内容正文:
第三部分写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别一写人叙事类
(2025,2022,2023副题,2020副题)
常见题目表述
①人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升在每个人的生活中,总会有一个值得敬佩的人成为我们心中
的榜样。你校五四青年节将要组织一次英语演讲比赛,请你参考以下图示,以“A Hero in My Heart”为题,用
英语写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。
Who:
father,mother,firefighter,teacher,...
Why:
1.patient and kind
2.bring hope to people
3.give people a lot of warmth
How:
1.take...as my role model
2.help those in need
②人与自我:劳动实践假定你是李辉,你对风筝很感兴趣,上周六你在家亲手制作了一个蝴蝶形状的风
筝。请你结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的制作过程。
Who
When
Where
Making a Kite
What
Why
How
cut the bamboo into...,fix the bamboo
a piece of bamboo,a piece of silk,a knife
pieces to form the shape of...,tie the
a pair of scissors,...
string to the kite,...
作文框架)
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的人物)】
①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:'m glad to say something about my best friend.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:During the process of growing up,it is very
important to have someone who knows us well.Among all the people around me,I think no one else but my father is
the special person who knows me best.
中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when,where,what,how,,.)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮助你成长的故事:这个人物身上的闪光点;
②需要注意的点:经历类文章应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟、感受、自己的做法、对这个人的美好祝愿
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高分模板D
The Most
Person in My Heart
To be honest,
is the most
person I've ever met.She/He
(人物身份+人物外貌
特征:has a round face,a soft voice,).I think she/heis
because she/he is always
(描写人
物性格的形容词:patient,kind,helpful,.).She/He likes
(人物爱好:help others,collect stamps,
take part in volunteer activities,...).
Once I_(你遇到的麻烦:be sick,fail the exam,have difficulty in+学科,can't get along well
with,…),she/he told me__(人物的行为:not to give up,not to worry about,keep reading aloud,talk to,
help people in need,).Then she/he(人物的行为:teach me how to..,ask me to..,encourage me
to..).In addition,she/he_(人物的行为:give me flowers or books,give me helpful suggestions,listen to
me patiently,...)when I was in trouble.I became/felt
(你的改变/感受:confident,moved,
independent,happy,relaxed,...)because of her/him.
As her/his
I have learned that
(你的感悟:nothing is impossible,we should help
others,...).I hope I will be a person like her/him.I also hope she he will be better and better.
优秀范文记背)
Passage
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:表
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be here to give a speech.
明谁是自己
here to give a speech.Everyone has a
On the joumey of life,there's always someone who shines
心目中的
hero in their heart,and mine is my
like a star,and the hero in my heart is my father.
英雄
father.
What moves me most is his patience and kindness.
He is patient and kind.Every
After a tiring day at work,he still spends time listening to my
Body:介绍
evening,he listens to my daily stories
daily stories,and his eyes are full of care.Once I fell down
他/她成为自
after work.When I fall down,he helps
in a race,he didn't lift me up directly but encouraged me
己心目中英
me stand up and says,“Try again.”His
to stand up in a warm voice,which planted courage in my
雄的原因
big hands give me warmth.He often heart.He not only uses his warmth to comfort me but also
helps old people carry heavy things.
gives his kindness to others,like helping elderly neighbors
I see him as my role model.I
carry heavy things on rainy days.
Ending:表达
will help my friends when they need
I've decided to follow his example:to offer a hand to
向他/她学习
me.My father is the best hero.
those in need,just like he does every day.
的决心
Thanks for listening.
Thanks for listening.
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:
Making a Kite
Making a kite
引出制作风
I like kites very much,so I made a kite
I am interested in kites,so I made a kite by
筝的主题
at home last Saturday.
myself at home last Saturday.
Before making it,I prepared some
Before making it,I prepared some bamboo,a
bamboo and silk,a knife,a pair of scissors,
piece of silk,a knife,a pair of scissors,a needle,
a needle,some thread and a long string.I
some thread and a long string.When everything was
Body:具体介
began to make it.First,I cut the bamboo
ready,I began to make it.First of all,I cut the
绍所需要的
into thin pieces.And I fixed the thin
bamboo into thin pieces.And I fixed the thin bamboo
材料及制作
bamboo pieces to form the shape of a
pieces to form the shape of a butterfly.Second,I cut
方法
butterfly.Second,I cut the silk and fixed
the silk and fixed it according to the shape.Finally,
it.Finally,I tied the string to the kite.And
I tied the string to the kite.And then the kite was
then the kite was finished.I tried to fly it
finished.I tried to fly it high in the sky.To my
high in the sky and I succeeded.
surprise,I succeeded.
Ending:自己
I'm very happy.So I'm going to make
Practice makes perfect.I'm going to make more
的感受
more beautiful kites by myself in the future.
beautiful kites by myself in the future.
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