内容正文:
人与有然
主题10
环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
·中考命题角度探究
陕西中考
近6年真题/副题暂未考查
中考命题
角度探究
共建绿色校园
全国视野
节约能源,低碳生活
绿水青山就是金山银山,促进可持续发展
教材单元主题链接
人教版
八(下)U7 Facts about the world
九(全)Ul3 Protecting the environment
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.
Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the world today.
开头句
2.The earth is our home.Therefore,we should take action to protect it.
3.As is known to everyone,animals are our friends.However,many kinds of animals are in danger now.
1.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.Also,we can ride a
bike.It's good for health and it doesn't cost anything.[人教九(全)U13]
2.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy takeaway food.I use the ones at home.[
保护
九(全)U13]
3.We can do more to protect the environment.For example,we can help keep the air clean by planting
的
trees.[外研九(上)M12]
4.I've already tried my best to protect the environment.I recycle.I don't throw away things if I don't
want them any more.I turn off the lights when I leave a room.[外研九(上)M12]
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5.It's wise for people to choose public transport or ride bicycles.
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6.Last but not least,it's of great importance to stop using plastic bags and wooden chopsticks.
句保护
动植
1.If possible,we can take part in some activities to learn more about wild animals and try to protect them.
物的
2.What's more,we should advise the government to make laws so that wild animals can get enough
protection
行为
1.At a green school,every class collects waste which can be recycled or used again.Then the school sells
共建
the waste and uses the money to help students in poor areas..[外a研九(上)Ml2
绿色
2.Students at a green school also learn ways to save energy and recycle at home.That means less waste.
校园
[外研九(上)M12]
3.Each of us students is a cleaner.If we see garbage,we should actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
1.
So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future![人教九(全)Ul3]
结尾句
2.Though pollution is heavy now,I don't think it's hopeless.If everyone starts to do something,the world
will be saved..[外研九(上)M12]
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3.We cannot hope for rapid change,but let's take these simple steps today so that we will save the world
结尾句
for our grandsons and granddaughters tomorrow.[外研九(上)Ml2]
俗语
l.Save water,shame of waste.节约用水,浪费可耻。
谚语
2.Clear waters and green mountains are golden hills and silver mountains..绿水青山就是金山银山。
⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.我们学校最大的问题之一是太多塑料瓶被扔掉。(Tp:one of the biggest problems is.)》
2.正如所有学生所知,多植树有助于保持空气清洁。(Tip:as is known to sb.)
3.周末在公园捡垃圾对我们有好处。(Tip:It's good for sb.to do sth.)
4.离开教室时关灯是非常重要的。(Tip:It's of great importance to do sth.)
5.我们的科学老师教我们学习在日常生活中节约能源的方法。(Tip:learn ways to save energ罗)
6.我们班开始收集I旧书并重新利用,以减少浪费。(Tip:start to do sth.)
7.学生们自己带水杯去学校是明智的。(Tip:It's wise for sb.to do sth.)
8.购物时,我们可以用布袋代替塑料袋。(Tip:instead of)
◆句式升格
9.We pick up litter on the playground after PE class.The ground stays clean.(Tip:so that)
10.We grow some plants in the school garden.It makes the air fresher.(Tip:which)
二阶典例探究明思路
树木是保护自然环境的卫士,是人类能持续生存在地球上的保证。
审题四要素:
请你以“Functions of Trees(树的功能)”为题,根据以下思维导图的提
审体裁:说明文
示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。
审时态:一般现在时
To people:
To the environment:
审人称:第一人称为主
give us food,clothing
clean the air.stop the
and medicine
wind/water from...
审要点:对人类:提供食物、衣物、
Functions
of Trees
药物;对动物:提供栖息地、食物;
To animals:
live in the forest,eat..
What should we do?
对环境:净化空气、防风固土;我
参考词汇:carbon dioxide(二氧化碳),oxygen(氧气),soil(士壤),…
们该做什么:如多种树、不砍伐树
Functions of Trees
木等。
Trees are like natural guardians of our planet.
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②写作剖析
一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
Beginning-一点明
参考表达:
例:树木在很多方面发挥着重要作用。(翻译)
主题,简要介绍
play important
树木的重要性
roles in...
