“句式升级模板”，助力学生掌握续写技巧，教师可据此精准教学，实现高效备考。

Show, don’t tell 读后续写之动作和情绪描写 快速完成优质续写文的策略 探索续写规律: 01原文一致原则 内容要前后衔接，上下连贯 语言表达风格一致。 03曲折性原则 故事情节应跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 02正能量原则 故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义 核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定 回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但 最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。 三原则 四个步骤 2.细读首句，构思框架 仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。 1.读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。 4.修改润色，整洁誊写 思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。 3.增加细节，开始写作 依据情节发展和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。 Characters: Who, Events: What (when, where, how, why ) 环境描写,语言描写, 动作描写, 情绪描写, 心理描写, 检查错误升级句式 4 读后续写情绪类 词句汇总 喜乐 伤心 愤怒 恐惧 羞愧 紧张 担忧 震惊 傲慢 激动 感动 Continuation writing strategy Show, Don't Tell How did she feel? She felt ___________ happy excited delighted joyful glad thrilled... Picture Talk How can you tell? She jumped high with joy. She wore a shining smile on her face. The summer fresh air is filled with laughter. We can show one's emotion through actions. We can show one's emotion through facial expression. We can show one's emotion through the environment. Think and Say The girl jumped high with joy. She wore a shining smile on her face. The summer fresh air is filled with laughter. Think and Say She felt happy. To tell: To show: To tell To show VS To show: to write with more actions, facial expressions and environment descriptions, allowing readers to experience the same things as the characters do. She shouted. Step 1: 写话语：“What are you doing?”, she shouted. Step 2: 加表情：“What are you doing?”, she shouted with an expression of anger Step 3: 加眼睛：“What are you doing?”, she shouted with an expression of anger and her eyes widened Step 4: 加拳头：“What are you doing?”, she shouted with an expression of anger and her eyes widened , pounding on the table with her fist Step 5: 加眼神：“What are you doing?”, she shouted with an expression of anger and her eyes widened, pounding on the table with her fist and glaring at me furiously. 紧张 My stomach ____________________ and my hands were _______. 我心里很慌，手心都是汗。 He could__________________; and the painful beats made him feel faint. 他能感到他地心脏怦、怦、怦地跳，这令人痛苦地心跳让他觉得晕眩。 His heart almost________________________________. 他的心几乎要跳出来了。 was full of butterflies sweaty feel his heart thump, thump, thump leaped into his mouth 震惊 1. She ___________________________________________ at seeing her childhood friend. 看到儿时的朋友，她惊讶得呆住了。 2. ______________________, she simply couldn’t take her eyes off ... 她的嘴张得大大的，目不转睛地看着.... was rooted to the ground due to the amazement With her mouth wide opening 激动 Betty felt_______________________________________________. 贝蒂感到她的心激动得怦怦直跳。 His face________________________________. 他因兴奋而显得容光焕发。 When he was announced to be the winner, __________________________________ 当他被宣布获胜时，她兴奋得不能自已。 her heart was thumping with excitement a wild excitement took hold of her. was shining with excitement 1. 她满心欢喜。 She was overwhelmed with happiness. 2.她的微笑照亮了整个房间。 Her smile lit up the whole room. 3.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。 She wore a shining smile on her face. 4.看到眼前的一幕，她流下了幸福的泪水。 In the face of the scene, her tears of happiness flowed down. 5.他高兴得两眼闪闪发光。 His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 6. 笑声在房间里回荡。 Laughters lingered in the room. 喜乐 感动 1. 感动得热泪盈眶 be moved to tears 2. 感动得说不出话来 be moved beyond words 3. Both of them were in tears, hugging each other tightly. 两人泪流满面，紧紧地拥抱在一起。 4. A huge wave of warmth flooded all over my body. 一股暖流涌过我的全身。 5. Time seemed to cease to witness the touching moment. 时间似乎停止下来，见证这个伟大/动人的时刻了。 （适合用于happy ending的感人故事） 伤心 1. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 I felt like I was _______________________________________. 2. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 He stood silently, _________________________________. 3. 听到这个消息，她陷入极度的悲伤之中。 Hearing the news, she ________________________________________. 4. 因为一场事故，Tony的世界陷入一片黑暗和绝望之中。 As a result of an accident, Tony was suddenly _____________________________________________. floating in an ocean of sadness. tears rolling down his cheeks. was totally overwhelmed by grief thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. 愤怒 1. 他怒火中烧。 He was ________ with anger. 2. 她因为发怒脸涨得通红。 Her face was _____________. 3.Sam一动不动地站在那里，眼睛里闪烁着怒火。 Sam stood _____________, his eyes ________________. 4.她能感觉到愤怒在她心中酝酿。 She could feel the anger ___________________ inside her. boiling red with anger rooted to the spot blazing with anger growing, bubbling up 恐惧 1. 他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。 He turned to me, with _____________________. 2. 她吓得睁大了眼睛。 Her eyes were ________ horror. 3. 他浑身发抖，感到坐立不安。 She shook all over, feeling like ___________________________. 4.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was __________________________and my palms ___________________. his eyes full of horror wide with sitting on pins and needles seized by a strong sense of horror were sweating 羞愧 他感到非常羞愧，都能觉得脸上滚烫。 1. He felt so ashamed that ________________________________. 他感到非常羞愧，觉得血液涌上脸颊。 2. So ashamed was he that he could feel ____________________. he could feel his face burning the blood rush to his face 担忧 愁眉苦脸 have a worried look Worried about being criticized, he was unsettled the whole day. 由于担心受到批评，他整天心神不宁。 傲慢 He turned up his nose at him, expressing his arrogance. 他对他嗤之以鼻，表示他的傲慢自大。 $