参考表达:
Many animals live in the forest.It is full of trees.
①give sb.sth.:
(用which连接)
Body一具体阐述
②which引导的定语
树木对人类、动
从句:③be full of::
物和环境的具体
④give out;:
例:它们不仅能阻挡风把土壤吹走,还能防止土壤被水
功能
⑤stop...from.
冲走。(翻译)
⑥prevent..from..
Ending-一总结树木
参考表达:
例:让我们携手努力,让地球保持绿意盎然、美丽动
的多种功能,并强
①Let's work togethe,
人!(翻译)
调保护树木的重要
to do sth.;
性,提出我们应采
取的行动
②keep sth.+ad.
二、落笔:分阶范文&对比赏析
初阶范文
高阶范文
Functions of Trees
Functions of Trees
Trees are like natural guardians of our planet.
Trees are like natural guardians of our planet.They play
They play important roles in many ways.
important roles in many ways.
For people,trees are truly helpful.They give us
For people,trees are truly helpful.They give us food like
food like fruits,materials for clothing,and medicine
fruits,materials for clothing such as cotton,and medicine
made from their leaves.Animals benefit a lot from
made from their leaves.Animals also benefit a lot from trees.
trees.Many animals live in the forest.They feed on
Many animals live in the forest which is full of trees,and they
fruits,leaves and other things from trees.For the feed on fruits,leaves and other things from trees.For the
environment,trees are amazing.They can stop the environment,trees are amazing.They clean the air by taking
wind from blowing away the soil.They prevent soil in carbon dioxide and giving out oxygen.They can not only
from being washed away by water.
stop the wind from blowing away the soil but also prevent soil
So,we should plant more trees and protect them
from being washed away by water.
well.Let's work together to keep our earth green and
Therefore,we should plant more trees and protect them
beautiful!
well.Let's work together to keep our earth green and beautiful!
段对比赏析:
1.内容维度:内容更丰富具体,在人类受益部分细化“clothing such as cotton”,动物部分补充定语从句“which is
full of trees”,环境部分明确“taking in carbon dioxide and giving out oxygen”的光合作用原理。
2.逻辑维度:逻辑更严谨,在阐述树木对动物的作用时,用“which is full of trees'”明确森林与树木的关系,让“动
物依赖树木生存”的逻辑更紧密;环境部分通过“clean the air'”的原理说明,把“防风固土”的作用与生态循环
逻辑结合,说服力更强。
3.亮点表达:①词汇上:“planet”替代“earth”,更具书面感;②句式上:用定语从句“which is full of trees”、并列结
构“taking in..and giving out..”丰富句式。
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“构思”答案:Trees play important roles in many ways.;Many animals live in the forest which is full of trees.;They
can stop the wind from blowing away the soil and prevent soil from being washed away by water.;Let's work together
to keep our earth green and beautiful!
三阶写作实战提能力
你所在的学校上个月举办了“校园环保创意实践周”活动,你和同学一起完成了一项环保创意作品,并参
与了相关志愿活动。请以“An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity”为题,写一篇英语短文,分享你
的经历。
Creative works made by you and your classmates;
Volunteer activities you took part in;
.Your gains and feelings from these experiences.
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥:
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计人总词数。)》
An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity
Last month,our school held an "Environmental Protection Creative Practice Week"activity to encourage
students to protect the environment through practical actions.
Reflecting
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©
⑧
How well can you do these things?
Very well
OK
Needs work
●I can keep my writing paper clean.(2分)
口
口
▣
.I can use correct English expressions in writing.(5)
口
口
口
●I can write all the points..(5分)
口
口
口
My article is clearly structured and well organized.(3)
口
口
口
Self-assessment
Overall comment
Peer review
Teacher's assessment
Total score:
/15
53二阶典例探究明思路
三阶写作实战提能力
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
AI Can Help Me Learn
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms,my favorite is paper
AI can greatly help me in my learning.As a student,keeping
cutting.It's a kind of folk art in China,with a history of more than
up with all the information can be challenging,but AI helps me a lot
1,500 years.People cut out different pictures of people,animals or
by providing study plans based on my weaknesses.
plants with knives or scissors from red paper.
When I have trouble in doing my homework,AI offers clear
I've been practicing paper cutting for more than five years.It's
solutions and explanations.Also,it suggests the best way for me to
such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I
study,helping me focus on areas needing improvement.
came across it.Firstly,it's a perfect way to train me to be patient and
careful.Secondly,paper cutting works are great presents for family
AI can help me prepare for exams.It can provide me with
and friends on special festivals.
practice tests based on my past performance and areas of weaknesses
Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture,which all Chinese
By taking these practice tests,I can see more topics that I need to
people should be proud of.And I want to spread it to others.
review to improve my chances of success in the real exam
三阶写作实战提能力
In short,AI makes learning more efficient and helps me achieve
Dear Selina,
my goals.
How are you?I'd like to share some photos of the Dragon Boat
主题10环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
Festival with you.
一阶课本句型促写作
In the pictures,you'll see everyone was busy with different
1.One of the biggest problems in our school is that too many plastic
activities.My grandmother and sister were making zongzi,carefully
bottles are thrown away.
folding the leaves and adding rice.What makes this activity special is
2.As is known to all students,planting more trees helps keep the air
that making zongzi together helps us learn Grandma's skills and spend
clean
time as a family.Meanwhile,my mother and I were making bright
five-color strings.It is believed that these strings keep children safe
i 3.It's good for us to pick up litter in the park on weekends.
and healthy.The most exciting part was watching my father in the
4.It's of great importance to turn off the lights when we leave the
dragon boat race!The boats looked like colorful dragons,and the
classroom.
loud drums made everyone cheer excitedly.
5.Our science teacher teaches us to learn ways to save energy in
I really enjoy this festival.It's not only about the tasty zongzi and
daily life.
the exciting races,but also about being with family.We laugh,
i6.Our class starts to collect old books and reuse them to reduce
cook,and create happy memories together.
waste.
I hope you can come to China next year and celebrate the festival:7.It's wise for students to bring their own water bottles to school.
with us.
8.We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
Yours.i
9.We pick up litter on the playground after PE class so that the
Tiantian
ground stays clean.
主题9科学技术与工程,人类发明与
10.We grow some plants in the school garden,which makes the air
创新&航天事业的发展
fresher.
一阶课本句型促写作
三阶写作实战提能力
1.With the development of AI technology,people's daily lives have
An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity
become easier.
Last month,our school held an "Environmental Protection Crea-
2.Smartwatches are used to help students check the time and record
tive Practice Week"activity to encourage students to protect the en-
their exercise.
vironment through practical actions.My classmates and I joined in
3.Scientists have accounts on professional websites to share space
actively,and it became an unforgettable experience.
research results.
We decided to make something creative with waste.We collect-
4.It's easy to translate foreign languages with AI translation tools.
ed old boxes,plastic bottles and used cloth at home.After three
5.Teachers check online homework systems many times to make sure
days of working on it,we made a "multi-functional storage shelf"
they work smoothly.
Our work won the "Most Creative Award"in the school's exhibition.
6.We should study hard to make a contribution to science and
technology in the future.
During the week,we also volunteered to encourage garbage
7.With the help of Al,we can easily find out the mistakes in our
sorting on campus.We made posters to explain how to sort different
homework.
types of garbage and helped younger students put waste into the right
8.Our class came up with a small invention to save water.
rubbish bins.Many students said they learned a lot from us
9.As soon as the bell rings,the smart blackboard starts showing the
This activity taught me that we can turn waste into treasure with
lesson notes.
creativity.It also made me realize that everyone can do their part for
10.We should still think independently when we use Al tools to solve
environmental protection.I will keep doing small environmental
difficult problems.
actions in daily life to make our planet better.
听力提升训练册
第二部分
听力套卷专项训练
听力专项训练(一)》
19.meaningful pictures 20.truly write
I.1-5 CABAC 6-10 BCCBB 11-12 AC 13-15 BCB
听力专项训练(二)
II.16.valuable 17.take out 18.heart shape
I.1-5 AABCA 6-10 CBCBA 11-12 BC 13-15 ABC
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